AN I've got to keep down my author's notes. I think I butt in too much.
Chibi Kenie: 'Goku isn't that old! He's younger than Vegeta, and all the
times he's been dead, like 8 or 9 years that I know of... means that he's
14 or 15 years YOUNGER than Veggie-head'
I received that message which actually helps me a great deal, thanks Kenie! ^_^ It made me realise that unless you were me (the one writing it) you happen to not pick up the tiny details. Here's what happened when Pan made her wishes:
*Pan stayed the same age
*Bra stayed the same age
*Trunks is in his 14-year-old body
*Vegeta is in his 32-year-old body
*Gohan is in his 25 (or something) year-old body
*Goten is in his 13-year-old body but some mistake occurred (a Son quirk?) and he acts like his 13 self, having no remembrance of the past 26 yrs.
*Goku's age somehow went in the opposite direction. I don't know about you, but I reckon Sayians would have a much longer life span than humans... So Goku is about 200. (A 100 year-old in human-span, just to give you an idea.) AND, yes, Goku did age more than 26 years. And plus, he's dead, so maybe that's an explanation.
If you don't get it, please tell me in a review. ^_^ I just luuuuv reviews. *hint hint* And if you don't like it, you can stop reading it- everyone's entitled to an opinion!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, except maybe the plot. All I have is this computer and a bed that sqeeches during the middle of the night (waking me up – I sleep lightly. VERY lightly). Heck! I don't even own this computer (or the sqeechy, killing machine bed either, in case you wanted to know). So plz don't sue.
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His face LOOKED the same. The same hair, eyes, nose, well – all the same facial features.
'Your ki is stronger*' she had said.
It was inevitable that without years of training, he wouldn't be as powerful. But he had his tail back; didn't that count for something? Vegeta had said that a Sayain's tail was the key to his power… He didn't want to try powering up to Super Sayian in the house, he might break something, and Videl wouldn't very happy.
Well, he could always ask Dende what was going on. He was the Guardian of the Earth after all. Telling his wife where he was going, Gohan headed off to find some answers…
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*My fic-Gohan trained with Pan until she was about eight and since after that he didn't train for about 20 years, that would make him more powerful when he was younger, right? If you don't get it, please tell me!
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Bra wished she knew what was going on. Something was weird. And she hadn't been able to find any senzu's either – or Trunks who DID have all of the beans Korrin had grown over the past year. There seemed to be getting fewer and fewer of them, although the need for them wasn't as strong. Occasionally her father would use one after some hard training, or her brother & Goten would have a couple after a long spar. Still, she wanted to know what was going on.
Maybe Dende could just heal her mum. And she could hit one stone with two birds, or whatever that saying was. She could ask him if he knew what was going on. Bra stood up from her thinking position at Korrin's Tower and flew up to Kami/Now Dende's Lookout.
(A.N. The writing between breaks seems to be getting shorter, doesn't it? Someone give me ideas for COUPLES, the storyline, etc. ANYTHING would be appreciated. Maybe just what you think's going to happen. HELP ME!!!
Look – I've decided to take a break here – I need some new ideas & next chapter will (hopefully) be better once I've collected myself. Sorry for such a short chappie (and I took ages to post it…)!
This doesn't mean goodbye! ^_^)
The review
Button
Is just
Down
There!!!
I received that message which actually helps me a great deal, thanks Kenie! ^_^ It made me realise that unless you were me (the one writing it) you happen to not pick up the tiny details. Here's what happened when Pan made her wishes:
*Pan stayed the same age
*Bra stayed the same age
*Trunks is in his 14-year-old body
*Vegeta is in his 32-year-old body
*Gohan is in his 25 (or something) year-old body
*Goten is in his 13-year-old body but some mistake occurred (a Son quirk?) and he acts like his 13 self, having no remembrance of the past 26 yrs.
*Goku's age somehow went in the opposite direction. I don't know about you, but I reckon Sayians would have a much longer life span than humans... So Goku is about 200. (A 100 year-old in human-span, just to give you an idea.) AND, yes, Goku did age more than 26 years. And plus, he's dead, so maybe that's an explanation.
If you don't get it, please tell me in a review. ^_^ I just luuuuv reviews. *hint hint* And if you don't like it, you can stop reading it- everyone's entitled to an opinion!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, except maybe the plot. All I have is this computer and a bed that sqeeches during the middle of the night (waking me up – I sleep lightly. VERY lightly). Heck! I don't even own this computer (or the sqeechy, killing machine bed either, in case you wanted to know). So plz don't sue.
*** *** *** ***
His face LOOKED the same. The same hair, eyes, nose, well – all the same facial features.
'Your ki is stronger*' she had said.
It was inevitable that without years of training, he wouldn't be as powerful. But he had his tail back; didn't that count for something? Vegeta had said that a Sayain's tail was the key to his power… He didn't want to try powering up to Super Sayian in the house, he might break something, and Videl wouldn't very happy.
Well, he could always ask Dende what was going on. He was the Guardian of the Earth after all. Telling his wife where he was going, Gohan headed off to find some answers…
______________________________________________________________________
*My fic-Gohan trained with Pan until she was about eight and since after that he didn't train for about 20 years, that would make him more powerful when he was younger, right? If you don't get it, please tell me!
______________________________________________________________________
Bra wished she knew what was going on. Something was weird. And she hadn't been able to find any senzu's either – or Trunks who DID have all of the beans Korrin had grown over the past year. There seemed to be getting fewer and fewer of them, although the need for them wasn't as strong. Occasionally her father would use one after some hard training, or her brother & Goten would have a couple after a long spar. Still, she wanted to know what was going on.
Maybe Dende could just heal her mum. And she could hit one stone with two birds, or whatever that saying was. She could ask him if he knew what was going on. Bra stood up from her thinking position at Korrin's Tower and flew up to Kami/Now Dende's Lookout.
(A.N. The writing between breaks seems to be getting shorter, doesn't it? Someone give me ideas for COUPLES, the storyline, etc. ANYTHING would be appreciated. Maybe just what you think's going to happen. HELP ME!!!
Look – I've decided to take a break here – I need some new ideas & next chapter will (hopefully) be better once I've collected myself. Sorry for such a short chappie (and I took ages to post it…)!
This doesn't mean goodbye! ^_^)
The review
Button
Is just
Down
There!!!