A/N: Hey.....ok..Go ahead...yell..i know...I've been slacking...sorry. You know school started back up..and well......I only really have time to write on the weekends....I'm sorry this took so long to get out and hope you like this one.....well on to the story! But first... this is like a special.....my...50 reveiw special!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! So..hope you like!

Disclaimer: I don't own Dbz!

Goten: So, you finally dusted off that thing and typed a chapter? Pan-Chan: Ok, So....it's school..and I try. Goten: It's called....orginization. * all stare at him for his big usage of words* Pan-Chan: Did you make that up yourself? Goten: No, I looked it up in the di...dicti...dictionary! Yeah, the dictionary. Trunks: You can tell he doesn't look at it often. Plus I think he hasn't even said the word: Dictionary. Goten: Don't get smart. You're becoming like her! * points finger at me.* Pan-Chan: Don't make me hide the frige agian. * Door opens, and all look at the doorway* BK: Good Kami, is it hot out there. Trunks: Hey, Bk. Pan-Chan: Hey gurl. Goten: ahaha! Did ya get my twinkies?? * puts on his best pathetic puppy dog eyes* Pan-Chan: Twinkies? Trunks: He asked you to get Twinkies? Pan-Chan: what are you? Married? * Both me and Trunks start snickering * BK: No, but since last time you and 'The Garbage Disposal' ate all the Twinkies, sweets...ect... Goten: Twinkies? Did you get the goods?? BK: Um...i know I got em..* looks through some grocery bags* There in here some where. Here. hold this. * hands Goten a bag full of chips* Goten: Gladly! Bk: Don't eat them!! * continues looking* Trunks: Some times...... Pan-Chan: I wonder about those two..... BK: Ok, here they are. Ok, start stuffin. * Hands goten two large bags of Twinkies...of course he gladly takes them* Goten: TWINKIES!!! * Grabs 'em and sits on the couch* BK: Your welcome. Goten: Fdknks * continues divouring the sweets* Pan-Chan: Ok...now to ge-- * doorbell rings* Now who is it? Goten: * Gulp* yeah, Gohan and Videl are out. Trunks: I got it! * Jumps up and answers the door.* 1 teenage girl: Eekk!!!! Like oh my god! It's Trunks!!! * faints* 2nd teenage girl: Caroline! Stop doing that! Trunks: Um.....What do you want? 1st teen. girl: * now fully standing, with stars in her eyes* Um...W-W-We wanted to know...wanted to know...* faints again* Trunks: * sweat drop....Goten comes to the door* 2nd teen. girl: GOKU!!!!! Goten: Um....no....sorry....* trys to pry the girl off him. While trunks is poking the other with his foot* BK: * grabs a purse, and coincedentally it had 2 bricks in it.* Excuse me... 2nd teen. girl: What do you want? BK: * WHAP!......thwamps the girl on the head with the bricks* Don't let the door hit you on the way out. * walks back inside* Pan-Chan: Go BK!* starts up computer* 2nd teen. girl: * rubs her head that has a large bump on it* If you aren't Goku...who are you? Goten: Goten. 1st teen girl: * peeps eye open.* Hey! Stop poking me! I'm not no dead.....um..thing! Trunks: We could change that....* laughs demonically, turns around and walks back to the couch laughing demonically the whole time* Goten: What...do...you...want? 2nd teengirl: Ok...it's goten right? Ok...We're doing a..a..servey to see which guys would go with us to the prom. * smiles. and winks at Goten, who just stares at her with a look that said: Not in this lifetime.* 1st teengirl: Yeah, I was gonna see if Trunks would go with me.... Pan-Chan: That's not happening! * continues to wait for the computer to load* 2nd teengirl: Anyways...I was gonna ask Goku..but since you are an exact look alike..* puts on a hoochi voice* Would you go with me? Pretty please? Goten: * starts to snicker* Janie?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! * falls on floor laughing* 1st teen girl: Janie!! You said he wouldn't know you! 2nd teen girl: Well, I thought he wouldn't. But I guess I was just to gorgeous for the poor boy to forget. * flips her hair* Goten: * stops wheezing* Janie Capicello?? Is that really you? 2nd teen girl: Yes, It is. Goten: I didn't reconize you with out the head gear!!! * lets out a howl.and falls on the floor laughing agian* 2nd teengirl: It's not my fault Billy tripped me.... 1st teen girl: Head gear? * face turns red from holding in her howls* Bk: Goten! Don't be rude.. Pan-Chan: What?! Goten.. You keep going! Keep that rude streak going! And...GET THOSE SPAZES OFF OUR PORCH! * Trunks gets up to assist Goten* 1st teen girl: I'm suprised you don't remember me..huney bun... Trunks: Oh..Kami..noo...noooo....Tally Cumberland? 1st teengirl: So you remember me!? Trunks: Unfortunatly.. 1st teen girl: Yes, I have beautified my self. * flips hair and winks at Trunks* Trunks: But...I must not have reconized you b/c the last time I saw you....you ..had..on..HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! * falls laughing* Goten: Hahhahah! * wheeze* had acne real bad and ...* hhahaha wheeze* had....had.... Trunks and Goten: THOSE HUGE GLASSES!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (Ok...they were like big rimmed glasses adn when she put them on they made her eyes look like 50 times larger...she had a crush on Trunks and Trunks well spent all elemetary school trying to hide from her* 1st teen girl: Well, now I'm beautiful! All this is 100% me! * does a little pose* PAn-Chan: Ok..Lets check this out. Those two won't get rid of them. They'll sit there and laugh at them for the rest of the day...* gets up and walks to the door* Ok..which one of you is 4 eyes Tally? * looks to one girl and to the other one* 1st teen girl: I don't have glasses no more. And now I'm drop dead perdy. Pan-Chan: So....um..how much did it cost? ' Fake-o!' ' HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! IT'S PLASTIC TALLY!! BRA'S BARBIE DOLL!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA' 1st teengilr: Nothing! PAn-Chan: No...really. How much? 20 thousand? 1st: No..actually 50... Pan-Chan: Ok...I'll give you teh count of ten to get your scank feet off my porch and to the next county. The clock';s tickin... 2nd: we're not going anywhere till..till you tell me how YOU got Trunks? Pan-Chan: 10! GET LOST! * glares at them* 1st and 2nd teen girls: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh................... .................................................... .. ...* high tail it outta there* Pan-Chan: Now, we gotta disenfect it! * walks back in, the boys following holding ther stomaches.* Trunks: Haha...woo...That was funny.. Goten: Yes..quite funny... Bk: So, how many reviews you got Pan-Chan? Pan-Chan: I dun know. I would know if I didn't have to get those skanks off our property.... Trunks: Sorry.. Goten: Yeah..sorry...it was really funny tho! * Starts howling,

Trunks joining in* Pa-Chan: * pulls up FF* Oh my Kami! I GOT 50 REVIEWS!!!! Bk: No way! Pan-Chan: HAha!!! TRUNKS GOTEN! GET THE SODA! Trunks: Soda? PAn-Chan: Go on. I'm thirsty. Trunks: Oh...* goes and gets some pop.* Pan-Chan: I'd like to say one thing to all my reviewers.................

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