Hihi! How is the fic right now?! bad or good? i ain't getting alot of
reviews..so i'm guessing that it ain't that popular..but..the people that
did give me a review liked it..arigato!
Disclaimer: I don't own Pretear..I'll like to take Hayate tho..oh well!! ~haha
Chapter 4 - Reunite
As Himeno turned back the the new girl, she studied her more carefully and was only interrupted when the new girl asked her,"Are you the new Pretear?"
Himeno starred blankly and answerred "Yes, and you must be Maho-chan! My name is Himeno!!"
At this, HImeno stretched out her hand, waiting for a shake. But Maho ignored Himeno and turned to Sasame and asked, "Daijobu, Sasame?"
Now awake, Sasame did a faint nod and rested on Goh, who carried him back to the mansion.
Everyone as starting to walk bacck to the house in Leafenia, when Maho pulled Hayate out of the group and whispered to him, "I think I can Pre"
TWO DAYS LATER
As Hayate walked through the halls of Himeno's home, he rememberred Sasame's words the day before.
(thinks back) Sasame was lying on the bed because of his wounds, when Hayate came in and told him what Maho had said to him.
"Maho can pre..." Hayate said softly.
Sasame's eyes widended and said, "That can't be...That..means..Maho and..Himeno.."
"Yes..we're going to have to pick one....and me too.."
Both stayed quiet for awhile, till Sasame interrupted.
"That monster at the park..was it from..." Sasame said slowly
"You felt it too?" asked Hayate
"Yah.."Sasame said quietly.
"So I guess its the test" Hayate said.
(Back to Reality)
As Hayate walked past HImeno's room, he stopped and stood there for a few seconds,. Deciding whether to go in or not. But he finally reached out his hand to knock on her door.
After a few minuites, he was let in and sat on a chair facing Himeno.
"Himeno..I got to tell you something.." he said very very slowly.
Himeno's head bolted up, and said, "Yeah?"
"Uh..umm..nevermind."
With that, Himeno dropped her head and looked down.
"I just wanted to tell you that Maho is staying in Leafenia, untill she finds anyplace else." Hayate finished.
As the two of them sat in silence, tearns trickled down HImeno's face.
Outside, Sasame watched the whole thing happen, and walked slowly toward Leafenia.
LEAFENIA
Back at Leafenia, the house was empty but Maho. She was cleanning up the house, when Sasame came in and sat in front of her.
"Yes, Sasame?" stopping her cleanning and also sits in front of Sasame.
"Maho..honestly..why did you come back?" asked Sasame with a straight look.
"I missed you guys!! and..what happened with the other three guys? I haven't seen them..and why are there children hanging aroundy ou guys?"
Sasame went quiet for a few seconds then continuing, "The three of them...they died."
Tears started to form in her eyes, and as they fell, she asked, "Was it because of me?"
Sasame starred at the ceiling and said, "No...it was with Takako that they died."
"T-Takako...the Pretear after me..." Maho said with tears running down her face.
There was a moments of silence, but Sasame broke it when he asked Maho again.
"Why did you come back?"
Maho seemed suprised but answerred, "What do you mean, Sasame?"
Sasame starred right into Maho and answerred, "You know what I mean...don't play with me.."
"S-Sa...Same...alright..I'll tell you, I heard about Hayate being very close to this new Pretear..so.."
"So..you came back to break them up?!" asked Sasame.
Maho looked straight at Sasame and said, "Yes."
AN: How is it?? very bad?! write a review plz!!
Disclaimer: I don't own Pretear..I'll like to take Hayate tho..oh well!! ~haha
Chapter 4 - Reunite
As Himeno turned back the the new girl, she studied her more carefully and was only interrupted when the new girl asked her,"Are you the new Pretear?"
Himeno starred blankly and answerred "Yes, and you must be Maho-chan! My name is Himeno!!"
At this, HImeno stretched out her hand, waiting for a shake. But Maho ignored Himeno and turned to Sasame and asked, "Daijobu, Sasame?"
Now awake, Sasame did a faint nod and rested on Goh, who carried him back to the mansion.
Everyone as starting to walk bacck to the house in Leafenia, when Maho pulled Hayate out of the group and whispered to him, "I think I can Pre"
TWO DAYS LATER
As Hayate walked through the halls of Himeno's home, he rememberred Sasame's words the day before.
(thinks back) Sasame was lying on the bed because of his wounds, when Hayate came in and told him what Maho had said to him.
"Maho can pre..." Hayate said softly.
Sasame's eyes widended and said, "That can't be...That..means..Maho and..Himeno.."
"Yes..we're going to have to pick one....and me too.."
Both stayed quiet for awhile, till Sasame interrupted.
"That monster at the park..was it from..." Sasame said slowly
"You felt it too?" asked Hayate
"Yah.."Sasame said quietly.
"So I guess its the test" Hayate said.
(Back to Reality)
As Hayate walked past HImeno's room, he stopped and stood there for a few seconds,. Deciding whether to go in or not. But he finally reached out his hand to knock on her door.
After a few minuites, he was let in and sat on a chair facing Himeno.
"Himeno..I got to tell you something.." he said very very slowly.
Himeno's head bolted up, and said, "Yeah?"
"Uh..umm..nevermind."
With that, Himeno dropped her head and looked down.
"I just wanted to tell you that Maho is staying in Leafenia, untill she finds anyplace else." Hayate finished.
As the two of them sat in silence, tearns trickled down HImeno's face.
Outside, Sasame watched the whole thing happen, and walked slowly toward Leafenia.
LEAFENIA
Back at Leafenia, the house was empty but Maho. She was cleanning up the house, when Sasame came in and sat in front of her.
"Yes, Sasame?" stopping her cleanning and also sits in front of Sasame.
"Maho..honestly..why did you come back?" asked Sasame with a straight look.
"I missed you guys!! and..what happened with the other three guys? I haven't seen them..and why are there children hanging aroundy ou guys?"
Sasame went quiet for a few seconds then continuing, "The three of them...they died."
Tears started to form in her eyes, and as they fell, she asked, "Was it because of me?"
Sasame starred at the ceiling and said, "No...it was with Takako that they died."
"T-Takako...the Pretear after me..." Maho said with tears running down her face.
There was a moments of silence, but Sasame broke it when he asked Maho again.
"Why did you come back?"
Maho seemed suprised but answerred, "What do you mean, Sasame?"
Sasame starred right into Maho and answerred, "You know what I mean...don't play with me.."
"S-Sa...Same...alright..I'll tell you, I heard about Hayate being very close to this new Pretear..so.."
"So..you came back to break them up?!" asked Sasame.
Maho looked straight at Sasame and said, "Yes."
AN: How is it?? very bad?! write a review plz!!