Disclaimer: I still do not own these characters. Ninja Fox is mine I think.
So Konami own everything but Ninja Fox. Man these are tough.
Thanks for the review. I think I fixed the first chapter a bit. But soon it won't be in a first person view. Next Chapter will be the end of that. Thanks for the review.
After us being spotted we ran back to the armory hoping they wouldn't find us there. The guards went past the armory and looked for us in the room we fought all the guards. We started to head back, we scanned the room to make sure we weren't in for a surprise. As we headed down the other passage we heard loud screams and gunshots coming from the other room. We ran back I grabbed the USP and Raiden grabbed his Socom.
I saw what I could not believe. All the guards lay there dead and appeared to be cut by some type of blade. The bodies now were higher than ever we had to tackle a wall of bodies just to get in the room. Someone lay there. A female person with a blade. She noticed us come in and drew her blade out.
"Who are you?" Raiden asked.
"I am Ninja Fox, the deadliest women you will ever see" she replied.
Then after she said that, she disappeared. I guess we did owe her, I mean she did take out all these guards but I sure didn't trust her. We headed back to the Metal Gear storage room. Nobody was there. We walked cautiously across the room. Someone came in. We quickly hid behind two of the tanks that held the Metal Gears.
"Hmm." said a familiar voice as it walked back out.
Ocelot I thought. We continued walking after Ocelot left. As we came to the end of the room we saw another passage, or rather two. I called Raiden on the codec.
Snake (codec): We have a problem
Raiden (codec): I noticed
Snake (codec): You take left I take right
Raiden (codec): But Sna-
Snake (codec): No
I turned off the transmission and we were off. I took the right while Raiden took the left. I then got a call from Otacon.
Otacon (codec): Snake you there?
Snake (codec): Yeah I'm here
Otacon (codec): I just got some new information. It appears that the people inside Arsenal Gear have been using computers.
Snake (codec): Yeah what about it?
Otacon (codec): Snake this may be hard to believe but. Snake (codec): What is it already?
Otacon (codec): The terrorists inside Arsenal are.Vulcan Raven, Sniper Wolf, Psycho Mantis, Revolver Ocelot, and someone named Ninja Fox.
Snake (codec): That can't be!
Otacon (codec): It's what on the file. Information on everyone one of those guys.
Snake (codec): Could it be a trap?
Otacon (codec): I don't know but it has to mean something. Be careful Snake
Snake (codec): Got it.Snake out.
I still couldn't believe it. Everyone but Ocelot and this Ninja Fox I've killed.I then had one of those freaky feelings. I killed all of them. I started to regret it once again; it was my mission and my role. It scared me but I have to go on. The world depends on me now. I started to walk USP at hand. As I walked through this hall the walls started to fall.
Then I was trapped; two walls lay there blocking my way of getting out. I tried to call Otacon and Raiden but the codec would only give me static. I was trapped once again. I fired madly at the walls with the M4. Not even a dent lay there. I heard a voice over in the room.
"Hahahahaha!" said the voice.
"OCELOT!" I yelled.
"Time for you to see what it's like to be frozen Snake!" Ocelot said.
Suddenly what appeared to be gas came into the room. I started to freeze, then shiver. Then suddenly a flash of light came around me. I had been frozen. The last thing I remember are the walls coming back up and seeing...Raiden!
Thanks for the review. I think I fixed the first chapter a bit. But soon it won't be in a first person view. Next Chapter will be the end of that. Thanks for the review.
After us being spotted we ran back to the armory hoping they wouldn't find us there. The guards went past the armory and looked for us in the room we fought all the guards. We started to head back, we scanned the room to make sure we weren't in for a surprise. As we headed down the other passage we heard loud screams and gunshots coming from the other room. We ran back I grabbed the USP and Raiden grabbed his Socom.
I saw what I could not believe. All the guards lay there dead and appeared to be cut by some type of blade. The bodies now were higher than ever we had to tackle a wall of bodies just to get in the room. Someone lay there. A female person with a blade. She noticed us come in and drew her blade out.
"Who are you?" Raiden asked.
"I am Ninja Fox, the deadliest women you will ever see" she replied.
Then after she said that, she disappeared. I guess we did owe her, I mean she did take out all these guards but I sure didn't trust her. We headed back to the Metal Gear storage room. Nobody was there. We walked cautiously across the room. Someone came in. We quickly hid behind two of the tanks that held the Metal Gears.
"Hmm." said a familiar voice as it walked back out.
Ocelot I thought. We continued walking after Ocelot left. As we came to the end of the room we saw another passage, or rather two. I called Raiden on the codec.
Snake (codec): We have a problem
Raiden (codec): I noticed
Snake (codec): You take left I take right
Raiden (codec): But Sna-
Snake (codec): No
I turned off the transmission and we were off. I took the right while Raiden took the left. I then got a call from Otacon.
Otacon (codec): Snake you there?
Snake (codec): Yeah I'm here
Otacon (codec): I just got some new information. It appears that the people inside Arsenal Gear have been using computers.
Snake (codec): Yeah what about it?
Otacon (codec): Snake this may be hard to believe but. Snake (codec): What is it already?
Otacon (codec): The terrorists inside Arsenal are.Vulcan Raven, Sniper Wolf, Psycho Mantis, Revolver Ocelot, and someone named Ninja Fox.
Snake (codec): That can't be!
Otacon (codec): It's what on the file. Information on everyone one of those guys.
Snake (codec): Could it be a trap?
Otacon (codec): I don't know but it has to mean something. Be careful Snake
Snake (codec): Got it.Snake out.
I still couldn't believe it. Everyone but Ocelot and this Ninja Fox I've killed.I then had one of those freaky feelings. I killed all of them. I started to regret it once again; it was my mission and my role. It scared me but I have to go on. The world depends on me now. I started to walk USP at hand. As I walked through this hall the walls started to fall.
Then I was trapped; two walls lay there blocking my way of getting out. I tried to call Otacon and Raiden but the codec would only give me static. I was trapped once again. I fired madly at the walls with the M4. Not even a dent lay there. I heard a voice over in the room.
"Hahahahaha!" said the voice.
"OCELOT!" I yelled.
"Time for you to see what it's like to be frozen Snake!" Ocelot said.
Suddenly what appeared to be gas came into the room. I started to freeze, then shiver. Then suddenly a flash of light came around me. I had been frozen. The last thing I remember are the walls coming back up and seeing...Raiden!
