Xin Ru Si Hui (A Heart Reduced To Ashes)
Chapter Four
What if Max had been in love with Zack as well as Logan at the time of Blah Blah Woof Woof? Who would she have chosen? What would have happened?
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Zack paced the small room, occasionally stopping to punch the wall, or kick a couch. It didn't help to stop the feelings that were overwhelming him at the minute.
"How could I have been so stupid?" he yelled at himself. "I should have gotten her out of here last night! I shouldn't have let her leave! I'm a failure. I'm unfit to be their CO. I should have taken her away sooner!"
He stopped talking to himself for a minute, and went to look out of the window. It was raining again. 'God I hate this rain. It's so mind numbing. I can't even think one single thought that I want to think while it is raining. Not to mention the fact that Max spent half her time brooding in front of this very window. And then she fell asleep. I was so stupid not to just take her then and leave. I mean I had the car and everything.'
Before he could get any further, he heard the mobile phone that he owned ring. 'But I didn't think anyone had think anyone had this number except.Logan. What the hell does Logan want!'
He picked up the phone, and answered it. It was Logan's friend.
"Look Zack, I need a favor off you. It's about Max." Bling said.
"Max. What's she done now?"
"She went to the hospital to try and save Logan, and the police have taken her in. I thought that the whole idea was to get her and you out of Seattle."
"It was the idea, but she had to go and wreck it. She thought that Logan was in danger and so she had to go rescue him. It's her own fault you know."
"I know. But Logan thought that Lydecker might be behind this."
"Lydecker?"
"Yes, Lydecker. That's why he wanted her to get out so quickly. Zack? Zack are you there? Hello?"
'So Lydecker was behind this after all. I have to get her out of there. But Logan's friend didn't say where she was being held. Only that she was being held. I can't believe that I let this happen. I have to go and get her out of this. I don't care what I said before, I. I love her and I have to save her. Big brother to the rescue.'
With that Zack grabbed his jacket and the mobile phone, and ran outside. He ran around to the other side of the cottage where he had left the van that he had 'borrowed'. He jumped in the driver's side, and started the ignition. But before he started to drive away, he remembered something. He picked up the phone, and dialed a number that he knew as well as his own barcode.
"You'd better be home, come on pick up. Pick the God damned phone up will you." Zack continued to swear into the phone for another couple of seconds before someone on the other end picked up.
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The end. For the minute anyway. I decided to write this now even though I can't post it for a couple of days cause fanfiction is down and I can't get on. It's so annoying. I can't believe that they would do this to me. Actually I understand why they did it, but I'm still pissed off cause I have written two chapters in like three days and I can't post one of them. And you guys can't read them. It's just not fair. Anyway, please review.
Please?
PLEASE????????????????
Chapter Four
What if Max had been in love with Zack as well as Logan at the time of Blah Blah Woof Woof? Who would she have chosen? What would have happened?
~~
Zack paced the small room, occasionally stopping to punch the wall, or kick a couch. It didn't help to stop the feelings that were overwhelming him at the minute.
"How could I have been so stupid?" he yelled at himself. "I should have gotten her out of here last night! I shouldn't have let her leave! I'm a failure. I'm unfit to be their CO. I should have taken her away sooner!"
He stopped talking to himself for a minute, and went to look out of the window. It was raining again. 'God I hate this rain. It's so mind numbing. I can't even think one single thought that I want to think while it is raining. Not to mention the fact that Max spent half her time brooding in front of this very window. And then she fell asleep. I was so stupid not to just take her then and leave. I mean I had the car and everything.'
Before he could get any further, he heard the mobile phone that he owned ring. 'But I didn't think anyone had think anyone had this number except.Logan. What the hell does Logan want!'
He picked up the phone, and answered it. It was Logan's friend.
"Look Zack, I need a favor off you. It's about Max." Bling said.
"Max. What's she done now?"
"She went to the hospital to try and save Logan, and the police have taken her in. I thought that the whole idea was to get her and you out of Seattle."
"It was the idea, but she had to go and wreck it. She thought that Logan was in danger and so she had to go rescue him. It's her own fault you know."
"I know. But Logan thought that Lydecker might be behind this."
"Lydecker?"
"Yes, Lydecker. That's why he wanted her to get out so quickly. Zack? Zack are you there? Hello?"
'So Lydecker was behind this after all. I have to get her out of there. But Logan's friend didn't say where she was being held. Only that she was being held. I can't believe that I let this happen. I have to go and get her out of this. I don't care what I said before, I. I love her and I have to save her. Big brother to the rescue.'
With that Zack grabbed his jacket and the mobile phone, and ran outside. He ran around to the other side of the cottage where he had left the van that he had 'borrowed'. He jumped in the driver's side, and started the ignition. But before he started to drive away, he remembered something. He picked up the phone, and dialed a number that he knew as well as his own barcode.
"You'd better be home, come on pick up. Pick the God damned phone up will you." Zack continued to swear into the phone for another couple of seconds before someone on the other end picked up.
~~
The end. For the minute anyway. I decided to write this now even though I can't post it for a couple of days cause fanfiction is down and I can't get on. It's so annoying. I can't believe that they would do this to me. Actually I understand why they did it, but I'm still pissed off cause I have written two chapters in like three days and I can't post one of them. And you guys can't read them. It's just not fair. Anyway, please review.
Please?
PLEASE????????????????