Okay, obviously we all know that FFN is going to be a real whore with the
populace of us that have NC-17 stories up here. Well, what can we do. So,
I have reposted. Go me. But with my old story being removed from the
site, I lost all of my reviews. Þ Well, because all of the reviews that
were left mean so much to me and I would absolutly die if I lost them, I
decided to repost them as a separate chapter in my story. I know y'all
probably don't read these things, but I would like to keep them up and with
the story. Perhaps I am corny, but just ask my friends, corniness is my
essence. =) In all complete honesty, the only reason I made it NC-17 is
because I pull half of my ideas out of my ass when I write them so I truly
have no idea where it's going. The rating was for my own protection, I
guess..but anyways...here are my own reviews. Please keep supporting me!
I love knowing that my writings are actually read and enjoyed.
^_____________________________^
First published February 3rd, 2002. 53 reviews as of September 13th, 2002
Briar Rose (maresdrake@hotmail.com) ---------2002-09-13-------------14 Oh, I love this story. Brad and Schu are so sweet together. But REALLY, it should be rated "R." An NC-17 is NOT warranted, and you do your story a dis- service (besides which, ff.net is going to delete all "NC-17" by Oct. 12.
"R" is still "adult over 17 content" and covers homosexual themes, rape, cuss words---and other things more "objectionable" than are in your fic.
Reggae--------------2002-07-15-----------------14 Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. o.^
P.S. Speare-----------------2002-06-05-------------------14 *throws 'new' picket sign (since apparently my old one was recycled) and self into dryer, and spins dry on high for an hour* There, now that I've shrunken myself, I'll just camp out by the computer until there's more. The story is coming along quite nicely, and I can't help but cheer for Crawford and Schu to be together. Some heartwarming Brad/Schu moments in this chapter which were wonderfully done. Please, keep it coming! ^_^
Soxs (Trinity4343@gmx.de) ---------------------2002-06-05---------------14 hi,
i just wanted to say that i really love your fic...
it's one of the best i have ever read...
i'm always looking forward to you updating this incredibly good story
thanks and bye soxs
sabacat------------------2002-06-04-------------------14 YUM!!! That was delicious! So sweet... yet so sad... I love how you write! Great chapter once again! ^___^
Ians-Koibito-----------------------2002-06-04----------------------14 Yeah!!!!!! Brad got to be Seme!!!!!!! *GRIN*
Good chapter, when will we get ta see more??
BlondGoddess---------------------2002-05-18------------------13 That was great! You just gotta luv Schu! ^.~
ShiTiger------------------2002-05-09------------------13 Great chapter, what happens now?
P.S. Speare---------------------2002-05-08-----------------------13 *Pickets around Trunkschan's computer with a 'More!' sign* I need more. Please, write more! I'm really enjoying the relationship you've developed between Brad and Schu, angsty at times and yet sweet some other times. Not to mention the the plot is unfolding quite nicely. Please continue, and soon! ^_^
sabacat----------------------2002-05-08----------------------13 What a cool chapter!!! Evil place to stop though...lol Write more fast! ^___^
Ians-Koibito-----------------------2002-04-21------------------------12 This is a really good story, I'm enjoying reading it very much and can't wait for the next chapter to be put up. ^^
ShiTiger---------------------2002-04-18----------------------12 Great chapter! Schuldig is getting stronger. More yaoi! Next chapter soon, please!
wispykitty---------------------2002-04-18------------------12 *dies* That was beautiful! Mooooore!!!!! ^_^
NagiLite------------------------2002-04-16--------------------11 Oooooh, this is just so cool! WRITE MORE!!!! Pronto! ^-^
Ketty (ketty2@wp.pl) ----------------------2002-04-16-------------------11 ^-^
This story is better with every chapter.
I just love to read it!!!!
And of course I'm waiting for more
Madiha---------------2002-04-16--------------11 I like the flow of this fic.Continue ne?I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
ShiTiger-------------------2002-04-15------------------11 Very good. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Yaoi!
sabacat----------------------2002-04-15------------------11 Poor little Schu! ...it's sure to hit the fan now! This was another cool chapter! ^___^
Yukina----------------------2002-04-12------------------------10 Ok first off I have totally enjoyed reading your fic thus far. You have done a wonderfull job of keeping the characters, well, in character ^_^ Second off...YOU CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!!!! NOOOO PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE FINISH IT!!! Hehe sorry. I know work takes too much time but I am keeping my fingers crossed that you continue this soon ^_^
*Yukina*
ShiTiger---------------------2002-04-11---------------------10 That was so sweet! I just loved that chapter, please write more. Yaoi!
Katashi Usagi-----------------------2002-04-10-------------------10 Okok, i read it. stop buggin me now hehe. yes hun it was VERY sweet and VERY cute. now be a good best friend and write some more before we go to Yohji's on Friday k? hehe see ya later!...... SO SWEET!!!
P.S. Speare---------------------2002-04-10-------------------10 That was such a touching Brad/Schu scene in Ch. 10. Beautifully done! I'm really enjoying the dimensions you're putting into Brad and Schu''s characters, not to mention the developing relationship you've created between them. Wonderful job. Please, continue! And soon! :)
wispykitty--------------------2002-04-10-------------------10 Oooooooh!!!!! That was so sweet!!!!!!! Aw man, that was so adorable, so sweet!! ^^
Akari------------------------2002-04-10--------------------10 Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That's so sweet. *gets all teary eyed* *sniff* more please.
sabacat-----------------------2002-04-10------------------------10 That was wonderful! So sweet!
ShiTiger--------------------------2002-04-09--------------------9 Poor Schu, can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. This story was fun to read, when will the other two arrive? Yaoi!
Akari--------------------2002-04-09----------------------9 Oooh I like this.
What about Nagi-chan and Farfie warfiepoo?
Uh,Yeah... just right more ok.
Madiha-------------------------2002-04-09-------------------9 Hmm....kinda sad for SchuSchu here ne?
Katashi Usagi-----------------------2002-03-31-----------------------8 you're not allowed to have an opinion in this Nagi-chan, and neither am i.... besides you know you and i got to read it first anyways! heheh.. i STILL can't belive you wrote that Schuschu.
Nagi-chan------------------------2002-03-30---------------------8 Post the yaoi...heheh...
Yaoi, is the essence of life...*grin*
Madiha---------------------2002-03-28-----------------------8 I vote for basic drama in the next chapter and lemon in the later chapters.
rave (wonderlandrave@hotmail.com) ---------------------2002-03-27----------- -------8 damn sex between two really bishonen guys or a good plot let's pnder that for a sec... hmmmmmmm SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! (i'm such a hentai ^_^;;;)
sandy-------------------------2002-03-27--------------------8 would we?! of course, well, at least I am, its not complete without it doncha think?^_~ and besides, if its a schu and brad lemon, its even more better, please continue this fic because it's really good! can't wait for the next one, hopefully full of brad/schu lemony goodness!hehe...^_~
Ketty (ketty2@wp.pl) -------------------------2002-03-22-------------------- 7 I like your story vey,vey,very much. ^_^
And now I'm wondering what will Bradly do with SchuSchu...
Please write more!
Katashi Usagi---------------------2002-03-22---------------------7 Wow... i can't believe you wrote that.... wow... hehe you know i'm NEVER gonna let you forget the fact that you wrote this hehe. Can't wait till Rae reads it. hehehe oh boy hehehe well bye!
Katashi Usagi---------------------2002-03-22-----------------------6 WAIWAI!!! Hun i love this story, you know i do. hehe can't wait to read more. Oh, new chapter to test read! hehe bye!
Lilee--------------------2002-03-21------------------6 ooooh!!!this is really good!!! ^_^ please write some more of this story, I luv it! especially a schu and brad fic! they look good together^_~ so please, update soon k?! ^_^
Me Myself & I -------------------2002-03-21---------------------6 WOO HOO!!! I luv Schu and Brad. Gotta get some yaoi schtuff in here. heheh... *grin*
Leoangel --------------------------2002-03-21---------------------6 AWESOME STORY! I LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS ^ ^
Sabacat----------------------2002-03-21----------------------6 YaY! the beginning of Crawford and Schu! I want more!!! ^__^
wispykitty--------------------------2002-03-20---------------------5 Oi!! Me loves this story so much!!!!! You so have to write some more very soon!! This story totally rules so far. :)
CherryBerry------------------------2002-03-20-----------------------5 WAH! Poor Brad! He's definitely on the road to doing whatever it takes to get what he wants though. Ya just gotta love that guy! Great chapter!
Lela--------------------------2002-03-14----------------------4 I wish you'd keep writing more, I want to know what happened with Nagi and Schu (since they're my favorites, of course ^_^). So... To speed things up, here's cookies for you! Freshly made in Sweden, the land of... Whatever. ;) Keep writing, onegai yo!
Nagi-chan (soldier_senshi@hotmail.com) ---------------------------2002-03- 05------------------3 sugoi Trunks-chan!! I like having an older sister who writes fanfic hehe... ^_~ MOOSE!
sabacat--------------------------2002-03-05---------------------3 This should get very interesting for Brad... Great chapter!
Alyce---------------------2002-03-04-------------------1 Well...it's an interesting storyline, however, I REALLY think you should take out the Japanese in the beginning. Why? This fic is in ENGLISH. As a Japanese major, it drives me NUTS when anime fans decide to include it in their fics. Unless the entire thing is written in romanji, or you have subtitles within the fic so that those who haven't seen a lot of subbed anime will still understand, it's not going to make sense to some people.
Kira------------------------2002-03-04-------------------1 Hm...Actually pretty good...But it's
"Die Geschichte von Schwarz" (The History of Schwarz) "Geschichte aus Schwarz" means, History out of black....^^; Or is it meant that way? (trust me with the pronounciation of the German...I am German...^^)
sabacat--------------------------2002-03-04-------------------2 YAY! I was happy to see a new part this morning! The more Brad the better! Great part!
Cloudy daze------------------------2002-03-03---------------------1 Very good so far. *grins* I'm really getting into schwarz lately and their pasts always fasinated me. And of course for me yaoi is always a good thing. ^__^ Keep it up.
Kaneko-Chan -----------------------2002-03-03--------------------1 Wow, great start ^^, but what about farfie-sama? Please keep going ^.^
sabacat---------------------2002-03-03------------------1 That's a great start--definitely can't wait to read more! ^__^
Madiha------------------------2002-03-03-------------------1 Wow....I love every part of this fic.Especially the Nagi part.
Katashi Usagi--------------------2002-03-02----------------------1 Sugoi sugoi Trunks-chan! you finally got one of the stories published!! can't wait till you get more done on this. i love it so much so far. keep goin!
First published February 3rd, 2002. 53 reviews as of September 13th, 2002
Briar Rose (maresdrake@hotmail.com) ---------2002-09-13-------------14 Oh, I love this story. Brad and Schu are so sweet together. But REALLY, it should be rated "R." An NC-17 is NOT warranted, and you do your story a dis- service (besides which, ff.net is going to delete all "NC-17" by Oct. 12.
"R" is still "adult over 17 content" and covers homosexual themes, rape, cuss words---and other things more "objectionable" than are in your fic.
Reggae--------------2002-07-15-----------------14 Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. o.^
P.S. Speare-----------------2002-06-05-------------------14 *throws 'new' picket sign (since apparently my old one was recycled) and self into dryer, and spins dry on high for an hour* There, now that I've shrunken myself, I'll just camp out by the computer until there's more. The story is coming along quite nicely, and I can't help but cheer for Crawford and Schu to be together. Some heartwarming Brad/Schu moments in this chapter which were wonderfully done. Please, keep it coming! ^_^
Soxs (Trinity4343@gmx.de) ---------------------2002-06-05---------------14 hi,
i just wanted to say that i really love your fic...
it's one of the best i have ever read...
i'm always looking forward to you updating this incredibly good story
thanks and bye soxs
sabacat------------------2002-06-04-------------------14 YUM!!! That was delicious! So sweet... yet so sad... I love how you write! Great chapter once again! ^___^
Ians-Koibito-----------------------2002-06-04----------------------14 Yeah!!!!!! Brad got to be Seme!!!!!!! *GRIN*
Good chapter, when will we get ta see more??
BlondGoddess---------------------2002-05-18------------------13 That was great! You just gotta luv Schu! ^.~
ShiTiger------------------2002-05-09------------------13 Great chapter, what happens now?
P.S. Speare---------------------2002-05-08-----------------------13 *Pickets around Trunkschan's computer with a 'More!' sign* I need more. Please, write more! I'm really enjoying the relationship you've developed between Brad and Schu, angsty at times and yet sweet some other times. Not to mention the the plot is unfolding quite nicely. Please continue, and soon! ^_^
sabacat----------------------2002-05-08----------------------13 What a cool chapter!!! Evil place to stop though...lol Write more fast! ^___^
Ians-Koibito-----------------------2002-04-21------------------------12 This is a really good story, I'm enjoying reading it very much and can't wait for the next chapter to be put up. ^^
ShiTiger---------------------2002-04-18----------------------12 Great chapter! Schuldig is getting stronger. More yaoi! Next chapter soon, please!
wispykitty---------------------2002-04-18------------------12 *dies* That was beautiful! Mooooore!!!!! ^_^
NagiLite------------------------2002-04-16--------------------11 Oooooh, this is just so cool! WRITE MORE!!!! Pronto! ^-^
Ketty (ketty2@wp.pl) ----------------------2002-04-16-------------------11 ^-^
This story is better with every chapter.
I just love to read it!!!!
And of course I'm waiting for more
Madiha---------------2002-04-16--------------11 I like the flow of this fic.Continue ne?I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
ShiTiger-------------------2002-04-15------------------11 Very good. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Yaoi!
sabacat----------------------2002-04-15------------------11 Poor little Schu! ...it's sure to hit the fan now! This was another cool chapter! ^___^
Yukina----------------------2002-04-12------------------------10 Ok first off I have totally enjoyed reading your fic thus far. You have done a wonderfull job of keeping the characters, well, in character ^_^ Second off...YOU CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!!!! NOOOO PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE FINISH IT!!! Hehe sorry. I know work takes too much time but I am keeping my fingers crossed that you continue this soon ^_^
*Yukina*
ShiTiger---------------------2002-04-11---------------------10 That was so sweet! I just loved that chapter, please write more. Yaoi!
Katashi Usagi-----------------------2002-04-10-------------------10 Okok, i read it. stop buggin me now hehe. yes hun it was VERY sweet and VERY cute. now be a good best friend and write some more before we go to Yohji's on Friday k? hehe see ya later!...... SO SWEET!!!
P.S. Speare---------------------2002-04-10-------------------10 That was such a touching Brad/Schu scene in Ch. 10. Beautifully done! I'm really enjoying the dimensions you're putting into Brad and Schu''s characters, not to mention the developing relationship you've created between them. Wonderful job. Please, continue! And soon! :)
wispykitty--------------------2002-04-10-------------------10 Oooooooh!!!!! That was so sweet!!!!!!! Aw man, that was so adorable, so sweet!! ^^
Akari------------------------2002-04-10--------------------10 Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That's so sweet. *gets all teary eyed* *sniff* more please.
sabacat-----------------------2002-04-10------------------------10 That was wonderful! So sweet!
ShiTiger--------------------------2002-04-09--------------------9 Poor Schu, can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. This story was fun to read, when will the other two arrive? Yaoi!
Akari--------------------2002-04-09----------------------9 Oooh I like this.
What about Nagi-chan and Farfie warfiepoo?
Uh,Yeah... just right more ok.
Madiha-------------------------2002-04-09-------------------9 Hmm....kinda sad for SchuSchu here ne?
Katashi Usagi-----------------------2002-03-31-----------------------8 you're not allowed to have an opinion in this Nagi-chan, and neither am i.... besides you know you and i got to read it first anyways! heheh.. i STILL can't belive you wrote that Schuschu.
Nagi-chan------------------------2002-03-30---------------------8 Post the yaoi...heheh...
Yaoi, is the essence of life...*grin*
Madiha---------------------2002-03-28-----------------------8 I vote for basic drama in the next chapter and lemon in the later chapters.
rave (wonderlandrave@hotmail.com) ---------------------2002-03-27----------- -------8 damn sex between two really bishonen guys or a good plot let's pnder that for a sec... hmmmmmmm SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! (i'm such a hentai ^_^;;;)
sandy-------------------------2002-03-27--------------------8 would we?! of course, well, at least I am, its not complete without it doncha think?^_~ and besides, if its a schu and brad lemon, its even more better, please continue this fic because it's really good! can't wait for the next one, hopefully full of brad/schu lemony goodness!hehe...^_~
Ketty (ketty2@wp.pl) -------------------------2002-03-22-------------------- 7 I like your story vey,vey,very much. ^_^
And now I'm wondering what will Bradly do with SchuSchu...
Please write more!
Katashi Usagi---------------------2002-03-22---------------------7 Wow... i can't believe you wrote that.... wow... hehe you know i'm NEVER gonna let you forget the fact that you wrote this hehe. Can't wait till Rae reads it. hehehe oh boy hehehe well bye!
Katashi Usagi---------------------2002-03-22-----------------------6 WAIWAI!!! Hun i love this story, you know i do. hehe can't wait to read more. Oh, new chapter to test read! hehe bye!
Lilee--------------------2002-03-21------------------6 ooooh!!!this is really good!!! ^_^ please write some more of this story, I luv it! especially a schu and brad fic! they look good together^_~ so please, update soon k?! ^_^
Me Myself & I -------------------2002-03-21---------------------6 WOO HOO!!! I luv Schu and Brad. Gotta get some yaoi schtuff in here. heheh... *grin*
Leoangel --------------------------2002-03-21---------------------6 AWESOME STORY! I LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS ^ ^
Sabacat----------------------2002-03-21----------------------6 YaY! the beginning of Crawford and Schu! I want more!!! ^__^
wispykitty--------------------------2002-03-20---------------------5 Oi!! Me loves this story so much!!!!! You so have to write some more very soon!! This story totally rules so far. :)
CherryBerry------------------------2002-03-20-----------------------5 WAH! Poor Brad! He's definitely on the road to doing whatever it takes to get what he wants though. Ya just gotta love that guy! Great chapter!
Lela--------------------------2002-03-14----------------------4 I wish you'd keep writing more, I want to know what happened with Nagi and Schu (since they're my favorites, of course ^_^). So... To speed things up, here's cookies for you! Freshly made in Sweden, the land of... Whatever. ;) Keep writing, onegai yo!
Nagi-chan (soldier_senshi@hotmail.com) ---------------------------2002-03- 05------------------3 sugoi Trunks-chan!! I like having an older sister who writes fanfic hehe... ^_~ MOOSE!
sabacat--------------------------2002-03-05---------------------3 This should get very interesting for Brad... Great chapter!
Alyce---------------------2002-03-04-------------------1 Well...it's an interesting storyline, however, I REALLY think you should take out the Japanese in the beginning. Why? This fic is in ENGLISH. As a Japanese major, it drives me NUTS when anime fans decide to include it in their fics. Unless the entire thing is written in romanji, or you have subtitles within the fic so that those who haven't seen a lot of subbed anime will still understand, it's not going to make sense to some people.
Kira------------------------2002-03-04-------------------1 Hm...Actually pretty good...But it's
"Die Geschichte von Schwarz" (The History of Schwarz) "Geschichte aus Schwarz" means, History out of black....^^; Or is it meant that way? (trust me with the pronounciation of the German...I am German...^^)
sabacat--------------------------2002-03-04-------------------2 YAY! I was happy to see a new part this morning! The more Brad the better! Great part!
Cloudy daze------------------------2002-03-03---------------------1 Very good so far. *grins* I'm really getting into schwarz lately and their pasts always fasinated me. And of course for me yaoi is always a good thing. ^__^ Keep it up.
Kaneko-Chan -----------------------2002-03-03--------------------1 Wow, great start ^^, but what about farfie-sama? Please keep going ^.^
sabacat---------------------2002-03-03------------------1 That's a great start--definitely can't wait to read more! ^__^
Madiha------------------------2002-03-03-------------------1 Wow....I love every part of this fic.Especially the Nagi part.
Katashi Usagi--------------------2002-03-02----------------------1 Sugoi sugoi Trunks-chan! you finally got one of the stories published!! can't wait till you get more done on this. i love it so much so far. keep goin!