AN: Sorry for neglecting all my reviewers but here's the bit where I thank
you all.
Ashira - Thanks for pointing out my mistakes they'll be sorted ASAP. Just to explain this is the first story I have ever wrote in my life, my past writing experience has been shopping lists, lol. So forgive me if I get things wrong.
Charli - Your not pathetic I'm glad it affected you it was supposed to. (Though not in a gross way, if you get my meaning.) And I'm glad you reviewed my sex scene, (What do you think of that?) Lol.
Screamin-psiren - Thanks for staying with me, your approval means a lot especially since I read your own work it's fantastic.
Bonnie S - Read and see, and thank you for your lovely comment.
Cormack - Your approval of my fic means a lot to me I'm also really enjoying yours. (Hands clasped behind back asks with fluttering eyelashes) 'can I have you autograph?'
That's it for now, or I'll be here all night. (Pride, Boasting.) And it's already 2:45am, so I think on with the story. By the way if you don't like the story with the prologue added, I'll remove it, and incorporate it into the story, just for you nice peeps.
Disclaimer: If I owned it don't you think the movie would have been longer, and it would have been rated 15.
Mine
Deceptions
Sarah lay back against her pillows. A smile played across her mouth. 'Until tonight.' How many hours was that, well however many, it was too much. She gave a long and contented sigh, and looked over to the window where she could see the sky turning red.
Her gaze fell on the cases on her window seat. Cases, her argument with Karen. She wouldn't be here tonight.
'Okay okay don't panic.' Sarah thought, there was only one thing for it, she would have to apologise to Karen. Sarah gave a mental laugh as a vision intruded on her thoughts, a vision of Karen, fainting from shock.
Apologising would be difficult, but she would do it for Jareth.
She needed to be here tonight, and for Jareth, she would do anything. Even face Dragons She gave a real giggle, out loud this time.
Just then, a loud popping noise filled her bedroom. Sparks flew out of thin air. A woman suddenly appeared, looked at Sarah, and dropped to the floor.
Sarah rushed over, deftly tying the sheet around her as she did so.
The woman was lying face down on the floor. Sarah reached down to help her up.
'Are you all right, did you hurt yourself' she said, helping the woman to sit on her bed.
'I'm fine, just a little off balance is all.' The woman's voice was sweet, almost too sweet; it set Sarah's teeth on edge.
'Okay, well we've established your fine, now what I'd like to know is. Who the hell are you? And what do you want from me?'
'How do you know I want something?' The woman's voice was hesitant.
'Well your either one of two things. One you're a magician's assistant, and he just majorly screwed up his illusion, or you're from the underground. And I'm going with number two here, and I don't think you got your pretty little self up here to ask me what the weather's like'
Sarah knew she was being sarcastic, but she couldn't help herself, this woman had only been her a few seconds, and Sarah instincts screamed trouble.
The woman gave a long sigh. Sweat stood out on her upper lip.
'You're right Sarah I do want something' the woman gave a dramatic pause, Sarah's heart started thudding.
She looked the woman in the eye, mentally hurrying her along. 'I want you, to leave my husband alone.' The woman said quite calmly.
'You're husband' Sarah already knew what was coming.
'Yes, my husband, Jareth'
I know super short but more will be up tomorrow night I promise X my heart hope to be taken to the underground.
Ashira - Thanks for pointing out my mistakes they'll be sorted ASAP. Just to explain this is the first story I have ever wrote in my life, my past writing experience has been shopping lists, lol. So forgive me if I get things wrong.
Charli - Your not pathetic I'm glad it affected you it was supposed to. (Though not in a gross way, if you get my meaning.) And I'm glad you reviewed my sex scene, (What do you think of that?) Lol.
Screamin-psiren - Thanks for staying with me, your approval means a lot especially since I read your own work it's fantastic.
Bonnie S - Read and see, and thank you for your lovely comment.
Cormack - Your approval of my fic means a lot to me I'm also really enjoying yours. (Hands clasped behind back asks with fluttering eyelashes) 'can I have you autograph?'
That's it for now, or I'll be here all night. (Pride, Boasting.) And it's already 2:45am, so I think on with the story. By the way if you don't like the story with the prologue added, I'll remove it, and incorporate it into the story, just for you nice peeps.
Disclaimer: If I owned it don't you think the movie would have been longer, and it would have been rated 15.
Mine
Deceptions
Sarah lay back against her pillows. A smile played across her mouth. 'Until tonight.' How many hours was that, well however many, it was too much. She gave a long and contented sigh, and looked over to the window where she could see the sky turning red.
Her gaze fell on the cases on her window seat. Cases, her argument with Karen. She wouldn't be here tonight.
'Okay okay don't panic.' Sarah thought, there was only one thing for it, she would have to apologise to Karen. Sarah gave a mental laugh as a vision intruded on her thoughts, a vision of Karen, fainting from shock.
Apologising would be difficult, but she would do it for Jareth.
She needed to be here tonight, and for Jareth, she would do anything. Even face Dragons She gave a real giggle, out loud this time.
Just then, a loud popping noise filled her bedroom. Sparks flew out of thin air. A woman suddenly appeared, looked at Sarah, and dropped to the floor.
Sarah rushed over, deftly tying the sheet around her as she did so.
The woman was lying face down on the floor. Sarah reached down to help her up.
'Are you all right, did you hurt yourself' she said, helping the woman to sit on her bed.
'I'm fine, just a little off balance is all.' The woman's voice was sweet, almost too sweet; it set Sarah's teeth on edge.
'Okay, well we've established your fine, now what I'd like to know is. Who the hell are you? And what do you want from me?'
'How do you know I want something?' The woman's voice was hesitant.
'Well your either one of two things. One you're a magician's assistant, and he just majorly screwed up his illusion, or you're from the underground. And I'm going with number two here, and I don't think you got your pretty little self up here to ask me what the weather's like'
Sarah knew she was being sarcastic, but she couldn't help herself, this woman had only been her a few seconds, and Sarah instincts screamed trouble.
The woman gave a long sigh. Sweat stood out on her upper lip.
'You're right Sarah I do want something' the woman gave a dramatic pause, Sarah's heart started thudding.
She looked the woman in the eye, mentally hurrying her along. 'I want you, to leave my husband alone.' The woman said quite calmly.
'You're husband' Sarah already knew what was coming.
'Yes, my husband, Jareth'
I know super short but more will be up tomorrow night I promise X my heart hope to be taken to the underground.
