So here's another chapter. That's three in four days! Wow! Enough with my
pointless babble on with the story!
As always I do not own dbz or the characters but come to think of of I do own Naraka!
Crying in the Rain Chapter 4 Naraka's Past.
After coming out of Goten's mind, Naraka wasn't even in the slightest bit tired. She had done this too many times to be tired.
"Princess Naraka are you close to getting him?" asked Iris
"Yes we are very close I have his attention now."
"And the pendant?"
"Yes he has it. All is going according to plan. Iris please leave me I am going to visit my past."
"Very well my princess."
Iris knew very well what Naraka's past was. She was there.
* Its doing her no good going back as often as this. You shouldn't dwell on the past. *
Naraka sat on the wooden floor. Her legs crossed. As she went into her trance her eyes rolled back. Her vision blurred and slowly the corridors of her mind came into view. The walls were made of crystal and the doors were glass this was the way she liked it like the ice cavern she had lived in for so many years.
She walked slowly down the icy tunnels; her heals clicking on the floor. Naraka had been in her own mind many times now and as a result knew the doors and corridors by heart. She ran her hands along the walls as she walked and then she started skipping as only a child would. She went through corridor after corridor until she came to the one marked "Past." Slowly she pushed it open it leads into a beautiful throne room. At the top of the room sits three thrones. The King of Planet Vegeta sits upon the largest of the gold thrones to his left sits a small boy and to his right the chair is empty.
* That place will soon be mine * thought Naraka
"BRING IN THE SORCERESS!" bellowed the King
"You called my king?" asked a younger version or Naraka as she bowed.
"Tell me sorceress what is in store for this planet and the Saiyan race?"
"Your majesty you know I can see the future but you also know I shall never reveal it as the future changes along with the people but I will bend the rules slightly just this once. Be wary of the one named Freiza he is not to be trusted."
"Thank you Sorceress. That will be all."
Naraka bowed and turned to leave but as she did so she saw that the third class warrior Bardock was also in the room. Naraka knew he was here to discuss the fate of his son Kacurott.
"Bardock let your son go to this planet Earth. If he stays here he shall be killed but if he goes… lets just say he is made of the stuff legends are made of."
"Thank you Naraka." Replied Bardock
Naraka gasped no one ever called her anything but sorceress. She quickly bowed before leaving. Her skirts swished as she walked.
As the years passed Naraka discovered Frieza's plan to destroy her planet and felt it her duty to tell the king. To think the almighty king had pleaded with her to stop him. She had a condition.
"I want to rule the planet. I don't expect you to hand over the crown but marry me with Vegeta and I shall become Queen."
"Anything just try and stop him!"
She did try not for her King or he race but because she could be Queen. She tried everything from the same trick she had used on Goten to trying to make Freiza insane but the truth be told he was too strong and so Naraka took the cowards way out she convinced Freiza to take Vegeta and she fled from the planet and took her loyal apprentice Iris with her.
Naraka came out of her trance her past was painful and there was little more to it. Naraka laughed and laughed. She laughed at the fact she had one of the few legendary Super Saiyans in her power.
"A Super Saiyan helpless at the vision of a sorceress!"
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This chapter wasn't as good I'm sorry I just thought I'd have her past in. please review anyway!
Now thank you to everyone who reviewed this fic will get back to a reasonable standard soon. I forgot to thank Saiyan Serpent in my second chapter for my first ever review! (My excuse was I was upset at being called a 12-year-old IM NOT REALLY!) Do I write like a 12 year old? Thank you for you is other fantastic reviews! Z as always I love getting your reviews and thank you for them now you have to get your chapter up! Thank you Gotenks- princess I will continue my fic whenever Z gets her chapter up and this one will be good! Ooooohhhhh I'm going to have the next chap about Bra and Goten! And maybe Trunks and Pan! Well I'm going to get started on it now! Chiao babes! Love Magma-Chanxxxxxxxx
As always I do not own dbz or the characters but come to think of of I do own Naraka!
Crying in the Rain Chapter 4 Naraka's Past.
After coming out of Goten's mind, Naraka wasn't even in the slightest bit tired. She had done this too many times to be tired.
"Princess Naraka are you close to getting him?" asked Iris
"Yes we are very close I have his attention now."
"And the pendant?"
"Yes he has it. All is going according to plan. Iris please leave me I am going to visit my past."
"Very well my princess."
Iris knew very well what Naraka's past was. She was there.
* Its doing her no good going back as often as this. You shouldn't dwell on the past. *
Naraka sat on the wooden floor. Her legs crossed. As she went into her trance her eyes rolled back. Her vision blurred and slowly the corridors of her mind came into view. The walls were made of crystal and the doors were glass this was the way she liked it like the ice cavern she had lived in for so many years.
She walked slowly down the icy tunnels; her heals clicking on the floor. Naraka had been in her own mind many times now and as a result knew the doors and corridors by heart. She ran her hands along the walls as she walked and then she started skipping as only a child would. She went through corridor after corridor until she came to the one marked "Past." Slowly she pushed it open it leads into a beautiful throne room. At the top of the room sits three thrones. The King of Planet Vegeta sits upon the largest of the gold thrones to his left sits a small boy and to his right the chair is empty.
* That place will soon be mine * thought Naraka
"BRING IN THE SORCERESS!" bellowed the King
"You called my king?" asked a younger version or Naraka as she bowed.
"Tell me sorceress what is in store for this planet and the Saiyan race?"
"Your majesty you know I can see the future but you also know I shall never reveal it as the future changes along with the people but I will bend the rules slightly just this once. Be wary of the one named Freiza he is not to be trusted."
"Thank you Sorceress. That will be all."
Naraka bowed and turned to leave but as she did so she saw that the third class warrior Bardock was also in the room. Naraka knew he was here to discuss the fate of his son Kacurott.
"Bardock let your son go to this planet Earth. If he stays here he shall be killed but if he goes… lets just say he is made of the stuff legends are made of."
"Thank you Naraka." Replied Bardock
Naraka gasped no one ever called her anything but sorceress. She quickly bowed before leaving. Her skirts swished as she walked.
As the years passed Naraka discovered Frieza's plan to destroy her planet and felt it her duty to tell the king. To think the almighty king had pleaded with her to stop him. She had a condition.
"I want to rule the planet. I don't expect you to hand over the crown but marry me with Vegeta and I shall become Queen."
"Anything just try and stop him!"
She did try not for her King or he race but because she could be Queen. She tried everything from the same trick she had used on Goten to trying to make Freiza insane but the truth be told he was too strong and so Naraka took the cowards way out she convinced Freiza to take Vegeta and she fled from the planet and took her loyal apprentice Iris with her.
Naraka came out of her trance her past was painful and there was little more to it. Naraka laughed and laughed. She laughed at the fact she had one of the few legendary Super Saiyans in her power.
"A Super Saiyan helpless at the vision of a sorceress!"
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This chapter wasn't as good I'm sorry I just thought I'd have her past in. please review anyway!
Now thank you to everyone who reviewed this fic will get back to a reasonable standard soon. I forgot to thank Saiyan Serpent in my second chapter for my first ever review! (My excuse was I was upset at being called a 12-year-old IM NOT REALLY!) Do I write like a 12 year old? Thank you for you is other fantastic reviews! Z as always I love getting your reviews and thank you for them now you have to get your chapter up! Thank you Gotenks- princess I will continue my fic whenever Z gets her chapter up and this one will be good! Ooooohhhhh I'm going to have the next chap about Bra and Goten! And maybe Trunks and Pan! Well I'm going to get started on it now! Chiao babes! Love Magma-Chanxxxxxxxx