I didn't get any reviews for my first chapter but I don't care. I am writing the next chapter now in hope that someone will see it and review!
A/N This chap may seem a little weird but remember I am typing this really late at night to see if my writing gets better/worse in the wee hours of the morning!
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" 'Twas a long time ago that I remember... I was a boy, a young boy, a boy... Did I mention that I was a boy? Well, now that we have that matter strait we can continue..."
"I was a boy... Wait done that... I lived with my parents in a log cabin and had a happy life..."
The scene comes into focus and a log cabin is revealed. There are people inside they appear to be happy. When suddenly A HUGE HULKING BEAST APPEARED OUT OF THIN AIR AND ATE THE LOT OF THEM INCLUDING THE CABIN!!! Wait, wait, sorry bout that... Wrong fanfic material... They appeared to be happy. They had good reason to be too. They had a son who was about to become of age. The coming of age represented when a boy became a man. This ceremony took place on the twelfth of every month and every boy in the village who had turned twelve would go to it. This coming of age was a time for celebration. The boy, now man would find a job and start to get ready to raise a family of his own. It also meant he had his freedom, he had control of his life...
"Honey, honey, wake up!" His foster mother said as she shook the sleeping child. "It's the coming of age ceremony today!"
"Ahhhhhh." He groaned. Why did he have to get up so early? "Wazzamatter?" He said, still somewhat confused due to recently waking up. He began to stand up but him being so accident prone (you will find more out about this later in the story) he tripped on seemingly nothing falling face-first onto the floor breaking, not just his nose, but his leg which was twisted at an odd angle still in the sheets.
Later on that day at the ceremony all the boys who had turned twelve that month (which totalled 15) were lined up to receive the acknowledgement that they were finally men. The one with the unknown name and the broken leg stood within the line. He shall be referred to as Will for the story's purpose. When his turn finally came the priest walked up in front of him and began to recite the vows that would complete the ceremony. "Omun toe loosa mun jah doo wun cun..."Chanted the priest.
Later that day Will was at home sleeping after a stressful day. He dreamt of a holy-like being of the like he had never saw before in dream or reality. "What the fuck are you?" He asked the strange creature.
The creature fell from the sky and hit the ground hard. The creature had obviously fallen from shock.
"You do not know who I am?" It inquired.
"No actually I don't" He replied.
If the creature actually had a visible face it surly would have been contorted into a look so fearful it would have send Diablo himself running back to deepest depths of hell screaming for his mother.
"I am the almighty archangel Tyrael!"
"Nope, sorry doesn't ring any bells." He had a look of deep thought on his face as if he was trying to remember who Tyrael was. "Nope still can't remember." He grins sheepishly
"Arrrrrrg, if I wasn't one of the angles of heaven and I was a demon I would have had you dismembered a long dime ago!"
"Well, that's damn lucky for me aint it!" He replied a little too cockily.
"I have been sent to you in your dream is because it is your destiny to save the world from the three prime evils." He informed Will.
"Whoa, dude, hold on a second. You mean to say that me, a twelve year old can take on three fully-grown demons and come out victorious? I mean, I couldn't stand a chance against a single REGULAR demon for crying out-loud!"
To which Tyrael replied. "Well, you see, ummm, ahhh, I gotta go. Erm, important heaven business gotta go bye! Do what I command you or you will end up going to hell."
"Ohh whoa, what a big and hard decision to make!" he called out sarcastically.
He suddenly woke...
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So... How did you like that? Please review or NO MORE CHAPTERS GOT IT? Good...
A/N This chap may seem a little weird but remember I am typing this really late at night to see if my writing gets better/worse in the wee hours of the morning!
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" 'Twas a long time ago that I remember... I was a boy, a young boy, a boy... Did I mention that I was a boy? Well, now that we have that matter strait we can continue..."
"I was a boy... Wait done that... I lived with my parents in a log cabin and had a happy life..."
The scene comes into focus and a log cabin is revealed. There are people inside they appear to be happy. When suddenly A HUGE HULKING BEAST APPEARED OUT OF THIN AIR AND ATE THE LOT OF THEM INCLUDING THE CABIN!!! Wait, wait, sorry bout that... Wrong fanfic material... They appeared to be happy. They had good reason to be too. They had a son who was about to become of age. The coming of age represented when a boy became a man. This ceremony took place on the twelfth of every month and every boy in the village who had turned twelve would go to it. This coming of age was a time for celebration. The boy, now man would find a job and start to get ready to raise a family of his own. It also meant he had his freedom, he had control of his life...
"Honey, honey, wake up!" His foster mother said as she shook the sleeping child. "It's the coming of age ceremony today!"
"Ahhhhhh." He groaned. Why did he have to get up so early? "Wazzamatter?" He said, still somewhat confused due to recently waking up. He began to stand up but him being so accident prone (you will find more out about this later in the story) he tripped on seemingly nothing falling face-first onto the floor breaking, not just his nose, but his leg which was twisted at an odd angle still in the sheets.
Later on that day at the ceremony all the boys who had turned twelve that month (which totalled 15) were lined up to receive the acknowledgement that they were finally men. The one with the unknown name and the broken leg stood within the line. He shall be referred to as Will for the story's purpose. When his turn finally came the priest walked up in front of him and began to recite the vows that would complete the ceremony. "Omun toe loosa mun jah doo wun cun..."Chanted the priest.
Later that day Will was at home sleeping after a stressful day. He dreamt of a holy-like being of the like he had never saw before in dream or reality. "What the fuck are you?" He asked the strange creature.
The creature fell from the sky and hit the ground hard. The creature had obviously fallen from shock.
"You do not know who I am?" It inquired.
"No actually I don't" He replied.
If the creature actually had a visible face it surly would have been contorted into a look so fearful it would have send Diablo himself running back to deepest depths of hell screaming for his mother.
"I am the almighty archangel Tyrael!"
"Nope, sorry doesn't ring any bells." He had a look of deep thought on his face as if he was trying to remember who Tyrael was. "Nope still can't remember." He grins sheepishly
"Arrrrrrg, if I wasn't one of the angles of heaven and I was a demon I would have had you dismembered a long dime ago!"
"Well, that's damn lucky for me aint it!" He replied a little too cockily.
"I have been sent to you in your dream is because it is your destiny to save the world from the three prime evils." He informed Will.
"Whoa, dude, hold on a second. You mean to say that me, a twelve year old can take on three fully-grown demons and come out victorious? I mean, I couldn't stand a chance against a single REGULAR demon for crying out-loud!"
To which Tyrael replied. "Well, you see, ummm, ahhh, I gotta go. Erm, important heaven business gotta go bye! Do what I command you or you will end up going to hell."
"Ohh whoa, what a big and hard decision to make!" he called out sarcastically.
He suddenly woke...
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So... How did you like that? Please review or NO MORE CHAPTERS GOT IT? Good...