Author's Note: Arigato, everyone who reviewed. I love hearing what people
think of my fic. Yes, this truly was my first fic. Sorry, it took me so
long to get everyone's review posted. I will always post the review as the
last chapter no matter if it is a good or bad review. Don't worry. Feel
free to tell me what I'm doing wrong, how I can improve, and what you
think. I love hearing from everyone. But please if it's spelling or
grammar mistakes, don't tell me. I get enough from my friends at school.
Yes Stephanie and Brittany, the perfectionists. I still love you. And I
love all my readers as long as they read my fic. J/k p.s. tell me 'bout
fic you write. I'll read them.
Reviews For: Love is not a game
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---- Lydia 2002-09-06 It was awesome! I liked the second ending better 'cause I'm not that much of a fluffy fan.
Dijiil2 (Inuyasha's angel) 2002-09-05
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA that was funny and good MORE MORE
Miyami 2002-09-01 I'm not sure which chapter I loved the most... Though it's pretty interesting to see how Fluffy and Kagome act together... And to see Kikyo as almost nice instead of a bitch...=P
Itadakimasu 2002-09-01 o__0! this wuz cool! but I couldn't believe you had inu-yasha marry kikyou even though kagome married sesshoumaru! well i gess it's possible tho ^^ good job! are you gonna make more??? and i'll check out ur fanfic!!!!! jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w ps. can't believe this is your first fanfic...itz good!
just peachy 2002-08-31 @_@... ok.. umm.. so let me get this straight.. Kagome marries Sesshoumaru ... then Sesshoumaru lets her go back to Inuyasha? WHY?? aww... shh...ucks...
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-31 *sniff* how nice....
Lin-chan (piggytailgirl@yahoo.com) 2002-08-31 Kwaii!!! That was so sweet, I love it when inuyasha is joeusles. *gigle* (Sorry for the damit spelling) -.-; PS: please post soon! ^_^
2002-08-30 Anonymous gasp* what will ever happen?!?!?!?! k anywayz great story^_^ update soon!!Ü
Blade 2002-08-30 Kagome should go with Sesshou-maru becuz Inu-yasha is a gigantic butt-head for choosing Kikyo over Kagome. Yep, but that's only what I think. Bye-bye
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-29 OMG I love this fic SO much!
liz 2002-08-29 ah! write more!!!!!!
Lissa 2002-08-29 AWW! ^^ Not a cliffie11 ^O^ Keep on writin'!! ^_~
Miyami 2002-08-29 *cries* i wanna read mooooreeee!!!!!!! please write im dyin over here!!!!!!
DemonBlade 2002-08-29 I WILL KILL U IF SHE ENDS UP WITH FEM-BOY!!!!
Itadakimasu 2002-08-29 she has to go with fluffy-chan! please please please! fluffy-chan alllll the way! *waves around fluffy/kag sign* jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w
Lindsay 2002-08-28 Make this a Sess/Kagome please.
saskia 2002-08-28 hahahha you but seshumaru in a red kimono like inuyashua's T-T , but i like the white kimono he has he looks very sexy. anyway hoe you keep it up
sakura 2002-08-27 That was soooo good!!! More!!! Update!!! But I think that it's going a little too quick. But I still love it!!! I think it should be a Sess/Kag fic, cause Inu-Yasha's soooo mean in here! Update soon!!!
2002-08-27 Anonymous i luv it!!! gotta continue!!! poor inuyasha! but he was stupid anywayz for doing that... update soon ^-^
MiyokoAinoKou 2002-08-27 YOOOUUU!!!!! ::RANTS:: INU YASHA/KAGOME!!!!!!! Although I like Fluffy...but...NOT WITH KAGOME!!! n.n I like your fic...
Usagi2005 2002-08-27 huge sweatdrop! but hey its good me likes! mwhahahahahahahaha hehehehe signed person to lazy to log in ( but had to this time )
Miyami 2002-08-27 Ehum...*giggleing violently* what will happen? what will happen?!!!!? Please write mooore!
whatsinaname 2002-08-27 AH! you now Sesshomaru gonna win!! ^_^ (in the blechers with pom-poms) GO FLUFFY-CHAN GO! Good story! keep writing
Dark Star 2002-08-27 It was kind of too direct, but I like it, I like it! ^_^
Itadakimasu 2002-08-27 i love this fic! sesshoumaru and kagome kissed! ^^!!! sooo soo happy! are they going to become a real copule soon??? please! hah! i dun care if inu- yasha's tortured at all!!! ^^, anything as long as sesshouamru's happY!!!! *i think i've been watching to much inuyasha...i'm starting to talk of them like they're actualy real people...yeh, i wish!* jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-26 I love this!!!!!
Jen 2002-08-26 hey! wonderful story! a little rushed in some parts tho... (i rush too :-D ) can't wait to hear more . i luv revenge stories.. hehehe ~Jen
Itadakimasu 2002-08-26 I LOVE THE STORY SO FREAKING MUCH, I'M ADDING TO MY FAVORITES! DUDE! I LOVE IT! please please please make this a sess/kag! pleaes! I beg you! i love those kind of stories! i love sess/kag! they make such an kick-ass couple! of course that's probably due to the fact that i love sesshoumaru...^^ please please please get the next chapter out a really sooN! me loves the story! jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w
P.t 2002-08-26 cool! P.t
just peachy 2002-08-25 please update soon! this has good potential!!!
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-25 OMG I love this continue it cuz i need it SO bad
mewie9 2002-08-25 ^o^ a s/k~! waiwaiwai~! ^o^ anyway, here's some critique-ness: using '?', '!', and so forth would help; such as when shippou was asking a question, there was no '?' at the end. also, the characters are a bit OOC; for example sesshoumaru wouldn't give in so easily or be so... not indifferent. oh, and those times where there was just one word, like: 'stare'. those work ok, but it doesn't seem to flow well with the way you wrote everything else; using descriptions instead of a word will make your story a lot more serious. and it's jaken, not 'jayken'. plus, those times when you inserted the lyrics of songs, it would help to space the verses and lines out; easier to read, then. well, hope my critique doesn't seem too... harsh; i'm just trying to write a constructive review ^o^ great story, tho! plz, write more! i wanna know what happens~
Dark Star 2002-08-25 SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG! SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG! I think that's enough for what I want, but it's totally up to you. Just a note, I got a little confused when they were talking, but other than that, the story's got a great start! Keep writing! ^_^ ~*~*~Dark Star~*~*~
whatsinaname 2002-08-25 poor poor sesshy. ^evii evil Kagome^. Y oh y would u do this to Fluffy- chan?? ;_; he had better get the tetsusigia, but he prob. wont. ;_; Sesshomaru!!! keep writing! its really good!!
phoebemoon 2002-08-25 I love it!! But, you will keep sessh and kag a couple, right? I hope so, keep it up, love it so far
DemonBlade 2002-08-25 O.O; ok....that was...different. -_-;; never fluffy and kagome tho. ok?
Reviews For: Love is not a game
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---- Lydia 2002-09-06 It was awesome! I liked the second ending better 'cause I'm not that much of a fluffy fan.
Dijiil2 (Inuyasha's angel) 2002-09-05
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA that was funny and good MORE MORE
Miyami 2002-09-01 I'm not sure which chapter I loved the most... Though it's pretty interesting to see how Fluffy and Kagome act together... And to see Kikyo as almost nice instead of a bitch...=P
Itadakimasu 2002-09-01 o__0! this wuz cool! but I couldn't believe you had inu-yasha marry kikyou even though kagome married sesshoumaru! well i gess it's possible tho ^^ good job! are you gonna make more??? and i'll check out ur fanfic!!!!! jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w ps. can't believe this is your first fanfic...itz good!
just peachy 2002-08-31 @_@... ok.. umm.. so let me get this straight.. Kagome marries Sesshoumaru ... then Sesshoumaru lets her go back to Inuyasha? WHY?? aww... shh...ucks...
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-31 *sniff* how nice....
Lin-chan (piggytailgirl@yahoo.com) 2002-08-31 Kwaii!!! That was so sweet, I love it when inuyasha is joeusles. *gigle* (Sorry for the damit spelling) -.-; PS: please post soon! ^_^
2002-08-30 Anonymous gasp* what will ever happen?!?!?!?! k anywayz great story^_^ update soon!!Ü
Blade 2002-08-30 Kagome should go with Sesshou-maru becuz Inu-yasha is a gigantic butt-head for choosing Kikyo over Kagome. Yep, but that's only what I think. Bye-bye
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-29 OMG I love this fic SO much!
liz 2002-08-29 ah! write more!!!!!!
Lissa 2002-08-29 AWW! ^^ Not a cliffie11 ^O^ Keep on writin'!! ^_~
Miyami 2002-08-29 *cries* i wanna read mooooreeee!!!!!!! please write im dyin over here!!!!!!
DemonBlade 2002-08-29 I WILL KILL U IF SHE ENDS UP WITH FEM-BOY!!!!
Itadakimasu 2002-08-29 she has to go with fluffy-chan! please please please! fluffy-chan alllll the way! *waves around fluffy/kag sign* jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w
Lindsay 2002-08-28 Make this a Sess/Kagome please.
saskia 2002-08-28 hahahha you but seshumaru in a red kimono like inuyashua's T-T , but i like the white kimono he has he looks very sexy. anyway hoe you keep it up
sakura 2002-08-27 That was soooo good!!! More!!! Update!!! But I think that it's going a little too quick. But I still love it!!! I think it should be a Sess/Kag fic, cause Inu-Yasha's soooo mean in here! Update soon!!!
2002-08-27 Anonymous i luv it!!! gotta continue!!! poor inuyasha! but he was stupid anywayz for doing that... update soon ^-^
MiyokoAinoKou 2002-08-27 YOOOUUU!!!!! ::RANTS:: INU YASHA/KAGOME!!!!!!! Although I like Fluffy...but...NOT WITH KAGOME!!! n.n I like your fic...
Usagi2005 2002-08-27 huge sweatdrop! but hey its good me likes! mwhahahahahahahaha hehehehe signed person to lazy to log in ( but had to this time )
Miyami 2002-08-27 Ehum...*giggleing violently* what will happen? what will happen?!!!!? Please write mooore!
whatsinaname 2002-08-27 AH! you now Sesshomaru gonna win!! ^_^ (in the blechers with pom-poms) GO FLUFFY-CHAN GO! Good story! keep writing
Dark Star 2002-08-27 It was kind of too direct, but I like it, I like it! ^_^
Itadakimasu 2002-08-27 i love this fic! sesshoumaru and kagome kissed! ^^!!! sooo soo happy! are they going to become a real copule soon??? please! hah! i dun care if inu- yasha's tortured at all!!! ^^, anything as long as sesshouamru's happY!!!! *i think i've been watching to much inuyasha...i'm starting to talk of them like they're actualy real people...yeh, i wish!* jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-26 I love this!!!!!
Jen 2002-08-26 hey! wonderful story! a little rushed in some parts tho... (i rush too :-D ) can't wait to hear more . i luv revenge stories.. hehehe ~Jen
Itadakimasu 2002-08-26 I LOVE THE STORY SO FREAKING MUCH, I'M ADDING TO MY FAVORITES! DUDE! I LOVE IT! please please please make this a sess/kag! pleaes! I beg you! i love those kind of stories! i love sess/kag! they make such an kick-ass couple! of course that's probably due to the fact that i love sesshoumaru...^^ please please please get the next chapter out a really sooN! me loves the story! jyane Itadakimasu ^^! liza w
P.t 2002-08-26 cool! P.t
just peachy 2002-08-25 please update soon! this has good potential!!!
Lyn/Lin 2002-08-25 OMG I love this continue it cuz i need it SO bad
mewie9 2002-08-25 ^o^ a s/k~! waiwaiwai~! ^o^ anyway, here's some critique-ness: using '?', '!', and so forth would help; such as when shippou was asking a question, there was no '?' at the end. also, the characters are a bit OOC; for example sesshoumaru wouldn't give in so easily or be so... not indifferent. oh, and those times where there was just one word, like: 'stare'. those work ok, but it doesn't seem to flow well with the way you wrote everything else; using descriptions instead of a word will make your story a lot more serious. and it's jaken, not 'jayken'. plus, those times when you inserted the lyrics of songs, it would help to space the verses and lines out; easier to read, then. well, hope my critique doesn't seem too... harsh; i'm just trying to write a constructive review ^o^ great story, tho! plz, write more! i wanna know what happens~
Dark Star 2002-08-25 SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG! SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG!SESS/KAG! I think that's enough for what I want, but it's totally up to you. Just a note, I got a little confused when they were talking, but other than that, the story's got a great start! Keep writing! ^_^ ~*~*~Dark Star~*~*~
whatsinaname 2002-08-25 poor poor sesshy. ^evii evil Kagome^. Y oh y would u do this to Fluffy- chan?? ;_; he had better get the tetsusigia, but he prob. wont. ;_; Sesshomaru!!! keep writing! its really good!!
phoebemoon 2002-08-25 I love it!! But, you will keep sessh and kag a couple, right? I hope so, keep it up, love it so far
DemonBlade 2002-08-25 O.O; ok....that was...different. -_-;; never fluffy and kagome tho. ok?