Author's Note

I don't know if anyone cares anymore, but I don't like the direction that this fic is going in, so, unless there's too much portest, I'm going to erase chapter 7, rewrite the whole thing, but just change a couple of things I think need changing, so I hope It will get better. Later I'm going to erase this little message when I'm sure enough people read it. it's not going to be much better, I just think that it was turning too much into a fluff, so just to tell you, thom & Lanna are not going to get together like I was planning, and Lanna is in for a surprise, sorry this took a long time, but Chapter 8 was getting really long & that's when I realized this was not what I wanted for Lanna. so, I guess that now I have rearange everything. Oh well, go work for summer vacation.

List of things I've chnaged in the storiy
Chapter 1:
*Note: The first paragraph is kind of based here, in the word where you can't talk to animals, also it's in the future, so,most of the story is in flashback
* changed her hairstyle
* made the Alanna/Lanna conversation longer, and a little nicer
* It mensions the name of tortall near the end of the fic, that's cause the map only had fief & roads &phicical things, it never mentioned Tortall in it
* I tide this story with a up coming story of mine, I don't know what I'l call it, it's kind of a preview
Chapter 2:
* I changed the whole begining, sort of, at least the chapter is longer
* added things at the end, changed the ending too
Chapter 3:
*I added something & took some out, It should be better now, she doesn't seem like such a slut
* again with the diffrent ending
Chapter 4:
* I changed the whole thing entirly
Chapter 5:
* she is not going to kill all of the guards or anything like that, she's just going to look for you know who
*no love between thom/lanna
*not much is changed
Chapter 7:
*this is the old chapter 6, the letter is diffrent and the end is diffrent too

so this is all I updated, I hope it's better than before, tell me is you think otherwise