Land of the mysterious Pokemon!
The Journey
Author's note: BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I can't believe any of you losers are actually reading this, but HA! Anyway, this is the second chapter I wrote, all nice and formatted. Its virtually unchanged, except for the correction of some horrible, glaring grammar and spelling errors. Other than that, its pretty much dialogue! Enjoy! (Yeah right). HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Scott and Brutaki have just exited the pine forest and are on their way to Prof. Oak's lab to meet him. Scott is very exited about showing professor oak his new Brutaki. "Hey!"
"Huh?" Scott muttered, "What was that?"
"Hey Scott!"
"Oh no, It's Jason."
"Too bad you don't have a pokemon!" He sneered, "guess you'll just have to wait till' next year!"
"Actually, I do have a pokemon!" Scott snapped back, "it's a new species!"
"Sure it is!"
"Yeah, here it is."
"WHAT??? YOU HAVE A POKEMON?"
"Yep, it's a Brutaki!"
"Hmmm, let's battle, your Bru-ta-kee thing doesn't stand a chance against my Bulbasaur!"
"We'll see about that!"
"Bulbasaur, go!"
"Bulba, Bulbasaur!" It cried.
"Brutaki, GO!"
"Bruta Bruta!" It yelled back. "Brutaki, scratch!"
"Brutakiii!" Brutaki acknowledged. KKSSHHTTT!!
"BULBASAUR!!"
"Good job Brutaki," Scott cheered.
"Take this," Jason yelled, "Bulbasaur, tackle it!"
"Watch out Brutaki!" Scott warned. Too late, Bulbasaur hit Brutaki hard in the stomach. "That does it!" Scott glared back, he smiled slyly, "Brutaki thunder shock!"
"What?" Brazapp!!
"Bulba" Bulbasaur lay on the ground, defeated.
"Alright!" Scott shouted "Brutaki, we won!"
"Bruta Bruta."
"Huh?" Brutaki was glowing! "Pokedex, does Brutaki evolve?"
"No, it is learning a new move and growing a level."
"Oh, what's it learning?"
"Dig."
"WHAT? I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU BEAT ME!!!"
"Ha ha, serves you right loser," Scott teased. "Let's go Brutaki."
"Bruta Bruta!" Brutaki jumped into Scott's backpack. "Let's head over the professor's lab, Brutaki." When they reached the lab professor oak was standing there waiting for them.
"So Scott, looks like you found Brutaki!"
"Yeah, I really like it."
"Well take care of it, okay Scott?"
"Okay." Scott headed out to the grassy area outside Pallet Town, he was looking for new pokemon. They were walking around when they heard a rustle.
"Timben! Tim timben!"
"Huh? Pokedex, what is that thing?"
"A timben male, timbens eat small insect and are of the poison type."
"I gotta catch it! Brutaki go!"
"Timben?"
"Brutaki, dig!" SHOOF! Brutaki dug a hole in the ground. The timben looked around confused. When Brutaki came up, it was right under the timben. It flew up into the air.
"Pokeball, go!" Scott threw the ball at the timben in midair. The timben was hit with the ball and caught inside. The ball fell to the ground and wiggled, then wiggled again, then was still. He walked over and picked up the pokeball. "Cool, now let's head over to Pewter City to get the Boulder badge.
"Bruta Brutaki."
"You're hungry?" Scott asked, "Well we'll get something to eat in Pewter City." After walking for a while he noticed he was getting hungry too. Their trip there was uneventful. They finally made it to Pewter City and decided to go to the pokemon center first. After dropping timben off Scott headed over to the nearest restaurant. They ate while he planned their strategy for fighting Brock. He decided to use timben first then Brutaki. They walked over to the gym and pushed the doors open. When they entered the whole outside world disappeared. TO BE CONTINUED.
The Journey
Author's note: BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I can't believe any of you losers are actually reading this, but HA! Anyway, this is the second chapter I wrote, all nice and formatted. Its virtually unchanged, except for the correction of some horrible, glaring grammar and spelling errors. Other than that, its pretty much dialogue! Enjoy! (Yeah right). HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Scott and Brutaki have just exited the pine forest and are on their way to Prof. Oak's lab to meet him. Scott is very exited about showing professor oak his new Brutaki. "Hey!"
"Huh?" Scott muttered, "What was that?"
"Hey Scott!"
"Oh no, It's Jason."
"Too bad you don't have a pokemon!" He sneered, "guess you'll just have to wait till' next year!"
"Actually, I do have a pokemon!" Scott snapped back, "it's a new species!"
"Sure it is!"
"Yeah, here it is."
"WHAT??? YOU HAVE A POKEMON?"
"Yep, it's a Brutaki!"
"Hmmm, let's battle, your Bru-ta-kee thing doesn't stand a chance against my Bulbasaur!"
"We'll see about that!"
"Bulbasaur, go!"
"Bulba, Bulbasaur!" It cried.
"Brutaki, GO!"
"Bruta Bruta!" It yelled back. "Brutaki, scratch!"
"Brutakiii!" Brutaki acknowledged. KKSSHHTTT!!
"BULBASAUR!!"
"Good job Brutaki," Scott cheered.
"Take this," Jason yelled, "Bulbasaur, tackle it!"
"Watch out Brutaki!" Scott warned. Too late, Bulbasaur hit Brutaki hard in the stomach. "That does it!" Scott glared back, he smiled slyly, "Brutaki thunder shock!"
"What?" Brazapp!!
"Bulba" Bulbasaur lay on the ground, defeated.
"Alright!" Scott shouted "Brutaki, we won!"
"Bruta Bruta."
"Huh?" Brutaki was glowing! "Pokedex, does Brutaki evolve?"
"No, it is learning a new move and growing a level."
"Oh, what's it learning?"
"Dig."
"WHAT? I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU BEAT ME!!!"
"Ha ha, serves you right loser," Scott teased. "Let's go Brutaki."
"Bruta Bruta!" Brutaki jumped into Scott's backpack. "Let's head over the professor's lab, Brutaki." When they reached the lab professor oak was standing there waiting for them.
"So Scott, looks like you found Brutaki!"
"Yeah, I really like it."
"Well take care of it, okay Scott?"
"Okay." Scott headed out to the grassy area outside Pallet Town, he was looking for new pokemon. They were walking around when they heard a rustle.
"Timben! Tim timben!"
"Huh? Pokedex, what is that thing?"
"A timben male, timbens eat small insect and are of the poison type."
"I gotta catch it! Brutaki go!"
"Timben?"
"Brutaki, dig!" SHOOF! Brutaki dug a hole in the ground. The timben looked around confused. When Brutaki came up, it was right under the timben. It flew up into the air.
"Pokeball, go!" Scott threw the ball at the timben in midair. The timben was hit with the ball and caught inside. The ball fell to the ground and wiggled, then wiggled again, then was still. He walked over and picked up the pokeball. "Cool, now let's head over to Pewter City to get the Boulder badge.
"Bruta Brutaki."
"You're hungry?" Scott asked, "Well we'll get something to eat in Pewter City." After walking for a while he noticed he was getting hungry too. Their trip there was uneventful. They finally made it to Pewter City and decided to go to the pokemon center first. After dropping timben off Scott headed over to the nearest restaurant. They ate while he planned their strategy for fighting Brock. He decided to use timben first then Brutaki. They walked over to the gym and pushed the doors open. When they entered the whole outside world disappeared. TO BE CONTINUED.