All On You
Yep, I'm finally doing the racing scene.so brave :D
Chapter 5
The three cars pulled upto the starting line, all revving their engines. Chris looked nervous, he was obviously doubting why he'd agreed to race Dom and Hector.
Hector's music was so loud he probably couldn't even hear himself think, but that seemed to work for him. He looked like he was concentrating, at least until some skanky blonde walked upto his window.
"Hector.I know you'll win. And if you do, I'll make it worth your while" She drawled, with an obvious Texas accent. It seemed to throw Hector off, but not for long. He just grinned and winked at her, and revved his engine again as she walked off.
Last was Dom.he looked like he could care less what was going on. He just revved his engine and started playing around with his stereo. Then he looked like a stroke of genious had hit him, and quickly turned on his nitrous tanks.
Some girl was standing in front of them, holding a walkie-talkie, so she would know when to send them off. All of the sudden it got really quiet as she waved a bright pink shirt, and they all took off.
Dom was in the lead, looking like he'd never been away. He let his car fly, happy to be back.
Next was Hector, looking amazed and pissed off. He hit his NX a second after he left the start, much too soon.
Last was Chris, willing his car to speed up, to not make such a fool of him. But the car didn't listen. It just sputtered and died. Chris was done.he sat in his car, banging his head on the steering wheel.
Dom just shook his head, Hector had made a stupid move and Chris shouldn't have been racing in the first place. It was crazy. Right when he was nearing the end, and Hector had almost a car length on him he pushed his NoS button. He sailed over the finish line, winning an easy first, and an easy six grand.
So guys.my first race scene. It was kinda stupid, but my best ;-)
Yep, I'm finally doing the racing scene.so brave :D
Chapter 5
The three cars pulled upto the starting line, all revving their engines. Chris looked nervous, he was obviously doubting why he'd agreed to race Dom and Hector.
Hector's music was so loud he probably couldn't even hear himself think, but that seemed to work for him. He looked like he was concentrating, at least until some skanky blonde walked upto his window.
"Hector.I know you'll win. And if you do, I'll make it worth your while" She drawled, with an obvious Texas accent. It seemed to throw Hector off, but not for long. He just grinned and winked at her, and revved his engine again as she walked off.
Last was Dom.he looked like he could care less what was going on. He just revved his engine and started playing around with his stereo. Then he looked like a stroke of genious had hit him, and quickly turned on his nitrous tanks.
Some girl was standing in front of them, holding a walkie-talkie, so she would know when to send them off. All of the sudden it got really quiet as she waved a bright pink shirt, and they all took off.
Dom was in the lead, looking like he'd never been away. He let his car fly, happy to be back.
Next was Hector, looking amazed and pissed off. He hit his NX a second after he left the start, much too soon.
Last was Chris, willing his car to speed up, to not make such a fool of him. But the car didn't listen. It just sputtered and died. Chris was done.he sat in his car, banging his head on the steering wheel.
Dom just shook his head, Hector had made a stupid move and Chris shouldn't have been racing in the first place. It was crazy. Right when he was nearing the end, and Hector had almost a car length on him he pushed his NoS button. He sailed over the finish line, winning an easy first, and an easy six grand.
So guys.my first race scene. It was kinda stupid, but my best ;-)