Chapter 5

Angels or Devils?

Colonel Jack O'Neill just stood and attempted to understand what Carter was saying. But all he heard was "bah, blah, teleport, blah, blah, light."

Giving up, he turned to glance at the members of his team; Daniel looked like a five year old who had just been given a new toy to play with. His eyes were wide and his mouth kept opening and closing with awe. Which just made him look like a fish.

Teal'c as usual just stood like a statue, taking it upon himself as usual to act as a sentry. And although he stood with his face impassive, O'Neill could tell that he was tense and uncertain on this new planet.

While Carter kept blabbering on about that stupid flash and how she had seen a person there. Geez she's doing my head in he thought , wait take that back, this planet is doing my head in. There's no one here, there are flashes everywhere and, there's very little oxygen in the air and its making me feel nauseous.

"Hey, hey Carter!" He began, lifting his hands up in submission desperate to make her shut up. "Carter! Calm down!"

"What? Oh sorry sir, its just..."

"I know, something about a teleporter . But calm down. Plenty of time..."

But before he could finish black lightning and strong storm winds buffeted into them.

"whoa! What was that?" Daniel gasped.

"O'Neill!" Teal'c shouted urgently, pointing towards the other end of "what had Daniel called it? A plaza?" Yeah, a plaza.

Following his indication, O'Neill found himself staring at two figures.

One, the taller had white angel wings attached to her back and held a long staff in her right hand. The second, smaller by about a head, held a long pole arm that was almost double her height, shaped at both ends in to large spikes. Again this was held in her right hand.

So he thought privately, who are they angels of mercy? or devils in disguise?

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O.K I admit it that chapter was pretty bad. But you try keeping characters that aren't of your making in character. Oh yeah most people do. Oh well that chapter has had me stumped for ages it was almost done from Daniels point of view. Now review people... You know you want to. And if you don't I'll send Neo Saturn round to your house, coz she's getting very bored here.