Last and Final Chapter of my lovely fanfic! I'm so glad people liked it. ^-
^ I like it too! Anything with Malik will suit Mandee.*gets on with the
well-anticipated last chapter* Oh yah, if there's anything in parentheses (
), then it's me saying somethin' to you.
So Malik is on the ground yelling at no one and like killing the sand with his frustration.O.o; Yami and Chibi are like in his head and he's talking like Anakin an' stuff. ^-^;;;; Like my eh summary thing?
Malik just bent there over the sand for a minute or two until he felt himself lying on the ground with a big red mark in the shape of a hand on his face. His eye twitched a bit and then he sat up. Zara had tried to slap him back into reality, and it worked.
"Don't just sit there, do you know how many people he can kill in an hour?" There was no need to say whom the he was, it was their biggest problem.
(Note: I have an urge to type "like" in every line because I'm hyper.)
"All right then, but how do we-" Malik muttered and just sat there looking up at Bakura with his elbows on his knees and his face in his hands. "Bakura?"
Bakura wasn't there anymore; it was Yami Bakura, with his Millennium Ring out on his chest. "Get up, Malik, unless you want Zara to slap you again." he said. Malik stood up almost mindlessly and kept staring at Y. Bakura.
"It's not fair how there's just two of you and you share that body." Malik said.
"Oh? You think so? It's Ryou's body; I'm just the spirit inside of the Ring. And I'm obviously smarter than Ryou; I might know a way to stop all this," Y. Bakura stated almost teasingly.
"You might?" Chibi Malik asked, not knowing that to put an end to this, he'd have to go too. (Poor Chibi!)
Y. Bakura simply nodded and then held the Ring in both hands. "I can trap the two in here and then.find some way to get them back in Malik." He said the last nine words rather slowly, because he didn't know if he could actually do that.
"Both of them?" Malik said looking longingly at Chibi Malik. He wanted him for a younger sibling, even if it meant a third of his personality gone.
"Yes, Malik, both of them," (I wish he could say "The Wheel weaves as the Wheel wills", or "It's a part of the Pattern" but that's somethin' completely different) He noticed Malik looking at the Chibi, "Oh come on, you don't really want to keep him? Weren't you annoying when you were younger?"
"Sometimes he's annoying now." Zara muttered.
Malik looked from to Bakura to Chibi then back to Bakura. "All right, but can we go get Yami first? I want to spend some time with him."
(OMG. this is turning out like a Disney movie or something. They have it all planned out, now they just have to do it and it's all taken care and it ends so happily. Ugh!!! It shouldn't be a "They lived happily ever after." There needs to be sacrifices and stuff. Pain, torture, agony, it's not a Malik fic without those. How about I make two endings, a Disney one, and then a Malik-ish one. Let's see which is better. *Coughthemalikonecough*)
^^^Disney ending^^^
The four walked to where Yami had run off, ready for almost anything. Almost anything. But they weren't ready for what came when they walked up to a deserted café. Malik was sitting at a table eating cooked garlic. (XD I have garlic breath right now so I had to do that.) He looked at them.
"Oh so you've finally come to get me, eh?" Y. Malik asked grinning maniacally.
"Yes, we have," Malik said and dropped to his knees, "Please oh please just work with us!"
"Yeah right, aibou.I've never seen you beg on your knees before, it's not like you, eh, me." Y. Malik said.
"I know, I know, it's just, I.care." He forced the word out," About people that you'll hurt or have hurt."
"Wow? You actually care? Well then, I'm impressed, I'll work with you, what do you want me to do?"
(WTF?)
"Bakura?"
"All right!" Bakura said and used his Ring to suck up Y. Malik and then he transferred the spirit back into Malik where he can be controlled.
"Wow that was quick!" Zara exclaimed and became a ditz.
"Yeah! OK, I'm sorry Chibi, but you have to go back into me too." Malik said and then Bakura did the same thing to Chibi.
"Yay! I'm me again!" Malik yelled and ran around the café.
"Let's just hope that doesn't happen again!" Zara yelled and went "Oh yeah!" like a ditz because she's a ditz and she actually said something smart.
"Yeah!" Bakura yelled back and then turned back into Ryou. "Hey Y. Malik and Chibi Malik are gone!"
"Yeah your Yami took care of them!" Malik yelled to Ryou.
Then they lived happily ever after.
(*Ish laughing so hard* What the heck was that? See? Torture, pain, and agony make the fic better! I can't believe I dissed my favorite characters like that. Especially my own character.hope you got a few laughs from that pathetic ending!)
^^^Real ending^^^
As they continued down the beach in the direction toward where the loose Yami went, dark clouds started to form overhead. They loomed over the four, reaching over their shoulders as it turned into a heavy fog covering the entire beach. They could only see a couple of feet ahead of them and Bakura kept tripping on stray wood or ripped up pieces of towel or umbrella. They walked and walked endlessly until they felt the sand turn to concrete as they walked into the city. It was hard to tell where they were because of the fog. Malik kept giving them directions on where to go, Yami's evil snicker was what they followed. Occasionally they heard a person scream in the direction that they were walking so they quickened their pace. Eventually after walking what seemed like a day, they reached the park in the middle of the city. They encountered many unconscious or maybe even dead people lying on the ground everywhere, it was hard to not trip over them. Bakura seemed to have the most trouble walking, when he tripped over unconscious people they moaned; when he tripped over what seemed to be dead people he fell over completely and walked more quickly after he got up. (Like you care about the dead people.) They walked a few more steps and then the fog in front of them was gone. It revealed a round pit surrounded by fog on all sides with a walkway in front of them to the center, where there was a small circular area of land about 5 feet wide. There were four walkways to the center, each about 20 feet long and 2 feet wide, making it look like a circle with a cross in it. (No relevance to The Dark is Rising figure) Chibi Malik looked down into the pit. He jumped backwards and landed on the ground.
"There's flames!! Giant ones! Really really burning hot!" Chibi Malik screamed and stood up again. He looked back over the edge and gulped, "They look like they go on forever."
But what caught Malik's eye weren't the flames in the bottomless pit; it was the two people standing on the patch of dirt in the middle. The heat made sweat appear on his face, but it also made the people blurry. "Come with me Bakura. Chibi, Zara, stay as far away as possible, the pit might open up and swallow anyone near it. All right?"
"OK, c'mon Malik," Zara said and took the child away from the fiery pit of no return. (Hey that's a good name!)
Malik and Bakura carefully walked on the walkway to the middle. Malik first, then Bakura. When the people were close enough to be seen clearly even with the heat Malik froze where he was standing and Bakura bumped into him.
"Hey why'd you st-"Bakura mumbled but then he looked up and saw the two figures. "Oh my."
(This is such a brilliant idea!) The two people were Yami Malik and Isis. Isis was trying to run away from him off of one of the walkways, but Y. Malik was easily holding her back. He saw Malik and Bakura and smirked.
"I wondered when you would get here, she makes perfect bait," Y. Malik teased.
"Let her go!" Malik roared. He didn't want to live a life alone. Sure he would have Bakura and Zara, but he still needed family.
"No. I've never taken orders from you and I won't start now," he smirked again, "So you don't want to live alone? That would be my fault, I guess. Oh well. Do anything stupid."
"What do you mean, your fault?" Malik cut him off shakily, the sweat shining on his face. He wished the heat and flames would go away.
"You don't know who killed your father? Wait, you think you know, you think it was Yami Yugi. But guess again, it wasn't."
"Liar! How would you know?!"
"Because I am the one who killed your father."
Malik's eyes opened wide, but then he shut them tightly with anger and frustration. "Just let her go.please.take me instead."
"I'm not that stupid, aibou, if you died I'd go with you. Now, if you leave and let me do as I please, she will stay alive, for a while, if you stay, then she will die and you will live a miserable life by yourself. So what will it be?"
Malik just elbowed Bakura hard under the ribs, muttering to him, "Hurry up!"
"What are you doing?" Y. Malik asked fiercely.
Before Y. Malik could do anything else, Bakura had already started to suck him into the Ring; he could do nothing to stop it, even with his M Rod.
"Nnnooooo!!!! Malik! You will suffer greatly for this!" was all that could be heard along with a few curse words. When he was completely gone, the fog lifted and the pit disappeared. The sun could be seen and the other unconscious people woke up. It appears that none were dead. But Isis lay unconscious on the ground. Zara and Chibi were running to where they were standing.
"Yay! You did it!" Chibi Malik yelled.
Zara flung her arms around Malik's neck but he was just staring at nothing.
"What's wrong?" she asked.
"My Yami killed my father.and almost Isis too." he said into her ear and glanced over at Isis. He looked back at her and instantly ran to her and knelt down. He felt her pulse. "Just sleeping."
Some of the people who had been unconscious were wondering why they were at the park. It appears they didn't remember anything. Bakura was telling Chibi Malik and Zara what had happened. It was short, and not very interesting, but it was still important. Malik stood up and walked over to them.
"Noo!" Chibi screamed and ran to hug Malik, "He wants to suck me into that Ring and then put me back into you! It seems scary!"
Malik patted the younger version of himself's head. "I'm sorry, Chibi, but it needs to be done."
Chibi Malik looked up at Malik and then solemnly walked over to Bakura. He looked sadly over at Malik as he too was sucked into the Ring. A few seconds later he felt something. A warmth spreading through his body from his toes to the top of his head. Then an ice cold feeling, spreading throughout his body like the warmth. It was finally over. He looked over at Isis. She was sitting cross-legged on the ground. When she saw him look at her she got up and walked over to him.
"So what did you do today?" Isis asked and smiled kindly.
"Nothing much. I found Bakura," he replied as all of the search party found them.
The End (or is it?)
YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! IT'S FINALLY OVER!
OK, thanks for reading my first decent Malik fanfic. I hope you liked it. I know I had fun writing it. Any questions, comments, or suggestions on what I should or shouldn't do for future fanfics, send them to my email address, which can be found on my profile. Go ahead and review, but there are no other chapters to reply to questions. *Doesn't expect any emails*
Now for the songfic. -.-;; I've never written one before and I barely have a clue on how to do it. But I chose a perfect song. PERFECT!!
So Malik is on the ground yelling at no one and like killing the sand with his frustration.O.o; Yami and Chibi are like in his head and he's talking like Anakin an' stuff. ^-^;;;; Like my eh summary thing?
Malik just bent there over the sand for a minute or two until he felt himself lying on the ground with a big red mark in the shape of a hand on his face. His eye twitched a bit and then he sat up. Zara had tried to slap him back into reality, and it worked.
"Don't just sit there, do you know how many people he can kill in an hour?" There was no need to say whom the he was, it was their biggest problem.
(Note: I have an urge to type "like" in every line because I'm hyper.)
"All right then, but how do we-" Malik muttered and just sat there looking up at Bakura with his elbows on his knees and his face in his hands. "Bakura?"
Bakura wasn't there anymore; it was Yami Bakura, with his Millennium Ring out on his chest. "Get up, Malik, unless you want Zara to slap you again." he said. Malik stood up almost mindlessly and kept staring at Y. Bakura.
"It's not fair how there's just two of you and you share that body." Malik said.
"Oh? You think so? It's Ryou's body; I'm just the spirit inside of the Ring. And I'm obviously smarter than Ryou; I might know a way to stop all this," Y. Bakura stated almost teasingly.
"You might?" Chibi Malik asked, not knowing that to put an end to this, he'd have to go too. (Poor Chibi!)
Y. Bakura simply nodded and then held the Ring in both hands. "I can trap the two in here and then.find some way to get them back in Malik." He said the last nine words rather slowly, because he didn't know if he could actually do that.
"Both of them?" Malik said looking longingly at Chibi Malik. He wanted him for a younger sibling, even if it meant a third of his personality gone.
"Yes, Malik, both of them," (I wish he could say "The Wheel weaves as the Wheel wills", or "It's a part of the Pattern" but that's somethin' completely different) He noticed Malik looking at the Chibi, "Oh come on, you don't really want to keep him? Weren't you annoying when you were younger?"
"Sometimes he's annoying now." Zara muttered.
Malik looked from to Bakura to Chibi then back to Bakura. "All right, but can we go get Yami first? I want to spend some time with him."
(OMG. this is turning out like a Disney movie or something. They have it all planned out, now they just have to do it and it's all taken care and it ends so happily. Ugh!!! It shouldn't be a "They lived happily ever after." There needs to be sacrifices and stuff. Pain, torture, agony, it's not a Malik fic without those. How about I make two endings, a Disney one, and then a Malik-ish one. Let's see which is better. *Coughthemalikonecough*)
^^^Disney ending^^^
The four walked to where Yami had run off, ready for almost anything. Almost anything. But they weren't ready for what came when they walked up to a deserted café. Malik was sitting at a table eating cooked garlic. (XD I have garlic breath right now so I had to do that.) He looked at them.
"Oh so you've finally come to get me, eh?" Y. Malik asked grinning maniacally.
"Yes, we have," Malik said and dropped to his knees, "Please oh please just work with us!"
"Yeah right, aibou.I've never seen you beg on your knees before, it's not like you, eh, me." Y. Malik said.
"I know, I know, it's just, I.care." He forced the word out," About people that you'll hurt or have hurt."
"Wow? You actually care? Well then, I'm impressed, I'll work with you, what do you want me to do?"
(WTF?)
"Bakura?"
"All right!" Bakura said and used his Ring to suck up Y. Malik and then he transferred the spirit back into Malik where he can be controlled.
"Wow that was quick!" Zara exclaimed and became a ditz.
"Yeah! OK, I'm sorry Chibi, but you have to go back into me too." Malik said and then Bakura did the same thing to Chibi.
"Yay! I'm me again!" Malik yelled and ran around the café.
"Let's just hope that doesn't happen again!" Zara yelled and went "Oh yeah!" like a ditz because she's a ditz and she actually said something smart.
"Yeah!" Bakura yelled back and then turned back into Ryou. "Hey Y. Malik and Chibi Malik are gone!"
"Yeah your Yami took care of them!" Malik yelled to Ryou.
Then they lived happily ever after.
(*Ish laughing so hard* What the heck was that? See? Torture, pain, and agony make the fic better! I can't believe I dissed my favorite characters like that. Especially my own character.hope you got a few laughs from that pathetic ending!)
^^^Real ending^^^
As they continued down the beach in the direction toward where the loose Yami went, dark clouds started to form overhead. They loomed over the four, reaching over their shoulders as it turned into a heavy fog covering the entire beach. They could only see a couple of feet ahead of them and Bakura kept tripping on stray wood or ripped up pieces of towel or umbrella. They walked and walked endlessly until they felt the sand turn to concrete as they walked into the city. It was hard to tell where they were because of the fog. Malik kept giving them directions on where to go, Yami's evil snicker was what they followed. Occasionally they heard a person scream in the direction that they were walking so they quickened their pace. Eventually after walking what seemed like a day, they reached the park in the middle of the city. They encountered many unconscious or maybe even dead people lying on the ground everywhere, it was hard to not trip over them. Bakura seemed to have the most trouble walking, when he tripped over unconscious people they moaned; when he tripped over what seemed to be dead people he fell over completely and walked more quickly after he got up. (Like you care about the dead people.) They walked a few more steps and then the fog in front of them was gone. It revealed a round pit surrounded by fog on all sides with a walkway in front of them to the center, where there was a small circular area of land about 5 feet wide. There were four walkways to the center, each about 20 feet long and 2 feet wide, making it look like a circle with a cross in it. (No relevance to The Dark is Rising figure) Chibi Malik looked down into the pit. He jumped backwards and landed on the ground.
"There's flames!! Giant ones! Really really burning hot!" Chibi Malik screamed and stood up again. He looked back over the edge and gulped, "They look like they go on forever."
But what caught Malik's eye weren't the flames in the bottomless pit; it was the two people standing on the patch of dirt in the middle. The heat made sweat appear on his face, but it also made the people blurry. "Come with me Bakura. Chibi, Zara, stay as far away as possible, the pit might open up and swallow anyone near it. All right?"
"OK, c'mon Malik," Zara said and took the child away from the fiery pit of no return. (Hey that's a good name!)
Malik and Bakura carefully walked on the walkway to the middle. Malik first, then Bakura. When the people were close enough to be seen clearly even with the heat Malik froze where he was standing and Bakura bumped into him.
"Hey why'd you st-"Bakura mumbled but then he looked up and saw the two figures. "Oh my."
(This is such a brilliant idea!) The two people were Yami Malik and Isis. Isis was trying to run away from him off of one of the walkways, but Y. Malik was easily holding her back. He saw Malik and Bakura and smirked.
"I wondered when you would get here, she makes perfect bait," Y. Malik teased.
"Let her go!" Malik roared. He didn't want to live a life alone. Sure he would have Bakura and Zara, but he still needed family.
"No. I've never taken orders from you and I won't start now," he smirked again, "So you don't want to live alone? That would be my fault, I guess. Oh well. Do anything stupid."
"What do you mean, your fault?" Malik cut him off shakily, the sweat shining on his face. He wished the heat and flames would go away.
"You don't know who killed your father? Wait, you think you know, you think it was Yami Yugi. But guess again, it wasn't."
"Liar! How would you know?!"
"Because I am the one who killed your father."
Malik's eyes opened wide, but then he shut them tightly with anger and frustration. "Just let her go.please.take me instead."
"I'm not that stupid, aibou, if you died I'd go with you. Now, if you leave and let me do as I please, she will stay alive, for a while, if you stay, then she will die and you will live a miserable life by yourself. So what will it be?"
Malik just elbowed Bakura hard under the ribs, muttering to him, "Hurry up!"
"What are you doing?" Y. Malik asked fiercely.
Before Y. Malik could do anything else, Bakura had already started to suck him into the Ring; he could do nothing to stop it, even with his M Rod.
"Nnnooooo!!!! Malik! You will suffer greatly for this!" was all that could be heard along with a few curse words. When he was completely gone, the fog lifted and the pit disappeared. The sun could be seen and the other unconscious people woke up. It appears that none were dead. But Isis lay unconscious on the ground. Zara and Chibi were running to where they were standing.
"Yay! You did it!" Chibi Malik yelled.
Zara flung her arms around Malik's neck but he was just staring at nothing.
"What's wrong?" she asked.
"My Yami killed my father.and almost Isis too." he said into her ear and glanced over at Isis. He looked back at her and instantly ran to her and knelt down. He felt her pulse. "Just sleeping."
Some of the people who had been unconscious were wondering why they were at the park. It appears they didn't remember anything. Bakura was telling Chibi Malik and Zara what had happened. It was short, and not very interesting, but it was still important. Malik stood up and walked over to them.
"Noo!" Chibi screamed and ran to hug Malik, "He wants to suck me into that Ring and then put me back into you! It seems scary!"
Malik patted the younger version of himself's head. "I'm sorry, Chibi, but it needs to be done."
Chibi Malik looked up at Malik and then solemnly walked over to Bakura. He looked sadly over at Malik as he too was sucked into the Ring. A few seconds later he felt something. A warmth spreading through his body from his toes to the top of his head. Then an ice cold feeling, spreading throughout his body like the warmth. It was finally over. He looked over at Isis. She was sitting cross-legged on the ground. When she saw him look at her she got up and walked over to him.
"So what did you do today?" Isis asked and smiled kindly.
"Nothing much. I found Bakura," he replied as all of the search party found them.
The End (or is it?)
YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! IT'S FINALLY OVER!
OK, thanks for reading my first decent Malik fanfic. I hope you liked it. I know I had fun writing it. Any questions, comments, or suggestions on what I should or shouldn't do for future fanfics, send them to my email address, which can be found on my profile. Go ahead and review, but there are no other chapters to reply to questions. *Doesn't expect any emails*
Now for the songfic. -.-;; I've never written one before and I barely have a clue on how to do it. But I chose a perfect song. PERFECT!!