Sweat Tears, Wishing You Were Here
By RicaSieg
Thank you to my reviewer, Kay, for the review. Only one person reviewed. I am so sad. *sniffs* In addition to this story I have written a song. I use parts of this song throughout my story, but you can see the whole thing on ff.net or in my yahoo group. It's called Lilly's Song. Please review my lovely readers. Without further ado, chapter 2
Dedication (Did you really think I wouldn't put this in?)
This Chapter is dedicated to Kay, my first and only reviewer.
Thanks Kay!
Chapter 2: Holding You Close
Brilliant red hair flashed in the sunlight.
Her sparkling laughter countered that of a baritone.
James and Lilly.
They sat side by side on a fluffy white cloud, talking about their years at Hogwarts.
"Remember when you dipped my hair in your ink during charms?" Lilly laughed.
James sighed with happiness, "Yeah, you whipped around and your hair hit Professor Flitwick off of his chair."
Lilly chocked out, "Yep, then I turned back around and ink flew into Sirius' mouth." Their laughter combined made a sweet song that only the ears of Heaven could hear.
They both saddened a bit at the thought of Sirius. They knew he had been punished for Wormtail's betrayal. "Sirius must be in great pain," James thought, "much like Harry."
Suddenly, James jumped up. "Harry! I bet we can go watch him again. It's been a week on Earth, so our banishment should be over."
"James," Lilly groaned, "do not scare anybody this time. It isn't nice to play Jokes on newcomers." The Watch Tower was where you could watch people on Earth, and new people came to heaven. "I don't think Albert Fuddle appreciated you jumping through him. I don't want to be banished again!" As she said this she grabbed James' wrist and started pulling him to the watch tower.
"Woo there Lills! Not so fast. You're starting to act like you did when you were pregnant!" James watched as Lilly's face turned bright red.
"JAMES FREDRICK POTTER! IF I EVER HEAR YOU INSULT ME WITH THAT AGAIN I'LL DO MORE THAN HIT YOU!"
"But you haven't hit me dear."
WAP
"Ouch, you're getting a little scary," whimpered James. "Honey," he added as soon as he saw her purpling face.
*sniff* "I just want to see my baby boy!" *sniff*
"It's a right. I'm sorry. Come on lets go."
Upon arriving at the Watch Tower, they ran over to a window and said the incantation that let them see Harry.
"James, look what they are doing to my baby boy!" Lilly cried. Harry was huddled beside the wall of a house. He was soaked and crying.
"Its okay honey," James crooned as he cradled his flower in his arms. "Just think, in a few years he'll be going to Hogwarts! Please don't cry."
"But he is in so much pain now!"
"I know, honey, I know."
"They're just leaving him out in the rain!" cried a hysterical Lilly, and despite being in James' arms, she collapsed.
"Excuse me, Miss, but I am going to have to ask you to leave. You are disturbing the other visitors and scaring the newcomers," said the spirit in charge of the tower.
"Please just five more minutes!" Lilly begged.
"Alright."
"James? Could I be alone with him for a little while?"
"Okay." James looked at her with concern etched all over his face.
"Hi Harry," Lilly whispered. "I'm going to send you some happiness. I hope my song charms still work here." With that said, Lilly sang her sweet song:
I'll watch you.
Forever and for always
I'll always be true.
I'll comfort you.
Lilly watched as the wave of warmth passed over the starved boy. He sighed and slowly fell asleep, alone in the rain.
"I love you Harry."
"Honey, it's time to go," sighed James as he walked back over to her. "Hey look! They're letting Harry back inside!"
Lilly turned back to Harry and saw him be tossed into his cupboard.
"I'm sorry, baby," crooned Lilly softly. "Happy Birthday."
He he, the evilness that is me. If I get 10 reviews, I'll post chapter 3 today. I might post it if I get 7 really good reviews. They have to be knew reviews though. Thank you for reviewing Kay! Please review peeps. Don't make me beg! I write for you, I need to know what you want. Chapter 3 is really interesting. It isn't like the first two chapters at all. It isn't even in the same time setting. The intro to my story is now over. I am planning on having about 27 chapters! Review
Vale!
Erica
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By RicaSieg
Thank you to my reviewer, Kay, for the review. Only one person reviewed. I am so sad. *sniffs* In addition to this story I have written a song. I use parts of this song throughout my story, but you can see the whole thing on ff.net or in my yahoo group. It's called Lilly's Song. Please review my lovely readers. Without further ado, chapter 2
Dedication (Did you really think I wouldn't put this in?)
This Chapter is dedicated to Kay, my first and only reviewer.
Thanks Kay!
Chapter 2: Holding You Close
Brilliant red hair flashed in the sunlight.
Her sparkling laughter countered that of a baritone.
James and Lilly.
They sat side by side on a fluffy white cloud, talking about their years at Hogwarts.
"Remember when you dipped my hair in your ink during charms?" Lilly laughed.
James sighed with happiness, "Yeah, you whipped around and your hair hit Professor Flitwick off of his chair."
Lilly chocked out, "Yep, then I turned back around and ink flew into Sirius' mouth." Their laughter combined made a sweet song that only the ears of Heaven could hear.
They both saddened a bit at the thought of Sirius. They knew he had been punished for Wormtail's betrayal. "Sirius must be in great pain," James thought, "much like Harry."
Suddenly, James jumped up. "Harry! I bet we can go watch him again. It's been a week on Earth, so our banishment should be over."
"James," Lilly groaned, "do not scare anybody this time. It isn't nice to play Jokes on newcomers." The Watch Tower was where you could watch people on Earth, and new people came to heaven. "I don't think Albert Fuddle appreciated you jumping through him. I don't want to be banished again!" As she said this she grabbed James' wrist and started pulling him to the watch tower.
"Woo there Lills! Not so fast. You're starting to act like you did when you were pregnant!" James watched as Lilly's face turned bright red.
"JAMES FREDRICK POTTER! IF I EVER HEAR YOU INSULT ME WITH THAT AGAIN I'LL DO MORE THAN HIT YOU!"
"But you haven't hit me dear."
WAP
"Ouch, you're getting a little scary," whimpered James. "Honey," he added as soon as he saw her purpling face.
*sniff* "I just want to see my baby boy!" *sniff*
"It's a right. I'm sorry. Come on lets go."
Upon arriving at the Watch Tower, they ran over to a window and said the incantation that let them see Harry.
"James, look what they are doing to my baby boy!" Lilly cried. Harry was huddled beside the wall of a house. He was soaked and crying.
"Its okay honey," James crooned as he cradled his flower in his arms. "Just think, in a few years he'll be going to Hogwarts! Please don't cry."
"But he is in so much pain now!"
"I know, honey, I know."
"They're just leaving him out in the rain!" cried a hysterical Lilly, and despite being in James' arms, she collapsed.
"Excuse me, Miss, but I am going to have to ask you to leave. You are disturbing the other visitors and scaring the newcomers," said the spirit in charge of the tower.
"Please just five more minutes!" Lilly begged.
"Alright."
"James? Could I be alone with him for a little while?"
"Okay." James looked at her with concern etched all over his face.
"Hi Harry," Lilly whispered. "I'm going to send you some happiness. I hope my song charms still work here." With that said, Lilly sang her sweet song:
I'll watch you.
Forever and for always
I'll always be true.
I'll comfort you.
Lilly watched as the wave of warmth passed over the starved boy. He sighed and slowly fell asleep, alone in the rain.
"I love you Harry."
"Honey, it's time to go," sighed James as he walked back over to her. "Hey look! They're letting Harry back inside!"
Lilly turned back to Harry and saw him be tossed into his cupboard.
"I'm sorry, baby," crooned Lilly softly. "Happy Birthday."
He he, the evilness that is me. If I get 10 reviews, I'll post chapter 3 today. I might post it if I get 7 really good reviews. They have to be knew reviews though. Thank you for reviewing Kay! Please review peeps. Don't make me beg! I write for you, I need to know what you want. Chapter 3 is really interesting. It isn't like the first two chapters at all. It isn't even in the same time setting. The intro to my story is now over. I am planning on having about 27 chapters! Review
Vale!
Erica
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