Prelude to insanity

I tried my best to humanize how Brolly went insane, mind you im only 12 and haven't seen the brolly movies or bardock special so please r+r with comments or suggestions

Kakarot had been in the nursery for a couple of hours and hadn't stopped crying yet. The nurses kept making faces and playing with him, still no use. Then another nurse came in holding a baby with shoulder length hair, "Heres another saiyan baby, his name is Brolly" The nurse lay Brolly in the crib beside Kakarot. Brolly was just laying there with his eyes closed and sucking his thumb paying no attention to Kakarot. *****



Hours had passed and Kakarot hadn't stopped crying, Brolly had just begun to even care about it. He slowly cracked his eyes open and began to scream, not cry. The nurses ran over to him and when they tried to pick him up he kicked them all sending them into the glass. Then Pargus ran into the room holing a gold headband with a green ruby in the center. He slid it onto Brollys head and he stopped screaming. He held him close and they ran out of the building. He bumped into the lower class saiyan, Bardock. Bardock saw a few nurses run in from the other side, "Get Kakarto into a pod and send him to the planet Earth!!" he said as he turned and left the room. They picked the crying child and put him into a pod. He was unaware of the devastating attack on his home planet by the evil.Frieza and little did he know he would destroy him.