The window shattered as Saidie fell backwards through it. She
plummeted down five stories and hit the pavement below. The pavement
cracked and crumbled beneath her on impact. Amazingly, she wasn't hurt. Her
silver armor protected her. A group of people who were nearby ran over.
"Hey are you okay?" someone asked.
Saidie sat up rubbing her head, "Uh yea."
"Woah, are you some kind of super hero?"
"No, I'm-" she stopped and noticed her all silver body, "Wait, I guess I am."
Saidie touched her armor. It was smooth and shiny. For being metal, it wasn't heavy at all, she felt as if she were wearing nothing. "This is amazing," she thought to herself, "I can really be a super hero like Spider- man now!" Saidie stood up and wished that there were some way she could fly. Suddenly, two wing-link jetpacks protruded from her back. "Wow, it's like my own personal metal genie!" And with one leap Saidie was up in the air.
"Yaaaahooooooo!" she cried happily soaring through the clouds. She practiced on making turns, then doing loop-de-loops, then any other tricks she could think of. She stayed in the sky for hours and didn't get tired once. Sooner or later, she noticed she had two little contraptions on her arms with holes on the wrists of her armor. With the right mental command, she found out that her right hand was a gun and her left was a laser- emitting sword. She practiced and played all night in the air, until it was morning and she knew it was time to head home.
Marie was feeling quite awful about how her friend felt, so she grabbed a bag of popcorn and a movie to surprise her. When she was walking up to the apartment building, she saw Peter Parker heading into it.
"Hey Peter!" she called.
"Oh, Marie."
"What are you doing here?" she asked.
Peter replied, "Well, I saw Saidie yesterday in a restaurant. Me and the guys invited her to stay, but right before she ate she ran out saying she had an emergency."
"Yea, she's been avoiding me as well. Let's go see what's up."
Saidie had just flown in from her broken window when she wondered how to take the armor off. Clearly, it wouldn't move by physical force. While she was pondering this, there was a knock at her door.
"Oh, no!" she gasped.
"Saidie?" Marie's voice said through the door, "Me and Peter are coming in."
"Oh no, oh no, they can't see me like this!" she whispered.
The doorknob started to turn. Saidie started to sweat. "Oh, I wish this suit would come off!" she thought. Just before they opened the door, the suit turned back into liquid form and went back into her body.
"Saidie!" Marie exclaimed not expecting to see her soaking wet with sweat and standing next to a broken window. "What happened?!"
"I-I don't know."
"You don't know how your window got like that?" Peter asked, confused.
"Uh, no. It was like this when I got home." Saidie smiled the best she could. "I think kids threw a baseball into it. What are you guys doing here?"
"We've come to keep you company. We got a movie and popcorn." Marie said as if she were taunting her.
"Cool, thanks guys."
In the dark depths of a place unknown, a group of villainous characters sat at a table together discussing their plans for a most evil future.
"I have the perfect plan," said a short stocky man, with a bowl cut and four long tentacles coming from his body, "I have an invention that will temporarily rid us of Spider-man and any other heroes that get in our way. Just enough time to kill them."
"I'm sick of your inventions and 'ingenious ideas'," said a younger man dressed in a green and yellow spandex costume, with lightning designs all down his sides and his mask, "I say we just go in there, and blow them all away!" He emphasized by making bolts of electricity dance from his fingers.
"Octavius is right," said another man dressed in a green and pink costume with a goblin mask, "We need to find a way to make Spider-man suffer for what he's done!"
"You all can do whatever you want to New York, we just want a piece of Spider-man." A creature with a black living costume said.
"You're not the only one who wants Spider-man, Venom." Said the final man in a plain white mask.
"Please, please, gentlemen," Dr. Octopus calmed them, "This is no time to argue. To defeat the webslinger, we must work together. Now, I have a plan that will involve all your talents. Listen carefully."
The group listened as Octopus revealed his evil scheme.
After the movie and Marie and Peter left, Saidie couldn't wait to get out there and start fighting crime. First, she had to think of a name for herself. She thought of The Super Soldier, The White Angel, and The Masked Avenger.
"Those are some of the stupidest hero names I've ever heard!" she cried out in aggravation. "I wish I could think of a cool name like, The Silver Phoenix! Hey, wait, that is cool, it fits perfect! Silver Phoenix it is!"
With a very large smile spread over her face, The Silver Phoenix headed out into the world. She flew over skyscrapers, highways, until she came to a building surrounded with police vehicles. She landed next to a single armed cop and asked, "What's going on?"
"It's a group of thieves, they took over the bank and they're holding hostages."
"All right, I'm going in!" she said as she started running in.
"Wait, you can't!" the cop yelled after her. But of course, nothing could stop her.
To be continued.
Alright, here's a few things: I know I spelled Phoenix wrong in the title and summary, but I got it covered now. Like I said before, I don't own Spidey, Peter, Doc Ock, Electro, Double G (Green Goblin), Venom, Chameleon, Harry or Flash, I'm just borrowing them! This may not be a very good writing style, but it's one of my first fan fics and I'm writing it as I think of it, so there's my deal. Oh and please review, I love it, I'll R/R yours in return!!!!
"Hey are you okay?" someone asked.
Saidie sat up rubbing her head, "Uh yea."
"Woah, are you some kind of super hero?"
"No, I'm-" she stopped and noticed her all silver body, "Wait, I guess I am."
Saidie touched her armor. It was smooth and shiny. For being metal, it wasn't heavy at all, she felt as if she were wearing nothing. "This is amazing," she thought to herself, "I can really be a super hero like Spider- man now!" Saidie stood up and wished that there were some way she could fly. Suddenly, two wing-link jetpacks protruded from her back. "Wow, it's like my own personal metal genie!" And with one leap Saidie was up in the air.
"Yaaaahooooooo!" she cried happily soaring through the clouds. She practiced on making turns, then doing loop-de-loops, then any other tricks she could think of. She stayed in the sky for hours and didn't get tired once. Sooner or later, she noticed she had two little contraptions on her arms with holes on the wrists of her armor. With the right mental command, she found out that her right hand was a gun and her left was a laser- emitting sword. She practiced and played all night in the air, until it was morning and she knew it was time to head home.
Marie was feeling quite awful about how her friend felt, so she grabbed a bag of popcorn and a movie to surprise her. When she was walking up to the apartment building, she saw Peter Parker heading into it.
"Hey Peter!" she called.
"Oh, Marie."
"What are you doing here?" she asked.
Peter replied, "Well, I saw Saidie yesterday in a restaurant. Me and the guys invited her to stay, but right before she ate she ran out saying she had an emergency."
"Yea, she's been avoiding me as well. Let's go see what's up."
Saidie had just flown in from her broken window when she wondered how to take the armor off. Clearly, it wouldn't move by physical force. While she was pondering this, there was a knock at her door.
"Oh, no!" she gasped.
"Saidie?" Marie's voice said through the door, "Me and Peter are coming in."
"Oh no, oh no, they can't see me like this!" she whispered.
The doorknob started to turn. Saidie started to sweat. "Oh, I wish this suit would come off!" she thought. Just before they opened the door, the suit turned back into liquid form and went back into her body.
"Saidie!" Marie exclaimed not expecting to see her soaking wet with sweat and standing next to a broken window. "What happened?!"
"I-I don't know."
"You don't know how your window got like that?" Peter asked, confused.
"Uh, no. It was like this when I got home." Saidie smiled the best she could. "I think kids threw a baseball into it. What are you guys doing here?"
"We've come to keep you company. We got a movie and popcorn." Marie said as if she were taunting her.
"Cool, thanks guys."
In the dark depths of a place unknown, a group of villainous characters sat at a table together discussing their plans for a most evil future.
"I have the perfect plan," said a short stocky man, with a bowl cut and four long tentacles coming from his body, "I have an invention that will temporarily rid us of Spider-man and any other heroes that get in our way. Just enough time to kill them."
"I'm sick of your inventions and 'ingenious ideas'," said a younger man dressed in a green and yellow spandex costume, with lightning designs all down his sides and his mask, "I say we just go in there, and blow them all away!" He emphasized by making bolts of electricity dance from his fingers.
"Octavius is right," said another man dressed in a green and pink costume with a goblin mask, "We need to find a way to make Spider-man suffer for what he's done!"
"You all can do whatever you want to New York, we just want a piece of Spider-man." A creature with a black living costume said.
"You're not the only one who wants Spider-man, Venom." Said the final man in a plain white mask.
"Please, please, gentlemen," Dr. Octopus calmed them, "This is no time to argue. To defeat the webslinger, we must work together. Now, I have a plan that will involve all your talents. Listen carefully."
The group listened as Octopus revealed his evil scheme.
After the movie and Marie and Peter left, Saidie couldn't wait to get out there and start fighting crime. First, she had to think of a name for herself. She thought of The Super Soldier, The White Angel, and The Masked Avenger.
"Those are some of the stupidest hero names I've ever heard!" she cried out in aggravation. "I wish I could think of a cool name like, The Silver Phoenix! Hey, wait, that is cool, it fits perfect! Silver Phoenix it is!"
With a very large smile spread over her face, The Silver Phoenix headed out into the world. She flew over skyscrapers, highways, until she came to a building surrounded with police vehicles. She landed next to a single armed cop and asked, "What's going on?"
"It's a group of thieves, they took over the bank and they're holding hostages."
"All right, I'm going in!" she said as she started running in.
"Wait, you can't!" the cop yelled after her. But of course, nothing could stop her.
To be continued.
Alright, here's a few things: I know I spelled Phoenix wrong in the title and summary, but I got it covered now. Like I said before, I don't own Spidey, Peter, Doc Ock, Electro, Double G (Green Goblin), Venom, Chameleon, Harry or Flash, I'm just borrowing them! This may not be a very good writing style, but it's one of my first fan fics and I'm writing it as I think of it, so there's my deal. Oh and please review, I love it, I'll R/R yours in return!!!!
