Well, up to chappie no. 4...
Ok, explanation from last time: Pan used the 'make everyone younger wish' and thought they (those affected) wouldn't remember what had happened the past 26 years. For some reason, Goten doesn't, but everybody else does (a Son quirk?). And Goku has unnatural wisdom and (also unnatural) age.
SlAsHeD, I hope I've cleared that up.
Thank you to: SlAsHeD, Maddy, Embury, ills, Chibi Kenie and Rice C25 for reviewing! I luvs ya all! ^_^
Remember, ages are as follows:
Pan=25
Bra=24 (I know she's should probably be older than Pan, but oh well)
Goten=13
Trunks=14
Vegeta=32
Gohan =mid 20's
and
Marron is 31.
On wid the story...
Vegeta stormed out of the gravity room with a sweat-soaked towel draped over his shoulder. After not finding out anything from Kakarott's younger brat, he had decided to train some more before lunch. But the call for his regular midday meal never came. Usually, being a full-blooded sayian, he was starving but the missing 30 plates of food was getting to him, gnawing at him, and wasn't the sway to a man through his stomach? How did his wife expect him to do anything for her if she didn't feed him?
"Woman! Where is my meal?" Vegeta's voice echoed from the dining room down to Bulma's lab. Vegeta straightened; satisfied that she would be able to hear him. Or at least she should have.
The small telecom TV that had other linked screens all over the house (& in the gravity room) switched on. "Tousan, quick! I'm in the lab! Kaasan's (mother) really sick!" The face of his daughter vanished from the screen.
--A little later- -
"She's been coughing up blood for the past three hours, the lab computer recorded it. She needs a doctor, or the hospital, desperately.
Vegeta scrunched up his face. The closest medical centre would be in the Western Capital, but Bulma needed help urgently, and if he flew her there fast, she might injure herself. A lot.
"It's too risky. We need some senzu beans," Vegeta told Bra. She nodded and moved to get some from upstairs. She gasped and her hand flung to her mouth.
"Trunks took them with him! He said-…"
Bra decided that such things were too personal, even within the family. "It doesn't matter. We've got to find him! I'll go to the CC Office (the part in Satan City where Trunks works)." She flew outside, giving her mother a last, sad/anxious glance before heading off to try and save Bulma's life. (A.N. In my story, Bra was taught the real basics of martial arts, and she knows how to fly, but she lost interest in fighting and Vegeta gave up on teaching her)
Still remaining in the room with his sleeping/jolting in sleep wife, Vegeta bent down and gently kissed her pale forehead.
He was made to suffer again. 'Kami, why?'
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Pan glared at the rock beside her. She was sitting on a small beach cliff with her feet dangling dangerously over the edge.
No one really cared about her, that's what her lesson in life to learn. Maybe her grandpa Goku did, but he was dead. (And as old as the Jurassic period - but an didn't know that)
How was she supposed to live like this, with everyone telling her she was 'too young' for this, saying she 'wasn't able to understand' that. She had feelings, you know. All she wanted was for someone to care, or at least acknowledge her existence. Maybe Trunks was right – he always said he was anyway.
"I don't love you…You Don't love me… You're too young…
His words swarmed inside of her mind and stabbed at her. Every word was a wound to her heart, her soul, her very being.
Making her wishes had been pointless; Trunks had at least made that clear to her. She hoped everyone was happy with their tails. Maybe next year she'd do everyone a favour and wish for the dragon to end her life.
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Goku (aka Mr Oldie-poots) looked down at the earth from King Kai's temporary planet. Bubbles and Gregory were fooling around somewhere, they hadn't noticed his (age) predicament (A.N. yet…*grins maliciously*)
"King Kai, I need to send Pan a message," came the crackled old voice of the saviour of the universe. "She needs to know there is someone who cares, someone- who hasn't realised it yet." Goku's mysterious tone unusual/even unnatural wisdom within its words. King Kai sat up, dazed. Who was Goku talking about?
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Munku-JGSPTV: Yes, what was Goku talking about? Please review, it only takes a minute.
Next time
"Indeed, Mr Popo. It seems the need for a different relationship is dwelling within their hearts. The loss of insert name here will be a great blow to them all."
Thanks to ills, Embury and Miss Myrhe for reviewing! ^_^
I Luvs ya all!!! *Sighs* reviews are like (my) babies. Lovable, cute, adorable babies that I raised and cared for, and now they're all grown up. Please Review!
Oh! And if you have any ideas on the couples you want for this fic email me: laiosiq@hotmail.com or leave it in your review (notice how that word comes up a lot? *snicker snicker* Ok. I'm desperate.) Remember, I'm a weird person, this is a weird fic, and it can have weird couples! Think I'd like to keep the Br/Got pairing though. And I can't believe I've written a sort of t/m.
I mean – Marron isn't one of my fave characters and so of course I LOVE a good T/P. but if you think this isn't where this story is supposed to go…
Oh, and you may go ewwwwwwww. P/V, but I've read a few now, and they seem to work (YES, Amanda, just not the real lemony ones) okay if they're really well written. Remember that the age difference between them doesn't really matter now. (Vegeta's 7 years older – less than Trunks was before the wishes), but if you have a couple in mind you'd be wanting to see (you're the ones who get a chance to 'appreciate' this fic) just tell me. And if you have ANY ideas on anything, even just a character quirk (e.g., Veggie's bed teddy Snuggles) or the storyline, please tell me also. ^_^
Cya next time,
Munku-JGSPTV
Ok, explanation from last time: Pan used the 'make everyone younger wish' and thought they (those affected) wouldn't remember what had happened the past 26 years. For some reason, Goten doesn't, but everybody else does (a Son quirk?). And Goku has unnatural wisdom and (also unnatural) age.
SlAsHeD, I hope I've cleared that up.
Thank you to: SlAsHeD, Maddy, Embury, ills, Chibi Kenie and Rice C25 for reviewing! I luvs ya all! ^_^
Remember, ages are as follows:
Pan=25
Bra=24 (I know she's should probably be older than Pan, but oh well)
Goten=13
Trunks=14
Vegeta=32
Gohan =mid 20's
and
Marron is 31.
On wid the story...
Vegeta stormed out of the gravity room with a sweat-soaked towel draped over his shoulder. After not finding out anything from Kakarott's younger brat, he had decided to train some more before lunch. But the call for his regular midday meal never came. Usually, being a full-blooded sayian, he was starving but the missing 30 plates of food was getting to him, gnawing at him, and wasn't the sway to a man through his stomach? How did his wife expect him to do anything for her if she didn't feed him?
"Woman! Where is my meal?" Vegeta's voice echoed from the dining room down to Bulma's lab. Vegeta straightened; satisfied that she would be able to hear him. Or at least she should have.
The small telecom TV that had other linked screens all over the house (& in the gravity room) switched on. "Tousan, quick! I'm in the lab! Kaasan's (mother) really sick!" The face of his daughter vanished from the screen.
--A little later- -
"She's been coughing up blood for the past three hours, the lab computer recorded it. She needs a doctor, or the hospital, desperately.
Vegeta scrunched up his face. The closest medical centre would be in the Western Capital, but Bulma needed help urgently, and if he flew her there fast, she might injure herself. A lot.
"It's too risky. We need some senzu beans," Vegeta told Bra. She nodded and moved to get some from upstairs. She gasped and her hand flung to her mouth.
"Trunks took them with him! He said-…"
Bra decided that such things were too personal, even within the family. "It doesn't matter. We've got to find him! I'll go to the CC Office (the part in Satan City where Trunks works)." She flew outside, giving her mother a last, sad/anxious glance before heading off to try and save Bulma's life. (A.N. In my story, Bra was taught the real basics of martial arts, and she knows how to fly, but she lost interest in fighting and Vegeta gave up on teaching her)
Still remaining in the room with his sleeping/jolting in sleep wife, Vegeta bent down and gently kissed her pale forehead.
He was made to suffer again. 'Kami, why?'
______________________________________________________________
Pan glared at the rock beside her. She was sitting on a small beach cliff with her feet dangling dangerously over the edge.
No one really cared about her, that's what her lesson in life to learn. Maybe her grandpa Goku did, but he was dead. (And as old as the Jurassic period - but an didn't know that)
How was she supposed to live like this, with everyone telling her she was 'too young' for this, saying she 'wasn't able to understand' that. She had feelings, you know. All she wanted was for someone to care, or at least acknowledge her existence. Maybe Trunks was right – he always said he was anyway.
"I don't love you…You Don't love me… You're too young…
His words swarmed inside of her mind and stabbed at her. Every word was a wound to her heart, her soul, her very being.
Making her wishes had been pointless; Trunks had at least made that clear to her. She hoped everyone was happy with their tails. Maybe next year she'd do everyone a favour and wish for the dragon to end her life.
___________________*_______________________________*________________________ _____
Goku (aka Mr Oldie-poots) looked down at the earth from King Kai's temporary planet. Bubbles and Gregory were fooling around somewhere, they hadn't noticed his (age) predicament (A.N. yet…*grins maliciously*)
"King Kai, I need to send Pan a message," came the crackled old voice of the saviour of the universe. "She needs to know there is someone who cares, someone- who hasn't realised it yet." Goku's mysterious tone unusual/even unnatural wisdom within its words. King Kai sat up, dazed. Who was Goku talking about?
____________________________________________________________________________ ___
Munku-JGSPTV: Yes, what was Goku talking about? Please review, it only takes a minute.
Next time
"Indeed, Mr Popo. It seems the need for a different relationship is dwelling within their hearts. The loss of insert name here will be a great blow to them all."
Thanks to ills, Embury and Miss Myrhe for reviewing! ^_^
I Luvs ya all!!! *Sighs* reviews are like (my) babies. Lovable, cute, adorable babies that I raised and cared for, and now they're all grown up. Please Review!
Oh! And if you have any ideas on the couples you want for this fic email me: laiosiq@hotmail.com or leave it in your review (notice how that word comes up a lot? *snicker snicker* Ok. I'm desperate.) Remember, I'm a weird person, this is a weird fic, and it can have weird couples! Think I'd like to keep the Br/Got pairing though. And I can't believe I've written a sort of t/m.
I mean – Marron isn't one of my fave characters and so of course I LOVE a good T/P. but if you think this isn't where this story is supposed to go…
Oh, and you may go ewwwwwwww. P/V, but I've read a few now, and they seem to work (YES, Amanda, just not the real lemony ones) okay if they're really well written. Remember that the age difference between them doesn't really matter now. (Vegeta's 7 years older – less than Trunks was before the wishes), but if you have a couple in mind you'd be wanting to see (you're the ones who get a chance to 'appreciate' this fic) just tell me. And if you have ANY ideas on anything, even just a character quirk (e.g., Veggie's bed teddy Snuggles) or the storyline, please tell me also. ^_^
Cya next time,
Munku-JGSPTV