Hiya cardcaptor fans! I got another flamer review!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Whoever this person is, i really wish you actually READ the BIG LETTERS WHEN I SAY NO FLAMERS!!!!! This is what Hello Kitty is shit wrote...twice:
God! All I can say is that it's horrible in every way. The grammar . . . it sucks. Do you know how to use proper capitalization? Do you know how to spell? Are you sure you're an American because I know a lot of other countries with better English than you. Does the term "crap" mean anything to you?
How shallow can you get? What's so important about cheerleading, sports and crushes? Can you make a fanfic that could actually classify as literature?
Author: You listen, WHO CARES ABOUT GRAMMAR???? I ADMIT I SUCK AT GRAMMAR BUT WHO CARES? AND YOU KNOW WHAT? I'M NOT AMERICAN! I'M FROM THE COUNTRY CANADA AND THAT'S HOW WE SPELL, OK? IF YOU HATE MY FANFIC SO MUCH DON'T READ, DON'T WRITE, DON'T DO ANYTHING THAT HAS TO DO WITH ME AND MY STORIES! MAYBE IN MY SCHOOL ALOT OF THE POPULAR KIDS ADORE CHEERLEADING, SPORTS AND CRUSHES, OK? SO I THOUGHT I ADD THAT IN! LEAVE MY STORY ALONE AND HELLO KITTY IS NOT SHIT! IT'S A VERY CUTE ANIME!
ok peeps, i'm done with that flamer! thank you freaky moneky hater, soalrfire () and Kawaiishoujo for those terrific reviews and if you love my story, send a review but if you hate it, LEAVE IT BE!
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(Cheerleading practise)
"Konnichiwa everyone! Congradulation everyone to those who made the cheerleading squad!" Misiku smiled cheerfully. Kizu and Juzi smiled brightly behind her.
"Um...misiku-sama..." Tomoyo stuttered.
"Hai(yes)?" Misiku smiled.
"I have some new ideas for new cheerleading uniforms!" Tomoyo sighed in relief and passed the paper to her.
Misiku took the paper and Kizu and Juzi peered over her shoulders.
"These are amazing! But, we don't know how to sew at all!" Juzi giggled.
"I can do it!" Tomoyo volounteered.
"Really? Can you do it?" Kizu cocked her head.
"Yup!" Tomoyo blushed and brought out a note book and some measurement tools. The girls lined up for tomoyo to make quick measurements while after the girls are done measuring, Kizu, Misiku and Juzi taught the girls the original cheers and moves.
(Soccer Practise)
"All right! My name is Giziwa Kaki! I'm the captain of the soccer team!" A tall, brunette boy. His bangs hung out in the front and had a little ponytail at the back. He had the looks of a celebrity and deep, daring eyes that girls can just fall into. "Can Li Syaoron step up?"
Syaoron stepped out from the line up.
"So, you're the co-captain?" Kaki observed him.
"Hai!" Syaoron said firmly.
"Hmm, let's test you out!" Kaki smirked evilly. One of the boys tossed him a soccer ball to Kaki as he began to dribble it down the field. Syaoron immediately reacted and chased after Kaki.
"You'll never catch me!" kaki yelled as he continued to run.
Syaoron huffed and bursted his speed for a few seconds and stole the ball from Kaki.
"Hey!" Kaki yelled after Syaoron and Kaki chased after him.
Syaoron began to run to the other side kicking his ball down thefield.
Kaki raced infront of the goal as Syaoron charged toward his goal. Syaoron smirked and kicking it to the right then to the left and finally gave one boost of power to kick the ball into the goal.
Kaki dived for it and it didn't make it in. Syaoron huffed in disappointment as Kaki walked towards him. Syaoron had angry eyes.
"Relax kid! You did great! You surprised me!" Kaki laughed slapping Syaoron on the back.
(Morning at schooL)
"Hey tomoyo-chan, are you almost done those uniforms?" Naoko eagerly asked as she bit into her dumpling.
"Almost! I only have a few more to go!" Tomoyo smiled chewing on a cookie.
"Konnichiwa girls!" A voice interrupted their conversation.
They saw all the boys there standing.
"Konnichiwa!" Sakura smiled.
Syaoron blushed and played around with a blade of grass.
"How was soccer and baseball practise yesterday?" Rika asked.
"Totally cool! We learned some new things and we are so going to beat whoever is going to challenge us!" Kazaki put a silly grin on his face.
"Soccer was ok. We just practised when the captain challenged syaoron-kun to a game!" Eriol grinned.
"ERIOL-KUN!" Syaoron whined.
"Really? How was it Syaoron-kun?" Sakura asked eagerly.
Syaoron deeply blushed and mumbled out, "it was ok..."
"He almost beat the captain of the soccer team! If only the captain missed just a few inches syaoron would've won!" Sasami blurted.
"SASAMI-KUN!" Syaoron said punching him lightly on the arm.
"WOW! That's awesome!" The girls chorused. The guys immediately became jealous.
~*Makoto*~ Hey peeps! What did you think of that? I know, this is pretty shorter then the other chapters i'm been doing but i got to do my other stories too ^^! Well, i want NO FLAMERS!! flame me? MEANIE! Please review only GOOD THINGS about my story!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Whoever this person is, i really wish you actually READ the BIG LETTERS WHEN I SAY NO FLAMERS!!!!! This is what Hello Kitty is shit wrote...twice:
God! All I can say is that it's horrible in every way. The grammar . . . it sucks. Do you know how to use proper capitalization? Do you know how to spell? Are you sure you're an American because I know a lot of other countries with better English than you. Does the term "crap" mean anything to you?
How shallow can you get? What's so important about cheerleading, sports and crushes? Can you make a fanfic that could actually classify as literature?
Author: You listen, WHO CARES ABOUT GRAMMAR???? I ADMIT I SUCK AT GRAMMAR BUT WHO CARES? AND YOU KNOW WHAT? I'M NOT AMERICAN! I'M FROM THE COUNTRY CANADA AND THAT'S HOW WE SPELL, OK? IF YOU HATE MY FANFIC SO MUCH DON'T READ, DON'T WRITE, DON'T DO ANYTHING THAT HAS TO DO WITH ME AND MY STORIES! MAYBE IN MY SCHOOL ALOT OF THE POPULAR KIDS ADORE CHEERLEADING, SPORTS AND CRUSHES, OK? SO I THOUGHT I ADD THAT IN! LEAVE MY STORY ALONE AND HELLO KITTY IS NOT SHIT! IT'S A VERY CUTE ANIME!
ok peeps, i'm done with that flamer! thank you freaky moneky hater, soalrfire () and Kawaiishoujo for those terrific reviews and if you love my story, send a review but if you hate it, LEAVE IT BE!
***********************************************************************
(Cheerleading practise)
"Konnichiwa everyone! Congradulation everyone to those who made the cheerleading squad!" Misiku smiled cheerfully. Kizu and Juzi smiled brightly behind her.
"Um...misiku-sama..." Tomoyo stuttered.
"Hai(yes)?" Misiku smiled.
"I have some new ideas for new cheerleading uniforms!" Tomoyo sighed in relief and passed the paper to her.
Misiku took the paper and Kizu and Juzi peered over her shoulders.
"These are amazing! But, we don't know how to sew at all!" Juzi giggled.
"I can do it!" Tomoyo volounteered.
"Really? Can you do it?" Kizu cocked her head.
"Yup!" Tomoyo blushed and brought out a note book and some measurement tools. The girls lined up for tomoyo to make quick measurements while after the girls are done measuring, Kizu, Misiku and Juzi taught the girls the original cheers and moves.
(Soccer Practise)
"All right! My name is Giziwa Kaki! I'm the captain of the soccer team!" A tall, brunette boy. His bangs hung out in the front and had a little ponytail at the back. He had the looks of a celebrity and deep, daring eyes that girls can just fall into. "Can Li Syaoron step up?"
Syaoron stepped out from the line up.
"So, you're the co-captain?" Kaki observed him.
"Hai!" Syaoron said firmly.
"Hmm, let's test you out!" Kaki smirked evilly. One of the boys tossed him a soccer ball to Kaki as he began to dribble it down the field. Syaoron immediately reacted and chased after Kaki.
"You'll never catch me!" kaki yelled as he continued to run.
Syaoron huffed and bursted his speed for a few seconds and stole the ball from Kaki.
"Hey!" Kaki yelled after Syaoron and Kaki chased after him.
Syaoron began to run to the other side kicking his ball down thefield.
Kaki raced infront of the goal as Syaoron charged toward his goal. Syaoron smirked and kicking it to the right then to the left and finally gave one boost of power to kick the ball into the goal.
Kaki dived for it and it didn't make it in. Syaoron huffed in disappointment as Kaki walked towards him. Syaoron had angry eyes.
"Relax kid! You did great! You surprised me!" Kaki laughed slapping Syaoron on the back.
(Morning at schooL)
"Hey tomoyo-chan, are you almost done those uniforms?" Naoko eagerly asked as she bit into her dumpling.
"Almost! I only have a few more to go!" Tomoyo smiled chewing on a cookie.
"Konnichiwa girls!" A voice interrupted their conversation.
They saw all the boys there standing.
"Konnichiwa!" Sakura smiled.
Syaoron blushed and played around with a blade of grass.
"How was soccer and baseball practise yesterday?" Rika asked.
"Totally cool! We learned some new things and we are so going to beat whoever is going to challenge us!" Kazaki put a silly grin on his face.
"Soccer was ok. We just practised when the captain challenged syaoron-kun to a game!" Eriol grinned.
"ERIOL-KUN!" Syaoron whined.
"Really? How was it Syaoron-kun?" Sakura asked eagerly.
Syaoron deeply blushed and mumbled out, "it was ok..."
"He almost beat the captain of the soccer team! If only the captain missed just a few inches syaoron would've won!" Sasami blurted.
"SASAMI-KUN!" Syaoron said punching him lightly on the arm.
"WOW! That's awesome!" The girls chorused. The guys immediately became jealous.
~*Makoto*~ Hey peeps! What did you think of that? I know, this is pretty shorter then the other chapters i'm been doing but i got to do my other stories too ^^! Well, i want NO FLAMERS!! flame me? MEANIE! Please review only GOOD THINGS about my story!