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1 Chapter 8 Naraka's competition
When Goten and Bra got back Goku was there, to collect Pan. Who was protesting she wanted to stay.
"Pan your father will be worried."
"Please Grandpa Goku." Pan flashed that grin that had her grandfather could never resist.
"Oh alright then." Goku replied smiling.
"Kacurott can you feel it?" Vegeta came running in.
Before Goku could reply he had ran out the door into the sudden downpour. Lightning streaked the now misty sky. A huge fork of lightning hit the ground and when the smoke cleared the fighters saw a figure. It was the slender figure of a woman. Her waist-length ruby red hair was blowing in the gales. It framed her perfect face. Her blemish free pale complexion was the perfect setting for her beautiful blue eyes. Eyes that you could dive into, they reminded you of the ocean.
"So we meet again Prince Vegeta." Her sweet voice was surprisingly dominant over the storm that had encased the Saiyan warriors.
"Naraka!"
Vegeta lunged forward, fist ready to plant in her stomach. Naraka had been looking at Goku her head snapped round and she held her hand up. Vegeta froze mid air.
"Let me go you witch! Fight like the Saiyan you were born as!"
"Be kind I saved your life, although not for long."
Naraka put him down and her head snapped back to Goku.
"So you are the warrior they call Kacurott?"
"Yes I am. Who are you and what do you want?"
"I am Naraka. I am the most powerful sorceress ever to have graced the Saiyan race. What do I want? Well that is easy I want the title of queen from Vegeta and from you I want your son."
"What? Goten why?"
"Ask Vegeta and Pan."
"I will not give up my son!"
"Dad you won't need to give me up I wont go and leave those that I love behind."
The storm raged round them the leaves blowing off trees and the ink black sky illuminated by white streaks.
"WHAT! Well if you won't come peacefully. I challenge you."
"What to fight?"
"Yes but a different sort of fight, a mind match. Its and old Saiyan battle which takes place in the competitors mind. Do you accept?"
"Yes." Replied Goten he was ready to fight now.
"Return to this place in one years time. If I win you will rule with me. If you win, which is unlikely I will go into hiding and never bother you again."
Goten nodded in agreement.
"Wait how do you know Daddy will give up the crown so easily?" Bra shouted
Naraka didn't reply. She licked her lips and stared at Bra. Naraka's tail flicked back and forwards. All of a sudden Naraka let out a wailing noise and pounced at Bra pinning her to the ground. Naraka held her lips to Bra's ear and said "Daddy wouldn't want me to hurt you."
Ropes of ki appeared round Bra and tied round her waist, knees, ankles and wrists. Bra was now crying.
"Bra NO! Bra I'll get you back I wont let her hurt you… I love you Bra always have always will.
"Goten I love you to."
Then Bra disappeared. Naraka laughed evilly now just to make sure I win this. She snapped her fingers and the ropes tied themselves around Goku.
Naraka turned to Pan "Say goodbye to Grandpa!" She spat
"And now I shall take my leave." Naraka turned to Vegeta and bowed low "King Vegeta, Queen Bulma, Prince Trunks."
She turned to the remaining Sons "Son Gohan, Son Goten my love, and of course Princess Pan."
Naraka disappeared along with the storm.
"Grandpa!" Cried Pan
"Excuse me but just why did she call you Princess Pan?" Asked and enraged Gohan (Gohan has a suspicion about Pan and Trunks)
"Well…" Pan looked at Trunks for support.
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He he I'm evil! Well what did you think? Did you like? Ooohhhh Goten and Bra! And Pan and Trunks have to fess up! What will happen to Bra and Goku? THANK YOU Z! AND BRA CHAN AND RICEE! Z I'm going to have to ask your opinion on something I'm thinking of putting in the next chapter. I think I'm only going to have one more chap up before my hols but I might post the odd chapter before I come back anyone wanting mailed when I update just push that little purple box down there on the left come on you know you want to! Please?
1 Chapter 8 Naraka's competition
When Goten and Bra got back Goku was there, to collect Pan. Who was protesting she wanted to stay.
"Pan your father will be worried."
"Please Grandpa Goku." Pan flashed that grin that had her grandfather could never resist.
"Oh alright then." Goku replied smiling.
"Kacurott can you feel it?" Vegeta came running in.
Before Goku could reply he had ran out the door into the sudden downpour. Lightning streaked the now misty sky. A huge fork of lightning hit the ground and when the smoke cleared the fighters saw a figure. It was the slender figure of a woman. Her waist-length ruby red hair was blowing in the gales. It framed her perfect face. Her blemish free pale complexion was the perfect setting for her beautiful blue eyes. Eyes that you could dive into, they reminded you of the ocean.
"So we meet again Prince Vegeta." Her sweet voice was surprisingly dominant over the storm that had encased the Saiyan warriors.
"Naraka!"
Vegeta lunged forward, fist ready to plant in her stomach. Naraka had been looking at Goku her head snapped round and she held her hand up. Vegeta froze mid air.
"Let me go you witch! Fight like the Saiyan you were born as!"
"Be kind I saved your life, although not for long."
Naraka put him down and her head snapped back to Goku.
"So you are the warrior they call Kacurott?"
"Yes I am. Who are you and what do you want?"
"I am Naraka. I am the most powerful sorceress ever to have graced the Saiyan race. What do I want? Well that is easy I want the title of queen from Vegeta and from you I want your son."
"What? Goten why?"
"Ask Vegeta and Pan."
"I will not give up my son!"
"Dad you won't need to give me up I wont go and leave those that I love behind."
The storm raged round them the leaves blowing off trees and the ink black sky illuminated by white streaks.
"WHAT! Well if you won't come peacefully. I challenge you."
"What to fight?"
"Yes but a different sort of fight, a mind match. Its and old Saiyan battle which takes place in the competitors mind. Do you accept?"
"Yes." Replied Goten he was ready to fight now.
"Return to this place in one years time. If I win you will rule with me. If you win, which is unlikely I will go into hiding and never bother you again."
Goten nodded in agreement.
"Wait how do you know Daddy will give up the crown so easily?" Bra shouted
Naraka didn't reply. She licked her lips and stared at Bra. Naraka's tail flicked back and forwards. All of a sudden Naraka let out a wailing noise and pounced at Bra pinning her to the ground. Naraka held her lips to Bra's ear and said "Daddy wouldn't want me to hurt you."
Ropes of ki appeared round Bra and tied round her waist, knees, ankles and wrists. Bra was now crying.
"Bra NO! Bra I'll get you back I wont let her hurt you… I love you Bra always have always will.
"Goten I love you to."
Then Bra disappeared. Naraka laughed evilly now just to make sure I win this. She snapped her fingers and the ropes tied themselves around Goku.
Naraka turned to Pan "Say goodbye to Grandpa!" She spat
"And now I shall take my leave." Naraka turned to Vegeta and bowed low "King Vegeta, Queen Bulma, Prince Trunks."
She turned to the remaining Sons "Son Gohan, Son Goten my love, and of course Princess Pan."
Naraka disappeared along with the storm.
"Grandpa!" Cried Pan
"Excuse me but just why did she call you Princess Pan?" Asked and enraged Gohan (Gohan has a suspicion about Pan and Trunks)
"Well…" Pan looked at Trunks for support.
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He he I'm evil! Well what did you think? Did you like? Ooohhhh Goten and Bra! And Pan and Trunks have to fess up! What will happen to Bra and Goku? THANK YOU Z! AND BRA CHAN AND RICEE! Z I'm going to have to ask your opinion on something I'm thinking of putting in the next chapter. I think I'm only going to have one more chap up before my hols but I might post the odd chapter before I come back anyone wanting mailed when I update just push that little purple box down there on the left come on you know you want to! Please?