* To Break a Soul *
By: Jedi Ve'keso
Rating: Still PG-13 (subject to change)
Genre: Star Wars
Couple: Obi/Qui
Feedback: Yes! Please! Feed the Author! Thanks to those who reviewed for chapter 1: Teltoli (Thanks! I'll try!) Esme (Sorry it took so long, but here's the second part!) Dark Hope (Thanks and I hope too!) Review (Love the name, and I agree, there needs to be more Q/O) Silverwolfprincess (Thank you! It means a lot!) Lessa Solarem (* waves hand back* you shall enjoy this chapter and thank you) Fei Jiao (I love them too! Thanks!)
Disclaimer: Again, the boys aren't mine, wish they were, but hell, they're not.so I own nothing and I make no money off their sexy fanfic lives.
Author Note: Sorry it took so long, school got back into session and boy were we in for a ride.I'll try to be more prompt in my updates, forgive the author! Forgive!
Chapter Summary: Thoughts on a vigil and a quest to return.
/-/ Bond speech //-// Thoughts not shared "-" Normal, spoken speech *~*~*~*~*
(Qui's POV)
Four days, four days now that my beloved has been floating lifelessly in a plasma, showing no signs of returning to me. Damn that boy! Why couldn't he have let the force have it's way, or kept his head so as not to kill himself in the attempt! If he does come around I really don't know if I will beat him to an inch of his returned life or make passionate love to him, I'll probably end up doing both. If he returns.
The medics are becoming dishearted, I can tell by how they give me sympathetic glances when they think my view is on my padawan alone, and even my master seems to have given up on the possibility of Obi-Wan's survival. He walks around the place with his yellow eyes closed to the world and his ears dropped to their lowest ebb. It seems I alone have faith in the man before me.
Perhaps it's only a lover's whim, but because I love him I refuse to believe that he is dead. He can't be dead, I would know if he was not going to return. If he doesn't, if my padawan loses the fight to return I know that I will lose the fight to live as well. No matter how it may happen, I will be with my love again, be it in the force or on this earth, with the jedi.
Then there is the council, to which I say sith take you all. Even they cannot refuse this love that shines between my padawan and me, even those pricks (Yoda being an exception mind you) must realize the bond we now share, and if not well the sith CAN take them. The young man before me is my life, is the only way I know how to live.
//Obi-wan! Hear my voice and come back to me! Come back my love! //
*~*~*~*~*
(Obi's POV)
I can hear him on the edge of my mind, but I think I can no longer fight to reach him. This darkness is so strong, so thick that my energy to fight it has been worn down to a mere candle flame from that which was a bon-fire. Oh how I love you Qui-Gon, I'm so sorry to have done this to you, so sorry to cause you the pain that I know you must be feeling, and it is for you that I manage to hang on. For I know as well as you do, that now, if I died, you would follow me into the force.
I am afraid master, afraid of what's happening to you, afraid of what's happening to me. I can feel you now, I can feel you on the edge of my mind, you voice is so faint, but now I can hear it, when before I couldn't. Maybe it's a sign that I will come back to you, that I might again be able to see your face, to touch your skin and to look into those eyes, those eyes which caused me to fall into a pit of love for you in the first place.
Maybe I can find you, maybe I can cling onto that voice, maybe I can find my way back to you Qui-gon. I'll try, please don't give up on me, please give me time, I'll find my way back, I'll find you. It's so dark in here, so dark, and so lonely, keep talking to me beloved, keep talking and I will try and reach you.just keep talking.
//QUI-GON! //
~TBC (end part 2)~
EN: Well, there ya go, sorry it's not my best work and sorry it took so long to get it out, the next will be out sooner, and the 2 chapter to Feather Brush, and Tormented Minds should be up soon as well, but, as we all know the reviews spark the bunnies, and the bunnies do interesting things with the plot! So, review and feed the author!
By: Jedi Ve'keso
Rating: Still PG-13 (subject to change)
Genre: Star Wars
Couple: Obi/Qui
Feedback: Yes! Please! Feed the Author! Thanks to those who reviewed for chapter 1: Teltoli (Thanks! I'll try!) Esme (Sorry it took so long, but here's the second part!) Dark Hope (Thanks and I hope too!) Review (Love the name, and I agree, there needs to be more Q/O) Silverwolfprincess (Thank you! It means a lot!) Lessa Solarem (* waves hand back* you shall enjoy this chapter and thank you) Fei Jiao (I love them too! Thanks!)
Disclaimer: Again, the boys aren't mine, wish they were, but hell, they're not.so I own nothing and I make no money off their sexy fanfic lives.
Author Note: Sorry it took so long, school got back into session and boy were we in for a ride.I'll try to be more prompt in my updates, forgive the author! Forgive!
Chapter Summary: Thoughts on a vigil and a quest to return.
/-/ Bond speech //-// Thoughts not shared "-" Normal, spoken speech *~*~*~*~*
(Qui's POV)
Four days, four days now that my beloved has been floating lifelessly in a plasma, showing no signs of returning to me. Damn that boy! Why couldn't he have let the force have it's way, or kept his head so as not to kill himself in the attempt! If he does come around I really don't know if I will beat him to an inch of his returned life or make passionate love to him, I'll probably end up doing both. If he returns.
The medics are becoming dishearted, I can tell by how they give me sympathetic glances when they think my view is on my padawan alone, and even my master seems to have given up on the possibility of Obi-Wan's survival. He walks around the place with his yellow eyes closed to the world and his ears dropped to their lowest ebb. It seems I alone have faith in the man before me.
Perhaps it's only a lover's whim, but because I love him I refuse to believe that he is dead. He can't be dead, I would know if he was not going to return. If he doesn't, if my padawan loses the fight to return I know that I will lose the fight to live as well. No matter how it may happen, I will be with my love again, be it in the force or on this earth, with the jedi.
Then there is the council, to which I say sith take you all. Even they cannot refuse this love that shines between my padawan and me, even those pricks (Yoda being an exception mind you) must realize the bond we now share, and if not well the sith CAN take them. The young man before me is my life, is the only way I know how to live.
//Obi-wan! Hear my voice and come back to me! Come back my love! //
*~*~*~*~*
(Obi's POV)
I can hear him on the edge of my mind, but I think I can no longer fight to reach him. This darkness is so strong, so thick that my energy to fight it has been worn down to a mere candle flame from that which was a bon-fire. Oh how I love you Qui-Gon, I'm so sorry to have done this to you, so sorry to cause you the pain that I know you must be feeling, and it is for you that I manage to hang on. For I know as well as you do, that now, if I died, you would follow me into the force.
I am afraid master, afraid of what's happening to you, afraid of what's happening to me. I can feel you now, I can feel you on the edge of my mind, you voice is so faint, but now I can hear it, when before I couldn't. Maybe it's a sign that I will come back to you, that I might again be able to see your face, to touch your skin and to look into those eyes, those eyes which caused me to fall into a pit of love for you in the first place.
Maybe I can find you, maybe I can cling onto that voice, maybe I can find my way back to you Qui-gon. I'll try, please don't give up on me, please give me time, I'll find my way back, I'll find you. It's so dark in here, so dark, and so lonely, keep talking to me beloved, keep talking and I will try and reach you.just keep talking.
//QUI-GON! //
~TBC (end part 2)~
EN: Well, there ya go, sorry it's not my best work and sorry it took so long to get it out, the next will be out sooner, and the 2 chapter to Feather Brush, and Tormented Minds should be up soon as well, but, as we all know the reviews spark the bunnies, and the bunnies do interesting things with the plot! So, review and feed the author!