Okay, even though little to no people reviewed, i'm posting this.
Maybe if I cut to the chase, you'll read my stupid fic.
And the only way you can correct me on whether this fic is stupid is to read it and then tell me it ain't.
I owth not thy Yu-Gi-Oh.
PoV's shall be announced before dialog, now read on!
(YAMI POV) I had no way of telling time. It seemed like weeks had passed, but that's just
due to complete boredom. Staring at walls gets old really fast. I was almost beginning to
enjoy Slade's random visits. At least it was something to do, even if he did enjoy
tormenting me. Sure enough, he appeared again. This time he was all business.
"Congratulations." he said. "For what?" I asked. "Your Light and his friends have found
the secret shortcut. They'll be here in a few hours." I felt elated by this. "Guess you
underestimated them, hmm?" I tried to rub it in. He just laughed at me again. If there's
one thing I hate, it's being laughed at. "Silly Yami. He has to find you first. So I have
to make sure you don't cheat." He grinned and with his powers, hit me as hard as he could.
It hurt a lot, and I blacked out instantly.
(YUGI POV) We had spent the night at Willow's village. She and her friends were very nice,
but we had to keep moving. By the time we reached the end of the forest, Joey was bugging
us by being paranoid, just like that time in the Duelist Kingdom. "I'm telling you guys,
something's following us!" he insisted. "Joey, if you don't cut it out I'll-" Taya was
interrupted by a giant sneeze coming from the trees. I laughed as the Blue Eyes crept out
sheepishly. "I think he wants to help, guys." Everyone else had decided to hide behind a
nearby rock at this point. The Blue Eyes was very friendly and cooperative, and gladly gave
us a ride to the Castle. It was at least four times bigger than Pegasus's. It was all
black stone and towers. The drawbridge was down, so we walked right in. "So this is the
finish line?" Tristan asked. "I thought he said Yami would be here." Bakura looked around
before answering, "Maybe we have to look for him ourselves?" Yami was no where to be seen
outside, so we walked inside the main building. Blue Eyes had to stay outside because he's
too big. We walked down the hall. There were big paintings of different things - Duel
Monsters, old Egyptians none of us recognized, that sort of thing. We ended up in front of
a large black door. "Hasn't he ever heard of color?" Joey asked. Inscribed on a plaque on
the door was a message:
SO YOU'VE MADE IT TO MY CASTLE:
All well and good, but you haven't found the finish line yet!
You have to pass through the trial to find the line.
If you lose, it counts.
If you lose, I win.
And I want to face you first, so try not to lose in here, little boy.
Have Fun!
"He really bugs me, you know." Taya said after we all read it. Nothing to do but go in, so
we did. The door closed behind us, and we all fell!
Oh joy, oh rapture. What in the worlds could I have done to them?
Well, if you don't review, i'll never post and you'll never know. NEVER! *cue insane laughter*
I need more sleep. Eh heh heh...
Maybe if I cut to the chase, you'll read my stupid fic.
And the only way you can correct me on whether this fic is stupid is to read it and then tell me it ain't.
I owth not thy Yu-Gi-Oh.
PoV's shall be announced before dialog, now read on!
(YAMI POV) I had no way of telling time. It seemed like weeks had passed, but that's just
due to complete boredom. Staring at walls gets old really fast. I was almost beginning to
enjoy Slade's random visits. At least it was something to do, even if he did enjoy
tormenting me. Sure enough, he appeared again. This time he was all business.
"Congratulations." he said. "For what?" I asked. "Your Light and his friends have found
the secret shortcut. They'll be here in a few hours." I felt elated by this. "Guess you
underestimated them, hmm?" I tried to rub it in. He just laughed at me again. If there's
one thing I hate, it's being laughed at. "Silly Yami. He has to find you first. So I have
to make sure you don't cheat." He grinned and with his powers, hit me as hard as he could.
It hurt a lot, and I blacked out instantly.
(YUGI POV) We had spent the night at Willow's village. She and her friends were very nice,
but we had to keep moving. By the time we reached the end of the forest, Joey was bugging
us by being paranoid, just like that time in the Duelist Kingdom. "I'm telling you guys,
something's following us!" he insisted. "Joey, if you don't cut it out I'll-" Taya was
interrupted by a giant sneeze coming from the trees. I laughed as the Blue Eyes crept out
sheepishly. "I think he wants to help, guys." Everyone else had decided to hide behind a
nearby rock at this point. The Blue Eyes was very friendly and cooperative, and gladly gave
us a ride to the Castle. It was at least four times bigger than Pegasus's. It was all
black stone and towers. The drawbridge was down, so we walked right in. "So this is the
finish line?" Tristan asked. "I thought he said Yami would be here." Bakura looked around
before answering, "Maybe we have to look for him ourselves?" Yami was no where to be seen
outside, so we walked inside the main building. Blue Eyes had to stay outside because he's
too big. We walked down the hall. There were big paintings of different things - Duel
Monsters, old Egyptians none of us recognized, that sort of thing. We ended up in front of
a large black door. "Hasn't he ever heard of color?" Joey asked. Inscribed on a plaque on
the door was a message:
SO YOU'VE MADE IT TO MY CASTLE:
All well and good, but you haven't found the finish line yet!
You have to pass through the trial to find the line.
If you lose, it counts.
If you lose, I win.
And I want to face you first, so try not to lose in here, little boy.
Have Fun!
"He really bugs me, you know." Taya said after we all read it. Nothing to do but go in, so
we did. The door closed behind us, and we all fell!
Oh joy, oh rapture. What in the worlds could I have done to them?
Well, if you don't review, i'll never post and you'll never know. NEVER! *cue insane laughter*
I need more sleep. Eh heh heh...