Ah My Goddess!: The Purest Form of Love
Hi! I'm Mallow, normally I write Final Fantasy fics but this time I'm going to try something new and write about my one of my favorite Manga series. Though I wasn't sure why I decided liking this series (maybe it had to do with Belldandy looking a little like Aeris from Final Fantasy 7?) I practically fell in love with its characters and still am a huge fan even today. So this is my first attempt at writing a Ah My Goddess/Aa! Megamisama fic.
However I don't know where this fic is heading like I have everything scripted out but I have a couple of endings to choose from like I was thinking of turning it into a lemon and make this the first lemon fic I've ever written but I'm not so sure yet, any reviews with advice would be most appreciated.
As it is a requirement and I have to say this, I do not own any of the characters they are all the rights of Kosuke Fujishima, now on to the story. ________________________________________________________________________
Keiichi's POV
Keiichi Morisato stared at the woman he loved and sighed as she was looking at various sauces and spices that she could use for one of her award winning homemade meals. He thought about all they have been through since the last couple of years. He remembered first meeting her as a young boy and making a promise that would change his life forever this was a memory that was long forgotten but was remembered again. When she had to leave the first time, he remembered meeting her again when he was in college and making the wish that started it all.
"I wish that a goddess like you would be with me forever"
Or something along those lines, he was joking at the time not really meaning it like what type of divine goddess would actually grant such a wish to a insignificant mortal like himself? Boy was he surprised, she would grant the wish (in a very cool looking light-show fashion too he remembered) and would go on to explain that they had a contract and were now bound by an Ultimate Force that would make sure that they were never separated of course again Keiichi had to learn how it worked the hard way. However after going through what would make any sensible mortal want to break the contract agreement, things such as Belldandy's two sisters, demons and even a fallen god had made Keiichi realized how much he loved her, every incident only making his bond with her grow stronger, who needed the Ultimate Force? Keiichi would have gone hell (literally too) and back just for her. Of course now the Force seemed to be gone and they were both free to go where they wanted to go, Keiichi obviously chose to stay by her side.
Belldandy: Keiichi?
Belldandy's sweet voice broke Keiichi from his daydreams
Belldandy: I found what I needed shall we be off?
Keiichi: s-sure Bell
Keiichi wanted to mentally punch himself for his shyness, but instead tried to focus on why he was here. Belldandy had needed supplies to make dinner so she had asked Keiichi if he wanted to come along shopping with her, while a market didn't seem like the most romantic place to take somebody at least he got to be alone with her and being alone with her seemed to be a luxury for him. Belldandy took Keiichi's hand and started to walk off to where Keiichi had parked his motorcycle (his second pride and joy) they hadn't made it halfway there when Belldandy stopped suddenly.
Belldandy: oh my
Keiichi: what? Is something wrong?
Belldandy: I forgot to get the soy sauce.Keiichi can you wait right here? I'll be right back
Keiichi: sure thing
After Belldandy had left. Keiichi sighed as he watched her go; lately he had felt so empty but why? Her had her love what more could he possibly need? Instead of pondering about it more Keiichi distracted himself by taking a scan over the stores and stands that were scattered along the place each one trying to make a yen. Keiichi didn't really care much for them he felt most of them were cons anyway but for some odd reason one them seemed to catch his eye. It was a fortune-telling tent, Keiichi shrugged he had time to kill (Bell always was very selective over the type of soy sauce she needed to get). Keiichi approached the tent and read the sign:
"Madam Rose's fortune and love predictions"
Keiichi approached the tent even closer he wasn't sure why he was there he didn't really believe in the fortune telling thing but it was almost like an outside force was drawing him in. The tent itself was what one would expect from a fortune teller, it had a shelf with books about the zodiac and stars, elaborate beads hanging on several places on the walls and in the middle of the room was the supposed Madam Rose (Keiichi could never decide if fortune tellers ever used their real name). Keiichi almost got a nose-bleed from the sight of her, she was a tall woman, wearing a quite scandalous dress, the revealed quite a lot of leg and didn't do much to hide any cleavage, she wore a veil that covered most of her face.
Keiichi:...*poor kid's in shock*
Rose: ah velcome...moi have predicted your arrival, vhat's vrong? You seem, vhat's ze word? Uncomfortable
Keiichi: well I just thought you'd you know wouldn't be this young
Rose: ah zank you, moi take zhat as a compliment, now I know vhy you're here, you vant to get your fortune told
Keiichi: well actually I'm just looking...um NOT IN THAT way I mean, it's just argh I don't even know why I'm here
Rose: please don't go, moi is not finished yet
Keiichi: it's alright I really don't believe in this sort of thing
Rose: then vhy are you here? Moi will zell you, you feel so empty, you have ze woman you love by your zide and yet you feel zhat is not enough..you vant to learn how you can feel better about ze love you have, Keiichi Morisato
Keiichi froze dead in his tracks
Keiichi: wait how did you know my name?
Rose: Madam Rose knows all didn't you read my sign? moi know all about love and fortune
Keiichi: (she got my problem dead on too.I do feel empty but this can- fortune teller, really doesn't have the solution does she?)
Rose: moi zake ze great offense zhat you zink I'm a fraud
Keiichi: gack...
Rose: all I ask Keiichi is that you hear me out, I have no interest in your money..you're special zo I'll read your fortune for free
Keiichi: what the hell couldn't hurt..(creepy it's almost like she can read my mind)
Rose: of course I can read your mind, but zhats besides ze point...
Rose reached under a table and drew a deck a tarot cards
Keiichi: what? No crystal ball?
Rose: no, zhat is not necessary, ze cards are all that moi needs, now.
Rose shuffled them and laid out several of them face down
Rose: now Keiichi, pick a card
Keiichi: um I may now know much about fortune telling but I'm pretty sure this is not a technique
Rose: you zhould not concern yourself about zuch trifle details just pick a card
Keiichi shrugs and picks one of them, he turns it over, it is a strange looking card written in some foreign language, but the picture definitely depicts two (nude) lovers holding on to each other
Roase: ah ze lover's card..it zells zhat your love is pure, you love ze Belldandy is it? vith all your heart but the extend of your love is big you don't just vant to be loved but rather you vant to be a little more intimate
Keiichi: um and how does this help me?
Keiichi already knew this, he didn't need some two bit con artist telling him things he already knew but it was a little freaky she knew Bell's name.
Rose: vait, I'm not finished..
Rose drew several more cards and picked one
Rose: oh I zee
Keiichi: what? What is it..it's not death is it? Please don't tell me it's death
Rose: ze happy squirrel!!!!!
Keiichi: -_-;; ooooookay
Rose: you don't realize the zrouble you're in do you Keiichi?
Keiichi: unless I am a nut, no...
Rose: ze happy squirrel is the mischievous bringer of misfortune and according to ze cards it is going to bring misfortune on your relationship with the one you love the most, however zhis card is also the bringer of strength
Keiichi: how so?
Rose: when misfortune comes you have the chance to make a decision that will affect your happiness, choose right and you will have your desires fulfilled, choose vrong and you vill lose the ze one you cherish the most
Keiichi:...
Rose: ho ho ho ho ho.
Keiichi: what's so funny?
Rose: forgive me, but first you called me a con and now you believe me
Keiichi: I do not
Rose: do not deny it Keiichi, I can read it in your eyes
Keiichi: is it really possible that I can lose Bell? Like I admit several things has happened that almost made me lose her but..can this be any different then those other times?
Rose: oui, zhis vill be ze worst one..but do not doubt your own strength Keiichi, I believe in you
Keiichi: tell me what will happen?
Rose: I cannot tell you all you need zo do is be prepared to protect her
Keiichi: protect her? Me?
Rose: oui, you..
Keiichi was taken back by all this, protect her? Usually it was always the other way round. Sure he would help her in whatever way he could but to go so far as protecting her? No that was something Keiichi knew he was unable to do
Keiichi: that's a very kind thought to think I'm capable of such a thing but..
Rose: but what? Are you saying you are incapable of protecting the one you love?
Keiichi meekly nodded his head
Rose shook her head in disappointment
Rose: zhat is ze problem with zoday's vorld, people have forgotten how to zruely love
Keiichi: huh?
Rose: love can bloom anywhere but you must be able to protect zhat loved one
Keiichi: is this another fortune?
Rose: non, it's advice.do you know what made ze romances of ze past zo successful?
Keiichi: no
Rose: it was because ze lovers vere villing to protect each other, now a days zhat feeling is gone. People claim to love one another but do zhey really know it it's zrue? Zhey don't that's what and many of zhose so called loves end in failure zhats vhat's so zragic about zoday's vorld. None of zhose people realize zhey aren't meant for each other zill its' zoo late
Keiichi: then does that mean I'm not right for Belldandy?
Rose: non, I'm not saying zhat, people usually get mixed up vhen I talk about strength. Vhat I mean is you need to be strong in your heart, zee ze strength in your heart and you will triumph, you'll zee
Keiichi:...
Rose: zhat is all I have to say, may your path be filled with happiness
Keiichi: bye
Rose: oh before you go..I have one last gift for you
Rose reached under the table and pulled out a small box
Keiichi: what's this?
Rose: after you fulfill your promise to protect her and after you realize your own desires open it vhen ze time is right, you'll know
Keiichi: gee thanks
Keiichi pocketed the box and exited the tent.
End Chapter 1 Well that was chapter one not bad, but I could have done better.. anyway this first chapter focused on how Keiichi's love for Belldandy can be even more truer by being able to protect her!!! But what does that mean? Find out soon
Chapter 2 will focus on Belldandy's point of view as she learns something very special about her relationship with Kei and herself oh and get the soy sauce, I hope I can get it up soon
But in the meantime here's some questions you can or cannot answer
Madam Rose's quote: "love can bloom anywhere but you must be able to protect zhat loved one" was a revised and slightly altered quote taken from what game? Who do you think Rose is? Hint her name gives it away I made a Simpson's gag somewhere in the fic can you find it? I made several past Ah My Goddess references can you find them as well? Did I make any of the characters too OOC?
Anyway if Madam Rose speech confused you, I don't blame you that's my pathetic attempt at trying to make a French accent..sigh back to the drawing boards.
Hi! I'm Mallow, normally I write Final Fantasy fics but this time I'm going to try something new and write about my one of my favorite Manga series. Though I wasn't sure why I decided liking this series (maybe it had to do with Belldandy looking a little like Aeris from Final Fantasy 7?) I practically fell in love with its characters and still am a huge fan even today. So this is my first attempt at writing a Ah My Goddess/Aa! Megamisama fic.
However I don't know where this fic is heading like I have everything scripted out but I have a couple of endings to choose from like I was thinking of turning it into a lemon and make this the first lemon fic I've ever written but I'm not so sure yet, any reviews with advice would be most appreciated.
As it is a requirement and I have to say this, I do not own any of the characters they are all the rights of Kosuke Fujishima, now on to the story. ________________________________________________________________________
Keiichi's POV
Keiichi Morisato stared at the woman he loved and sighed as she was looking at various sauces and spices that she could use for one of her award winning homemade meals. He thought about all they have been through since the last couple of years. He remembered first meeting her as a young boy and making a promise that would change his life forever this was a memory that was long forgotten but was remembered again. When she had to leave the first time, he remembered meeting her again when he was in college and making the wish that started it all.
"I wish that a goddess like you would be with me forever"
Or something along those lines, he was joking at the time not really meaning it like what type of divine goddess would actually grant such a wish to a insignificant mortal like himself? Boy was he surprised, she would grant the wish (in a very cool looking light-show fashion too he remembered) and would go on to explain that they had a contract and were now bound by an Ultimate Force that would make sure that they were never separated of course again Keiichi had to learn how it worked the hard way. However after going through what would make any sensible mortal want to break the contract agreement, things such as Belldandy's two sisters, demons and even a fallen god had made Keiichi realized how much he loved her, every incident only making his bond with her grow stronger, who needed the Ultimate Force? Keiichi would have gone hell (literally too) and back just for her. Of course now the Force seemed to be gone and they were both free to go where they wanted to go, Keiichi obviously chose to stay by her side.
Belldandy: Keiichi?
Belldandy's sweet voice broke Keiichi from his daydreams
Belldandy: I found what I needed shall we be off?
Keiichi: s-sure Bell
Keiichi wanted to mentally punch himself for his shyness, but instead tried to focus on why he was here. Belldandy had needed supplies to make dinner so she had asked Keiichi if he wanted to come along shopping with her, while a market didn't seem like the most romantic place to take somebody at least he got to be alone with her and being alone with her seemed to be a luxury for him. Belldandy took Keiichi's hand and started to walk off to where Keiichi had parked his motorcycle (his second pride and joy) they hadn't made it halfway there when Belldandy stopped suddenly.
Belldandy: oh my
Keiichi: what? Is something wrong?
Belldandy: I forgot to get the soy sauce.Keiichi can you wait right here? I'll be right back
Keiichi: sure thing
After Belldandy had left. Keiichi sighed as he watched her go; lately he had felt so empty but why? Her had her love what more could he possibly need? Instead of pondering about it more Keiichi distracted himself by taking a scan over the stores and stands that were scattered along the place each one trying to make a yen. Keiichi didn't really care much for them he felt most of them were cons anyway but for some odd reason one them seemed to catch his eye. It was a fortune-telling tent, Keiichi shrugged he had time to kill (Bell always was very selective over the type of soy sauce she needed to get). Keiichi approached the tent and read the sign:
"Madam Rose's fortune and love predictions"
Keiichi approached the tent even closer he wasn't sure why he was there he didn't really believe in the fortune telling thing but it was almost like an outside force was drawing him in. The tent itself was what one would expect from a fortune teller, it had a shelf with books about the zodiac and stars, elaborate beads hanging on several places on the walls and in the middle of the room was the supposed Madam Rose (Keiichi could never decide if fortune tellers ever used their real name). Keiichi almost got a nose-bleed from the sight of her, she was a tall woman, wearing a quite scandalous dress, the revealed quite a lot of leg and didn't do much to hide any cleavage, she wore a veil that covered most of her face.
Keiichi:...*poor kid's in shock*
Rose: ah velcome...moi have predicted your arrival, vhat's vrong? You seem, vhat's ze word? Uncomfortable
Keiichi: well I just thought you'd you know wouldn't be this young
Rose: ah zank you, moi take zhat as a compliment, now I know vhy you're here, you vant to get your fortune told
Keiichi: well actually I'm just looking...um NOT IN THAT way I mean, it's just argh I don't even know why I'm here
Rose: please don't go, moi is not finished yet
Keiichi: it's alright I really don't believe in this sort of thing
Rose: then vhy are you here? Moi will zell you, you feel so empty, you have ze woman you love by your zide and yet you feel zhat is not enough..you vant to learn how you can feel better about ze love you have, Keiichi Morisato
Keiichi froze dead in his tracks
Keiichi: wait how did you know my name?
Rose: Madam Rose knows all didn't you read my sign? moi know all about love and fortune
Keiichi: (she got my problem dead on too.I do feel empty but this can- fortune teller, really doesn't have the solution does she?)
Rose: moi zake ze great offense zhat you zink I'm a fraud
Keiichi: gack...
Rose: all I ask Keiichi is that you hear me out, I have no interest in your money..you're special zo I'll read your fortune for free
Keiichi: what the hell couldn't hurt..(creepy it's almost like she can read my mind)
Rose: of course I can read your mind, but zhats besides ze point...
Rose reached under a table and drew a deck a tarot cards
Keiichi: what? No crystal ball?
Rose: no, zhat is not necessary, ze cards are all that moi needs, now.
Rose shuffled them and laid out several of them face down
Rose: now Keiichi, pick a card
Keiichi: um I may now know much about fortune telling but I'm pretty sure this is not a technique
Rose: you zhould not concern yourself about zuch trifle details just pick a card
Keiichi shrugs and picks one of them, he turns it over, it is a strange looking card written in some foreign language, but the picture definitely depicts two (nude) lovers holding on to each other
Roase: ah ze lover's card..it zells zhat your love is pure, you love ze Belldandy is it? vith all your heart but the extend of your love is big you don't just vant to be loved but rather you vant to be a little more intimate
Keiichi: um and how does this help me?
Keiichi already knew this, he didn't need some two bit con artist telling him things he already knew but it was a little freaky she knew Bell's name.
Rose: vait, I'm not finished..
Rose drew several more cards and picked one
Rose: oh I zee
Keiichi: what? What is it..it's not death is it? Please don't tell me it's death
Rose: ze happy squirrel!!!!!
Keiichi: -_-;; ooooookay
Rose: you don't realize the zrouble you're in do you Keiichi?
Keiichi: unless I am a nut, no...
Rose: ze happy squirrel is the mischievous bringer of misfortune and according to ze cards it is going to bring misfortune on your relationship with the one you love the most, however zhis card is also the bringer of strength
Keiichi: how so?
Rose: when misfortune comes you have the chance to make a decision that will affect your happiness, choose right and you will have your desires fulfilled, choose vrong and you vill lose the ze one you cherish the most
Keiichi:...
Rose: ho ho ho ho ho.
Keiichi: what's so funny?
Rose: forgive me, but first you called me a con and now you believe me
Keiichi: I do not
Rose: do not deny it Keiichi, I can read it in your eyes
Keiichi: is it really possible that I can lose Bell? Like I admit several things has happened that almost made me lose her but..can this be any different then those other times?
Rose: oui, zhis vill be ze worst one..but do not doubt your own strength Keiichi, I believe in you
Keiichi: tell me what will happen?
Rose: I cannot tell you all you need zo do is be prepared to protect her
Keiichi: protect her? Me?
Rose: oui, you..
Keiichi was taken back by all this, protect her? Usually it was always the other way round. Sure he would help her in whatever way he could but to go so far as protecting her? No that was something Keiichi knew he was unable to do
Keiichi: that's a very kind thought to think I'm capable of such a thing but..
Rose: but what? Are you saying you are incapable of protecting the one you love?
Keiichi meekly nodded his head
Rose shook her head in disappointment
Rose: zhat is ze problem with zoday's vorld, people have forgotten how to zruely love
Keiichi: huh?
Rose: love can bloom anywhere but you must be able to protect zhat loved one
Keiichi: is this another fortune?
Rose: non, it's advice.do you know what made ze romances of ze past zo successful?
Keiichi: no
Rose: it was because ze lovers vere villing to protect each other, now a days zhat feeling is gone. People claim to love one another but do zhey really know it it's zrue? Zhey don't that's what and many of zhose so called loves end in failure zhats vhat's so zragic about zoday's vorld. None of zhose people realize zhey aren't meant for each other zill its' zoo late
Keiichi: then does that mean I'm not right for Belldandy?
Rose: non, I'm not saying zhat, people usually get mixed up vhen I talk about strength. Vhat I mean is you need to be strong in your heart, zee ze strength in your heart and you will triumph, you'll zee
Keiichi:...
Rose: zhat is all I have to say, may your path be filled with happiness
Keiichi: bye
Rose: oh before you go..I have one last gift for you
Rose reached under the table and pulled out a small box
Keiichi: what's this?
Rose: after you fulfill your promise to protect her and after you realize your own desires open it vhen ze time is right, you'll know
Keiichi: gee thanks
Keiichi pocketed the box and exited the tent.
End Chapter 1 Well that was chapter one not bad, but I could have done better.. anyway this first chapter focused on how Keiichi's love for Belldandy can be even more truer by being able to protect her!!! But what does that mean? Find out soon
Chapter 2 will focus on Belldandy's point of view as she learns something very special about her relationship with Kei and herself oh and get the soy sauce, I hope I can get it up soon
But in the meantime here's some questions you can or cannot answer
Madam Rose's quote: "love can bloom anywhere but you must be able to protect zhat loved one" was a revised and slightly altered quote taken from what game? Who do you think Rose is? Hint her name gives it away I made a Simpson's gag somewhere in the fic can you find it? I made several past Ah My Goddess references can you find them as well? Did I make any of the characters too OOC?
Anyway if Madam Rose speech confused you, I don't blame you that's my pathetic attempt at trying to make a French accent..sigh back to the drawing boards.