It's All On You
Hey guys - another update, I'm so good to you, lol. I need some ideas for where to take the story, leave helpful reviews, please (
Chapter 3
The next morning Letty and Dom came downstairs to see Mia cooking breakfast, and Vince was sitting, talking to her. They both noticed that Vince seemed more appreciative of Mia than usual, not like an overprotective older brother, like he usually was. Dom silently fumed, but Letty kicked the back of his shin before Mia or Vince looked up, to keep him from talking.
Dom just sighed and sat down, silently willing Vince to save himself and stop acting like this. But Mia seemed like she didn't notice, and just filled everyone's plates. Dom was so happy to be home, back where he belonged.
- Dom's POV -
It's so great to be home, to be with the people that I love. I went two years without seeing my wife, except for through glass, with people listening to our conversation. Her and Mia were the only ones allowed to visit.Vince never even got to come.
I felt so guilty having them visit. Mia was always scared, and after the first time rarely came, and when she did it was obvious Letty had made her. But Letty came every single time she was allowed. I hated having her come, because she always cried. I haven't seen her cry since we were 7, but when I was in prison.she cried. She cried when she saw me, when I told her I loved her, and when the guard pulled her away from the glass.
- Letty's POV -
God I missed him.I missed him so much. Having him back home is.crazy. I'm not used to having someone else. It's been me and Mia and Vince for two years, we're used to each other. But I'd rather have him here than back in jail. I hated not being with him, not having him near me.
I'm just scared about what will happen with him being back home, though. He's always had girls all over him, and I know he can't wait to race again. He used to drag back in high school, and near the end started street racing pretty seriously. I wonder if anyone will even remember him.of course they will. He's the legend, no matter what.
- Mia's POV -
My big brother's home.it's great. I love having him back. And Letty's automatically different. She's smiling and sitting on his lap laughing. She's so happy, I haven't seen her happy in a long time. The whole time he was gone she was always stressed, running Toretto's and DT's. It was too much for her, but she was determined, and she made it. She did it.
The other difference is Vince, what's with him? It's pretty obvious he's into me and all, but seriously. The way Dom looked at him when he was sitting there talking to me was hilarious. And it was obvious that Letty did something to keep Dom from saying anything, judging by the way he winced and then kept his mouth shut.
- Vince's POV -
Dom's back! My best friend since I was a little kid, since third grade. He's back again, he's home. I love the guy, he's always been there for me. I just wish I could've been there for him when he had to go to prison. But we're alright now, the heart of the family's back.
Mia.oh man. I know he's probably figured something out, noticed how much I like her. I know it's totally crazy to even THINK about my best friend's baby sister, especially since she's sixteen and I'm twenty. But I can't help it. The girl is amazing. I wonder what Dom would say if I asked her out.I'd ask him first, though.
- Letty's POV -
This house is crazy. Mia's cleaning up breakfast, dancing around the singing like an idiot while she does it. I could smack the girl.especially since she's playing the frigin' Backstreet Boys! I'm gonna shoot somebody if she doesn't turn it off soon.
Vince is having this stupid little inner battle. It's so obvious. He wants to make fun of Mia's music so badly, but he wants her to like him. You can practically hear the voices in his head arguing. So pathetic it's cute.
And then there's Dom. He's already gone to DT's, I said I'd get a ride with Vince. He can't wait to drive again, to go racing. I guess that's what we're doing tonight. Go and see how Edwin and Hector are, I haven't talked to them in ages. It'll be good to see everyone.except maybe the race skanks.
***Hey guys! How'd you like chapter three? Please review.I might need some help with the race chapter, so give me advice, please. Stuff you'd like to see, etc.
Hey guys - another update, I'm so good to you, lol. I need some ideas for where to take the story, leave helpful reviews, please (
Chapter 3
The next morning Letty and Dom came downstairs to see Mia cooking breakfast, and Vince was sitting, talking to her. They both noticed that Vince seemed more appreciative of Mia than usual, not like an overprotective older brother, like he usually was. Dom silently fumed, but Letty kicked the back of his shin before Mia or Vince looked up, to keep him from talking.
Dom just sighed and sat down, silently willing Vince to save himself and stop acting like this. But Mia seemed like she didn't notice, and just filled everyone's plates. Dom was so happy to be home, back where he belonged.
- Dom's POV -
It's so great to be home, to be with the people that I love. I went two years without seeing my wife, except for through glass, with people listening to our conversation. Her and Mia were the only ones allowed to visit.Vince never even got to come.
I felt so guilty having them visit. Mia was always scared, and after the first time rarely came, and when she did it was obvious Letty had made her. But Letty came every single time she was allowed. I hated having her come, because she always cried. I haven't seen her cry since we were 7, but when I was in prison.she cried. She cried when she saw me, when I told her I loved her, and when the guard pulled her away from the glass.
- Letty's POV -
God I missed him.I missed him so much. Having him back home is.crazy. I'm not used to having someone else. It's been me and Mia and Vince for two years, we're used to each other. But I'd rather have him here than back in jail. I hated not being with him, not having him near me.
I'm just scared about what will happen with him being back home, though. He's always had girls all over him, and I know he can't wait to race again. He used to drag back in high school, and near the end started street racing pretty seriously. I wonder if anyone will even remember him.of course they will. He's the legend, no matter what.
- Mia's POV -
My big brother's home.it's great. I love having him back. And Letty's automatically different. She's smiling and sitting on his lap laughing. She's so happy, I haven't seen her happy in a long time. The whole time he was gone she was always stressed, running Toretto's and DT's. It was too much for her, but she was determined, and she made it. She did it.
The other difference is Vince, what's with him? It's pretty obvious he's into me and all, but seriously. The way Dom looked at him when he was sitting there talking to me was hilarious. And it was obvious that Letty did something to keep Dom from saying anything, judging by the way he winced and then kept his mouth shut.
- Vince's POV -
Dom's back! My best friend since I was a little kid, since third grade. He's back again, he's home. I love the guy, he's always been there for me. I just wish I could've been there for him when he had to go to prison. But we're alright now, the heart of the family's back.
Mia.oh man. I know he's probably figured something out, noticed how much I like her. I know it's totally crazy to even THINK about my best friend's baby sister, especially since she's sixteen and I'm twenty. But I can't help it. The girl is amazing. I wonder what Dom would say if I asked her out.I'd ask him first, though.
- Letty's POV -
This house is crazy. Mia's cleaning up breakfast, dancing around the singing like an idiot while she does it. I could smack the girl.especially since she's playing the frigin' Backstreet Boys! I'm gonna shoot somebody if she doesn't turn it off soon.
Vince is having this stupid little inner battle. It's so obvious. He wants to make fun of Mia's music so badly, but he wants her to like him. You can practically hear the voices in his head arguing. So pathetic it's cute.
And then there's Dom. He's already gone to DT's, I said I'd get a ride with Vince. He can't wait to drive again, to go racing. I guess that's what we're doing tonight. Go and see how Edwin and Hector are, I haven't talked to them in ages. It'll be good to see everyone.except maybe the race skanks.
***Hey guys! How'd you like chapter three? Please review.I might need some help with the race chapter, so give me advice, please. Stuff you'd like to see, etc.