Hello and welcome to the next chapter of Crying in the Rain I thought I
couldn't deprive you any longer and maybe Z will find some inspiration in
this chapter!
(I don't own dbz)
Chapter 3-Goten Wakes Up
Trunks watched his sister she hadn't moved from that spot since Goten had that headache. She sat by him. He hadn't opened his eyes in three days. Neither himself nor Bra had stopped worrying. Bra was the most scared at least Trunks tore himself away to eat. Bulma was considering putting a bed in there for her but what was the point in that? She wasn't sleeping either.
Pan came up the stairs. Bulma and Chi-Chi had thought it best to keep him in Capsule Corp. When Pan looked at him through the door she broke down. She couldn't keep the tears back any longer. Trunks saw this and put his arm around her supportively. Pan sobbed into his chest. When was he going to wake up? Was he going to wake up?
"Of course he is this is just probably a lie-in for Goten"
Pan looked at Trunks bewildered * How did he know what she was thinking? * At second thought she had probably said it out loud without thinking. She smiled at his reply.
"That's better tears won't help him he's got to do this on his own"
Pan came away from Trunks's chest and looked at Bra sitting by Goten.
"She looks rough has she been away at all?"
"Nope hasn't moved."
"Poor Bra." Pan noticed Trunks hadn't taken his arm off her shoulder.
Goten opened his eyes slowly the light was blinding. Finally things came into focus. He saw Bra her face stained with tears he lifted his hand and tenderly wiped him away. Then a thought came to him.
"What has that low-life done to you this time? I'll kill him!" Goten sprung up "But first food!"
Goten ran down the stairs past A very surprised Pan and Trunks. He sprinted to the kitchen and an even more surprised Bulma gave him breakfast.
Bra, Pan and Trunks were too shocked to move.
"Tell me that was Goten and not a dream?"
"It was Goten either that or Granddad is playing a joke."
The trio of Saiyan offspring wandered down to the kitchen with shocked expressions on their faces.
"What are you guy's staring at?"
Bra couldn't contain herself any longer; she ran over to Goten, threw herself at him and wouldn't let go of his neck.
"Uh Guys?"
"Uncle Goten you have been in a coma like state for three days. I'm still trying to believe how you went that long without food."
"What three days without food?"
"Yeah Dad says someone was in your mind."
"You know I don't remember a thing."
"That strange" Said Bulma "You look fine now but Bra hasn't ate or slept in three days."
"Really well I'll tell you what lets go out to a club tomorrow, after you get some rest and food."
Bra could only shake her head then she fell asleep still holding on to Goten's neck.
"Hey I thought me and Bra were going out tomorrow?"
"That's ok come over here and we'll get a pizza and rent some videos?" offered Trunks
"I suppose"
The very next night Goten turned up on the Capsule Corp. door accompanied by Pan. Goten was dressed in that same oh so tight cream top and very tight jeans. Pan well Pan was in her usual cream trousers that had an embroidered dragon on the back of her right leg and a tight black top. Pan had customised this top with the poem Goku used to tell her
"I wish I was a Glow worm
A Glow worm's never glum
'Cos how could you be grumpy
When the sun shines out your bum!"
Trunks opened the door in a faded pair of jeans and a white t-shirt.
"Hey Pan! Goten Bra will be two seconds"
At that moment Bra came down the stairs wearing a very short, very tight pink dress.
"Bra your escort awaits."
Bra smiled and Goten took her arm and led her to the club. Goten went in and held the door open for Bra.
"Why thank you kind sir."
As Goten looked inside his eyes darted to the Dance floor.
"Sakatu!" He growled.
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What do you think? It's a lot better than that last chapter. What will happen to Sakatu? What will happen between Bra and Goten? And we can't forget Pan and Trunks and I fell a lemon coming on! Who I wonder? Thank you z for your review (the only one sniff) get your next chapter up! I've got to go see you later peeps!
(I don't own dbz)
Chapter 3-Goten Wakes Up
Trunks watched his sister she hadn't moved from that spot since Goten had that headache. She sat by him. He hadn't opened his eyes in three days. Neither himself nor Bra had stopped worrying. Bra was the most scared at least Trunks tore himself away to eat. Bulma was considering putting a bed in there for her but what was the point in that? She wasn't sleeping either.
Pan came up the stairs. Bulma and Chi-Chi had thought it best to keep him in Capsule Corp. When Pan looked at him through the door she broke down. She couldn't keep the tears back any longer. Trunks saw this and put his arm around her supportively. Pan sobbed into his chest. When was he going to wake up? Was he going to wake up?
"Of course he is this is just probably a lie-in for Goten"
Pan looked at Trunks bewildered * How did he know what she was thinking? * At second thought she had probably said it out loud without thinking. She smiled at his reply.
"That's better tears won't help him he's got to do this on his own"
Pan came away from Trunks's chest and looked at Bra sitting by Goten.
"She looks rough has she been away at all?"
"Nope hasn't moved."
"Poor Bra." Pan noticed Trunks hadn't taken his arm off her shoulder.
Goten opened his eyes slowly the light was blinding. Finally things came into focus. He saw Bra her face stained with tears he lifted his hand and tenderly wiped him away. Then a thought came to him.
"What has that low-life done to you this time? I'll kill him!" Goten sprung up "But first food!"
Goten ran down the stairs past A very surprised Pan and Trunks. He sprinted to the kitchen and an even more surprised Bulma gave him breakfast.
Bra, Pan and Trunks were too shocked to move.
"Tell me that was Goten and not a dream?"
"It was Goten either that or Granddad is playing a joke."
The trio of Saiyan offspring wandered down to the kitchen with shocked expressions on their faces.
"What are you guy's staring at?"
Bra couldn't contain herself any longer; she ran over to Goten, threw herself at him and wouldn't let go of his neck.
"Uh Guys?"
"Uncle Goten you have been in a coma like state for three days. I'm still trying to believe how you went that long without food."
"What three days without food?"
"Yeah Dad says someone was in your mind."
"You know I don't remember a thing."
"That strange" Said Bulma "You look fine now but Bra hasn't ate or slept in three days."
"Really well I'll tell you what lets go out to a club tomorrow, after you get some rest and food."
Bra could only shake her head then she fell asleep still holding on to Goten's neck.
"Hey I thought me and Bra were going out tomorrow?"
"That's ok come over here and we'll get a pizza and rent some videos?" offered Trunks
"I suppose"
The very next night Goten turned up on the Capsule Corp. door accompanied by Pan. Goten was dressed in that same oh so tight cream top and very tight jeans. Pan well Pan was in her usual cream trousers that had an embroidered dragon on the back of her right leg and a tight black top. Pan had customised this top with the poem Goku used to tell her
"I wish I was a Glow worm
A Glow worm's never glum
'Cos how could you be grumpy
When the sun shines out your bum!"
Trunks opened the door in a faded pair of jeans and a white t-shirt.
"Hey Pan! Goten Bra will be two seconds"
At that moment Bra came down the stairs wearing a very short, very tight pink dress.
"Bra your escort awaits."
Bra smiled and Goten took her arm and led her to the club. Goten went in and held the door open for Bra.
"Why thank you kind sir."
As Goten looked inside his eyes darted to the Dance floor.
"Sakatu!" He growled.
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What do you think? It's a lot better than that last chapter. What will happen to Sakatu? What will happen between Bra and Goten? And we can't forget Pan and Trunks and I fell a lemon coming on! Who I wonder? Thank you z for your review (the only one sniff) get your next chapter up! I've got to go see you later peeps!