AUTHORS NOTES
Well, I wanted to write a short story of my own before reviewing others on this site. And as this is the first time I have attempted writing something like this, I limited myself to a story of a single day at Hogwarts. I wanted a known set up from the books and I was quite frankly a bit disappointed by the sudden ending of GOF. I can understand J. K. Rowling wanting to end such a long tale but leaving Harry without any sort of help after such traumatic experiences did not sit well with me. So I thought I'd have a go at getting him some help. I don't think they have grief councillors in the magic world, so I sent Harry the next best thing, his family.
Personally I think the Dursleys deserve a better deal. Sure they are not the nicest of people but on the other hand they did take Harry in and raise him. OK they might have been better at it sure. They have also taken him back every year and lets face it Harry has been more than a handful for such conservative people. I think they would do what they could if Harry needed them. Anyway that is the basis of the story. Family may send you mad at times but they stand by you when you need them like no one else.
Before you ask questions like were is Hagrid, I must let you know I decided not to repeat any scenes from the book. Harry's meeting with Hagrid in the end of GOF was better than anything I could write and this is also the reason I did not describe the Leaving Feast. If you think the story should have them for completeness just imagine them in the right spots in my story. Besides this was suppose to be just a short story. It sort of took on a life of its own. If I keep adding to it it would become longer than GOF.
Now if you are reviewing the story could I get you to let me know how I did on several levels?
The characters – were they as believable as they are in the books?
The story – does it lack anything?
The humour – hardest part by far – how did I do? And does anyone know the name of the muggle studies teacher? I made Professor Urban up, hoping his name fits his job.
Grammar and spelling – not my forte to be sure and I am Australian, so you have to allow for regional differences in spelling and expressions.
And finally, did you enjoy it? – the most important thing about any story. Was it worth the time to read it?
Would you read it to your children? - After all that is who these stories are written for. Guess I'm just a big kid at heart.
Thanks