unbelievable
Disclaimer: I don't own Roswell. Or the song "your unbelievable" by EMF.
Category: M/L
Summary: au - no aliens, someone wants Liz dead, but what if they send max to do the job?
Author's note: my first fic, tell me how am I doing.
Roswell, New Mexico
Max was standing outside her front door, 'this is where it's all begin' he thought, no, actually it all began when he got a phone call, to men who wanted to meet him, when he got there the two men were wearing suits and they said they wanted him to kill a woman, Liz Parker, they said that if he would do it they'll give him 1 Million dollar.
Sounds perfect right? Right, until he got her picture from them, she was beautiful, long brown hair, and a perfect smile. The only question was: why do these men want her dead? When he asked them they said it was none of his business and they were right, so he agreed to the deal.
Yep, ladies and gentlemen, max Evans killed people for money, that was his job.
How did he got to this business at the first place? He really had no choice, he grow up in New york with his always-drunk- mother who didn't give a damn about him, when she died four years ago he needed money, then he met Michael who introduced him to the business and became his best friend.
Now max is in Roswell, a stupid town who believe in aliens, this is where he found Liz, he's been tracking Liz for about a month, it was hard to find her in this small town, but he was good, really good. Usually he would have shot her already and took the money, but he couldn't, there was just something about her.
The men he made the deal with called him almost every day, and it seemed that it was important to them that the job was done. He didn't understand it she looked so innocent.
He peeped at her trough the window, she was listening to music while cleaning the house, wearing jeans and a blue t-shirt, she was singing with the music:
"You burden me with your questions You'd have me tell no lies, You're always asking what it's all about But don't listen to my replies, You say to me you don't talk enough But when I do i'm a fool, These times i've spent, i've realized I'm going to shoot through And leave you, The things you say Your purple prouse just gives you away, The things you say, Ur unbelievable!"
While singing she started jumping on the couch until she tripped and fell to the floor, giggling but still singing along, she looked so cute!
That's the person he was seposed to kill???
And he decided: he was going to find out who wants her dead and why.
I know its short, but I want to know if I should continue, please tell me how am I doing and how can I make this better. The song is EMF's "you're unbelievable".
Disclaimer: I don't own Roswell. Or the song "your unbelievable" by EMF.
Category: M/L
Summary: au - no aliens, someone wants Liz dead, but what if they send max to do the job?
Author's note: my first fic, tell me how am I doing.
Roswell, New Mexico
Max was standing outside her front door, 'this is where it's all begin' he thought, no, actually it all began when he got a phone call, to men who wanted to meet him, when he got there the two men were wearing suits and they said they wanted him to kill a woman, Liz Parker, they said that if he would do it they'll give him 1 Million dollar.
Sounds perfect right? Right, until he got her picture from them, she was beautiful, long brown hair, and a perfect smile. The only question was: why do these men want her dead? When he asked them they said it was none of his business and they were right, so he agreed to the deal.
Yep, ladies and gentlemen, max Evans killed people for money, that was his job.
How did he got to this business at the first place? He really had no choice, he grow up in New york with his always-drunk- mother who didn't give a damn about him, when she died four years ago he needed money, then he met Michael who introduced him to the business and became his best friend.
Now max is in Roswell, a stupid town who believe in aliens, this is where he found Liz, he's been tracking Liz for about a month, it was hard to find her in this small town, but he was good, really good. Usually he would have shot her already and took the money, but he couldn't, there was just something about her.
The men he made the deal with called him almost every day, and it seemed that it was important to them that the job was done. He didn't understand it she looked so innocent.
He peeped at her trough the window, she was listening to music while cleaning the house, wearing jeans and a blue t-shirt, she was singing with the music:
"You burden me with your questions You'd have me tell no lies, You're always asking what it's all about But don't listen to my replies, You say to me you don't talk enough But when I do i'm a fool, These times i've spent, i've realized I'm going to shoot through And leave you, The things you say Your purple prouse just gives you away, The things you say, Ur unbelievable!"
While singing she started jumping on the couch until she tripped and fell to the floor, giggling but still singing along, she looked so cute!
That's the person he was seposed to kill???
And he decided: he was going to find out who wants her dead and why.
I know its short, but I want to know if I should continue, please tell me how am I doing and how can I make this better. The song is EMF's "you're unbelievable".