WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!! Im not getting any more reviews!! * cries
uncontrolably* Plz, for the love of the prophet Jesus, REVIEW!!! (ps—im not
a christian, so that prob explains the previous sentence)
Ch 5: the bomb squad…
Rated pg13 for language and animated violence.
The platform led tehm to… u gessed it… the STAGE.
NEW!! From now on, tehre will be frequent POV changing!
~zidane~
oh great…were on stage. Everyone stared at us in shock, and silence overcame the audience. "guys! Improvise!" I hissed to my friends, putting aki down and telling her to shut up.
They got the message.
"cornelia!" marcus shouted.
"cornelia is marcus's lover," I whispered to garnet.
"oh marcus!" she cried dramtically [shes totally pulling a rita, haha * inside joke*] the rest of the play went on, tehre wasn't much left. "cornelia" accidentally got stabbed, etc…
then a scared lookng kid ran up on stage [ how, I don't know, since the end of the ship is the stage, and it floats in a big open area, so everyone has to watch from their balconies and roof tops. Go figure]
his face was pitch black, I coodnt see it, excpet for his bright yellow eyes. He wore a tattered steepled hat, blue coat…thing… and pants tat were striped with wide vertical bands of seagreen and white. Some guys were chasing him, causing him to trip as they got on stage too.
"you okay, kid?" aki ran over to him and helped him up. The kid nodded ferverently and ran around some more away from the guys. He stopped and held out his gloved hands. "cornelia" was lying "dead" on the ground between him and the two guys.
"d-don't come any closer!!" he said quaveringly, and shot fireballs from his hands. They caught garnet's hood on fire.
"HOT HOT HOT HOT!!" she shriekd, jumping up suddenly and running around before she threw her hood off, revealing herself. The audience gasped and the queen stared in shock befre getting furious.
Steiner suddenly regained his senses. "seize them!" he shouted to the two guys. They were two of his knights!
~BATTLE!!!!! [goody]~
the queen felt the need to shoot a huge living fireball (called a bomb) at us… great… it floated behind that idiot steiner, who didn't notice it. His knights did, and they ran off.
"dude! Wat the hell is that Bomb thing doing?!" aki creid in horror. She recouped [busting out with the vocab…* another inside joke..*] her senses and drew her dagger. "Is it—"
"growing!" I finished her sentence for her. Everyone drew their weapons. Garnet had a rod, and the kid (a black mage) had a staff.
"I will not fall for such tricks!" stiener slashed arrogantly at me with his sword, but I nimbly dodged. [nimbly is a funny word…]
"fire!" the mage shouted and waved his staff, casuing fire damage to steiner.
"good shot!" aki complimented as garnet struck steiner with her rod.
"please steiner, behind you!" she said, but to no avail; steiner woodnt listen.
"you dumbass! Tehres a friggin giant monster behind you!" aki screamed and swiped at him so hard that she spun around 3 times and fell to the floor dizzy.
I rolled my eyes in impatience. Shes pretty powerful, but aki REALLY needs more practice. Meanwhile, the bomb kept growing. Now it was so huge, it cooda snacked on us all if it felt like it. Its shadow fell over the whole stage. FINALLY, steiner noticed that we were not kidding.
"its gonna blow!!" the mage cried. We all managed to run away as the ship tried to take off into the clouds. Just as we were getting away, something hit the airship, and it caught on fire. The ship shook violently in the clouds, then began gliding downwards,a flaming mass of flying wood. A dark forest of trees was going to be our landing pad. Everyone screamed for dear life. We were going to crash!!!
Well, this chapter was supposed to be longer, but I don't have time right now.. tis almost lunchtime!!
I WILL add a new char to this fic in the next chap!! Its gonna be a guy, age 16… I need a name for him!! PLZ HELP ME OUT HERE!! Im no good at names.. it took me forever to think up Aki. Hmm… if u have a name, put it in the review section…
Tankies!!
Latte!!
~mirai
Ch 5: the bomb squad…
Rated pg13 for language and animated violence.
The platform led tehm to… u gessed it… the STAGE.
NEW!! From now on, tehre will be frequent POV changing!
~zidane~
oh great…were on stage. Everyone stared at us in shock, and silence overcame the audience. "guys! Improvise!" I hissed to my friends, putting aki down and telling her to shut up.
They got the message.
"cornelia!" marcus shouted.
"cornelia is marcus's lover," I whispered to garnet.
"oh marcus!" she cried dramtically [shes totally pulling a rita, haha * inside joke*] the rest of the play went on, tehre wasn't much left. "cornelia" accidentally got stabbed, etc…
then a scared lookng kid ran up on stage [ how, I don't know, since the end of the ship is the stage, and it floats in a big open area, so everyone has to watch from their balconies and roof tops. Go figure]
his face was pitch black, I coodnt see it, excpet for his bright yellow eyes. He wore a tattered steepled hat, blue coat…thing… and pants tat were striped with wide vertical bands of seagreen and white. Some guys were chasing him, causing him to trip as they got on stage too.
"you okay, kid?" aki ran over to him and helped him up. The kid nodded ferverently and ran around some more away from the guys. He stopped and held out his gloved hands. "cornelia" was lying "dead" on the ground between him and the two guys.
"d-don't come any closer!!" he said quaveringly, and shot fireballs from his hands. They caught garnet's hood on fire.
"HOT HOT HOT HOT!!" she shriekd, jumping up suddenly and running around before she threw her hood off, revealing herself. The audience gasped and the queen stared in shock befre getting furious.
Steiner suddenly regained his senses. "seize them!" he shouted to the two guys. They were two of his knights!
~BATTLE!!!!! [goody]~
the queen felt the need to shoot a huge living fireball (called a bomb) at us… great… it floated behind that idiot steiner, who didn't notice it. His knights did, and they ran off.
"dude! Wat the hell is that Bomb thing doing?!" aki creid in horror. She recouped [busting out with the vocab…* another inside joke..*] her senses and drew her dagger. "Is it—"
"growing!" I finished her sentence for her. Everyone drew their weapons. Garnet had a rod, and the kid (a black mage) had a staff.
"I will not fall for such tricks!" stiener slashed arrogantly at me with his sword, but I nimbly dodged. [nimbly is a funny word…]
"fire!" the mage shouted and waved his staff, casuing fire damage to steiner.
"good shot!" aki complimented as garnet struck steiner with her rod.
"please steiner, behind you!" she said, but to no avail; steiner woodnt listen.
"you dumbass! Tehres a friggin giant monster behind you!" aki screamed and swiped at him so hard that she spun around 3 times and fell to the floor dizzy.
I rolled my eyes in impatience. Shes pretty powerful, but aki REALLY needs more practice. Meanwhile, the bomb kept growing. Now it was so huge, it cooda snacked on us all if it felt like it. Its shadow fell over the whole stage. FINALLY, steiner noticed that we were not kidding.
"its gonna blow!!" the mage cried. We all managed to run away as the ship tried to take off into the clouds. Just as we were getting away, something hit the airship, and it caught on fire. The ship shook violently in the clouds, then began gliding downwards,a flaming mass of flying wood. A dark forest of trees was going to be our landing pad. Everyone screamed for dear life. We were going to crash!!!
Well, this chapter was supposed to be longer, but I don't have time right now.. tis almost lunchtime!!
I WILL add a new char to this fic in the next chap!! Its gonna be a guy, age 16… I need a name for him!! PLZ HELP ME OUT HERE!! Im no good at names.. it took me forever to think up Aki. Hmm… if u have a name, put it in the review section…
Tankies!!
Latte!!
~mirai