Hey guys this is my first fan fic hope you like it. I posted it on another
board but thought I should post it here too after all the positive feedback
I got from it so here is part 1.
It is a couple of days after the events of Lockdown. Since then Abby has been tactfully avoiding carter & pretending like nothing happened & carter, who isn't quite sure what to make of the situation, hasn't been willing to bring up the conversation incase it rattles abby.
The scene starts with carter ringing abby who wont answer the phone to him as she is confused about her feelings for him! He leaves a message saying he wants to meet her as they need to talk and to be in the diner down the road at 7! Abby is unsure & doesn't know whether to go or not! Meanwhile Carter is wondering if she will turn up or not!
7 o clock arrives & Leaves & ABBY doesn't show. Carter finally decides she isn't comming & gets up 2 leave. Just at that moment Abby comes through the door covered in snow! Carter says nothin but she cracks some joke about walking around the block so many times she could do it backward with her eyes shut!!! Since she has been walking round deciding whether or not to come in!
They sit down order coffee and she is acting like the kiss never happened! They make small talk 4 a while n then abby asks "Is this why you asked me down here so you could comment on how bad the coffee is?" Carter: No u know why I asked you down here! Abby just tries 2 pass it off but he's having none of it and asks her sraight out Carter: did You regret the kiss? she comes back almost instantly with "NO! no i didnt regret the kiss." so carter is like " well why have you been avoiding me? avoiding the issue?" she says nothing, and Carter , who hasn't touched her yet puts his hand over hers n says "abby we can work through it whatever is holding you back we can work through it but you have 2 tell me before we can work through it" she looks up from staring into her coffee and realises at that point that what he is saying is true and realises that she does want to share the things she has hidden away in her past with him. This promps a converstion about her past which we get insights into via flash backs which bring us right upto the point of her abortion at this point she stops, feeling that this is 1 thing she cant really share with him 4 fear of loosing him. Carter senses this n gets annoyed at her he pushes her so far that she ends up yelling at him I HAD AN ABORTION OK THAT IS WHY ITS SO COMPLICATED COZ I HAD AN ABORTION & im scared you'll h8 me 4 it! at which point she breaks down n cries and we fade to black with carter jus sat there in shock n abby crying!!
This was my first part to the fic 7 is more of a background setter for the rest rather than a story. It was actually written as ideas on how the new series should start so if there seems a lot of background & not much dialogue that's why. I will upload the next part as well so you can get a feel for the actual setting & then you can let me know if you want the rest up or not!
It is a couple of days after the events of Lockdown. Since then Abby has been tactfully avoiding carter & pretending like nothing happened & carter, who isn't quite sure what to make of the situation, hasn't been willing to bring up the conversation incase it rattles abby.
The scene starts with carter ringing abby who wont answer the phone to him as she is confused about her feelings for him! He leaves a message saying he wants to meet her as they need to talk and to be in the diner down the road at 7! Abby is unsure & doesn't know whether to go or not! Meanwhile Carter is wondering if she will turn up or not!
7 o clock arrives & Leaves & ABBY doesn't show. Carter finally decides she isn't comming & gets up 2 leave. Just at that moment Abby comes through the door covered in snow! Carter says nothin but she cracks some joke about walking around the block so many times she could do it backward with her eyes shut!!! Since she has been walking round deciding whether or not to come in!
They sit down order coffee and she is acting like the kiss never happened! They make small talk 4 a while n then abby asks "Is this why you asked me down here so you could comment on how bad the coffee is?" Carter: No u know why I asked you down here! Abby just tries 2 pass it off but he's having none of it and asks her sraight out Carter: did You regret the kiss? she comes back almost instantly with "NO! no i didnt regret the kiss." so carter is like " well why have you been avoiding me? avoiding the issue?" she says nothing, and Carter , who hasn't touched her yet puts his hand over hers n says "abby we can work through it whatever is holding you back we can work through it but you have 2 tell me before we can work through it" she looks up from staring into her coffee and realises at that point that what he is saying is true and realises that she does want to share the things she has hidden away in her past with him. This promps a converstion about her past which we get insights into via flash backs which bring us right upto the point of her abortion at this point she stops, feeling that this is 1 thing she cant really share with him 4 fear of loosing him. Carter senses this n gets annoyed at her he pushes her so far that she ends up yelling at him I HAD AN ABORTION OK THAT IS WHY ITS SO COMPLICATED COZ I HAD AN ABORTION & im scared you'll h8 me 4 it! at which point she breaks down n cries and we fade to black with carter jus sat there in shock n abby crying!!
This was my first part to the fic 7 is more of a background setter for the rest rather than a story. It was actually written as ideas on how the new series should start so if there seems a lot of background & not much dialogue that's why. I will upload the next part as well so you can get a feel for the actual setting & then you can let me know if you want the rest up or not!