Well, it seems that people want the sequels. ^_^ You're not alone I was
kind of hopping people would want them.
Chapter 12: O_o Somebody Call The Exorcist!
Everyone sat in silence watching the stunned Naraku for his next move. Sango in her bindings leaned over to Naraku, "Houshi-sama, do you understand what's going on?"
"I'm not sure, but I think Naraku might not have as much control over Namida as he thinks."
Naraku said out loud, "Stay out of this girl, the more you fight it, the less strength you'll have." He lifted the sword up again and his arm froze in mid air.
"Why are you fighting so?" Naraku said. "It's not like a shy, weak human matters."
Then Namida's voice came out of the mouth, "He's not weak and pathetic, he's Botan!" Then she took three steps back. Naraku cut the top of her wrist and she screamed in pain.
Naraku groweled and said, "I am your father Namida! Obey me!" the sword went up again and swung. Only it didn't swing at Botan it flew from Namida's hand and passed through Inu Yasha's energy bubble and it popped.
Then Namida brought her hand up to her forehead and rubbed the shikon shard in a circular motion. "Sorry father," she said. "But if you don't leave me right now, I'm going to have to result to higher forces."
All of a sudden Naraku groweled and her hands came up to grip her face. Namida whimpered in pain. "You arrogant little wench," Naraku said. "you have the same spunk as your mother but I took her with me to hell in the end. Now you think that a weak kindheart like you is going to destroy the evil of Naraku?" Then he let go and she stood up. After a few seconds, she stood up and hugged herself. Inu Yasha patted his side as a gut reaction looking for the tetsusaiga, but Namida had thrown it away a long time ago.
Then he looked up at the sound of a loud rip, The panda pelt fell on the ground in two pieces. Underneath, she wore a white Kimono top with a light blue skirt. And her black stringy hair was tied back with a white ribbon. She straightened her arm and held her fist in front of her.
Then she put her other hand over it and punted herself in the stomach. She did it a couple more times. She then stuck her finger deep down her throat and heaved. All of a sudden she coughed up the black shikon jewel. She sat with a dazed and sick look on her face. Her eyes went back to their original brown and the shikon jewel rose into the air. A shadow formed around it in the shape of Naraku and it had glowing red eyes. It dove forward catching her off guard. He knocked her onto her back and wrapped his hands around her neck. "You b*tch! You ruined everything! Do you have any last word before you breathe your last breath?"
She gasped for air and squinted at him. "Just-one!" she said. She weakly lifted her hand and snapped her fingers. "KOHAKU!"
All of a sudden, Kohaku's chain blade sliced the shadow in half. Namida crawled out from under the shadow as Kohaku started throwing various attacks at it.
"Fool! What are you doing?!" Naraku shouted at him.
"The apple doesn't fall far from the tree!" Namida said. She looked at Inu Yasha and he nodded to her. She turned back to what she was doing. "Kohaku!" she said again. He jumped to her side. She smiled at him and said, "Thank you Kohaku, you've done a good job and for that, I give you your freedom!" she kissed his forehead and his spell of slavery vanished. He looked around and saw Sango. "Sister!" he shouted and ran to her arms. They laughed and cried then he started to remove everyone from the hair. The old enemies literally started to shrink away as Naraku's power started to decrease. Namida lifted her arms into the air and a distant whistle rang out through the forest. Those with demon ears looked into the air as they heard the sound of many somethings flying toward the clearing. Several flying serpants flew over and circled around Namida affectionately. She held out her hand and they all dropped glowing orbs into her hand. They became one orb about the size of a softball. She gripped the orb and it turned into a longbow. The Naraku shadow stood up and it's evil aurora flared. She pointed a white arrow at him and said, "Goodbye, Father!" she fired the arrow and vaporized the shikon jewel holding his spirit. There was a sonicboom of light and she shielded her eyes. Kagome and Botan sat up. Botan looked around and said, "Wow!"
Naraku's spirit all of a sudden grew a long spike and thrust it through Kouga's heart. "If I'm leaveing," Naraku said in a booming voice, then I'm not leaving alone!"
Namida shot another arrow at the shadow and he and the light disappeared. Kouga fell to his knees in pain and his face met the grass. Everyone crowed around him.
"Kouga-kun!" Kagome sat at his side.
"Father!" Honey cried.
Inu Yasha turned him over. Blood poured out of the large wound in his chest. The demon coughed up blood and looked into the sky blindly. "Hachimitsu." He choaked. She took his hand and it felt cold. He breathed heavily and fast struggling to hold onto life.
"Stay with us dad!" Hachimitsu said with tears pooling in her eyes.
"Hachimitsu, I will not live." He said looking upward like she was right above him. "I love you, my daughter. You take over the wolf pack, be a good girl, and don't ever take any crap from anyone." He let go of her hand then turned his head in the direction of Inu Yasha's scent. It wasn't much since he was still congested, (An: Man, wouldn't it suck to die with a cold.)
"Inu Yasha," He said. Probably the first time he had ever called him by his real name.
Inu Yasha leaned over him. "I'm listening." He said.
"I want you to take care of my daughter and Kagome." Then he reached out and grabbed the front of his shirt and jerked him three inches from his face. "Cause if I find out from the afterlife that you let anything happen to them, I swear I will find a way to come back and haunt you until your death!" He pushed Inu Yasha away and gropped for Kagome's hand. "I love you Kagome, I always will. I don't want you to feel like you can't love ever again after my death, no matter how bad the pain is! (An: He sure is hard on himself. ;;;;;) Inu Yasha's gonna take care of you." Then he pulled her forward and kissed her lips passionately. Inu Yasha let him as a last request, but that didn't keep him from being insanely jealous. Kagome finally backed away. Kouga smiled at her then his head dropped back and his eyes closed. He went out with a smile.
"DADDY!" Honey screamed and cried into her hands. Kagome hugged her and cried into her hair.
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I still can't tell if this is a cliff hanger, but if it isn't then it's my first time not making one. Tell me what you think, and of course, I'm not done yet.
Chapter 12: O_o Somebody Call The Exorcist!
Everyone sat in silence watching the stunned Naraku for his next move. Sango in her bindings leaned over to Naraku, "Houshi-sama, do you understand what's going on?"
"I'm not sure, but I think Naraku might not have as much control over Namida as he thinks."
Naraku said out loud, "Stay out of this girl, the more you fight it, the less strength you'll have." He lifted the sword up again and his arm froze in mid air.
"Why are you fighting so?" Naraku said. "It's not like a shy, weak human matters."
Then Namida's voice came out of the mouth, "He's not weak and pathetic, he's Botan!" Then she took three steps back. Naraku cut the top of her wrist and she screamed in pain.
Naraku groweled and said, "I am your father Namida! Obey me!" the sword went up again and swung. Only it didn't swing at Botan it flew from Namida's hand and passed through Inu Yasha's energy bubble and it popped.
Then Namida brought her hand up to her forehead and rubbed the shikon shard in a circular motion. "Sorry father," she said. "But if you don't leave me right now, I'm going to have to result to higher forces."
All of a sudden Naraku groweled and her hands came up to grip her face. Namida whimpered in pain. "You arrogant little wench," Naraku said. "you have the same spunk as your mother but I took her with me to hell in the end. Now you think that a weak kindheart like you is going to destroy the evil of Naraku?" Then he let go and she stood up. After a few seconds, she stood up and hugged herself. Inu Yasha patted his side as a gut reaction looking for the tetsusaiga, but Namida had thrown it away a long time ago.
Then he looked up at the sound of a loud rip, The panda pelt fell on the ground in two pieces. Underneath, she wore a white Kimono top with a light blue skirt. And her black stringy hair was tied back with a white ribbon. She straightened her arm and held her fist in front of her.
Then she put her other hand over it and punted herself in the stomach. She did it a couple more times. She then stuck her finger deep down her throat and heaved. All of a sudden she coughed up the black shikon jewel. She sat with a dazed and sick look on her face. Her eyes went back to their original brown and the shikon jewel rose into the air. A shadow formed around it in the shape of Naraku and it had glowing red eyes. It dove forward catching her off guard. He knocked her onto her back and wrapped his hands around her neck. "You b*tch! You ruined everything! Do you have any last word before you breathe your last breath?"
She gasped for air and squinted at him. "Just-one!" she said. She weakly lifted her hand and snapped her fingers. "KOHAKU!"
All of a sudden, Kohaku's chain blade sliced the shadow in half. Namida crawled out from under the shadow as Kohaku started throwing various attacks at it.
"Fool! What are you doing?!" Naraku shouted at him.
"The apple doesn't fall far from the tree!" Namida said. She looked at Inu Yasha and he nodded to her. She turned back to what she was doing. "Kohaku!" she said again. He jumped to her side. She smiled at him and said, "Thank you Kohaku, you've done a good job and for that, I give you your freedom!" she kissed his forehead and his spell of slavery vanished. He looked around and saw Sango. "Sister!" he shouted and ran to her arms. They laughed and cried then he started to remove everyone from the hair. The old enemies literally started to shrink away as Naraku's power started to decrease. Namida lifted her arms into the air and a distant whistle rang out through the forest. Those with demon ears looked into the air as they heard the sound of many somethings flying toward the clearing. Several flying serpants flew over and circled around Namida affectionately. She held out her hand and they all dropped glowing orbs into her hand. They became one orb about the size of a softball. She gripped the orb and it turned into a longbow. The Naraku shadow stood up and it's evil aurora flared. She pointed a white arrow at him and said, "Goodbye, Father!" she fired the arrow and vaporized the shikon jewel holding his spirit. There was a sonicboom of light and she shielded her eyes. Kagome and Botan sat up. Botan looked around and said, "Wow!"
Naraku's spirit all of a sudden grew a long spike and thrust it through Kouga's heart. "If I'm leaveing," Naraku said in a booming voice, then I'm not leaving alone!"
Namida shot another arrow at the shadow and he and the light disappeared. Kouga fell to his knees in pain and his face met the grass. Everyone crowed around him.
"Kouga-kun!" Kagome sat at his side.
"Father!" Honey cried.
Inu Yasha turned him over. Blood poured out of the large wound in his chest. The demon coughed up blood and looked into the sky blindly. "Hachimitsu." He choaked. She took his hand and it felt cold. He breathed heavily and fast struggling to hold onto life.
"Stay with us dad!" Hachimitsu said with tears pooling in her eyes.
"Hachimitsu, I will not live." He said looking upward like she was right above him. "I love you, my daughter. You take over the wolf pack, be a good girl, and don't ever take any crap from anyone." He let go of her hand then turned his head in the direction of Inu Yasha's scent. It wasn't much since he was still congested, (An: Man, wouldn't it suck to die with a cold.)
"Inu Yasha," He said. Probably the first time he had ever called him by his real name.
Inu Yasha leaned over him. "I'm listening." He said.
"I want you to take care of my daughter and Kagome." Then he reached out and grabbed the front of his shirt and jerked him three inches from his face. "Cause if I find out from the afterlife that you let anything happen to them, I swear I will find a way to come back and haunt you until your death!" He pushed Inu Yasha away and gropped for Kagome's hand. "I love you Kagome, I always will. I don't want you to feel like you can't love ever again after my death, no matter how bad the pain is! (An: He sure is hard on himself. ;;;;;) Inu Yasha's gonna take care of you." Then he pulled her forward and kissed her lips passionately. Inu Yasha let him as a last request, but that didn't keep him from being insanely jealous. Kagome finally backed away. Kouga smiled at her then his head dropped back and his eyes closed. He went out with a smile.
"DADDY!" Honey screamed and cried into her hands. Kagome hugged her and cried into her hair.
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I still can't tell if this is a cliff hanger, but if it isn't then it's my first time not making one. Tell me what you think, and of course, I'm not done yet.