OK chapter 2 its still gonna be short but this one is from the greasers POV
when Savannah moves in. Please R&R for both chapters. And its Soda talking.
We were all sitting outside when a car pulled up next door.
"Hey looks like someone finally bought that old house." Pony said from a porch step. He was smoking a cigarette like he always is.
We all looked up when Pony said that the first to get out of the car was an older woman. But she didn't look like a rude or mean person like many of the people in our town were. A moment after she got out of the car another girl got out of the car. This on was about my age and she was actually kinda cute. She had long reddish blond hair and soft blue eyes. When Dallas saw her he started making catcalls at her.
"Hey baby how ya doin? Wanna come over and have some fun?" That's all I'm gonna say about what Dallas was saying some of it was just plain mean. She just looked at us for a moment and walked inside. Everyone but me and my brothers started laughing we hated it when the guys made fun and picked on nice girls like her. At least she seems like a nice girl. She might not have been dressed to classy but at least she didn't give Dallas the finger or cuss him out like most of the girls do.
Everyone but Pony and me had gone back inside when the girl came back outside. I waved to her to get her attention and then pony and I went over to talk to her at the fence. I apologized for Dallas being so rude and she even agreed to hang out with us and let us show her around.
When we went back inside everyone was sitting around watching Mickey Mouse again. (That's all we ever watch) and I told them about Savannah. Dallas got an evil grin on his face so I might need to keep an eye on him when they all meet her. But after I finished telling them about her I went to take a shower. Savannah is kinda cute and she seems nice enough to me but I wonder how she's gonna react to me after she finds out what my friends are like.
OK I know that ending sucked and I'm sorry it was short again but like I said I need reviews. So please take the time to R&R and tell me what you think Thanx
peace
We were all sitting outside when a car pulled up next door.
"Hey looks like someone finally bought that old house." Pony said from a porch step. He was smoking a cigarette like he always is.
We all looked up when Pony said that the first to get out of the car was an older woman. But she didn't look like a rude or mean person like many of the people in our town were. A moment after she got out of the car another girl got out of the car. This on was about my age and she was actually kinda cute. She had long reddish blond hair and soft blue eyes. When Dallas saw her he started making catcalls at her.
"Hey baby how ya doin? Wanna come over and have some fun?" That's all I'm gonna say about what Dallas was saying some of it was just plain mean. She just looked at us for a moment and walked inside. Everyone but me and my brothers started laughing we hated it when the guys made fun and picked on nice girls like her. At least she seems like a nice girl. She might not have been dressed to classy but at least she didn't give Dallas the finger or cuss him out like most of the girls do.
Everyone but Pony and me had gone back inside when the girl came back outside. I waved to her to get her attention and then pony and I went over to talk to her at the fence. I apologized for Dallas being so rude and she even agreed to hang out with us and let us show her around.
When we went back inside everyone was sitting around watching Mickey Mouse again. (That's all we ever watch) and I told them about Savannah. Dallas got an evil grin on his face so I might need to keep an eye on him when they all meet her. But after I finished telling them about her I went to take a shower. Savannah is kinda cute and she seems nice enough to me but I wonder how she's gonna react to me after she finds out what my friends are like.
OK I know that ending sucked and I'm sorry it was short again but like I said I need reviews. So please take the time to R&R and tell me what you think Thanx
peace