Reading over this fanfic in which I had written a long time ago, I realized that I had did some things that were just so corny, like adding too many sound effects sooo...the first chapter was an exception and from this point on in the story i will try to use them less and i will deter alot from the original storyline of Fushigi Yuugi. (Even though I did do that somewhat already from the fact that I just erased tamahome from the scene altogether and will add him in at a later date. This is meant to be a Miaka and Hotohori fic after all....there aren't too many of those out there^_^.