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Beep...Beep...Beep...Beep. Prue listened to the hypnotic beeping of the heart monitor as she stroked her Phoebe's hair. She and Piper had been sitting in the hospital room for what seemed like hours when their baby sister let out a soft moan. "Mmph." "Phoebe?" Piper looked up, hoping for a miracle. "P-piper?" her voice was merely a whisper. "Yeah, sweetie, it's me. And Prue." "Prue?"
"Hey, Pheebs. How you feeling?" "Okay," she wouldn't admit how sore she actually was. She winced as she opened her eyes and saw the bright light. She tried to reach for her head but she could barely move her arm. "Take it easy, you've been out for a while." Prue said, with her usual overprotectiveness. She closed her eyes again. It was then that she remembered.
"Cole. Has he called?" "No, but I'm sure he's fine, honey." Piper said, giving her sister's hand a reassuring squeeze. "Why don't you rest a little." "Okay," "Guys?" Phoebe called out, with her eyes still closed. "If Cole calls one of you, tell him to come here. I think I should tell him what happened." "We will, Pheebs. Now you rest." Piper said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cole shimmered into Phoebe's room, wanting to surprise her. He was the one surprised when he didn't see her sleeping in her bed. It was 4:00 am. P3 should've been closed by now. "Phoebe?" he yelled. "Piper? Prue?" He walked over and grabbed the phone and punched in Phoebe's cell number. All he got in return was the ringing of her phone, which was sitting on her dresser. He tried Piper's number, but soon discovered her phone was in the kitchen. Finally, he resorted to Prue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Hello?" "Prue? Where are you? Where are Phoebe and Piper?" "Cole. Um.... maybe you should come here. Or to Phoebe. Or us." "What?" "Just shimmer over here." "WHAT?" "Just do it." Prue pressed the little red button on her phone and placed it back in her purse. "Pheebs, come on, wake up." She shook her sister gently. "Mmph." She struggled to open her eyes. "Phoebe," Cole gasped when he saw her laying in the bed. "What happened?" "Um... we'll leave you to alone." Piper said, getting up. She reached for Prue's arm and pulled her outside. "Hi." Phoebe said, trying desperately to sound as "okay" as possible. "So... um... Leo...uh," she couldn't think of an easy way to say it. "Leo shot me." "What?" Cole asked in disbelief. "Yeah, he was possessed. The book moved away from him and I saw so... he did the only thing he could think of." "Alior." Cole muttered. "Who?" "Alior. He's one of the Source's best demons." "Oh my god. You have to tell Prue and Piper." "I will. You rest and I'll go explain it to them." "Okay," she replied as she let the weariness take over her. "Prue? Piper? Can you come in here for a minute?" "Sure, what is it?" Piper asked as they walked into the room. "Shh, she's sleeping." Cole said, putting a finger to his mouth. "I think I know who the demon is." Cole said. He sat down in a chair and began to tell them about Alior and his powers. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Hello?" Phoebe yelled and looked around the cave. "Is anybody here?" "As a matter of fact," Alior grabbed Phoebe, "there is." Phoebe gasped as she looked into his blood red eyes. "Who are you?" Her voice trembled. "That is not your concern." "How can't it be my concern? Your probably the one who sent an arrow through me anyways." "Shutup and listen, witch." He shook her, causing her to cry out in pain. "I'm going to get your sisters. And you can't do anything."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Phoebe shot up in her bed, causing a sharp pain to run through her body. She clutched her stomach and screamed in pain. "Phoebe!" Cole, Piper, and Prue yelled when they heard her scream. Cole stroked her sweat-soaked hair as she began coughing and shaking violently. After what seemed like an eternity, she seemed to have calmed down. Prue, Piper, and Cole shared worried glances. They all knew that this meant she still had internal bleeding. Phoebe looked into her hands after one final cough and cried out at what she saw. Blood. She had coughed up blood. "Oh god," was all she could get out before her eyes rolled to the back of her head and she fell back onto the bed, convulsing.
"Phoebe!" Cole screamed, trying, in vain, to stop her seizure. Prue ran to the red emergency button and slammed it then hurried back to Phoebe's bed. Piper watched in horror as Phoebe's pulse quickened. She turned and clung onto Prue, crying hysterically. Then, all of their hearts stopped as the line on the heart monitor flattened out and became one, long, monotonous beep.
I NEED a new title. I've decided to change the plot and the story isn't really about saving phoebe so please give me some help!
Beep...Beep...Beep...Beep. Prue listened to the hypnotic beeping of the heart monitor as she stroked her Phoebe's hair. She and Piper had been sitting in the hospital room for what seemed like hours when their baby sister let out a soft moan. "Mmph." "Phoebe?" Piper looked up, hoping for a miracle. "P-piper?" her voice was merely a whisper. "Yeah, sweetie, it's me. And Prue." "Prue?"
"Hey, Pheebs. How you feeling?" "Okay," she wouldn't admit how sore she actually was. She winced as she opened her eyes and saw the bright light. She tried to reach for her head but she could barely move her arm. "Take it easy, you've been out for a while." Prue said, with her usual overprotectiveness. She closed her eyes again. It was then that she remembered.
"Cole. Has he called?" "No, but I'm sure he's fine, honey." Piper said, giving her sister's hand a reassuring squeeze. "Why don't you rest a little." "Okay," "Guys?" Phoebe called out, with her eyes still closed. "If Cole calls one of you, tell him to come here. I think I should tell him what happened." "We will, Pheebs. Now you rest." Piper said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cole shimmered into Phoebe's room, wanting to surprise her. He was the one surprised when he didn't see her sleeping in her bed. It was 4:00 am. P3 should've been closed by now. "Phoebe?" he yelled. "Piper? Prue?" He walked over and grabbed the phone and punched in Phoebe's cell number. All he got in return was the ringing of her phone, which was sitting on her dresser. He tried Piper's number, but soon discovered her phone was in the kitchen. Finally, he resorted to Prue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Hello?" "Prue? Where are you? Where are Phoebe and Piper?" "Cole. Um.... maybe you should come here. Or to Phoebe. Or us." "What?" "Just shimmer over here." "WHAT?" "Just do it." Prue pressed the little red button on her phone and placed it back in her purse. "Pheebs, come on, wake up." She shook her sister gently. "Mmph." She struggled to open her eyes. "Phoebe," Cole gasped when he saw her laying in the bed. "What happened?" "Um... we'll leave you to alone." Piper said, getting up. She reached for Prue's arm and pulled her outside. "Hi." Phoebe said, trying desperately to sound as "okay" as possible. "So... um... Leo...uh," she couldn't think of an easy way to say it. "Leo shot me." "What?" Cole asked in disbelief. "Yeah, he was possessed. The book moved away from him and I saw so... he did the only thing he could think of." "Alior." Cole muttered. "Who?" "Alior. He's one of the Source's best demons." "Oh my god. You have to tell Prue and Piper." "I will. You rest and I'll go explain it to them." "Okay," she replied as she let the weariness take over her. "Prue? Piper? Can you come in here for a minute?" "Sure, what is it?" Piper asked as they walked into the room. "Shh, she's sleeping." Cole said, putting a finger to his mouth. "I think I know who the demon is." Cole said. He sat down in a chair and began to tell them about Alior and his powers. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Hello?" Phoebe yelled and looked around the cave. "Is anybody here?" "As a matter of fact," Alior grabbed Phoebe, "there is." Phoebe gasped as she looked into his blood red eyes. "Who are you?" Her voice trembled. "That is not your concern." "How can't it be my concern? Your probably the one who sent an arrow through me anyways." "Shutup and listen, witch." He shook her, causing her to cry out in pain. "I'm going to get your sisters. And you can't do anything."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Phoebe shot up in her bed, causing a sharp pain to run through her body. She clutched her stomach and screamed in pain. "Phoebe!" Cole, Piper, and Prue yelled when they heard her scream. Cole stroked her sweat-soaked hair as she began coughing and shaking violently. After what seemed like an eternity, she seemed to have calmed down. Prue, Piper, and Cole shared worried glances. They all knew that this meant she still had internal bleeding. Phoebe looked into her hands after one final cough and cried out at what she saw. Blood. She had coughed up blood. "Oh god," was all she could get out before her eyes rolled to the back of her head and she fell back onto the bed, convulsing.
"Phoebe!" Cole screamed, trying, in vain, to stop her seizure. Prue ran to the red emergency button and slammed it then hurried back to Phoebe's bed. Piper watched in horror as Phoebe's pulse quickened. She turned and clung onto Prue, crying hysterically. Then, all of their hearts stopped as the line on the heart monitor flattened out and became one, long, monotonous beep.
I NEED a new title. I've decided to change the plot and the story isn't really about saving phoebe so please give me some help!