Hewwoachies!!! It's me again, Evui-chan, and i finally got around to writing chapter 2 of Michael Doi's Makeover!! ^^;;; I know, It took me a while, but I'm finally back!! Heheh! Oh, I don't own Bust A Groove, Yadda yadda, no one does but the ppl who created it, because if a fanfic writer was one of them...I don't know, just review this damn chapter!


Evui: Ahhh....sweeeet. Now Doi, are you ready to show yourself to everybody?

M-D: Ummm...but Kitty-N! She liked me before, and now think of what she'll do to me!! I'm gonna die!

Evui: Uh, can't help ya there buddy, for I'll be turning all my attention to sexy Heat....waaaa....his sweet..hard sexy body...hard dick..

M-D: Evui...you're scaring me...

Evui: Huh? Oh, heheh, sorry, I'll stop...anywho, time to introduce yourself to the people, are you ready?

M-D: No..

Evui: Ok!! drags him downstairs Everybody! Feast your eyes upon the new and improved Michael Doi!!!!

Everybody: Whoa!!!!

Kitty-N: gasp Doi-sama!! huggles the life out of him KAWAII!!!!

M-D: Evui!!! Help...me!!

Evui: Sorry. Uhh...Heat? If I roughly kissed you, what would you do?

Heat: What the Hell!?

Frida: Hey!! He's mine! wraps her arm around his

Evui: kicks her away No!!!! blasts her Ha! kisses Heat and runs and kisses Strike and runs away, laughing insanely MYUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! .

Heat&Stike: ,,,O.O,,,

Evui: returns Ok, I'm back. Michael, are you okay?

M-D: face is turning blue then a shade of purple from lack of air

Shorty: Kitty-N...umm..I think you're killing him...o.o

K-N: No, I'm not!!! He's perfectly fine!!! kisses him

M-D: Evui.....I can't...breathe....@_@ passes out from lack of air

Shorty: I told you...

Evui: Uh oh.

Tsutomu: Obviously...

Evui: DIE, BASTARD!!!!! punches him in the nose, knocking him unconscious Hahahahaha!!!

Robo-Z: puts his gun down Target down. Termination already occured.

Comet: You were planning on shooting him?

Evui: It would be ok with me. looks at Tsutomu who is out cold on the floor suddenly hears a Japanese "Yoooo-oooohh!!", spins upside down, see's Pander's face and hands, and falls . OWWW!! Pander!!

Pander: You must not kill. It's evil to do.

Evui: To Hell with you, pander. What did you do that for? And you do look like Uncle Fester!! And I don't feel bad for you anymore, you freak of nature!!

Hamm: But I though all of us were freaks...

Evui: No, Pander's a freak OF NATURE...his dance style's whacked up, his song is whacked up, A/N: But it's cool anyway, I love Enka 1 o.o;;his level's whacked up, his appearance is whacked up....EVERYTHING is whacked up, even his attack...

Hamm: Oh.

Pander: begins to dwell around aimlessly

Evui: Heat, why? Please tell me why.

Heat: I don't know, Evui. Why'd you kiss me?

Evui:.....Because you are SEXAY!!! Dead sexay!!! And ur 1P self, Strike, is sexy, too!! A/N: His 2P charater is UGLY, lol

Strike: Don't make me point another gun at your head...wraps his arm around Kelly
^_~

Evui: No! You can't stop me! Ever!

Comet: Evui, just calm down..o.o

Evui: No, the fucking I will not calm down!!!

Strike: Fuck this shit, I wanna go home...

Evui: -_-...Wait....walks to Michael Doi, who is laying on the couch Poor thing...kawaii....^^

M-D: wakes up Huh? Am I dead?

Evui: No, unfortunately for you, you aren't....

M-D: Damn.

Evui: wonders why she's watching Jaws IRL What a corny ass movie. Anyway, Kitty-N, I think you shoud stay away from Doi for a while...

K-N: Why? I love him.

M-D: Ughh...

Evui: That's why...anyway, I'm going to go in the backyard and get the Playstation, I stored it in the back of the shed there. It's dark, Heat can you come with me?

Heat: I really don't trust you...

Evui: drags him outside Come on...Heat, I'm scared...

Heat: Heh, there might be a man or a rabid animal back there, Ev..

Evui: Why? o.o

Heat: Why?? You confuse me sometimes....o.O

Evui: I know!

yeah, yeah, whatever gets the Playstation and comes back in

Evui: Ok! Now, we're gonna play some Bust A Groove 2!!!

Shorty: Alright!!!!

Pinky: Meh, I'm not in it..

Hamm: Neither am I...hey, how come they removed the only two Black people huh? They got something against us?

Evui: A/N I dun like rascist ppl an' stuff, and I'm Black IRL just ta let ya'll know... I dono, I've been wondering the same thing...whatever, let's play!

Shorty: Can I go first?

Kelly: I'll play against Shorty..

Evui: Ok, I like ya'll both, so you can go first A/N: Not like that, eww!!

they play as their charaters in Shorty's level, and Shorty ends up winning by 300 pts., and they fever time together the reaching fever time

yeah, yeah, I can't think of anything else to add to this section, except for the fact that Comet ended up touching Heat's dick in the the reaching two-dancer fever time just like before and Frida got mad

Evui: Ok, I run out of ideas at this time, so meh. Oh, and Matt, when are you and Mika gonna have sex? O.o I scare myself.



Ok, so this one was crappy, I know, lol. Punk Angel, this was made to MST so I hope you get around to it soon. ^^ Matt is not worthy of the name of Zim, lol. Who knows? Maybe I'll write a lemon, one day, because as weird as it may seem, I'm excellent at those, so I may write one to this story. Reviews will only tell what pairings there till be....KellyxStrike? HeatxFrida? HeatxEvui? MikaxMatt? lol! I'm done, goobyeHewwoachies!!! It's me again, Evui-chan, and i finally got around to writing chapter 2 of Michael Doi's Makeover!! ^^;;; I know, It took me a while, but I'm finally back!! Heheh! Oh, I don't own Bust A Groove, Yadda yadda, no one does but the ppl who created it, because if a fanfic writer was one of them...I don't know, just review this damn chapter!


Evui: Ahhh....sweeeet. Now Doi, are you ready to show yourself to everybody?

M-D: Ummm...but Kitty-N! She liked me before, and now think of what she'll do to me!! I'm gonna die!

Evui: Uh, can't help ya there buddy, for I'll be turning all my attention to sexy Heat....waaaa....his sweet..hard sexy body...hard dick..

M-D: Evui...you're scaring me...

Evui: Huh? Oh, heheh, sorry, I'll stop...anywho, time to introduce yourself to the people, are you ready?

M-D: No..

Evui: Ok!! drags him downstairs Everybody! Feast your eyes upon the new and improved Michael Doi!!!!

Everybody: Whoa!!!!

Kitty-N: gasp Doi-sama!! huggles the life out of him KAWAII!!!!

M-D: Evui!!! Help...me!!

Evui: Sorry. Uhh...Heat? If I roughly kissed you, what would you do?

Heat: What the Hell!?

Frida: Hey!! He's mine! wraps her arm around his

Evui: kicks her away No!!!! blasts her Ha! kisses Heat and runs and kisses Strike and runs away, laughing insanely MYUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! .

Heat&Stike: ,,,O.O,,,

Evui: returns Ok, I'm back. Michael, are you okay?

M-D: face is turning blue then a shade of purple from lack of air

Shorty: Kitty-N...umm..I think you're killing him...o.o

K-N: No, I'm not!!! He's perfectly fine!!! kisses him

M-D: Evui.....I can't...breathe....@_@ passes out from lack of air

Shorty: I told you...

Evui: Uh oh.

Tsutomu: Obviously...

Evui: DIE, BASTARD!!!!! punches him in the nose, knocking him unconscious Hahahahaha!!!

Robo-Z: puts his gun down Target down. Termination already occured.

Comet: You were planning on shooting him?

Evui: It would be ok with me. looks at Tsutomu who is out cold on the floor suddenly hears a Japanese "Yoooo-oooohh!!", spins upside down, see's Pander's face and hands, and falls . OWWW!! Pander!!

Pander: You must not kill. It's evil to do.

Evui: To Hell with you, pander. What did you do that for? And you do look like Uncle Fester!! And I don't feel bad for you anymore, you freak of nature!!

Hamm: But I though all of us were freaks...

Evui: No, Pander's a freak OF NATURE...his dance style's whacked up, his song is whacked up, A/N: But it's cool anyway, I love Enka 1 o.o;;his level's whacked up, his appearance is whacked up....EVERYTHING is whacked up, even his attack...

Hamm: Oh.

Pander: begins to dwell around aimlessly

Evui: Heat, why? Please tell me why.

Heat: I don't know, Evui. Why'd you kiss me?

Evui:.....Because you are SEXAY!!! Dead sexay!!! And ur 1P self, Strike, is sexy, too!! A/N: His 2P charater is UGLY, lol

Strike: Don't make me point another gun at your head...wraps his arm around Kelly
^_~

Evui: No! You can't stop me! Ever!

Comet: Evui, just calm down..o.o

Evui: No, the fucking I will not calm down!!!

Strike: Fuck this shit, I wanna go home...

Evui: -_-...Wait....walks to Michael Doi, who is laying on the couch Poor thing...kawaii....^^

M-D: wakes up Huh? Am I dead?

Evui: No, unfortunately for you, you aren't....

M-D: Damn.

Evui: wonders why she's watching Jaws IRL What a corny ass movie. Anyway, Kitty-N, I think you shoud stay away from Doi for a while...

K-N: Why? I love him.

M-D: Ughh...

Evui: That's why...anyway, I'm going to go in the backyard and get the Playstation, I stored it in the back of the shed there. It's dark, Heat can you come with me?

Heat: I really don't trust you...

Evui: drags him outside Come on...Heat, I'm scared...

Heat: Heh, there might be a man or a rabid animal back there, Ev..

Evui: Why? o.o

Heat: Why?? You confuse me sometimes....o.O

Evui: I know!

yeah, yeah, whatever gets the Playstation and comes back in

Evui: Ok! Now, we're gonna play some Bust A Groove 2!!!

Shorty: Alright!!!!

Pinky: Meh, I'm not in it..

Hamm: Neither am I...hey, how come they removed the only two Black people huh? They got something against us?

Evui: A/N I dun like rascist ppl an' stuff, and I'm Black IRL just ta let ya'll know... I dono, I've been wondering the same thing...whatever, let's play!

Shorty: Can I go first?

Kelly: I'll play against Shorty..

Evui: Ok, I like ya'll both, so you can go first A/N: Not like that, eww!!

they play as their charaters in Shorty's level, and Shorty ends up winning by 300 pts., and they fever time together the reaching fever time

yeah, yeah, I can't think of anything else to add to this section, except for the fact that Comet ended up touching Heat's dick in the the reaching two-dancer fever time just like before and Frida got mad

Evui: Ok, I run out of ideas at this time, so meh. Oh, and Matt, when are you and Mika gonna have sex? O.o I scare myself.



Ok, so this one was crappy, I know, lol. Punk Angel, this was made to MST so I hope you get around to it soon. ^^ Matt is not worthy of the name of Zim, lol. Who knows? Maybe I'll write a lemon, one day, because as weird as it may seem, I'm excellent at those, so I may write one to this story. Reviews will only tell what pairings there till be....KellyxStrike? HeatxFrida? HeatxEvui? MikaxMatt? lol! I'm done, goobyeHewwoachies!!! It's me again, Evui-chan, and i finally got around to writing chapter 2 of Michael Doi's Makeover!! ^^;;; I know, It took me a while, but I'm finally back!! Heheh! Oh, I don't own Bust A Groove, Yadda yadda, no one does but the ppl who created it, because if a fanfic writer was one of them...I don't know, just review this damn chapter!


Evui: Ahhh....sweeeet. Now Doi, are you ready to show yourself to everybody?

M-D: Ummm...but Kitty-N! She liked me before, and now think of what she'll do to me!! I'm gonna die!

Evui: Uh, can't help ya there buddy, for I'll be turning all my attention to sexy Heat....waaaa....his sweet..hard sexy body...hard dick..

M-D: Evui...you're scaring me...

Evui: Huh? Oh, heheh, sorry, I'll stop...anywho, time to introduce yourself to the people, are you ready?

M-D: No..

Evui: Ok!! drags him downstairs Everybody! Feast your eyes upon the new and improved Michael Doi!!!!

Everybody: Whoa!!!!

Kitty-N: gasp Doi-sama!! huggles the life out of him KAWAII!!!!

M-D: Evui!!! Help...me!!

Evui: Sorry. Uhh...Heat? If I roughly kissed you, what would you do?

Heat: What the Hell!?

Frida: Hey!! He's mine! wraps her arm around his

Evui: kicks her away No!!!! blasts her Ha! kisses Heat and runs and kisses Strike and runs away, laughing insanely MYUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! .

Heat&Stike: ,,,O.O,,,

Evui: returns Ok, I'm back. Michael, are you okay?

M-D: face is turning blue then a shade of purple from lack of air

Shorty: Kitty-N...umm..I think you're killing him...o.o

K-N: No, I'm not!!! He's perfectly fine!!! kisses him

M-D: Evui.....I can't...breathe....@_@ passes out from lack of air

Shorty: I told you...

Evui: Uh oh.

Tsutomu: Obviously...

Evui: DIE, BASTARD!!!!! punches him in the nose, knocking him unconscious Hahahahaha!!!

Robo-Z: puts his gun down Target down. Termination already occured.

Comet: You were planning on shooting him?

Evui: It would be ok with me. looks at Tsutomu who is out cold on the floor suddenly hears a Japanese "Yoooo-oooohh!!", spins upside down, see's Pander's face and hands, and falls . OWWW!! Pander!!

Pander: You must not kill. It's evil to do.

Evui: To Hell with you, pander. What did you do that for? And you do look like Uncle Fester!! And I don't feel bad for you anymore, you freak of nature!!

Hamm: But I though all of us were freaks...

Evui: No, Pander's a freak OF NATURE...his dance style's whacked up, his song is whacked up, A/N: But it's cool anyway, I love Enka 1 o.o;;his level's whacked up, his appearance is whacked up....EVERYTHING is whacked up, even his attack...

Hamm: Oh.

Pander: begins to dwell around aimlessly

Evui: Heat, why? Please tell me why.

Heat: I don't know, Evui. Why'd you kiss me?

Evui:.....Because you are SEXAY!!! Dead sexay!!! And ur 1P self, Strike, is sexy, too!! A/N: His 2P charater is UGLY, lol

Strike: Don't make me point another gun at your head...wraps his arm around Kelly
^_~

Evui: No! You can't stop me! Ever!

Comet: Evui, just calm down..o.o

Evui: No, the fucking I will not calm down!!!

Strike: Fuck this shit, I wanna go home...

Evui: -_-...Wait....walks to Michael Doi, who is laying on the couch Poor thing...kawaii....^^

M-D: wakes up Huh? Am I dead?

Evui: No, unfortunately for you, you aren't....

M-D: Damn.

Evui: wonders why she's watching Jaws IRL What a corny ass movie. Anyway, Kitty-N, I think you shoud stay away from Doi for a while...

K-N: Why? I love him.

M-D: Ughh...

Evui: That's why...anyway, I'm going to go in the backyard and get the Playstation, I stored it in the back of the shed there. It's dark, Heat can you come with me?

Heat: I really don't trust you...

Evui: drags him outside Come on...Heat, I'm scared...

Heat: Heh, there might be a man or a rabid animal back there, Ev..

Evui: Why? o.o

Heat: Why?? You confuse me sometimes....o.O

Evui: I know!

yeah, yeah, whatever gets the Playstation and comes back in

Evui: Ok! Now, we're gonna play some Bust A Groove 2!!!

Shorty: Alright!!!!

Pinky: Meh, I'm not in it..

Hamm: Neither am I...hey, how come they removed the only two Black people huh? They got something against us?

Evui: A/N I dun like rascist ppl an' stuff, and I'm Black IRL just ta let ya'll know... I dono, I've been wondering the same thing...whatever, let's play!

Shorty: Can I go first?

Kelly: I'll play against Shorty..

Evui: Ok, I like ya'll both, so you can go first A/N: Not like that, eww!!

they play as their charaters in Shorty's level, and Shorty ends up winning by 300 pts., and they fever time together the reaching fever time

yeah, yeah, I can't think of anything else to add to this section, except for the fact that Comet ended up touching Heat's dick in the the reaching two-dancer fever time just like before and Frida got mad

Evui: Ok, I run out of ideas at this time, so meh. Oh, and Matt, when are you and Mika gonna have sex? O.o I scare myself.



Ok, so this one was crappy, I know, lol. Punk Angel, this was made to MST so I hope you get around to it soon. ^^ Matt is not worthy of the name of Zim, lol. Who knows? Maybe I'll write a lemon, one day, because as weird as it may seem, I'm excellent at those, so I may write one to this story. Reviews will only tell what pairings there till be....KellyxStrike? HeatxFrida? HeatxEvui? MikaxMatt? lol! I'm done, goobye!