Disclaimer: Not mine, not mine, never will be. None of the products or real places I name
are not mine either.
Author: Bayleigh Colby Ford
Rating:PG-13, For some minor cursing
Summary: When you love someone, what lengths are you willing to go make it work ?
A Mary Jane/Peter Parker story, with a hint of action and a sprinkle of drama.
Please read and review.
Ta-da....This is it..the last plot-driven chapter of Surrender. It is a bit different then what I originally wrote,
because I accidently erased the the beginning. Hope everyone enjoys..........
Firstly, this is what each of the symbols mean in the story.
" "-out loud
****- thought speech
nothing around it-Peter thoughts
Secondly, I hope everyone likes it.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
CH11 Paladin
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Damn it.
Damn it.
He flew through the city. Landing on the walkway, he realized he had no idea where Dafoe would go.
He could do it without suspicion. New Yorkers were busy, filled with things to do people, and in truth,
wouldn't pay mine to him.
He could do it anywhere.
He could be anywhere.
Damn it, Dafoe, where are you ?
**Oh Itty-Bitty Spider...........come out, come out, so I can wash you all about"**
It at first scared him, then he quickly realized it was part of his psychic ability.
***Where are you ?***
***And make it easy for you ? Come on?***
Bastard. Stupid......wait. Frank Dafoe is a big asshole. Idiot. Moron. Would lose his head if it wasn't attached.
He felt something lift inside him. Dafoe could only here when HE directed his thoughts to him.
***I know what your doing.**
***No you don't.***
**Ethophyside. H2D. Water Death. Wipe out the city. Ring any bells ?***
Suddenly a sharp intake of breath, and a low hiss, snake like in nature, came out.
**How did you know ?***
**Wouldn't you like to know **
Then, there was nothing.
***DAFOE. DAFOE***
He wanted to scream.
Suddenly, someone smacked into him. He was about say something, but then he realized it was all part of
The Plan.
***************FlashBack.............................3am..........................last Night.......................
He woke at 5, from a nightmare, scared he wasn;t going to be able to do his job.
after a hour of comtemplation, he put on the suit and swung to the nearest police station.
He walked in, right up to the desk.
"I need to see the highest person here."
"Look, buddy" the cop first answered in a deep Brooklyn accent, till he looked up and saw who it was.
(A/N, In my story, the cops are NOT After him. They don't like him, but realized his only goal is to
help the city)
"Spiderman"
"Look, I"
"He's not here"
"Get him here", after a quick look at his badge, "Officer Dunst"
"And what do you want me to tell him. Its 5 am"
"Tell him I need him. Tell him 8 million lives are at risk. Tell him that there isn't time for bullshit"
He looked at him for a moment, till something in his face changed
"Fine, wait in Interagation Room 1. 2nd door on the left."
He started to walk, under the stares of the few officers in the precinct. Suddenly a call from the officer.
"Hey, Spiderman"
He turned.
"He'll be there in 5 minutes."
Without a a answer, he turned and walked into the room.
10 minutes later, the door opened to a tall man with spikey blond hair and light blue eyes. He was thin and
looked in his late thirties.
"Captain Mack Kristian, at your service. Whats the emergency Mr.....uumm.....well..Spiderman?"
Without a word, he handed him the paper, and took it and a question mark appeared on his face.
"Whats this ?."
"The destruction of the city"
"A bit dramatic are we"
"No", then proceeded to tell him everything Dr. Simmons-Roberts told him. He watched the fear, anger, pain
and terror flash across his face, till it landed on a grim determination.
"And you know when ?"
"12. Hudson River"
"Ok," he said, and took a deep breath, " I think I have a plan"
***********************End Flashback............................................................................
The note dropped on the floor.
Since the NYPD couldn't really do anything, the Captain had them doing the only thing that they could,
stationing over 100 cops throughout the area, as joggers, dog-walkers, sunbather's, bicyclists, rollerbladers,
what ever they could think of. They all had pictures and the goal was to have one of them spot him, and
he could do the rest. When they did ,a note, in code, would get to him.
Without picking it up, he bent down and scanned it and he was on his way.
ESS2
East Side, Sewer 2.
A sewer. He was going to release it through the sewer. He then realized he had 15 minutes to saw a city.
**Oh Frank. Guess What ?**
**I don't care.**
"I think you should. Hi Frank"
The black clad figure turned, the vial in back over the edge, dangling.
"Spiderman. How great to meet you in the flesh"
"Wish I could say the same. Why are doing this?"
"Let me ask you a better question. Why do you bother ?. Don't you see they aren't worth it ?"
Realizing he was distracted, he tried to make a move, to be rewarded by a flying trip to the asphault.
"You can stop me. Don't you see?"
"Can I ?", said a new voice.
"P-Spiderman."
James. What the hell was he doing here ?. And he know the other voice, and the hand on his back.
"MJ, what are you doing?", he hissed.
"James came in. He was panicked. He said that he know Frank was going to do something. He saw it in the
apartment and tryed to deny it, that he would never do anything, but everything else added up. He said he
know where it was and I went with him cause I didn't want him to do anything stupid"
Damn, his head hurt.
"Well, he already did. MJ, you leave."
"Peter"
"MJ. I need you to leave. Please"
"Fine. Be careful"
"I will"
With her gone, he realized they were talking. Dafoe wasn't even looking at him, or the tube.
"What are you doing, Jamey. You were supposed to be on a plane."
"I had to stop you"
'No, you didn't"
Peter then realized he had a opening. This was his sign, chance.
In one fluid motion, he used a web to grab the liquid, take out the the needle the antidote to turn the
liquid harmless.
"No"
Suddenly he was in the air.
"Give it back"
"In your dreams"
As he was a about to be slammed into a tree, he webbed him self to the top, and before he could do anything
else, he was at the bottom, right in front of Dafoe.
"Give it to me"
"Go to hell", and with, that he webbed him.
"This can't hold me"
"I know."
Turning he opened the tube and put the antidote in. By that time, Dafoe was out of the web.
"No. No. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo"
With thats a slew of cops went for him, only to be tossed throughout the sidewalk.
Suddenly, Kristian was at his side.
"Ok, so how do we get him ?"
"I can do it", said James.
"How ?."
"I can shut off his powers."
"Your sure ?"
"Give me five minutes"
With that, James went to a now defeated Frank Dafoe and stood in front of him. Before, he could do anything,
James had put his hands on his forehead. Light emerged from Franks head, and too James arms. After 5
minutes of this, James let go and Frank passed out. He walked over to them.
"He's fine.You can arrest him. All of this powers are gone"
"Your sure?, and if so where is it ? the power I mean ", asked Kristian.
"Yes, and I have it, but its not useable, so don't worry"
"Good", said Kristian, and he turned to Peter.
"Thank You"
"You don't have to say thank you. This is my job, but your welcome"
"We can handle everything from here. I just hope he likes orange."
"Your sure ?"
"Positive. You can go. I'm sure who ever you are under there, you have a girl waiting for you."
"You have no idea."
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Hi......I hope everyone liked it. I'v never written a action scene, so I wasn't sure how this last part would
turn out, but I think it was ok. Right ?
The last chapter of Surrender "Happily Ever After........Or Not" will be up within the week......then, sadly
that is the end of Surrender....but not to fear, a sequel will come. :)
~~~Bay C.
are not mine either.
Author: Bayleigh Colby Ford
Rating:PG-13, For some minor cursing
Summary: When you love someone, what lengths are you willing to go make it work ?
A Mary Jane/Peter Parker story, with a hint of action and a sprinkle of drama.
Please read and review.
Ta-da....This is it..the last plot-driven chapter of Surrender. It is a bit different then what I originally wrote,
because I accidently erased the the beginning. Hope everyone enjoys..........
Firstly, this is what each of the symbols mean in the story.
" "-out loud
****- thought speech
nothing around it-Peter thoughts
Secondly, I hope everyone likes it.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
CH11 Paladin
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Damn it.
Damn it.
He flew through the city. Landing on the walkway, he realized he had no idea where Dafoe would go.
He could do it without suspicion. New Yorkers were busy, filled with things to do people, and in truth,
wouldn't pay mine to him.
He could do it anywhere.
He could be anywhere.
Damn it, Dafoe, where are you ?
**Oh Itty-Bitty Spider...........come out, come out, so I can wash you all about"**
It at first scared him, then he quickly realized it was part of his psychic ability.
***Where are you ?***
***And make it easy for you ? Come on?***
Bastard. Stupid......wait. Frank Dafoe is a big asshole. Idiot. Moron. Would lose his head if it wasn't attached.
He felt something lift inside him. Dafoe could only here when HE directed his thoughts to him.
***I know what your doing.**
***No you don't.***
**Ethophyside. H2D. Water Death. Wipe out the city. Ring any bells ?***
Suddenly a sharp intake of breath, and a low hiss, snake like in nature, came out.
**How did you know ?***
**Wouldn't you like to know **
Then, there was nothing.
***DAFOE. DAFOE***
He wanted to scream.
Suddenly, someone smacked into him. He was about say something, but then he realized it was all part of
The Plan.
***************FlashBack.............................3am..........................last Night.......................
He woke at 5, from a nightmare, scared he wasn;t going to be able to do his job.
after a hour of comtemplation, he put on the suit and swung to the nearest police station.
He walked in, right up to the desk.
"I need to see the highest person here."
"Look, buddy" the cop first answered in a deep Brooklyn accent, till he looked up and saw who it was.
(A/N, In my story, the cops are NOT After him. They don't like him, but realized his only goal is to
help the city)
"Spiderman"
"Look, I"
"He's not here"
"Get him here", after a quick look at his badge, "Officer Dunst"
"And what do you want me to tell him. Its 5 am"
"Tell him I need him. Tell him 8 million lives are at risk. Tell him that there isn't time for bullshit"
He looked at him for a moment, till something in his face changed
"Fine, wait in Interagation Room 1. 2nd door on the left."
He started to walk, under the stares of the few officers in the precinct. Suddenly a call from the officer.
"Hey, Spiderman"
He turned.
"He'll be there in 5 minutes."
Without a a answer, he turned and walked into the room.
10 minutes later, the door opened to a tall man with spikey blond hair and light blue eyes. He was thin and
looked in his late thirties.
"Captain Mack Kristian, at your service. Whats the emergency Mr.....uumm.....well..Spiderman?"
Without a word, he handed him the paper, and took it and a question mark appeared on his face.
"Whats this ?."
"The destruction of the city"
"A bit dramatic are we"
"No", then proceeded to tell him everything Dr. Simmons-Roberts told him. He watched the fear, anger, pain
and terror flash across his face, till it landed on a grim determination.
"And you know when ?"
"12. Hudson River"
"Ok," he said, and took a deep breath, " I think I have a plan"
***********************End Flashback............................................................................
The note dropped on the floor.
Since the NYPD couldn't really do anything, the Captain had them doing the only thing that they could,
stationing over 100 cops throughout the area, as joggers, dog-walkers, sunbather's, bicyclists, rollerbladers,
what ever they could think of. They all had pictures and the goal was to have one of them spot him, and
he could do the rest. When they did ,a note, in code, would get to him.
Without picking it up, he bent down and scanned it and he was on his way.
ESS2
East Side, Sewer 2.
A sewer. He was going to release it through the sewer. He then realized he had 15 minutes to saw a city.
**Oh Frank. Guess What ?**
**I don't care.**
"I think you should. Hi Frank"
The black clad figure turned, the vial in back over the edge, dangling.
"Spiderman. How great to meet you in the flesh"
"Wish I could say the same. Why are doing this?"
"Let me ask you a better question. Why do you bother ?. Don't you see they aren't worth it ?"
Realizing he was distracted, he tried to make a move, to be rewarded by a flying trip to the asphault.
"You can stop me. Don't you see?"
"Can I ?", said a new voice.
"P-Spiderman."
James. What the hell was he doing here ?. And he know the other voice, and the hand on his back.
"MJ, what are you doing?", he hissed.
"James came in. He was panicked. He said that he know Frank was going to do something. He saw it in the
apartment and tryed to deny it, that he would never do anything, but everything else added up. He said he
know where it was and I went with him cause I didn't want him to do anything stupid"
Damn, his head hurt.
"Well, he already did. MJ, you leave."
"Peter"
"MJ. I need you to leave. Please"
"Fine. Be careful"
"I will"
With her gone, he realized they were talking. Dafoe wasn't even looking at him, or the tube.
"What are you doing, Jamey. You were supposed to be on a plane."
"I had to stop you"
'No, you didn't"
Peter then realized he had a opening. This was his sign, chance.
In one fluid motion, he used a web to grab the liquid, take out the the needle the antidote to turn the
liquid harmless.
"No"
Suddenly he was in the air.
"Give it back"
"In your dreams"
As he was a about to be slammed into a tree, he webbed him self to the top, and before he could do anything
else, he was at the bottom, right in front of Dafoe.
"Give it to me"
"Go to hell", and with, that he webbed him.
"This can't hold me"
"I know."
Turning he opened the tube and put the antidote in. By that time, Dafoe was out of the web.
"No. No. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo"
With thats a slew of cops went for him, only to be tossed throughout the sidewalk.
Suddenly, Kristian was at his side.
"Ok, so how do we get him ?"
"I can do it", said James.
"How ?."
"I can shut off his powers."
"Your sure ?"
"Give me five minutes"
With that, James went to a now defeated Frank Dafoe and stood in front of him. Before, he could do anything,
James had put his hands on his forehead. Light emerged from Franks head, and too James arms. After 5
minutes of this, James let go and Frank passed out. He walked over to them.
"He's fine.You can arrest him. All of this powers are gone"
"Your sure?, and if so where is it ? the power I mean ", asked Kristian.
"Yes, and I have it, but its not useable, so don't worry"
"Good", said Kristian, and he turned to Peter.
"Thank You"
"You don't have to say thank you. This is my job, but your welcome"
"We can handle everything from here. I just hope he likes orange."
"Your sure ?"
"Positive. You can go. I'm sure who ever you are under there, you have a girl waiting for you."
"You have no idea."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hi......I hope everyone liked it. I'v never written a action scene, so I wasn't sure how this last part would
turn out, but I think it was ok. Right ?
The last chapter of Surrender "Happily Ever After........Or Not" will be up within the week......then, sadly
that is the end of Surrender....but not to fear, a sequel will come. :)
~~~Bay C.