Title: I heard Angels on the Steps
Chapter five:
Judgment
AN: Hey there, Before you read this chapter please let me apologize. I am truly sorry for not updating this fiction in a while, I am sorry for not updating any of my fictions in a while. I have been really caught up in a lot of things, and when I was able to update fanfiction.net was not working properly. So I do apologize and I hope that you still enjoy this fiction. I worked really hard on it and I hope that you all enjoy. Thank you.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters that are apart of this chapter that belong to DBZ.
Goku sat up in his bed, his skin burned and stung. He could feel his own blood moving down his skin, and he could see the blood on his hands. His brought the hand to his face, smelling the scent that came from it. It was not his blood, for it was not the blood of his species. He touched his tongue to it and knew whose it was.it was Chi Chi's. He now knew what Vegeta had meant when he had told him that all the pain that she was going to experience, Goku would now feel, but what he hadn't told him is that Chi Chi would feel the same pain, and he hardly experienced it from her grief. He is a liar, and he will soon find that he keeps his promises, but he will not kill Vegeta, he will make him suffer all the pain that he has made Chi Chi feel. And he could not do anything until he finds out where she is unless he wants him to do her more injury.
He got up and out of his bed, walking to the shower that was next to his room, he had a lot to think about and a lot to plan. He opened the door to the bathroom while stripping off his ripped shirt and removing the sash that held his pants in place, they hung loosely on his waist as he walked to the shower. He removed them and reached to turn on the hot water. The water came out in one smooth jet, something that appeared comforting to him. Steam enshrouded the room and sight was limited, but that didn't matter to him, he just needed to relax and ease his mind and sooth his back and shoulders.
He crouched to the floor and sat there, thinking and wondering how she holds up where ever she may be. He shook his head and brought a hand to his face to wipe off the water that got into his eyes. 'What am I supposed to do? No matter what I do I know that there is something that is going to go wrong.' He closed his eyes for a moment and realized that he could see her, surrounded by stone and iron bars, seems like a dungeon of some sort. Where is there a dungeon? He then saw a man walking towards her his eyes shown a dark intention. Goku's eyes opened and he glanced nervously around the room, then he closed his eyes once more, and could see that the man wanted to rape her. That was something that was common here, but it wasn't something that he wanted to happen to her. He knew that there was nothing that he could do. 'Chi Chi.please, wake up.' He tried to speak with her telepathically, but she didn't seem to move. A tear fell from his face at the hopelessness that he was confronting.there was nothing that he could do, all he could do was witness what was going to happen to her. Again he tried to talk to her, and again the same thing happened, nothing, there was no response.as if she was dead.another tear was shed.
He opened his eyes once more; the hot streams of water flowing down his muscular frame. 'Something must be done.Some one must die.and soon, people will learn that when they cross my will.' "they with hear my cry and feel my sorrow.And all of my HATE! VEGETA!" He rose to his feet; his gaze set on the door. Stepping out of the shower, a pool of water congregated at his feet as it dripped off his tall figure. He grabbed a towel a stood in front of the door. "THIS ENDS NOW VEGETA! Show yourself to me.and die a slow and painful death." He raised a clenched fist and hit the door. It splintered and shattered across the floor, and in the middle of the room, there stood the almighty Saiyan prince.
"You called.Kakkorat?" His voice was harsh and almost a whisper.
Well, hoped that you liked the ending of that chapter. What should I make happen next? I would like to hear your opinion on this one. And I have a slight conflict as to whether or not to include other DBZ characters in this story. The one character I seem to be having the most problem with is Bulma.Now some tell me to add her in and give he a shot at a role in the story, but others say that she sucks and they just want G/CC. I am hoping that there is a compromise out there somewhere and that someone out there is willing to tell it to me.
Maybe I should just mention her a few times and make a complete other story from a B/V point of view, although I like the way this is going, but tell me your opinions, after all I write it for you guys! The faster I get suggestions the faster the next chapter comes out. Please review or email huggables21@aol.com or IM me at Huggables21 or Bbsugar77. Thanks!
Now please review for me please. I need motivation.^ _ ^
AN: Hey there, Before you read this chapter please let me apologize. I am truly sorry for not updating this fiction in a while, I am sorry for not updating any of my fictions in a while. I have been really caught up in a lot of things, and when I was able to update fanfiction.net was not working properly. So I do apologize and I hope that you still enjoy this fiction. I worked really hard on it and I hope that you all enjoy. Thank you.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters that are apart of this chapter that belong to DBZ.
Goku sat up in his bed, his skin burned and stung. He could feel his own blood moving down his skin, and he could see the blood on his hands. His brought the hand to his face, smelling the scent that came from it. It was not his blood, for it was not the blood of his species. He touched his tongue to it and knew whose it was.it was Chi Chi's. He now knew what Vegeta had meant when he had told him that all the pain that she was going to experience, Goku would now feel, but what he hadn't told him is that Chi Chi would feel the same pain, and he hardly experienced it from her grief. He is a liar, and he will soon find that he keeps his promises, but he will not kill Vegeta, he will make him suffer all the pain that he has made Chi Chi feel. And he could not do anything until he finds out where she is unless he wants him to do her more injury.
He got up and out of his bed, walking to the shower that was next to his room, he had a lot to think about and a lot to plan. He opened the door to the bathroom while stripping off his ripped shirt and removing the sash that held his pants in place, they hung loosely on his waist as he walked to the shower. He removed them and reached to turn on the hot water. The water came out in one smooth jet, something that appeared comforting to him. Steam enshrouded the room and sight was limited, but that didn't matter to him, he just needed to relax and ease his mind and sooth his back and shoulders.
He crouched to the floor and sat there, thinking and wondering how she holds up where ever she may be. He shook his head and brought a hand to his face to wipe off the water that got into his eyes. 'What am I supposed to do? No matter what I do I know that there is something that is going to go wrong.' He closed his eyes for a moment and realized that he could see her, surrounded by stone and iron bars, seems like a dungeon of some sort. Where is there a dungeon? He then saw a man walking towards her his eyes shown a dark intention. Goku's eyes opened and he glanced nervously around the room, then he closed his eyes once more, and could see that the man wanted to rape her. That was something that was common here, but it wasn't something that he wanted to happen to her. He knew that there was nothing that he could do. 'Chi Chi.please, wake up.' He tried to speak with her telepathically, but she didn't seem to move. A tear fell from his face at the hopelessness that he was confronting.there was nothing that he could do, all he could do was witness what was going to happen to her. Again he tried to talk to her, and again the same thing happened, nothing, there was no response.as if she was dead.another tear was shed.
He opened his eyes once more; the hot streams of water flowing down his muscular frame. 'Something must be done.Some one must die.and soon, people will learn that when they cross my will.' "they with hear my cry and feel my sorrow.And all of my HATE! VEGETA!" He rose to his feet; his gaze set on the door. Stepping out of the shower, a pool of water congregated at his feet as it dripped off his tall figure. He grabbed a towel a stood in front of the door. "THIS ENDS NOW VEGETA! Show yourself to me.and die a slow and painful death." He raised a clenched fist and hit the door. It splintered and shattered across the floor, and in the middle of the room, there stood the almighty Saiyan prince.
"You called.Kakkorat?" His voice was harsh and almost a whisper.
Well, hoped that you liked the ending of that chapter. What should I make happen next? I would like to hear your opinion on this one. And I have a slight conflict as to whether or not to include other DBZ characters in this story. The one character I seem to be having the most problem with is Bulma.Now some tell me to add her in and give he a shot at a role in the story, but others say that she sucks and they just want G/CC. I am hoping that there is a compromise out there somewhere and that someone out there is willing to tell it to me.
Maybe I should just mention her a few times and make a complete other story from a B/V point of view, although I like the way this is going, but tell me your opinions, after all I write it for you guys! The faster I get suggestions the faster the next chapter comes out. Please review or email huggables21@aol.com or IM me at Huggables21 or Bbsugar77. Thanks!
Now please review for me please. I need motivation.^ _ ^