Title: Unfinished Business: Conclusion
Author: Nala (nala@fanfiction.net)
Disclaimers in part 1
2 months later
1130 EST
JAG HQ
Admiral Chegwidden's POV***
The sounds of Rabb and Mackenzie arguing break through the bullpen and I stop in shock trying to remember the last time I heard them fighting with each other. As I listen closer, I can tell that though their voices are raised, they aren't angry at each other. I sigh in relief and watch as the two round the corner still bantering with each other. .
"Harm, you didn't honestly think I was going to fall for that did you?" She looks at him with an expression mixed with amusement and disbelief.
Rabb shrugs. "I had to try it, Mac. My client deserves a vigorous defense."
She snorts at his comment. "Your client is guilty as hell and you know it. He deserves to go to Leavenworth and that is exactly where I am going to send him"
"I just can't believe that didn't work. I must be losing my touch." Rabb frowns at her.
"I know all your tricks, Sailor. Don't forget that the next time you try to sandbag me in court."
"Oh Mac, you definitely don't know all my tricks." Harm stares at her with his patented flyboy grin along with a raised eyebrow.
At that moment Mac notices my presence and turns bright red at the last comment. Her flabbergasted look is not lost on Rabb who turns to see what has her attention. I have to hold back the laughter as he stands ramrod straight. I could let them off easy, but I can't resist the urge to mess with Rabb at least a little bit.
"Rabb. What tricks would you be referring to?" His complexion turns a ghostly white and from the corner of my eye I see Mac trying to hold back her laughter.
"Uh, courtroom strategy, sir. I didn't intend it to sound inappropriate. My apologies, sir." At the rate he is backpedaling he's going to land on his six any second. I give him one last glare and narrow my eyes at him. I decide not to embarrass Mac since I have a soft spot for her and she has to put up with Rabb's ego as it is. As I walk away, I hear Mac snicker out loud and I know Rabb must be giving her his best glare because she suddenly bursts out in laughter and walks to her office. I find myself grinning as I think of how things are back to normal. Actually, they're really better than they ever were. Those two are growing closer and the depth of their friendship goes beyond anything they ever shared before Mac left on that mission. I wonder if anything more is going on, but from Rabb's comments I don't think they have crossed that line, yet.
4 hours later
JAG library
Mac's POV***
I'm sitting here surrounded by law books hoping to find an obscure reference to help with the new case Harm and I just got. I stretch my arms and roll my neck to get some of the kinks out. As I look across the table, I see Harm intently studying another law book. I take the moment to study him and my feelings for him. We've regained our friendship and the easy joking and banter is back. But is there more? As I look at his handsome features and study the lines of his face I think over the last few months and even years. I'm not surprised to find that I love him. I don't think I ever stopped loving him. But that isn't what I'm feeling right now. No, I'm in love with him. I feel a tinge of guilt, as if I'm betraying Jabir. But it fades quickly as Harriet's words come back to me and remind me that he would want me to find happiness. She's right too. I know Jabir would want that for me.
I wonder how he feels about me. I know he loves me as a friend, but is he in love with me? He was at one time, but I don't know anymore. I gradually realize that I'm not staring at the top of his head anymore but into his brilliant blue eyes. My first instinct is to look away from the intensity of his gaze, but I find myself searching his eyes. Hoping to find an answer to my unspoken question. My breath catches as I see his eyes fill with love and desire.
Rabb's POV***
I feel her eyes on me, studying me. She seems lost in another world as I raise my eyes to hers. I watch her emotions play across her face. I can tell the moment she realizes I am looking back at her. At first I think she is going to look away, but she holds my gaze; her eyes asking me a silent question. I try to convey my feelings for her with one simple look.
"Sarah." My voice is barely a whisper. Desire arcs between us like fingers of electricity stroking our skin.
The moment is lost as Bud and Harriet come into the library bringing the results of their search for information. I look to her and silently vow that we will finish the unspoken conversation started this evening. Soon, I'll say the words out loud. My heart is beating fast as I realize that I am so close to having what I desire most.
Next evening
1800 EST
Mac's Apt
Mac's POV*** Harm is lazing on the couch while I check on the baked Salmon we're having for dinner. He has been giving me cooking lessons, in attempt to 'broaden my talents'. Tonight is the first dish I've made entirely on my own and I'm really hoping it comes out all right.
We haven't talked about last night's moment in the library but I'm content to let things move forward between us without pushing. When I looked into his eyes last night, any doubts about his feelings were put to rest. I feel safe in the knowledge that he loves me and when the time is right we will move forward.
Rabb's POV***
I move from the couch and watch as she checks on the salmon she is baking for us tonight. I'm actually really impressed that she has picked up cooking so quickly, but I guess I shouldn't be too surprised. I think she's capable of doing anything.
"Harm, will you toss me the hot pad?"
Oh, I can't resist this. I have a clear shot at her. I send it sailing through the air and it thumps her directly in the back of her head. "Oh sorry, thought you were going to catch it."
"That's a little hard to do when my back is facing you." She turns and gives me her best glare, but I can see the edges of her mouth turning up in a smile. That however is replaced by a different look. Uh oh. That's her payback is hell look.
"Harm, could you come give me a hand with this?" Her smile is innocent but the mischievousness in her eyes is kind of scary, in a really sexy sort of way. She must sense my hesitation because she snickers. Ok, that's a challenge. I can take the best she has to offer.
I move over to help her, while trying to keep an eye on her. She asks me to get a bowl off her top shelf. I am forced to take my eyes off of her for one second when I feel a spray of water hit me in the back. What the?? Turning I barely have enough time to see her point the spray nozzle from the kitchen sink at me and then the next thing I know I am getting drenched. She is laughing hysterically and the sound of it warms me in spite of the cold dousing I am getting.
"This is war, jarhead." I barely manage to say as she aims the spray directly at my face. I rush forward and catch her before she can get away. Grabbing the nozzle from her I hold her in my arms and proceed to drench her from head to toe. Our laughter fills the apartment and I feel the best I have in years. She's struggling to get away but refuses to cry uncle, which makes me laugh even more. She is so stubborn! I decide to show mercy and put the nozzle away but hold her close.
She struggles again to get away but only ends up turning in my arms to face me. She looks up at me laughing and I am struck by how beautiful she is. The moment changes as I feel the soft outlines of her pressed against me. Her white tank top is soaked and hiding very little of her. She's so close and my body his humming with the sexual tension between us. I need to taste her. As she sees my hunger, her eyes darken with her own desire. I slowly lower my mouth to hers. What starts out as a gentle brush against her lips turns into a mind-numbing kiss. All of my senses are on fire as she opens her mouth to me and our tongues stroke each other. Her soft moans of approval fuel my need for her.
Mac's POV***
He eases me backwards and traps my body between his and the counter, pressing against me as his mouth devours mine. He moves his mouth to gently suck on one of my ear lobes while his hand trails down tugging the wet strap of my tank top off my shoulder. If it weren't for him pressing me against the counter I don't think I could even stand right now. I feel my breathing become ragged as he traces a fiery path of kisses from my neck down to my collarbone and still lower. Every nerve I have is overloaded with his touch, but still I need more. I vaguely register the loss of his warmth and open my eyes to find him staring back at me with the most incredible look on his face.
"Harm?"
"Sarah, before we go any further. I need to tell you how I feel. I need to make sure you know." He is struggling for breath and his words come out in a breathy whisper. He stands up and holds my face in his hands, tilting my face up to him.
"Sarah, I love you so much. I don't want to lose another day that could be spent with you. I don't want to take the chance again that you might not know how much I'm in love with you."
My heart soars at his declaration of love. "Harm, I love you too. I don't think I ever stopped loving you." He presses his finger against my mouth and smiles softly.
"I know." He lowers his mouth to mine again and I feel myself getting lost in the sensation. The next thing I know he scoops me up into his arms and is carrying me to my bedroom.
He looks down at me and smiles. "We have unfinished business and I'd prefer to finish it somewhere more comfortable." As I look up into his loving eyes, I find myself breathless at the depth of my feelings for him. I have to be the luckiest woman in the world to find two incredible loves in one lifetime. I know I'll spend the rest of my life with this man and as Harm and I make love, I know I've finally found home.
END OF STORY
Ha ha, couldn't resist the unfinished business line. Well, that's it for my first fanfic. Hope you all enjoyed. I know I tortured the poor shippers a bit, but isn't it sweeter when they get together after a trial?? Now that it is finished, I would love to know your final thoughts on the story. Pretty please! But no flames. I'll just delete them and think you're an idiot for being so mean.
THANK YOU to ALL those who left encouragement and nice reviews. Especially those who were consistent in leaving a review after each chapter. That helped a ton!
Oh, yes there is a non-edited version on the Shipperhm list at yahoo groups. Got questions, email me at the address listed above. THANKS!!! =0)
One more OH. A sequel?? Now there's an idea. What trouble could I cook up for our favorite couple now that they're together??? HMMM...
Author: Nala (nala@fanfiction.net)
Disclaimers in part 1
2 months later
1130 EST
JAG HQ
Admiral Chegwidden's POV***
The sounds of Rabb and Mackenzie arguing break through the bullpen and I stop in shock trying to remember the last time I heard them fighting with each other. As I listen closer, I can tell that though their voices are raised, they aren't angry at each other. I sigh in relief and watch as the two round the corner still bantering with each other. .
"Harm, you didn't honestly think I was going to fall for that did you?" She looks at him with an expression mixed with amusement and disbelief.
Rabb shrugs. "I had to try it, Mac. My client deserves a vigorous defense."
She snorts at his comment. "Your client is guilty as hell and you know it. He deserves to go to Leavenworth and that is exactly where I am going to send him"
"I just can't believe that didn't work. I must be losing my touch." Rabb frowns at her.
"I know all your tricks, Sailor. Don't forget that the next time you try to sandbag me in court."
"Oh Mac, you definitely don't know all my tricks." Harm stares at her with his patented flyboy grin along with a raised eyebrow.
At that moment Mac notices my presence and turns bright red at the last comment. Her flabbergasted look is not lost on Rabb who turns to see what has her attention. I have to hold back the laughter as he stands ramrod straight. I could let them off easy, but I can't resist the urge to mess with Rabb at least a little bit.
"Rabb. What tricks would you be referring to?" His complexion turns a ghostly white and from the corner of my eye I see Mac trying to hold back her laughter.
"Uh, courtroom strategy, sir. I didn't intend it to sound inappropriate. My apologies, sir." At the rate he is backpedaling he's going to land on his six any second. I give him one last glare and narrow my eyes at him. I decide not to embarrass Mac since I have a soft spot for her and she has to put up with Rabb's ego as it is. As I walk away, I hear Mac snicker out loud and I know Rabb must be giving her his best glare because she suddenly bursts out in laughter and walks to her office. I find myself grinning as I think of how things are back to normal. Actually, they're really better than they ever were. Those two are growing closer and the depth of their friendship goes beyond anything they ever shared before Mac left on that mission. I wonder if anything more is going on, but from Rabb's comments I don't think they have crossed that line, yet.
4 hours later
JAG library
Mac's POV***
I'm sitting here surrounded by law books hoping to find an obscure reference to help with the new case Harm and I just got. I stretch my arms and roll my neck to get some of the kinks out. As I look across the table, I see Harm intently studying another law book. I take the moment to study him and my feelings for him. We've regained our friendship and the easy joking and banter is back. But is there more? As I look at his handsome features and study the lines of his face I think over the last few months and even years. I'm not surprised to find that I love him. I don't think I ever stopped loving him. But that isn't what I'm feeling right now. No, I'm in love with him. I feel a tinge of guilt, as if I'm betraying Jabir. But it fades quickly as Harriet's words come back to me and remind me that he would want me to find happiness. She's right too. I know Jabir would want that for me.
I wonder how he feels about me. I know he loves me as a friend, but is he in love with me? He was at one time, but I don't know anymore. I gradually realize that I'm not staring at the top of his head anymore but into his brilliant blue eyes. My first instinct is to look away from the intensity of his gaze, but I find myself searching his eyes. Hoping to find an answer to my unspoken question. My breath catches as I see his eyes fill with love and desire.
Rabb's POV***
I feel her eyes on me, studying me. She seems lost in another world as I raise my eyes to hers. I watch her emotions play across her face. I can tell the moment she realizes I am looking back at her. At first I think she is going to look away, but she holds my gaze; her eyes asking me a silent question. I try to convey my feelings for her with one simple look.
"Sarah." My voice is barely a whisper. Desire arcs between us like fingers of electricity stroking our skin.
The moment is lost as Bud and Harriet come into the library bringing the results of their search for information. I look to her and silently vow that we will finish the unspoken conversation started this evening. Soon, I'll say the words out loud. My heart is beating fast as I realize that I am so close to having what I desire most.
Next evening
1800 EST
Mac's Apt
Mac's POV*** Harm is lazing on the couch while I check on the baked Salmon we're having for dinner. He has been giving me cooking lessons, in attempt to 'broaden my talents'. Tonight is the first dish I've made entirely on my own and I'm really hoping it comes out all right.
We haven't talked about last night's moment in the library but I'm content to let things move forward between us without pushing. When I looked into his eyes last night, any doubts about his feelings were put to rest. I feel safe in the knowledge that he loves me and when the time is right we will move forward.
Rabb's POV***
I move from the couch and watch as she checks on the salmon she is baking for us tonight. I'm actually really impressed that she has picked up cooking so quickly, but I guess I shouldn't be too surprised. I think she's capable of doing anything.
"Harm, will you toss me the hot pad?"
Oh, I can't resist this. I have a clear shot at her. I send it sailing through the air and it thumps her directly in the back of her head. "Oh sorry, thought you were going to catch it."
"That's a little hard to do when my back is facing you." She turns and gives me her best glare, but I can see the edges of her mouth turning up in a smile. That however is replaced by a different look. Uh oh. That's her payback is hell look.
"Harm, could you come give me a hand with this?" Her smile is innocent but the mischievousness in her eyes is kind of scary, in a really sexy sort of way. She must sense my hesitation because she snickers. Ok, that's a challenge. I can take the best she has to offer.
I move over to help her, while trying to keep an eye on her. She asks me to get a bowl off her top shelf. I am forced to take my eyes off of her for one second when I feel a spray of water hit me in the back. What the?? Turning I barely have enough time to see her point the spray nozzle from the kitchen sink at me and then the next thing I know I am getting drenched. She is laughing hysterically and the sound of it warms me in spite of the cold dousing I am getting.
"This is war, jarhead." I barely manage to say as she aims the spray directly at my face. I rush forward and catch her before she can get away. Grabbing the nozzle from her I hold her in my arms and proceed to drench her from head to toe. Our laughter fills the apartment and I feel the best I have in years. She's struggling to get away but refuses to cry uncle, which makes me laugh even more. She is so stubborn! I decide to show mercy and put the nozzle away but hold her close.
She struggles again to get away but only ends up turning in my arms to face me. She looks up at me laughing and I am struck by how beautiful she is. The moment changes as I feel the soft outlines of her pressed against me. Her white tank top is soaked and hiding very little of her. She's so close and my body his humming with the sexual tension between us. I need to taste her. As she sees my hunger, her eyes darken with her own desire. I slowly lower my mouth to hers. What starts out as a gentle brush against her lips turns into a mind-numbing kiss. All of my senses are on fire as she opens her mouth to me and our tongues stroke each other. Her soft moans of approval fuel my need for her.
Mac's POV***
He eases me backwards and traps my body between his and the counter, pressing against me as his mouth devours mine. He moves his mouth to gently suck on one of my ear lobes while his hand trails down tugging the wet strap of my tank top off my shoulder. If it weren't for him pressing me against the counter I don't think I could even stand right now. I feel my breathing become ragged as he traces a fiery path of kisses from my neck down to my collarbone and still lower. Every nerve I have is overloaded with his touch, but still I need more. I vaguely register the loss of his warmth and open my eyes to find him staring back at me with the most incredible look on his face.
"Harm?"
"Sarah, before we go any further. I need to tell you how I feel. I need to make sure you know." He is struggling for breath and his words come out in a breathy whisper. He stands up and holds my face in his hands, tilting my face up to him.
"Sarah, I love you so much. I don't want to lose another day that could be spent with you. I don't want to take the chance again that you might not know how much I'm in love with you."
My heart soars at his declaration of love. "Harm, I love you too. I don't think I ever stopped loving you." He presses his finger against my mouth and smiles softly.
"I know." He lowers his mouth to mine again and I feel myself getting lost in the sensation. The next thing I know he scoops me up into his arms and is carrying me to my bedroom.
He looks down at me and smiles. "We have unfinished business and I'd prefer to finish it somewhere more comfortable." As I look up into his loving eyes, I find myself breathless at the depth of my feelings for him. I have to be the luckiest woman in the world to find two incredible loves in one lifetime. I know I'll spend the rest of my life with this man and as Harm and I make love, I know I've finally found home.
END OF STORY
Ha ha, couldn't resist the unfinished business line. Well, that's it for my first fanfic. Hope you all enjoyed. I know I tortured the poor shippers a bit, but isn't it sweeter when they get together after a trial?? Now that it is finished, I would love to know your final thoughts on the story. Pretty please! But no flames. I'll just delete them and think you're an idiot for being so mean.
THANK YOU to ALL those who left encouragement and nice reviews. Especially those who were consistent in leaving a review after each chapter. That helped a ton!
Oh, yes there is a non-edited version on the Shipperhm list at yahoo groups. Got questions, email me at the address listed above. THANKS!!! =0)
One more OH. A sequel?? Now there's an idea. What trouble could I cook up for our favorite couple now that they're together??? HMMM...