Sorry, my first chapter wasn't exactly all that great. It's not entirely the way I meant for it to be. I have a tendency to get carried away with thoughts and details when I write. I was also trying for a different writing style than most of the fics I have read before. I was trying to be original and realistic. I don't know if it comes off as that or not though. This is my first attempt, however, at a fanfic. I would appreciate any and all advice, criticism, and such that you may have for my story. Well, here's chapter 2.
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The wind blew fast and furiously around Pan as she made her way back to her house near the mountains. If anyone could see her at the moment, they would definitely notice that she had a feeling of nervousness around her and lost in thought. So lost in thought, in fact, that she almost flew past her house.
She landed a few feet from her front door and approached apprehensively in fear that her mother had not yet rid herself of her 'guest'. However, those fears were laid to rest when Videl came running out the front door crying.
"Panny, listen, you have got to understand that what you saw wasn't what it looked like. Well, I mean it was, but I never meant for anything like that to happen," exclaimed a tearful Videl.
"Are you going to tell Dad?" Pan asked coldly.
"Well, of course I am. I would be a fool not to. I know you would if I didn't, but since it is my mistake I would like to tell him myself, young lady."
"Fine mom, I'm glad you realize it's your mistake. But just answer me this, why?"
"Honestly, I don't know why. I love you and your father very much. I could never imagine cheating on your father. I guess that's the reason I didn't go to a hotel or something. It would have just felt dirty that way. I guess I just got caught up in his compliments and the attention he gave me. But that was still no excuse. I will except whatever decision your father makes regarding me," she choked out. She began to sob uncontrollably. Pan started to feel sorry for her.
"Don't worry, I thought you and dad had a bond or something. I'm sure he'll forgive you."
With that, they both went inside and awaited Gohan, father, husband, and decider of the future of the Son family.
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Sorry, it's not all that long. I'll write more later. It's 3:59 a.m. right now, and I'm getting slightly sleepy. If you read this, review and tell me what you think. Thanks.
*astropanny*