All On You
Wow, chapter six. I'm loving this. This story's so easy to write, because there's so many ideas in my head. This chapter should be longer than the last one, BTW.
Chapter 6
Dom got out of his car smiling happily. He was being swarmed, people were congratulating him, trying to talk to him.and some race skanks were just trying to be near him.
He got him money and pulled out of the crowd. He put his money in his pocket, and went to get Letty. She was sitting on the hood of Vince's car, smiling happily. He started laughing when he saw her, she looked innocent and kinda childlike.the complete opposite of anything she had ever been.
He rolled his eyes and picked her up. She laughed and kissed him, until Vince walked up and smacked the side of his head.
"Dom! Come on, man. Party's at Edwin's. We gotta roll.Letty, you going with Dom?" She nodded happily, and her and Dom made their way to his car.
They quickly raced off to Edwin's, right before the cops showed up, ready to bust them. They both laughed, they'd made it just in time.
People were already filling Edwin's house. Everyone was dancing and drinking and talking, and there were a bunch of people making out on the couches, or going off to find rooms.
When Dom and Letty walked in everyone looked up, but the two in particular that seemed to never take their eyes off of them were the two that should've blended in the best. Two guys. One real young blond, with his nails painted black, and holding a cigarette through the whole party. He seemed nervous and jumpy, and was always looking for re-assuring glances from the other guy. The other guy was also pretty young, maybe a little older than Dom and Letty. He had a goatee, and seemed like a scrub. He was wearing a basketball jersey and jeans, and had really dark hair. He seemed to be the younger guy's protector, which was understandable. The younger guy couldn't have been more then 16. Probably younger.
Dom looked at them, but after some people walked in between them, and people came to say hi to him he forgot about them, and didn't see them anymore that night.
Instead he just danced with Letty, and talked to whoever came up to welcome him back, or congratulate him. He was having a good time, but it got better when he left, and went home with Letty. ;-)
Hey guys.I know, another short one. And now I've gotta tell you.I don't plan on writing sex scenes, for the record. Alright?
Wow, chapter six. I'm loving this. This story's so easy to write, because there's so many ideas in my head. This chapter should be longer than the last one, BTW.
Chapter 6
Dom got out of his car smiling happily. He was being swarmed, people were congratulating him, trying to talk to him.and some race skanks were just trying to be near him.
He got him money and pulled out of the crowd. He put his money in his pocket, and went to get Letty. She was sitting on the hood of Vince's car, smiling happily. He started laughing when he saw her, she looked innocent and kinda childlike.the complete opposite of anything she had ever been.
He rolled his eyes and picked her up. She laughed and kissed him, until Vince walked up and smacked the side of his head.
"Dom! Come on, man. Party's at Edwin's. We gotta roll.Letty, you going with Dom?" She nodded happily, and her and Dom made their way to his car.
They quickly raced off to Edwin's, right before the cops showed up, ready to bust them. They both laughed, they'd made it just in time.
People were already filling Edwin's house. Everyone was dancing and drinking and talking, and there were a bunch of people making out on the couches, or going off to find rooms.
When Dom and Letty walked in everyone looked up, but the two in particular that seemed to never take their eyes off of them were the two that should've blended in the best. Two guys. One real young blond, with his nails painted black, and holding a cigarette through the whole party. He seemed nervous and jumpy, and was always looking for re-assuring glances from the other guy. The other guy was also pretty young, maybe a little older than Dom and Letty. He had a goatee, and seemed like a scrub. He was wearing a basketball jersey and jeans, and had really dark hair. He seemed to be the younger guy's protector, which was understandable. The younger guy couldn't have been more then 16. Probably younger.
Dom looked at them, but after some people walked in between them, and people came to say hi to him he forgot about them, and didn't see them anymore that night.
Instead he just danced with Letty, and talked to whoever came up to welcome him back, or congratulate him. He was having a good time, but it got better when he left, and went home with Letty. ;-)
Hey guys.I know, another short one. And now I've gotta tell you.I don't plan on writing sex scenes, for the record. Alright?