The Seventeenth Angel
Disclaimer: I don't own anything Evangelion. Nor do I know specifics about the show, I just know vague descriptions. If I am wrong on things, tell me, and maybe give me hints to correct them. Although this is AU, I want to make it as close to the original as possible.
Note: This takes place while Asuka is in a coma.
Years before Asuka joined Shinji and the others. Asuka is about seven in America.
"Man, late for school again." Asuka is running to school. She isn't watching where she is going and ends up bumping into someone. "Hey watch it." She says.
"Watch it yourself." A voice says.
Asuka looks up and sees a extremely cute guy who is probably only a year older than her. "S.Sorry." She says.
"Just be careful next time." The boy said. He gets up and walks off.
"Wait, my name is Asuka, what's yours." She calls out.
"Tom Walled." He says and leaves.
Years later
Outside of Nerv a New EVA walks up
"This is it." A voice says. "Asuka."
Inside
"Asuka, please wake up." Shinji says. Asuka is still not responding.
"Who are you? HEY DON'T GO IN THERE!" Misato yells outside the door. The door opens and a young teenager comes in, Shinji is ready to protect Asuka.
"Who are you?" Shinji asks. The guy says nothing and walks up towards Asuka. "ANSWEAR ME!" Shinji screams. A balls up a fist and is ready to pound the guy. The guy grabbed his first and flipped him over his back. Misato and the others ran in and checked Shinji, then she saw the guy walk up to Asuka.
"Asuka." He said. He walks up to Shinji. Then he punches him in the gut. "You, how could you let such a thing happen to a creature of such perfect beauty."
"Who are you?" Misato asked.
"I am Tom Walled, I am a friend of Asuka." She said.
Later
"We met in America years ago, before she joined you all. We were best friends, in fact, one could say we were more then that. However something.happened, and she left for here. I don't know what it was, she just left." Tom said.
"That EVA you brought." Shinji asked.
"Ah yes, that is the Americans EVA-01, a company, similar to Nerv, had been extremely secretly working on it. Shortly after Asuka left, it was attacked by an Angel. The Fourteenth one. And was wiped out, nothing was left to even show it was an Angel attack. I was gone, trying to gather myself still after Asuka left. When I returned, my family, my friends, all gone. The only thing that was left was the Eva-01 A. or Eva-01 American. My father was one of the key scientist in making it. I was to be the pilot so I fulfilled my fathers wishes."
"How can we know that for a fact." Misato asked.
"Well, let's me see, I challenge Shinji to a EVA fight. Prove to you, if I can handle an Angel HUNTER, I'm right." Tom said.
"Sure, I guess." Shinji said.
Later
Tom and Shinji were getting into their suits.
"Hey Shinji." Tom said.
"Yeah." Shinji said, quietly.
"Just to let you know in advance, sorry for beating you." Tom said with a smirk.
Shinji wasn't the least bit amused. The two got to their elevators and entered their Eva's. Then the two were launched into the city. The fight had started.
Tom grabbed out two swords (like Asuka) and ran a Shinji, he swiped with one of them. Shinji jumped. However Tom spun around immediately and threw the other one right behind him and it connected to Shinji. Shinji, still in the air, held his arm. Tom threw the other one at him. Shinji grabbed the one in his arm out and slashed Toms in half, then he threw it a Tom, it spun as it went down. Tom just stood their.
In Nerv
"What's he doing, is he frozen with fear." Someone asked out loud.
Outside
Tom was anything but afraid. He smirked and swiped the sword with his hand. It didn't cut him. He timed it just right, so perfect, that he hit the handle and smashed the sword. Then he jumped and was about to punch Shinji. However Shinji bent back and hit the ground on his back. He then used the impact to catapult him hard at Tom and sent him into a building.
"Impressive." Tom said.
"Just wait." Shinji said.
"We'll see." Tom said.
Toms Eva's arm opened up and a gun came out. Then he shot at Shinji. Shinji back flipped to avoid the shots. Then he jumped and tried to kick Tom. Tom was ready, however, and he roundhouse kicked Shinji. Then he jumped on top of him and BIT HIM! Yes he bit Shinji's Eva. Then the Eva- 01 jumped up and punched Tom in the face. However Shinji noticed the Eva- 01 was losing power.
'How, this thing is powered by angel 14 power source.' Shinji asked. Then he looked in Eva-01 A's mouth and saw the power source. That is why he was bitten.
"Don't worry, I won't keep it." Tom said, he spat out the power source. As it hit the ground, Shinji collapsed, the Eva-01 was never needed to be recharged since Angel 14, so it had no back up power. Tom had won. By a fluke Shinji felt.
Later Where Asuka was
"Asuka, I tried to win, but I lost." Shinji cried. "Tom was really good."
Asuka groaned. She was waking up. Shinji jumped. "Hey, what was that you said." Asuka mumbled.
"HEY EVERYONE, ASUKA IS AWAKE!" Shinji said. Overjoyed, he hugged Asuka. That woke her up all right. She was in shocked and wanted to push him away (mainly cause he was crushing her) but she was still too weak to do that.
Everyone came in. Asuka's eyes bugged out when she saw Tom. "SHINJI!" She growled. Shinji let go. Then Asuka got up and stumbled/walked towards Tom. "Tom?" She asked him.
"Yep, it's me." Tom said.
Asuka hugged him. "TOM!" She cried.
Shinji look jealous.
Later
Asuka was alone and thinking. 'Tom's back, my American sweetheart, but there's still Shinji. I know that little pervert likes me, no, not likes me, LOVES me. Do I feel the same towards him? Oh, I really didn't need to wake up to this.' She thought, grabbing her head.
What will happen to Asuka and Shinji? Is Tom really all that he seems? Find out next time.
Personal Note: (Possible Spoiler) this story means a lot to me, I'm going to do something with Tom that I've never done before. So PLEASE DON'T FLAME ME BECAUSE TOO MANY FLAMES SLOW DOWN MY NEED TO CONTINUE AND MIGHT STOP IT COMPLETELY! SO PLEASE REVIEW!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything Evangelion. Nor do I know specifics about the show, I just know vague descriptions. If I am wrong on things, tell me, and maybe give me hints to correct them. Although this is AU, I want to make it as close to the original as possible.
Note: This takes place while Asuka is in a coma.
Years before Asuka joined Shinji and the others. Asuka is about seven in America.
"Man, late for school again." Asuka is running to school. She isn't watching where she is going and ends up bumping into someone. "Hey watch it." She says.
"Watch it yourself." A voice says.
Asuka looks up and sees a extremely cute guy who is probably only a year older than her. "S.Sorry." She says.
"Just be careful next time." The boy said. He gets up and walks off.
"Wait, my name is Asuka, what's yours." She calls out.
"Tom Walled." He says and leaves.
Years later
Outside of Nerv a New EVA walks up
"This is it." A voice says. "Asuka."
Inside
"Asuka, please wake up." Shinji says. Asuka is still not responding.
"Who are you? HEY DON'T GO IN THERE!" Misato yells outside the door. The door opens and a young teenager comes in, Shinji is ready to protect Asuka.
"Who are you?" Shinji asks. The guy says nothing and walks up towards Asuka. "ANSWEAR ME!" Shinji screams. A balls up a fist and is ready to pound the guy. The guy grabbed his first and flipped him over his back. Misato and the others ran in and checked Shinji, then she saw the guy walk up to Asuka.
"Asuka." He said. He walks up to Shinji. Then he punches him in the gut. "You, how could you let such a thing happen to a creature of such perfect beauty."
"Who are you?" Misato asked.
"I am Tom Walled, I am a friend of Asuka." She said.
Later
"We met in America years ago, before she joined you all. We were best friends, in fact, one could say we were more then that. However something.happened, and she left for here. I don't know what it was, she just left." Tom said.
"That EVA you brought." Shinji asked.
"Ah yes, that is the Americans EVA-01, a company, similar to Nerv, had been extremely secretly working on it. Shortly after Asuka left, it was attacked by an Angel. The Fourteenth one. And was wiped out, nothing was left to even show it was an Angel attack. I was gone, trying to gather myself still after Asuka left. When I returned, my family, my friends, all gone. The only thing that was left was the Eva-01 A. or Eva-01 American. My father was one of the key scientist in making it. I was to be the pilot so I fulfilled my fathers wishes."
"How can we know that for a fact." Misato asked.
"Well, let's me see, I challenge Shinji to a EVA fight. Prove to you, if I can handle an Angel HUNTER, I'm right." Tom said.
"Sure, I guess." Shinji said.
Later
Tom and Shinji were getting into their suits.
"Hey Shinji." Tom said.
"Yeah." Shinji said, quietly.
"Just to let you know in advance, sorry for beating you." Tom said with a smirk.
Shinji wasn't the least bit amused. The two got to their elevators and entered their Eva's. Then the two were launched into the city. The fight had started.
Tom grabbed out two swords (like Asuka) and ran a Shinji, he swiped with one of them. Shinji jumped. However Tom spun around immediately and threw the other one right behind him and it connected to Shinji. Shinji, still in the air, held his arm. Tom threw the other one at him. Shinji grabbed the one in his arm out and slashed Toms in half, then he threw it a Tom, it spun as it went down. Tom just stood their.
In Nerv
"What's he doing, is he frozen with fear." Someone asked out loud.
Outside
Tom was anything but afraid. He smirked and swiped the sword with his hand. It didn't cut him. He timed it just right, so perfect, that he hit the handle and smashed the sword. Then he jumped and was about to punch Shinji. However Shinji bent back and hit the ground on his back. He then used the impact to catapult him hard at Tom and sent him into a building.
"Impressive." Tom said.
"Just wait." Shinji said.
"We'll see." Tom said.
Toms Eva's arm opened up and a gun came out. Then he shot at Shinji. Shinji back flipped to avoid the shots. Then he jumped and tried to kick Tom. Tom was ready, however, and he roundhouse kicked Shinji. Then he jumped on top of him and BIT HIM! Yes he bit Shinji's Eva. Then the Eva- 01 jumped up and punched Tom in the face. However Shinji noticed the Eva- 01 was losing power.
'How, this thing is powered by angel 14 power source.' Shinji asked. Then he looked in Eva-01 A's mouth and saw the power source. That is why he was bitten.
"Don't worry, I won't keep it." Tom said, he spat out the power source. As it hit the ground, Shinji collapsed, the Eva-01 was never needed to be recharged since Angel 14, so it had no back up power. Tom had won. By a fluke Shinji felt.
Later Where Asuka was
"Asuka, I tried to win, but I lost." Shinji cried. "Tom was really good."
Asuka groaned. She was waking up. Shinji jumped. "Hey, what was that you said." Asuka mumbled.
"HEY EVERYONE, ASUKA IS AWAKE!" Shinji said. Overjoyed, he hugged Asuka. That woke her up all right. She was in shocked and wanted to push him away (mainly cause he was crushing her) but she was still too weak to do that.
Everyone came in. Asuka's eyes bugged out when she saw Tom. "SHINJI!" She growled. Shinji let go. Then Asuka got up and stumbled/walked towards Tom. "Tom?" She asked him.
"Yep, it's me." Tom said.
Asuka hugged him. "TOM!" She cried.
Shinji look jealous.
Later
Asuka was alone and thinking. 'Tom's back, my American sweetheart, but there's still Shinji. I know that little pervert likes me, no, not likes me, LOVES me. Do I feel the same towards him? Oh, I really didn't need to wake up to this.' She thought, grabbing her head.
What will happen to Asuka and Shinji? Is Tom really all that he seems? Find out next time.
Personal Note: (Possible Spoiler) this story means a lot to me, I'm going to do something with Tom that I've never done before. So PLEASE DON'T FLAME ME BECAUSE TOO MANY FLAMES SLOW DOWN MY NEED TO CONTINUE AND MIGHT STOP IT COMPLETELY! SO PLEASE REVIEW!
