It's All On You
Hey guys! Yep, the second chapter's up.I'm having fun with this story. Sorry for the short one last time, I think this one might be pretty short too.
If anyone has any suggestions PLEASE tell me.or email me at dancing_darlin@hotmail.com. Thx!
Chapter 2
July 10 1998
Letty and Mia were dancing around the house, both ecstatically happy. Dom was coming home! Mia would have her big brother back; her last blood relative.and Letty would have her husband. She couldn't wait to see him.
Mia had since turned into a pretty little thing, the total opposite from the ackward little race princess she had been. She wore her favorite tight jeans and a little tank top.she knew her brother would freak, but that was the point. She wanted her over-protective big brother back, and a little shirt that showed off her stomach and had guys gawking was the perfect way to do it. He'd go back to being too defensive of her.
Letty hadn't changed the same way, but she was definitely different. She grew out her short hair, to be long and naturally wavy like it had been when they were kids. And she stopped dressing like a crazy little punk kid, she'd become older, more sophisticated.she figured parent/teacher interviews too often did that to you. She tried on a bunch of outfits before she finally settled on a tight little denim dress, with white denim pockets on the back, and a white denim purse. She knew she looked put together.she wondered if Dom would like it.
Vince had come to pick them up, to take them to pick up Dom. The three of them were gonna go together, so Dom would have his three favorite people all there for him. Vince had been taking care of the girls, getting groceries for them, loaning them money, and helping at the garage and restaurant.
When Mia came down the stairs Vince looked like he was gonna pass out, he'd been watching her grow up, and playing big brother for two years, and had never really looked at her, he hadn't noticed how grown up she was. She was definitely his type.which made him very nervous. But he just shrugged and yelled at Letty to hurry up.
It was another twenty minutes before they were all ready and in the car, driving down the highway. The entire ride they were all jumpy and apprehensive worried about what would happen. Mia wondered if Dom would be violent.he had, after all almost killed a man. Vince wondered if he would act the same, could he possibly be the same goof, always joking around that he had been. But Letty was the most worried. What were the chances that the man she was going to get that day was the same man she'd married while she was still in grade 12? Probably slim to none, she decided.
They all looked at each other nervously when they pulled up to the prison. They weren't just there for a visit this time. He was coming home.he was theirs again.
They got out of the car and walked into the big building, stopping to go through security.
They had to wait for a little while, but soon enough Dom walked out. He looked ragged, and thin. He was still built the same as when he had gone in.huge, covered in muscles. But there was still a raggedness about him. A weariness, which made him look like an old man.
But his face quickly lit up when he saw them. First he picked up Letty, laughing and swung her around. They kissed while Mia and Vince stood looking at them, waiting for their turns. Dom and Letty figured it out after a minute, and pulled apart, still watching each other.
Dom broke his gaze away, and turned to his best friend, and his baby sister. He hugged them both and then told Mia to "put some damn clothes on." She just laughed and hugged him again. They all talked hurriedly, and went up to check him out. He got forms telling him when to go and see his probation officer, but otherwise he was free. Free to live his life again.
During the car ride home Mia and Vince sat up front talking quietly, while Letty and Dom made out in the back seat. They both rolled their eyes when Dom finally pulled his head up and said to Vince, "For god's sake, man, can't you drive any faster?"
Sorry guys, I know, another short one. But it's kinda cute, don't you think?
Reviews, please :D
Hey guys! Yep, the second chapter's up.I'm having fun with this story. Sorry for the short one last time, I think this one might be pretty short too.
If anyone has any suggestions PLEASE tell me.or email me at dancing_darlin@hotmail.com. Thx!
Chapter 2
July 10 1998
Letty and Mia were dancing around the house, both ecstatically happy. Dom was coming home! Mia would have her big brother back; her last blood relative.and Letty would have her husband. She couldn't wait to see him.
Mia had since turned into a pretty little thing, the total opposite from the ackward little race princess she had been. She wore her favorite tight jeans and a little tank top.she knew her brother would freak, but that was the point. She wanted her over-protective big brother back, and a little shirt that showed off her stomach and had guys gawking was the perfect way to do it. He'd go back to being too defensive of her.
Letty hadn't changed the same way, but she was definitely different. She grew out her short hair, to be long and naturally wavy like it had been when they were kids. And she stopped dressing like a crazy little punk kid, she'd become older, more sophisticated.she figured parent/teacher interviews too often did that to you. She tried on a bunch of outfits before she finally settled on a tight little denim dress, with white denim pockets on the back, and a white denim purse. She knew she looked put together.she wondered if Dom would like it.
Vince had come to pick them up, to take them to pick up Dom. The three of them were gonna go together, so Dom would have his three favorite people all there for him. Vince had been taking care of the girls, getting groceries for them, loaning them money, and helping at the garage and restaurant.
When Mia came down the stairs Vince looked like he was gonna pass out, he'd been watching her grow up, and playing big brother for two years, and had never really looked at her, he hadn't noticed how grown up she was. She was definitely his type.which made him very nervous. But he just shrugged and yelled at Letty to hurry up.
It was another twenty minutes before they were all ready and in the car, driving down the highway. The entire ride they were all jumpy and apprehensive worried about what would happen. Mia wondered if Dom would be violent.he had, after all almost killed a man. Vince wondered if he would act the same, could he possibly be the same goof, always joking around that he had been. But Letty was the most worried. What were the chances that the man she was going to get that day was the same man she'd married while she was still in grade 12? Probably slim to none, she decided.
They all looked at each other nervously when they pulled up to the prison. They weren't just there for a visit this time. He was coming home.he was theirs again.
They got out of the car and walked into the big building, stopping to go through security.
They had to wait for a little while, but soon enough Dom walked out. He looked ragged, and thin. He was still built the same as when he had gone in.huge, covered in muscles. But there was still a raggedness about him. A weariness, which made him look like an old man.
But his face quickly lit up when he saw them. First he picked up Letty, laughing and swung her around. They kissed while Mia and Vince stood looking at them, waiting for their turns. Dom and Letty figured it out after a minute, and pulled apart, still watching each other.
Dom broke his gaze away, and turned to his best friend, and his baby sister. He hugged them both and then told Mia to "put some damn clothes on." She just laughed and hugged him again. They all talked hurriedly, and went up to check him out. He got forms telling him when to go and see his probation officer, but otherwise he was free. Free to live his life again.
During the car ride home Mia and Vince sat up front talking quietly, while Letty and Dom made out in the back seat. They both rolled their eyes when Dom finally pulled his head up and said to Vince, "For god's sake, man, can't you drive any faster?"
Sorry guys, I know, another short one. But it's kinda cute, don't you think?
Reviews, please :D