HiHi Mina! ^^ How are you all doing? I feel so sad! Only 6 reviews, does
that mean that my fic isn't that great? Please review me and tell me..is it
bad or not? Onegai(please)!!
Notes to you readers!
Snow_bliz : Thanxs for supporting me! Wow..you really must be reading..two reviews! Arigato!
Ashley-Chan : Thanxs..I know, Past and Present Lovers, this is really going to be hard. But don't worry, lets just leave the decision for Hayate. And if he doesn't decide rightly, I'll send a bolt of lightning to shock him..kk? ~haha
Sarina_Fannel : Thanxs much!
Crimsy : Arigato for reading..i luv it when you write reviews to me! Don't worry..i'll be writing more! Just remember to check back!!
Takeru_Yoshizuki : Thanxs! Wow..even though you don't know the anime..you're still reading it! Arigato! I really admire that, cause if I have never watched the anime..i would never read it! But..wow..you do that! That's really ..nice! thanxs!
Disclaimer: Gomenei(sorry)!! I don't own Pretear..too bad la! This is just a fic written by me..Cherryz Angel as a fan of Pretear!! Too bad..*sob*
In Love With You Chapter 7 1st Pretear Fic by Cherryz Angel
As the knights prepared for the match, Takako and Himeno sat down on the sidewalk curb, and watched the fight in silence.
Takako starred at Maho then said to Himeno, "Why are you doing this to yourself?"
Himeno looked down, then answered slowly, "What do you mean?"
"I don't understand you.you are like..giving Hayate away.." Takako said stuttered.
"I.." Himeno started, but never finished. After a few seconds, Himeno continued, "This.This is for Hayate's own good.won't it be better if he was with a more powerful Pretear then me?"
Takako crunched up her face and yelled, "Don't you understand? Right now, you are hurting yourself by doing this.I thought that it was fair and square if I lost Hayate to you..then I found Sasame.But..But now.I can't believe you!"
Looking surprised by Takako's yelling, Himeno sat, with her head down. Finally, she sat up by the patting on her shoulder, and found herself starring right at Goh.
"Wake up sleepy-head!" Goh said to her.
Himeno sat up, and touched her head.
Ahhhhh..it hurts.my head.it hurts.it hurts.why am I having a headache? Ahhhhhh..
Sasame seeing the pain in Himeno's face, he asked her, "Daijobu? Himeno.."
Himeno smiled shakily and answered, "Yeah..Its just a headache..i think..I'll be fine.."
Hayate stepped forward and said, "Why don't I walk back with you??"
Himeno abruptly said, "Nono.that's alright..its just a little headache..I'm sure I'll be alright..it's nothing big.."
Then, as everyone left in separate directions, Himeno slowly walked down the sidewalk gripping her forehead.
"itei..It hurts!..I need to get back home and take a shower.." Himeno said to herself.
But before she walked very far, her head started spinning and she fell to the ground.
What.I..i feel..so dizzy...maybe.should i..what ..
Just when Himeno fell, Sasame and Hayate passed by in Sasame's car. Hayate was leaning on the car door and was just watching the streets go by, when he saw Himeno.
"Himeno." he thought to himself.
He just turned his head, when all of a sudden he saw Himeno lying on the ground.
"HIMENO!" he yelled at her. But no answer came back, and her body was lying limply on the ground,
He turned back to Sasame, and said, "Stop!! Sasame..Stop!! Himeno!!"
Sasame nodded and turned his car and was just speeding back towards Himeno, when he saw Hayate opening his door and jumping out. Sasame called out to Hayate, but it was too late.
Sasame's eye widended, when he saw Hayate landing perfectly on the solid ground, and dashing toward Himeno.
Hayate.don't fool with your heart..you love Himeno..
As Sasame approached Himeno and Hayate, he turned his head. He couldn't stand the scene. Hayate obvioiusly loved Himeno, and was hugging her, but his face was full of guilt.
When Sasame finally couldn't stand it anymore, he blurted out. "Hayate!! YOU FOOL! You love her!! But You're guilty because of Maho!! I can't believe you!!" Sasame screamed.
Hayate picked up Himeno and stood up. He started to leave, when all of a sudden, Sasame pulled him back.
"Gomenei..(sorry) maybe..maybe I should take her back..when she wakes up, its not that great that you are their..i'll phone Takako.."
Hayate nodded, and placed the fragile Himeno into Sasame's arms and turned around and walked away.
END OF CHAPTER
AN : How is it peeps? I actually..well..i think its quite interesting. I was going to write this..very very boring chapter, but I changed it. I think..that..I'm gonna make Hayate choose quickly..kk? so..maybe chapter 10 being the last or something? Well..i'll try my best..and I'll end..maybe a feel chapters late! Arigato for reading!!
Please remember to R+ R!! Read and Review!! ^^
Notes to you readers!
Snow_bliz : Thanxs for supporting me! Wow..you really must be reading..two reviews! Arigato!
Ashley-Chan : Thanxs..I know, Past and Present Lovers, this is really going to be hard. But don't worry, lets just leave the decision for Hayate. And if he doesn't decide rightly, I'll send a bolt of lightning to shock him..kk? ~haha
Sarina_Fannel : Thanxs much!
Crimsy : Arigato for reading..i luv it when you write reviews to me! Don't worry..i'll be writing more! Just remember to check back!!
Takeru_Yoshizuki : Thanxs! Wow..even though you don't know the anime..you're still reading it! Arigato! I really admire that, cause if I have never watched the anime..i would never read it! But..wow..you do that! That's really ..nice! thanxs!
Disclaimer: Gomenei(sorry)!! I don't own Pretear..too bad la! This is just a fic written by me..Cherryz Angel as a fan of Pretear!! Too bad..*sob*
In Love With You Chapter 7 1st Pretear Fic by Cherryz Angel
As the knights prepared for the match, Takako and Himeno sat down on the sidewalk curb, and watched the fight in silence.
Takako starred at Maho then said to Himeno, "Why are you doing this to yourself?"
Himeno looked down, then answered slowly, "What do you mean?"
"I don't understand you.you are like..giving Hayate away.." Takako said stuttered.
"I.." Himeno started, but never finished. After a few seconds, Himeno continued, "This.This is for Hayate's own good.won't it be better if he was with a more powerful Pretear then me?"
Takako crunched up her face and yelled, "Don't you understand? Right now, you are hurting yourself by doing this.I thought that it was fair and square if I lost Hayate to you..then I found Sasame.But..But now.I can't believe you!"
Looking surprised by Takako's yelling, Himeno sat, with her head down. Finally, she sat up by the patting on her shoulder, and found herself starring right at Goh.
"Wake up sleepy-head!" Goh said to her.
Himeno sat up, and touched her head.
Ahhhhh..it hurts.my head.it hurts.it hurts.why am I having a headache? Ahhhhhh..
Sasame seeing the pain in Himeno's face, he asked her, "Daijobu? Himeno.."
Himeno smiled shakily and answered, "Yeah..Its just a headache..i think..I'll be fine.."
Hayate stepped forward and said, "Why don't I walk back with you??"
Himeno abruptly said, "Nono.that's alright..its just a little headache..I'm sure I'll be alright..it's nothing big.."
Then, as everyone left in separate directions, Himeno slowly walked down the sidewalk gripping her forehead.
"itei..It hurts!..I need to get back home and take a shower.." Himeno said to herself.
But before she walked very far, her head started spinning and she fell to the ground.
What.I..i feel..so dizzy...maybe.should i..what ..
Just when Himeno fell, Sasame and Hayate passed by in Sasame's car. Hayate was leaning on the car door and was just watching the streets go by, when he saw Himeno.
"Himeno." he thought to himself.
He just turned his head, when all of a sudden he saw Himeno lying on the ground.
"HIMENO!" he yelled at her. But no answer came back, and her body was lying limply on the ground,
He turned back to Sasame, and said, "Stop!! Sasame..Stop!! Himeno!!"
Sasame nodded and turned his car and was just speeding back towards Himeno, when he saw Hayate opening his door and jumping out. Sasame called out to Hayate, but it was too late.
Sasame's eye widended, when he saw Hayate landing perfectly on the solid ground, and dashing toward Himeno.
Hayate.don't fool with your heart..you love Himeno..
As Sasame approached Himeno and Hayate, he turned his head. He couldn't stand the scene. Hayate obvioiusly loved Himeno, and was hugging her, but his face was full of guilt.
When Sasame finally couldn't stand it anymore, he blurted out. "Hayate!! YOU FOOL! You love her!! But You're guilty because of Maho!! I can't believe you!!" Sasame screamed.
Hayate picked up Himeno and stood up. He started to leave, when all of a sudden, Sasame pulled him back.
"Gomenei..(sorry) maybe..maybe I should take her back..when she wakes up, its not that great that you are their..i'll phone Takako.."
Hayate nodded, and placed the fragile Himeno into Sasame's arms and turned around and walked away.
END OF CHAPTER
AN : How is it peeps? I actually..well..i think its quite interesting. I was going to write this..very very boring chapter, but I changed it. I think..that..I'm gonna make Hayate choose quickly..kk? so..maybe chapter 10 being the last or something? Well..i'll try my best..and I'll end..maybe a feel chapters late! Arigato for reading!!
Please remember to R+ R!! Read and Review!! ^^