Note..

Hello again. I read this story over again, and well, I find it wasn't written very well. My grammar is terrible, the story is all over the place, and the story is vague.

Anyway, if anyone wants me to fix it up i.e. add new small scenes to complete it more and edit things, etc.. Unless you think its fine, then I won't bother with it..

Please review for your opinions on what to do.. it's all up to the readers

P.S. Don't worry about my other ficcy's to those who are wondering, they'll come out soon.

~Blaze