Hiyaz! It was good to see some reviews within a day so... I'm going on to chapter two. Hope ya like it! But... it is a bit more immature than the last I think ^^;;; And there's a few curse words in here as well.
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CHAPTER 2
For a minute or two Akkie looked rather disappointed, which was how she felt. But she was able to force a smile over to the young boy who was dancing around with his tiny Marill. At that point he stopped and flashed a victory smile over to her.
"You're not that bad. Good fight."
She simply nodded and turned and walked back on her route towards the ice path. As she walked she glanced at the trees overhanging the route. She noticed a few Pidgey nestled together on a branch resting. She thought to herself *One of those would be a cinch to capture. They're practically asleep.* She grabbed Weedle's pokeball, enlarged it, then pressed the button letting him out. She knelt down next to him and whispered, "Now I know that you probably don't feel too well after that last battle, but I need you to just use just one little String Shot on any one of those Pidgey's over there. Don't wear yourself out I just think we'll be safer to have another pokemon with us in the ice path." Weedle nodded before inching over to the tree where the Pidgey were unaware of any danger. Akkie stood ready with one pokeball in both hands, one if Weedle needed out, one to throw at a Pidgey. Weedle arched up onto its highest point and shot out a web at the Pidgey.
"Pidgey!" One of the Pidgey's was awake enough to faintly see the Weedle attack. That Pidgey cried out a warning to the other two and flew out of harm's way. Another Pidgey was able to escape but the web barely hit the last on the wing, disabling her flight. She fell to the ground frantically flapping about on the ground.
"She's pretty strong but not all that great when it comes to speed, huh Weedle?" Weedle whimpered back a soft answer. Akkie clicked her tongue, "Sorry Weedle, but I think you're gonna have to give her a Poison Sting to keep her from getting away. Can you handle that?" Weedle nodded back slowly, looking tired and almost unconscious. He ran forward as fast as he could in his damaged state and was able to ram into the Pidgey causing poison to go from the horn on Weedle's head into the Pidgey. The impact, plus Weedle's injuries, knocked Weedle out. After Akkie called Weedle back she looked towards the Pidgey who by now was moving much slower. Akkie placed Weedles pokeball on her belt then pulled back the empty pokeball she'd been holding and threw it at Pidgey. She watched the pokeball wiggle back and forth once.. then twice.. then the ball stopped wiggling and the button came into place.
"I caught my first pokemon..." Akkie blinked a few times but then a smile wiped her entire face. "I caught my first pokemon!"
As she placed Pidgey's pokeball on her belt she felt as if she was being watched, but when she turned around no one was in sight. She shrugged the odd feeling off and continued walking. She was walking for about a half hour when she saw the cave, then she began to run. It was about then when she heard the sound of running slightly behind her right behind the trees. *So someone or something IS following me.* As she reached the entrance she thought a plan to herself that would make it easy to find out who was following her. As she walked in there was an immediate turn right. As she rounded that corner she slid up right against the wall but continued walking in place so the baka would think she was still walking.
She waited probably for only half a minute, her footsteps getting smaller and softer than the ones when she first went in. That's when she heard some footsteps enter the cave slowly. It was obvious that whoever was behind her didn't want to be seen. She stopped walking in place and simply listened. She was probably blushing when she heard a male voice not too much older than her start to mutter curses to himself.
"Shit, this place is so enclosed there's no where to hide from that girl. Dammit!" (A/N: whoever reviews this please tell me if its dammit or damn it cause me and my friends are having trouble with that)
*His voice is so...It's not too deep that it sounds evil but its not girly...It's perfect and I bet he's cute.* For a moment she started daydreaming about what he might look like, but then she snapped into reality.
"Okay! Who are you and WHY IN THE HECK ARE YOU FOLLOWING ME!?" She jumped out in front of the young man yelling at him. He looked startled, he obviously wasn't a very bright person but, in turn, he was just as cute as Akkie anticipated. He had dirty blonde hair that was short, but messily spiked up. His dark blue eyes almost completely matched his dark blue shirt. His shorts were baggy and were a tan color while his shoes were black. He saw her and his face just went bright red. She stood there a minute blinking, then began laughing. He regained himself and cocked an eyebrow.
"What's so funny?"
"Nothing. It was just the look on your face. So why were you stalking me?"
"Stalking? You? Don't be silly, I'm just a pokemon trainer coming through here."
"Who do you think I am? Stupid? I heard you say 'There's no place to hide from the girl.'" He pressed his index fingers together.
"That's not exactly what I said..."
"Well that's besides the point. You're a pokemon trainer and you're following...You're one of those damn trainers that follow someone for a period of time then try to surprise them with a battle aren't you?"
"Not exactly..." He looked down in defeat. Akkie had him mentally cornered.
"So what's your name?" She crossed her arms and slightly smirked.
"Kamata Haruki, and you?" (A/N: just a lil note. in Japan they say their family names' first when using full names so that's how I have them introduce themselves. So Haruki is his personal name that everyone calls him.)
"Matsuoka Akiko. Call me Akkie though." His eyes widened to this information.
"Matsuoka... As in Matsuoka Hideyori-sama? You're related to him?"
"If you're talking about the famous professor who pays no attention what-so-ever to his family. That's my father." Akkie looked rather irritated and angry. Her eyes that were calm even when she was speaking angrily now looked fiery and hard.
"Don't act so pissed. Do you know how lucky you are to have such a famous dad?"
"Don't tell me how to act Haruki-kun." She turned back around and walked silently and quickly. She wasn't even jogging but for some reason it seemed like she was walking that fast. Haruki stood there blinking for a second then ran after her.
"Akiko-san! Wait!"
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I'm just gonna stop there. So, Haruki (obviously) has some trouble with cussing. So he's gonna be cussing a lot and for a certain reason he's join up with Akkie. Actually its already obvious I think but he likes her e.e;; So because of the cussing should I change it to PG-13 or keep it at PG? Cause he's gonna have some serious cussing fits. And should I change it from General part of the genre to Romance since, you know, Akkie and Haruki like each other and they WILL kiss. So... yeah.. Review! ^^;;
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CHAPTER 2
For a minute or two Akkie looked rather disappointed, which was how she felt. But she was able to force a smile over to the young boy who was dancing around with his tiny Marill. At that point he stopped and flashed a victory smile over to her.
"You're not that bad. Good fight."
She simply nodded and turned and walked back on her route towards the ice path. As she walked she glanced at the trees overhanging the route. She noticed a few Pidgey nestled together on a branch resting. She thought to herself *One of those would be a cinch to capture. They're practically asleep.* She grabbed Weedle's pokeball, enlarged it, then pressed the button letting him out. She knelt down next to him and whispered, "Now I know that you probably don't feel too well after that last battle, but I need you to just use just one little String Shot on any one of those Pidgey's over there. Don't wear yourself out I just think we'll be safer to have another pokemon with us in the ice path." Weedle nodded before inching over to the tree where the Pidgey were unaware of any danger. Akkie stood ready with one pokeball in both hands, one if Weedle needed out, one to throw at a Pidgey. Weedle arched up onto its highest point and shot out a web at the Pidgey.
"Pidgey!" One of the Pidgey's was awake enough to faintly see the Weedle attack. That Pidgey cried out a warning to the other two and flew out of harm's way. Another Pidgey was able to escape but the web barely hit the last on the wing, disabling her flight. She fell to the ground frantically flapping about on the ground.
"She's pretty strong but not all that great when it comes to speed, huh Weedle?" Weedle whimpered back a soft answer. Akkie clicked her tongue, "Sorry Weedle, but I think you're gonna have to give her a Poison Sting to keep her from getting away. Can you handle that?" Weedle nodded back slowly, looking tired and almost unconscious. He ran forward as fast as he could in his damaged state and was able to ram into the Pidgey causing poison to go from the horn on Weedle's head into the Pidgey. The impact, plus Weedle's injuries, knocked Weedle out. After Akkie called Weedle back she looked towards the Pidgey who by now was moving much slower. Akkie placed Weedles pokeball on her belt then pulled back the empty pokeball she'd been holding and threw it at Pidgey. She watched the pokeball wiggle back and forth once.. then twice.. then the ball stopped wiggling and the button came into place.
"I caught my first pokemon..." Akkie blinked a few times but then a smile wiped her entire face. "I caught my first pokemon!"
As she placed Pidgey's pokeball on her belt she felt as if she was being watched, but when she turned around no one was in sight. She shrugged the odd feeling off and continued walking. She was walking for about a half hour when she saw the cave, then she began to run. It was about then when she heard the sound of running slightly behind her right behind the trees. *So someone or something IS following me.* As she reached the entrance she thought a plan to herself that would make it easy to find out who was following her. As she walked in there was an immediate turn right. As she rounded that corner she slid up right against the wall but continued walking in place so the baka would think she was still walking.
She waited probably for only half a minute, her footsteps getting smaller and softer than the ones when she first went in. That's when she heard some footsteps enter the cave slowly. It was obvious that whoever was behind her didn't want to be seen. She stopped walking in place and simply listened. She was probably blushing when she heard a male voice not too much older than her start to mutter curses to himself.
"Shit, this place is so enclosed there's no where to hide from that girl. Dammit!" (A/N: whoever reviews this please tell me if its dammit or damn it cause me and my friends are having trouble with that)
*His voice is so...It's not too deep that it sounds evil but its not girly...It's perfect and I bet he's cute.* For a moment she started daydreaming about what he might look like, but then she snapped into reality.
"Okay! Who are you and WHY IN THE HECK ARE YOU FOLLOWING ME!?" She jumped out in front of the young man yelling at him. He looked startled, he obviously wasn't a very bright person but, in turn, he was just as cute as Akkie anticipated. He had dirty blonde hair that was short, but messily spiked up. His dark blue eyes almost completely matched his dark blue shirt. His shorts were baggy and were a tan color while his shoes were black. He saw her and his face just went bright red. She stood there a minute blinking, then began laughing. He regained himself and cocked an eyebrow.
"What's so funny?"
"Nothing. It was just the look on your face. So why were you stalking me?"
"Stalking? You? Don't be silly, I'm just a pokemon trainer coming through here."
"Who do you think I am? Stupid? I heard you say 'There's no place to hide from the girl.'" He pressed his index fingers together.
"That's not exactly what I said..."
"Well that's besides the point. You're a pokemon trainer and you're following...You're one of those damn trainers that follow someone for a period of time then try to surprise them with a battle aren't you?"
"Not exactly..." He looked down in defeat. Akkie had him mentally cornered.
"So what's your name?" She crossed her arms and slightly smirked.
"Kamata Haruki, and you?" (A/N: just a lil note. in Japan they say their family names' first when using full names so that's how I have them introduce themselves. So Haruki is his personal name that everyone calls him.)
"Matsuoka Akiko. Call me Akkie though." His eyes widened to this information.
"Matsuoka... As in Matsuoka Hideyori-sama? You're related to him?"
"If you're talking about the famous professor who pays no attention what-so-ever to his family. That's my father." Akkie looked rather irritated and angry. Her eyes that were calm even when she was speaking angrily now looked fiery and hard.
"Don't act so pissed. Do you know how lucky you are to have such a famous dad?"
"Don't tell me how to act Haruki-kun." She turned back around and walked silently and quickly. She wasn't even jogging but for some reason it seemed like she was walking that fast. Haruki stood there blinking for a second then ran after her.
"Akiko-san! Wait!"
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I'm just gonna stop there. So, Haruki (obviously) has some trouble with cussing. So he's gonna be cussing a lot and for a certain reason he's join up with Akkie. Actually its already obvious I think but he likes her e.e;; So because of the cussing should I change it to PG-13 or keep it at PG? Cause he's gonna have some serious cussing fits. And should I change it from General part of the genre to Romance since, you know, Akkie and Haruki like each other and they WILL kiss. So... yeah.. Review! ^^;;