Alright, after this chapter it might take some time before the next comes
out! Probably forever if I don't get enough reviews. Hence; if you want me
to continue show it and write many reviews! I don't mind getting more then
one from one person! [I'm really at the bottom of the pit by now, am I
not?] Oh, and I own nothing! In none of my stories in fact! But I think I
forget the disclaimer sometimes. ^_^;; [I have to look so fucking stupid
right now!!!]
Anyways, read and enjoy.
3. Chapter: Hunting Vision
I fought to keep my mind; in fact I didn't care much about our aim and the way to it. I trusted the boy! Thus I didn't know him, but I knew that I would be dead if his family hadn't cared about me through my illness. And I was sure that they still did! From what else reason they would bring me to this strange white thing, I saw at the horizon and that I expected to be the aim of our journey? As we reached a high white tower, the boy sped up into the air, along the tower. It wouldn't end at all, but after a time we sped along a little. I don't know what it was, but I could tell I had seen a white cat and a man standing there and starring at us. Later we reached the end of this endless tower, and I heard the boy telling me, that it was the castle of god. You surely can imagine that I was quite irritated about this information. Did they think I was already dead? The moment I thought it, I saw the irony about being half dead and still making such stupid jokes about death. As we landed, a man stepped out of the shadows in the castle that hid him before, and he went through the door towards us. His face signalled that he didn't know if he should trust us. "What did you think about bringing this girl up to Dende's? Who is this girl?" he asked as he reached us. Through my blurred vision I saw that his complexion was totally green. But these things did never mean anything to me and I didn't saw that it was unusual. The boy, I thought I heard the other man call him Gohan, explained what had happened, but I didn't listen, when the aches around my heart became worse. I didn't think I would be able to take this much longer. What was this all about? Where did these pains come from? I tried to concentrate. First I couldn't sense anything, but I recognized that the green man felt my mental level raise. It seemed that he couldn't put this feeling he had in its proper place. He looked at me, very irritated. I supposed that the people in this world didn't train their mind much, but their body. They all were strong, but their body was stronger than their mind. But he obviously trained his. Otherwise he wouldn't be able to sense anything. I let this thought went through my head, but as he let his mind off of me, I tried again to sense the reason for my pain. Again I raised my level, when I couldn't find anything and the man (I think I picked his name up as they both talked to each other: it was Piccolo as far as I knew) threw a very suspicious look in my direction. But I didn't care.
Then, suddenly I saw it. This well known face there in the shadows. A smile spread over the face as he noticed that my mind was with him. It seemed as if his look shot directly through my eyes into my mind and into the place where you can find the key to all my fears. I asked myself if he had cursed me, and if he was the reason of my pain. As if he had heard me, he nodded and raised his staff over his head high into the air. I noticed that he had put some gems around the top of the golden staff. At this moment I couldn't remember their right names, but their function. He used black magic that was for sure by now! All these gems! Some had the meaning for loneliness, depressions, dependence or addiction. Others stood for lack of success, confusion, fear, illness, and nightmares and so on. Plus there were letters written in them that stood for the same things. As the dark man mumbled some words in a forgotten language, I couldn't hold any longer as pain ran through my whole body like electricity. I never had felt so much pain. Not even as I was tortured in one dimension for stealing bread. (And I thought that was the ultimatum of what was possible!!!) My mind screamed for death, even if my intellect was against giving up and die. But there was no way around this torture. I couldn't hold any longer. So I began to scream the pain out, my body tighted and my muscles nearly tore. The two men around me got shocked at the scream that came suddenly and fast up my throat. As my body strained, Gohan couldn't hold me any longer. Two more people came out of the castle and stared at me like the two did. One of the two men who came out, -he was green, too-, seemed like he had felt my mental ki rise, but he didn't knew what was going on. The dark man's grinning face disappeared, as I fainted of the pain.
The dropped girl lay on the ground. She was unconscious, that was for sure. They looked at her uncertainly, until they noticed that her clothes absorbed blood that ran over her body. "We must carry her in" Gohan said but didn't do anything. So did Piccolo first, but when he thought that she could die if they didn't do anything, and that he this way would probably never know what that feeling ment that he felt a moment ago, he brought himself to lift her up and carry her inside.
Remember: No reviews, no chapters. I need to get feedback! In my opinion this story is still bad! But perhaps you can make me go on: My enthusiasm is strengthened by yours! So tell me what you want!
Farewell,
Lady Espelle
3. Chapter: Hunting Vision
I fought to keep my mind; in fact I didn't care much about our aim and the way to it. I trusted the boy! Thus I didn't know him, but I knew that I would be dead if his family hadn't cared about me through my illness. And I was sure that they still did! From what else reason they would bring me to this strange white thing, I saw at the horizon and that I expected to be the aim of our journey? As we reached a high white tower, the boy sped up into the air, along the tower. It wouldn't end at all, but after a time we sped along a little. I don't know what it was, but I could tell I had seen a white cat and a man standing there and starring at us. Later we reached the end of this endless tower, and I heard the boy telling me, that it was the castle of god. You surely can imagine that I was quite irritated about this information. Did they think I was already dead? The moment I thought it, I saw the irony about being half dead and still making such stupid jokes about death. As we landed, a man stepped out of the shadows in the castle that hid him before, and he went through the door towards us. His face signalled that he didn't know if he should trust us. "What did you think about bringing this girl up to Dende's? Who is this girl?" he asked as he reached us. Through my blurred vision I saw that his complexion was totally green. But these things did never mean anything to me and I didn't saw that it was unusual. The boy, I thought I heard the other man call him Gohan, explained what had happened, but I didn't listen, when the aches around my heart became worse. I didn't think I would be able to take this much longer. What was this all about? Where did these pains come from? I tried to concentrate. First I couldn't sense anything, but I recognized that the green man felt my mental level raise. It seemed that he couldn't put this feeling he had in its proper place. He looked at me, very irritated. I supposed that the people in this world didn't train their mind much, but their body. They all were strong, but their body was stronger than their mind. But he obviously trained his. Otherwise he wouldn't be able to sense anything. I let this thought went through my head, but as he let his mind off of me, I tried again to sense the reason for my pain. Again I raised my level, when I couldn't find anything and the man (I think I picked his name up as they both talked to each other: it was Piccolo as far as I knew) threw a very suspicious look in my direction. But I didn't care.
Then, suddenly I saw it. This well known face there in the shadows. A smile spread over the face as he noticed that my mind was with him. It seemed as if his look shot directly through my eyes into my mind and into the place where you can find the key to all my fears. I asked myself if he had cursed me, and if he was the reason of my pain. As if he had heard me, he nodded and raised his staff over his head high into the air. I noticed that he had put some gems around the top of the golden staff. At this moment I couldn't remember their right names, but their function. He used black magic that was for sure by now! All these gems! Some had the meaning for loneliness, depressions, dependence or addiction. Others stood for lack of success, confusion, fear, illness, and nightmares and so on. Plus there were letters written in them that stood for the same things. As the dark man mumbled some words in a forgotten language, I couldn't hold any longer as pain ran through my whole body like electricity. I never had felt so much pain. Not even as I was tortured in one dimension for stealing bread. (And I thought that was the ultimatum of what was possible!!!) My mind screamed for death, even if my intellect was against giving up and die. But there was no way around this torture. I couldn't hold any longer. So I began to scream the pain out, my body tighted and my muscles nearly tore. The two men around me got shocked at the scream that came suddenly and fast up my throat. As my body strained, Gohan couldn't hold me any longer. Two more people came out of the castle and stared at me like the two did. One of the two men who came out, -he was green, too-, seemed like he had felt my mental ki rise, but he didn't knew what was going on. The dark man's grinning face disappeared, as I fainted of the pain.
The dropped girl lay on the ground. She was unconscious, that was for sure. They looked at her uncertainly, until they noticed that her clothes absorbed blood that ran over her body. "We must carry her in" Gohan said but didn't do anything. So did Piccolo first, but when he thought that she could die if they didn't do anything, and that he this way would probably never know what that feeling ment that he felt a moment ago, he brought himself to lift her up and carry her inside.
Remember: No reviews, no chapters. I need to get feedback! In my opinion this story is still bad! But perhaps you can make me go on: My enthusiasm is strengthened by yours! So tell me what you want!
Farewell,
Lady Espelle