I FIX IT. SO HOW IS IT NOW. REVIEW
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{Thoughts}
[sounds]
" " = Japanese
Otaku (oh-TOCK-oo) An anime fan. In japan it's generally a negative term, but i like
Katana=a typ of sword that was used by a samurai
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in Reikai the Spirit World.
[knock.....knock]
" The sign say's 'Do Not Disturb'. So go away. I'm very busy." Koenma said grouchedly. He was busy stamping 900 papers. He already did 347...poor little guy
[Knock-Knock]
"I'm Busy."
[KNOCK-KNOCK]
"WILL YOU STOP THAT!"
there was a short silence, followed by a-
[KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK]
Koenma looked up angrily, as the door was literally being pounded "FINE! YOU CAN COME IN NOW!."
The door opened revealing a person with yellow hair, with a little horn on his forehead, and blue skin.
" George," Koenma teeth clenched and he hisses rather than speaks.
"YOU BETTER HAVE SOME KIND OF IMPORTANT REASON TO BOTHER ME AT A TIME LIKE THIS!" he points to all the papers that where sitting around his office.
George the Oni sweatdropped. "Well. . . er. . . I . .ah, you see. . . ."
"Well?" Koenma asked impatiently as he continued to stamp papers, not bothering to look up at the Oni
"ahh. . . well. . .there's. . . this. . . ah, problem."
"Yeah, so. What is it?"
George sighed. "Experiment Number zero two is gone."
The temperature in the room suddenly dropped.
Koenma's hand froze in mid-stamp.
George gulped.
"WWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAA AAAAATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Koenma hollered, his face full of panic and his voice was loud enough to be heard all over the world.
Well world's actually.
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In Makai , the demon world.
"......what," Kurama paused, someone, somewhere, seemed to have shouted 'WHAT' with such horror it gave him goosebumps.
Yusuke crunched up his eyebrows in question,"What the matter?"
Kurama looked up at the sky "Did you hear something?"
"No, not really."
"Oh, it must be nothing."
"That little shimp, grrrrr." Kuwabara was still muttering to himself
Both Kurama and Yusuke tried to pretend that Kuwabara was not there, and they continued walking.
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"Gone." Koenma screeched. "GONE WHERE!!!?"
"ahh....well." more sweatdrops appeared on the back of George's head.
"WHAT HAPPEN?!?!?"
"Well. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .it woke up and ran-away." George answered lamely.
". . . . . .Woke. It woke up?" Koenma asked shocked.
"Yes."
"I don't believe it." Stars danced in Koenma's eyes. "After over 300 years a soul was selected. Ohhhh, my father will be so happ. . . . . .did you say it ran-away?" Stated the two foot high ruler.
"Yes."
Koenma looked like he was going to have a heart attack. "Whaaa. . .w-where. .d-did it go?"
"Well," George paused. "We. . . . . . .don't know."
"Gahh" Koenma fell out of his chair and got back up immediately. "Do we have any idea where it could have gone?"
"Well," the blue Oni rubbed his chin, "It was speaking english, and the only words I can translate was 'Why I oughtta kill 3 eyed stupid jerk."
"Well. . . . .that. . . . .interesting,"Koenma said, a drop of sweat forming on his head. "Why do you think it said that?"
George is looked down at his two forefingers that are tapping each other in nervousness.
"Damn it, George.This is serious." Koenma yelled, standing up on his desk causing paper to scatter across the room. "Don't we have any information on this souls past life?"
"So far we are only able to tell that it came from a parallel universe and died under some very strange circumstances."
" Circumstances, what circumstances?"
"It appears that soul was murdered in its dreams."
"In its dreams but that can only mean.....Uh-oh," Koenma gulped. He returns to his seat , sank back into his chair, head in his hands.
"The Dream-lace is the only thing to have that kind of power. And I just sent Yusuke to retrieve it."
George eyes widen in sudden realization. "Then, the three eyed stupid jerk must be....." he trailed off, not able to finish the sentence.
Koenma whimpered.
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In Makai , the demon world.
"How much longer before we get to the stupid temple?" Yusuke whined. He, Kurama, Kuwabara, and Hiei was still walking (or jumping from tree to tree) in the forest on a dirt path that looked like it would never end.
"If we continue going at this pace we will reach there," Kurama pause to calculate the exact time in his head ", around noon tomorrow."
"Ohhhhhh MAN." Yusuke moaned. "This is lame!!"
"grrr. ." Kuwabara growled again. "Stupid. . .little. . ." [grumble, mutter]
"Great. Keiko's mad at me. Hiei is falling out of tree's because he's having nightmare's. Kuwabara is talking to him-self..."
"Grrr. . . ." more muttering and swearing from the carrot top.
"And it's all Mark-ko's fault for stealing some necklace!!!" Yusuke grumble.
Kurama thought it was a good time to change the subject. "Why is Keiko angry at you?"
Yusuke sighed. "She got this new dress and wanted to know what my opinion was."
"And you said...?"
"I told her the truth of course."
"And that was....?"
"That.."
dramatic pause.
"..It made her butt look big."
"Ack!" Kurama almost felled over, but caught himself and gave Yusuke a weird look. "No wonder she's mad at you."
"Well it's not my fault!" Yusuke said. "She 'did' ask for 'my' opinion."
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An hour later,
"So, telling her that her butt look big was a bad idea?"
"Yes."
"But it was the truth!"
" Yes. But it wasn't very nice."
"Yeah. I know, it was still the truth though."
**********************
Another hour has gone by, it's almost sunset now.
The conversation between Kurama and Yusuke went from "how many way's not to tick off Keiko while still being truthful." to "why did Hiei fall out of a tree the night before?"
Kurama looked behind him at the trees. A black blur flickering from tree branch to tree branch was all that he needed to know to confirm that Hiei was still behind them. "I can't see why he would fall out the way he did. Hiei is completely at home in the tree's."
"When I get my hands on him..grr."
Yusuke ignored the carrot top cursing as they continued walking along the endless path. "I wonder what kind of nightmare he had to make him scream like that."
Kuwabara kept cursing. "..I'll smash his head the little.."
Kurama looked up at the sky as if the answer could be right there in the clouds. "I know, this is very strange.." he never got to finish the sentence because a dark figure jumped out of a tree, and landed right next to Yusuke ,who, immediately got into a fighting stance.
Kurama's hand ran through the silk locks of his red hair before he hesitated, "Hiei,"
"Ack, Hiei don't do that!" Yusuke yelled. "Do you want to get your teeth knock out?"
"HN." was Hiei response
"How much did you hear?' Kurama asked nervously.
". . . . .enough."
Kuwabara growled and stood right in front of Hiei. "WHY DID YOU HAVE TO FALL ON ME YOU CLUMSY SHRIMP?!?!?!." he screech at the top of his lungs. Which is very loud.
Every living thing in the surrounding area were on their backs, blown away by the phenomenally loud scream Kuwabara had given off. Yusuke even had swirly eyes and a rather disgruntled look. @_@
Hiei stood up, glared at (in his opinion) the stupid human, while attempting to straighten his ruffled hair. "Idiot."
"WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?!"
"Why were you sleeping under my tree?"
"YOUR TREE? I WAS THERE FIRST SHORTY!" said Kuwabara furiously.
"You were not."
"YES I WAS!!!!!!!!!"
"No. You weren't." Hiei replied calmly.
At this point the other two Spirit Detectives started to recover groggily.
"YES, I WAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Do you honestly think I will get any sleep with a fool like you under me?"
Smoke was coming out of Kuwabara ears,"GRRRRR..." his whole form trembled with restrain effort . "All right, THAT'S . . . . .Uhn. What the.." He looked around frantically, searching for something.
[BLINK-BLINK] everyone blinked their eyes as they regarded him.
"Ahh," Yusuke gave his friend a concerned look. "Kuwabara, are you feeling ok?"
"Quiet Urameshi. I'm Trying to concentrate."
"Huh?"
"I got one of those funny feeling again." Kuwabara explained. "What ever it is, it's coming this way."
Yusuke didn't look convinced. "Yeah right. " Yusuke snorted looking around. "Your just paranoid."
Kurama sniffed the air and frowned. He smelled something amiss, but couldn't tell what it was.
"I think when Hiei landed on you it messed up your spirit sense." Yusuke joked.
"Hn,"
"No, Kuwabara is right." Everyone turned to stare at the red-head who took a red rosevout of his hair
(AN Kurama keeps a lot of stuff in his hair. Most of them are plants. How he does I don't know.)
There was a long silence, no one moved, no one spoke, all of them were poised for battle searching the sky and tree's.
Hiei had his hand on the hilt of his katana.
Yusuke was in a fighting stance.
Kuwabara summoned his yellow Spirit Sword.
Kurama had his rose, which (for you people who don't know) would turn into a deadly thorny whip that would slice though anything.
Kuwabara's ESP was skyrocketing, warning him to Get Out Of There. {Stay calm. Stay calm. What could it be?} Then, he sensed something, it wasn't to far away.
"Look. IT'S UP THERE!" Kuwabara yelled pointing to a huge rock that was in the shape of an ocean wave before it crashes to the shore. It was 5 times bigger than a house, (or the size of a school) It towered over the trees high in the air.
Yusuke trained his eyes to see what it was. {Damn it. I don't like this. This is getting more and more stupid by the minute}
Then a blue bolt of light struck the rock which Kuwabara was pointing too.
"What the HELL.." Yusuke screamed
The sky grows dark and winds pick up. More blue lighting strike at random.
"WHERE DID THIS STUPID STORM COME FROM!?" Yusuke screamed again, shielding his eyes from the flashes of light.
"HOW AM I SUPOSE TO KNOW?!" Kuwabara yelled back
Kurama gritted his teeth. {This is no normal storm} he thought.
Large blood red clouds soon filled the entire sky. Blocking out the sun making the whole area have a red tint to it..
Hiei did his best to ignore the storm and kept his eyes on the cleft. As more azure lightning filled the air a dark figure could be made out standing on the cleft looking down on them.
"WHO THE HELL IS THAT?!" howled Yusuke pointing at the figure.
"HOW AM I SUPOSE TO KNOW?!"
"Is that the only words you can come up with Kuwabara?"
"HOW AM I...grr, shut-up Urameshi."
Again, lightning struck behind the cleft , but the figure was gone.
"Uh," Kuwabara gasp. "Where did he go?"
"You're the one who gets hunches," Yusuke grumbled. "Why don't you find the guy?"
"Will you both be QUITE?!" Hiei snapped. Their constant blabbering was annoying him.
Both Yusuke and Kuwabara gave Hiei a twin glare in the dark.
Kurama sighed, this was getting them no where.
Another blue bolt of light struck, this time only 20 feet away from them with a BOOM, making it a light as noon. All four of them had to shield their eyes from the explosion of light.
After a few moments the light subsided. Kurama was first to peek though his hand, and the first one to gasp at the sight that lay before him.
The figure that was on the cliff, was now standing where the lighting had struck and he/she was now in the middle of a ring of blue fire. The person was wearing a long dark cloak that reached past its knees that looked almost like a dress, with a white collar. It's face was covered in shadows by a straw hat that most chinese peasants wear in the rice fields. It's round at the bottom and pointed at the top.
Everyone stares at the stranger in confusion. All of them are thinking different things.
{That was quite an entrance. I'm impressed.} Kurama thought.
Yusuke was staring at the hat that the stranger was wearing {Why is that guy wearing a basket on his head?}
Hiei snorted and glares at the intruder {Why is he wearing my clothes.}
{Man, that guy is short.} Kuwabara notion. {Maybe shorter than Hiei. Maybe they are related. He is wearing like Hiei clothes an all. Could be his cousin. Or a brother. I KNOW, THEY GOTTA BE TWINS. }
No one said anything. The only noise was the wind moving in the tree's and the sound of thunder. The ring of fire that surrounded the 'stranger' started to die down to nothing at all.
The stranger broke the silence first. "Hiei-kun.."
"Hiei....kun?" All the boy thought at the same time.
The stranger grabbed something from behind it's back and quickly dashing forward, it bellow, "Prepare to DIE!" And it headed toward them
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Ghost-ku: Next time on Yu Yu Hakusho Anime Detective. . .Um, there's a fight. Manly between my sis--ah,(he panic's) THE STRANGER AND HIEI
kyra: (hits Ghost-ku with a mallet ) Ghost-ku you baka, you almost told them who the stranger is.
Ghost-ku: ow...IT'S NOT MY FAULT
kyra: then who fault is it?
Ghost-ku:...........................?
Kyra: just what i thought
Ghost-ku: (sniff) this is not fair (starts crying) WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kyra: (sweatdrops) -_-!
Yusuke: are you really going to put him in this story
kyra: (sighs) yeah. I'm already starting to regret it
Yusuke: Great. This is all your fault.
Kyra:........... you say that again and I'll make you share a room with him
Yusuke: (panic) WHAT?!?! YOU CAN'T DO THAT.
kyra: yes i can. I'm a fanfic writer. I can do anything in this story.
Yusuke: . . . . . anything
Kyra: yeah, anything
Yusuke: can you make him disappear (points to ghost-ku who is still crying)
kyra: sure (pulls out a computer and types in a few words)
ghost-ku disappears
Yusuke: cool. How about some pizza
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{Thoughts}
[sounds]
" " = Japanese
Otaku (oh-TOCK-oo) An anime fan. In japan it's generally a negative term, but i like
Katana=a typ of sword that was used by a samurai
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in Reikai the Spirit World.
[knock.....knock]
" The sign say's 'Do Not Disturb'. So go away. I'm very busy." Koenma said grouchedly. He was busy stamping 900 papers. He already did 347...poor little guy
[Knock-Knock]
"I'm Busy."
[KNOCK-KNOCK]
"WILL YOU STOP THAT!"
there was a short silence, followed by a-
[KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK]
Koenma looked up angrily, as the door was literally being pounded "FINE! YOU CAN COME IN NOW!."
The door opened revealing a person with yellow hair, with a little horn on his forehead, and blue skin.
" George," Koenma teeth clenched and he hisses rather than speaks.
"YOU BETTER HAVE SOME KIND OF IMPORTANT REASON TO BOTHER ME AT A TIME LIKE THIS!" he points to all the papers that where sitting around his office.
George the Oni sweatdropped. "Well. . . er. . . I . .ah, you see. . . ."
"Well?" Koenma asked impatiently as he continued to stamp papers, not bothering to look up at the Oni
"ahh. . . well. . .there's. . . this. . . ah, problem."
"Yeah, so. What is it?"
George sighed. "Experiment Number zero two is gone."
The temperature in the room suddenly dropped.
Koenma's hand froze in mid-stamp.
George gulped.
"WWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAA AAAAATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Koenma hollered, his face full of panic and his voice was loud enough to be heard all over the world.
Well world's actually.
**************************
In Makai , the demon world.
"......what," Kurama paused, someone, somewhere, seemed to have shouted 'WHAT' with such horror it gave him goosebumps.
Yusuke crunched up his eyebrows in question,"What the matter?"
Kurama looked up at the sky "Did you hear something?"
"No, not really."
"Oh, it must be nothing."
"That little shimp, grrrrr." Kuwabara was still muttering to himself
Both Kurama and Yusuke tried to pretend that Kuwabara was not there, and they continued walking.
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"Gone." Koenma screeched. "GONE WHERE!!!?"
"ahh....well." more sweatdrops appeared on the back of George's head.
"WHAT HAPPEN?!?!?"
"Well. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .it woke up and ran-away." George answered lamely.
". . . . . .Woke. It woke up?" Koenma asked shocked.
"Yes."
"I don't believe it." Stars danced in Koenma's eyes. "After over 300 years a soul was selected. Ohhhh, my father will be so happ. . . . . .did you say it ran-away?" Stated the two foot high ruler.
"Yes."
Koenma looked like he was going to have a heart attack. "Whaaa. . .w-where. .d-did it go?"
"Well," George paused. "We. . . . . . .don't know."
"Gahh" Koenma fell out of his chair and got back up immediately. "Do we have any idea where it could have gone?"
"Well," the blue Oni rubbed his chin, "It was speaking english, and the only words I can translate was 'Why I oughtta kill 3 eyed stupid jerk."
"Well. . . . .that. . . . .interesting,"Koenma said, a drop of sweat forming on his head. "Why do you think it said that?"
George is looked down at his two forefingers that are tapping each other in nervousness.
"Damn it, George.This is serious." Koenma yelled, standing up on his desk causing paper to scatter across the room. "Don't we have any information on this souls past life?"
"So far we are only able to tell that it came from a parallel universe and died under some very strange circumstances."
" Circumstances, what circumstances?"
"It appears that soul was murdered in its dreams."
"In its dreams but that can only mean.....Uh-oh," Koenma gulped. He returns to his seat , sank back into his chair, head in his hands.
"The Dream-lace is the only thing to have that kind of power. And I just sent Yusuke to retrieve it."
George eyes widen in sudden realization. "Then, the three eyed stupid jerk must be....." he trailed off, not able to finish the sentence.
Koenma whimpered.
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In Makai , the demon world.
"How much longer before we get to the stupid temple?" Yusuke whined. He, Kurama, Kuwabara, and Hiei was still walking (or jumping from tree to tree) in the forest on a dirt path that looked like it would never end.
"If we continue going at this pace we will reach there," Kurama pause to calculate the exact time in his head ", around noon tomorrow."
"Ohhhhhh MAN." Yusuke moaned. "This is lame!!"
"grrr. ." Kuwabara growled again. "Stupid. . .little. . ." [grumble, mutter]
"Great. Keiko's mad at me. Hiei is falling out of tree's because he's having nightmare's. Kuwabara is talking to him-self..."
"Grrr. . . ." more muttering and swearing from the carrot top.
"And it's all Mark-ko's fault for stealing some necklace!!!" Yusuke grumble.
Kurama thought it was a good time to change the subject. "Why is Keiko angry at you?"
Yusuke sighed. "She got this new dress and wanted to know what my opinion was."
"And you said...?"
"I told her the truth of course."
"And that was....?"
"That.."
dramatic pause.
"..It made her butt look big."
"Ack!" Kurama almost felled over, but caught himself and gave Yusuke a weird look. "No wonder she's mad at you."
"Well it's not my fault!" Yusuke said. "She 'did' ask for 'my' opinion."
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An hour later,
"So, telling her that her butt look big was a bad idea?"
"Yes."
"But it was the truth!"
" Yes. But it wasn't very nice."
"Yeah. I know, it was still the truth though."
**********************
Another hour has gone by, it's almost sunset now.
The conversation between Kurama and Yusuke went from "how many way's not to tick off Keiko while still being truthful." to "why did Hiei fall out of a tree the night before?"
Kurama looked behind him at the trees. A black blur flickering from tree branch to tree branch was all that he needed to know to confirm that Hiei was still behind them. "I can't see why he would fall out the way he did. Hiei is completely at home in the tree's."
"When I get my hands on him..grr."
Yusuke ignored the carrot top cursing as they continued walking along the endless path. "I wonder what kind of nightmare he had to make him scream like that."
Kuwabara kept cursing. "..I'll smash his head the little.."
Kurama looked up at the sky as if the answer could be right there in the clouds. "I know, this is very strange.." he never got to finish the sentence because a dark figure jumped out of a tree, and landed right next to Yusuke ,who, immediately got into a fighting stance.
Kurama's hand ran through the silk locks of his red hair before he hesitated, "Hiei,"
"Ack, Hiei don't do that!" Yusuke yelled. "Do you want to get your teeth knock out?"
"HN." was Hiei response
"How much did you hear?' Kurama asked nervously.
". . . . .enough."
Kuwabara growled and stood right in front of Hiei. "WHY DID YOU HAVE TO FALL ON ME YOU CLUMSY SHRIMP?!?!?!." he screech at the top of his lungs. Which is very loud.
Every living thing in the surrounding area were on their backs, blown away by the phenomenally loud scream Kuwabara had given off. Yusuke even had swirly eyes and a rather disgruntled look. @_@
Hiei stood up, glared at (in his opinion) the stupid human, while attempting to straighten his ruffled hair. "Idiot."
"WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?!"
"Why were you sleeping under my tree?"
"YOUR TREE? I WAS THERE FIRST SHORTY!" said Kuwabara furiously.
"You were not."
"YES I WAS!!!!!!!!!"
"No. You weren't." Hiei replied calmly.
At this point the other two Spirit Detectives started to recover groggily.
"YES, I WAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Do you honestly think I will get any sleep with a fool like you under me?"
Smoke was coming out of Kuwabara ears,"GRRRRR..." his whole form trembled with restrain effort . "All right, THAT'S . . . . .Uhn. What the.." He looked around frantically, searching for something.
[BLINK-BLINK] everyone blinked their eyes as they regarded him.
"Ahh," Yusuke gave his friend a concerned look. "Kuwabara, are you feeling ok?"
"Quiet Urameshi. I'm Trying to concentrate."
"Huh?"
"I got one of those funny feeling again." Kuwabara explained. "What ever it is, it's coming this way."
Yusuke didn't look convinced. "Yeah right. " Yusuke snorted looking around. "Your just paranoid."
Kurama sniffed the air and frowned. He smelled something amiss, but couldn't tell what it was.
"I think when Hiei landed on you it messed up your spirit sense." Yusuke joked.
"Hn,"
"No, Kuwabara is right." Everyone turned to stare at the red-head who took a red rosevout of his hair
(AN Kurama keeps a lot of stuff in his hair. Most of them are plants. How he does I don't know.)
There was a long silence, no one moved, no one spoke, all of them were poised for battle searching the sky and tree's.
Hiei had his hand on the hilt of his katana.
Yusuke was in a fighting stance.
Kuwabara summoned his yellow Spirit Sword.
Kurama had his rose, which (for you people who don't know) would turn into a deadly thorny whip that would slice though anything.
Kuwabara's ESP was skyrocketing, warning him to Get Out Of There. {Stay calm. Stay calm. What could it be?} Then, he sensed something, it wasn't to far away.
"Look. IT'S UP THERE!" Kuwabara yelled pointing to a huge rock that was in the shape of an ocean wave before it crashes to the shore. It was 5 times bigger than a house, (or the size of a school) It towered over the trees high in the air.
Yusuke trained his eyes to see what it was. {Damn it. I don't like this. This is getting more and more stupid by the minute}
Then a blue bolt of light struck the rock which Kuwabara was pointing too.
"What the HELL.." Yusuke screamed
The sky grows dark and winds pick up. More blue lighting strike at random.
"WHERE DID THIS STUPID STORM COME FROM!?" Yusuke screamed again, shielding his eyes from the flashes of light.
"HOW AM I SUPOSE TO KNOW?!" Kuwabara yelled back
Kurama gritted his teeth. {This is no normal storm} he thought.
Large blood red clouds soon filled the entire sky. Blocking out the sun making the whole area have a red tint to it..
Hiei did his best to ignore the storm and kept his eyes on the cleft. As more azure lightning filled the air a dark figure could be made out standing on the cleft looking down on them.
"WHO THE HELL IS THAT?!" howled Yusuke pointing at the figure.
"HOW AM I SUPOSE TO KNOW?!"
"Is that the only words you can come up with Kuwabara?"
"HOW AM I...grr, shut-up Urameshi."
Again, lightning struck behind the cleft , but the figure was gone.
"Uh," Kuwabara gasp. "Where did he go?"
"You're the one who gets hunches," Yusuke grumbled. "Why don't you find the guy?"
"Will you both be QUITE?!" Hiei snapped. Their constant blabbering was annoying him.
Both Yusuke and Kuwabara gave Hiei a twin glare in the dark.
Kurama sighed, this was getting them no where.
Another blue bolt of light struck, this time only 20 feet away from them with a BOOM, making it a light as noon. All four of them had to shield their eyes from the explosion of light.
After a few moments the light subsided. Kurama was first to peek though his hand, and the first one to gasp at the sight that lay before him.
The figure that was on the cliff, was now standing where the lighting had struck and he/she was now in the middle of a ring of blue fire. The person was wearing a long dark cloak that reached past its knees that looked almost like a dress, with a white collar. It's face was covered in shadows by a straw hat that most chinese peasants wear in the rice fields. It's round at the bottom and pointed at the top.
Everyone stares at the stranger in confusion. All of them are thinking different things.
{That was quite an entrance. I'm impressed.} Kurama thought.
Yusuke was staring at the hat that the stranger was wearing {Why is that guy wearing a basket on his head?}
Hiei snorted and glares at the intruder {Why is he wearing my clothes.}
{Man, that guy is short.} Kuwabara notion. {Maybe shorter than Hiei. Maybe they are related. He is wearing like Hiei clothes an all. Could be his cousin. Or a brother. I KNOW, THEY GOTTA BE TWINS. }
No one said anything. The only noise was the wind moving in the tree's and the sound of thunder. The ring of fire that surrounded the 'stranger' started to die down to nothing at all.
The stranger broke the silence first. "Hiei-kun.."
"Hiei....kun?" All the boy thought at the same time.
The stranger grabbed something from behind it's back and quickly dashing forward, it bellow, "Prepare to DIE!" And it headed toward them
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Ghost-ku: Next time on Yu Yu Hakusho Anime Detective. . .Um, there's a fight. Manly between my sis--ah,(he panic's) THE STRANGER AND HIEI
kyra: (hits Ghost-ku with a mallet ) Ghost-ku you baka, you almost told them who the stranger is.
Ghost-ku: ow...IT'S NOT MY FAULT
kyra: then who fault is it?
Ghost-ku:...........................?
Kyra: just what i thought
Ghost-ku: (sniff) this is not fair (starts crying) WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kyra: (sweatdrops) -_-!
Yusuke: are you really going to put him in this story
kyra: (sighs) yeah. I'm already starting to regret it
Yusuke: Great. This is all your fault.
Kyra:........... you say that again and I'll make you share a room with him
Yusuke: (panic) WHAT?!?! YOU CAN'T DO THAT.
kyra: yes i can. I'm a fanfic writer. I can do anything in this story.
Yusuke: . . . . . anything
Kyra: yeah, anything
Yusuke: can you make him disappear (points to ghost-ku who is still crying)
kyra: sure (pulls out a computer and types in a few words)
ghost-ku disappears
Yusuke: cool. How about some pizza