Disclaimer: Not mine, not mine, never will be. None of the products or real places I name
are not mine either.
Author: BayLeigh Colby Ford
Rating:PG-13, For some minor cursing.
Summary: When you love someone, what lengths are you willing to go make it work ?
A Mary Jane/Peter Parker story, with a hint of action and a sprinkle of drama.
And this is it..................
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Chapter 12 "Happily Ever After..............Or Not"
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So, though Peter Parker aka Spiderman , he saved the city.
"Sir,Sir"
"Oh," Peter said, as he snapped out of his trance and back to reality, "How much?"
"Five even"
Taking a wrinkled five fom his pocket, he handed it to the vendor and took the food. With the
food, he turned and walked back to the shady spot under a tree he and MJ had found when they
entered the park, blanket in hand. MJ was sitting down and has he walked he realized two
shirtless muscle bound guys were walking to the same place he was.
To MJ.
But why not ? In her tight low rider jeans and lavender pleasant blouse, red hair gleaming in the
sun, see was a sight to be seen. Instead of stopping them, he decided to let MJ handle this herself.
The blond took the first shot.
"Excuse me, do you drop from heaven cause you sure look like an angel"
Cheesy.
"How original boys. Now can you go, your blocking my sun."
Strike One. Shot down. Crewcut tried.
"I'm sorry for my friend. I'm Sam and he's Raymi. We-"
"Thats nice."
Strike 2. Double team time.
"Why don't we take you for some coffee?"
"I don't drink it"
And your out. Deciding to step in, he walked around the guys.
"Here, honey. Snapple and a pretzel right ?."
"Right". giving him her most dazzling smile.
Pretending he just noticed them, he looked up and said "Can I help you ?"
"No", giving MJ the look that said ***Your with HIM ???"
She then turned her attention to him.
"Thanks for all your help"
"What", he said laughing" You were handling it just fine"
"Thats right. Now, do I get a kiss or what?'
"Thats a hard decision. I may have to think about it"
"Urrrgghh. Come here"
He leaned over, and she gave him a soft kiss, then sat between his outstretched legs, her back to his chest,
legs entangled, his arms on her belly, with hers on his hands. He could smell the strawberry shampoo, and at
that moment, while they watched the joogers, bicyclists, people with kids and dogs alike, everything was
right in the world. There was a perfection the calmness of the moment, a look at people relaxing in a park
famous for the people and beauty.
"I love you", she said softly
"I love you more"
And then it passed, as quickly as it came and old worries resurfaced.
"Whats wrong?"
And then, maybe by karma or fate, Harry Osbourne stepped in there line of vision, blocking the light, giving
him a otherworldly glow in his khakis and plain white tee. He was in sunglasses, scoping the park and,
when he found then, he lifted them and gave them a bright smile.
"You're scared for him", she said as a statement.
"He hates Spiderman. He thinks he's responsible for his father's death. I promised Norman I would
never tell Harry what he became. I can't tell him who I am. I'm the only thing he has left, the only thing that
he could depend on. I'm going to lose him. What the hell do I do ?"
"You try to save him. You're his best friend. You've saved the city, you can save your best friend"
"'Thats the thing. None of them were my best friend"
"Hey, Guys" Harry said, as he reached the blanket.
"Hey", MJ said, "Sit."
Peter saw the look of hesitation, as he glanced at him , and Peter realized how he had been treating him of
late. He then realized MJ was right. The only way to get Harry back was to be what he was to him.
He could do this. He could make this right.
Starting Now.
"Don't just stand there. Sit. How was the trip ?"
"It was fine," he said as he sat,"...bussiness stuff, Boring really. What about you two ? I see something
changed while I was away.'
"Yeah............... well....me....she I"
"You don't have to explain. I knew it would happen," he said " I got you guys stuff. Here"
MJ opened her first and her face showed a question mark "What is it ?"
"A Dreamcatcher. It keeps the good dreams, stores them in the feathers and gets rid of nightmares, so
you will never have bad dreams, and the good ones will keep you safe"
"Its beautiful. Thanks"
"Whats mine?"
"Its Eyptian. It's called the The Eye of Horus. Its supposed to protect you from evil and bring fortune.
I thought you would like it"
(AN: The Eye of Horus is real, unlike the chemical)
If you only knew.
"I do. Thanks"
"No, problem, now are going to eat that pretzel ?"
And as they laughed, you would see there was love there. But if you looked closely you would see
nothing is ever what it seems, and pictures of perfection can the most deceitful of all.
T H E E N D.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
AN.........So this is it........Surrender is officially done. I had such a fantastic time writing it and
do plan to write a sequel (if you would want to read it :) :) )
For my wonderful reviewers who wanted more, I felt that 12 chapters was what Surrender should be.
There will be a sequel and I have the story thought out in my head, with will posted after I do a
Harry Potter fic, called Perdition(By Chance), which will be from 5-10 chapters, then I will write
the sequel, tentativeley called "Conquer" (about Harry, but a complete AU from comic books)
after that is done.
It may be awhile because of the Harry Potter fic.. I would never do 2 fic's at once because if I did, either one
would get done :).
Thanks again to everyone that read and reviewed. I hope you read my other story too.
~~~Bay C.
are not mine either.
Author: BayLeigh Colby Ford
Rating:PG-13, For some minor cursing.
Summary: When you love someone, what lengths are you willing to go make it work ?
A Mary Jane/Peter Parker story, with a hint of action and a sprinkle of drama.
And this is it..................
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 12 "Happily Ever After..............Or Not"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So, though Peter Parker aka Spiderman , he saved the city.
"Sir,Sir"
"Oh," Peter said, as he snapped out of his trance and back to reality, "How much?"
"Five even"
Taking a wrinkled five fom his pocket, he handed it to the vendor and took the food. With the
food, he turned and walked back to the shady spot under a tree he and MJ had found when they
entered the park, blanket in hand. MJ was sitting down and has he walked he realized two
shirtless muscle bound guys were walking to the same place he was.
To MJ.
But why not ? In her tight low rider jeans and lavender pleasant blouse, red hair gleaming in the
sun, see was a sight to be seen. Instead of stopping them, he decided to let MJ handle this herself.
The blond took the first shot.
"Excuse me, do you drop from heaven cause you sure look like an angel"
Cheesy.
"How original boys. Now can you go, your blocking my sun."
Strike One. Shot down. Crewcut tried.
"I'm sorry for my friend. I'm Sam and he's Raymi. We-"
"Thats nice."
Strike 2. Double team time.
"Why don't we take you for some coffee?"
"I don't drink it"
And your out. Deciding to step in, he walked around the guys.
"Here, honey. Snapple and a pretzel right ?."
"Right". giving him her most dazzling smile.
Pretending he just noticed them, he looked up and said "Can I help you ?"
"No", giving MJ the look that said ***Your with HIM ???"
She then turned her attention to him.
"Thanks for all your help"
"What", he said laughing" You were handling it just fine"
"Thats right. Now, do I get a kiss or what?'
"Thats a hard decision. I may have to think about it"
"Urrrgghh. Come here"
He leaned over, and she gave him a soft kiss, then sat between his outstretched legs, her back to his chest,
legs entangled, his arms on her belly, with hers on his hands. He could smell the strawberry shampoo, and at
that moment, while they watched the joogers, bicyclists, people with kids and dogs alike, everything was
right in the world. There was a perfection the calmness of the moment, a look at people relaxing in a park
famous for the people and beauty.
"I love you", she said softly
"I love you more"
And then it passed, as quickly as it came and old worries resurfaced.
"Whats wrong?"
And then, maybe by karma or fate, Harry Osbourne stepped in there line of vision, blocking the light, giving
him a otherworldly glow in his khakis and plain white tee. He was in sunglasses, scoping the park and,
when he found then, he lifted them and gave them a bright smile.
"You're scared for him", she said as a statement.
"He hates Spiderman. He thinks he's responsible for his father's death. I promised Norman I would
never tell Harry what he became. I can't tell him who I am. I'm the only thing he has left, the only thing that
he could depend on. I'm going to lose him. What the hell do I do ?"
"You try to save him. You're his best friend. You've saved the city, you can save your best friend"
"'Thats the thing. None of them were my best friend"
"Hey, Guys" Harry said, as he reached the blanket.
"Hey", MJ said, "Sit."
Peter saw the look of hesitation, as he glanced at him , and Peter realized how he had been treating him of
late. He then realized MJ was right. The only way to get Harry back was to be what he was to him.
He could do this. He could make this right.
Starting Now.
"Don't just stand there. Sit. How was the trip ?"
"It was fine," he said as he sat,"...bussiness stuff, Boring really. What about you two ? I see something
changed while I was away.'
"Yeah............... well....me....she I"
"You don't have to explain. I knew it would happen," he said " I got you guys stuff. Here"
MJ opened her first and her face showed a question mark "What is it ?"
"A Dreamcatcher. It keeps the good dreams, stores them in the feathers and gets rid of nightmares, so
you will never have bad dreams, and the good ones will keep you safe"
"Its beautiful. Thanks"
"Whats mine?"
"Its Eyptian. It's called the The Eye of Horus. Its supposed to protect you from evil and bring fortune.
I thought you would like it"
(AN: The Eye of Horus is real, unlike the chemical)
If you only knew.
"I do. Thanks"
"No, problem, now are going to eat that pretzel ?"
And as they laughed, you would see there was love there. But if you looked closely you would see
nothing is ever what it seems, and pictures of perfection can the most deceitful of all.
T H E E N D.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
AN.........So this is it........Surrender is officially done. I had such a fantastic time writing it and
do plan to write a sequel (if you would want to read it :) :) )
For my wonderful reviewers who wanted more, I felt that 12 chapters was what Surrender should be.
There will be a sequel and I have the story thought out in my head, with will posted after I do a
Harry Potter fic, called Perdition(By Chance), which will be from 5-10 chapters, then I will write
the sequel, tentativeley called "Conquer" (about Harry, but a complete AU from comic books)
after that is done.
It may be awhile because of the Harry Potter fic.. I would never do 2 fic's at once because if I did, either one
would get done :).
Thanks again to everyone that read and reviewed. I hope you read my other story too.
~~~Bay C.