Hello everyody! Thanks for the awsome reviews!! And I'm sorry it took me so
darn long to write more! I've done some major Revising so I hope you read
the summery thingy
and are re-reading this.Due to some future chapters I have planned I had
to revise the prolouge.Also Im stuck on a major writers block issue and if
anyone has any Ideas please! let me know.Also I'll work on my spelling but
if someone would like to correct them for me before I post future chapters
let me know! Well on with the revising!Oh one more thing I'll try to make
future chapters longer just give me some time I'll get used to this!
Hopefully!
Disclaimer:I don't own Fushigi Yuugi..but I'd love to! Specially Tasuki!!
Well don't sue me I don't have a penny!
~ indicates her more bitter side of her italicoized indicates emphasis (no duh lol) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~****~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Prolouge:(Miaka's View)
"While I was in hell you were thinking of tamahome",Yui's voice echoed through my head. Why would she think that I sadly wonder.Why? I honestly wonder if she would care if she knew what just took place.
~"She probaly told him to do this!"~,the darker side of my mind snapped.
No! Yui-chan wouldn't do this!,Yui-chan so nice...my friend! She wouldnt! No matter how much she hates me! Not even she would wish this upon somebody she hates.
~You never know Miaka! She's changed.She is no longer your friend.She don't even like you. She hates you~ taunted the voice.
"Shut up! Shut up! It's not true!" yell.
~If you say so..~ the voice said while fading away.
After awhile silence is all I can hear as I start thinking about my latest encounter with Yui. ~*~FlashBack~*~ "Wait! Yui where's Tamahome?! Onegai!?! Return Tamahome to me!" I yelled as Iheld onto her arm.
"I don't know!",she yells bitterly then tries to yank her arm out from my grip. "Let go!"
"Yui-chan!Onegai! Yui!"I cry out to her once more.
"I told you to let go of me!!",she yells shoving me backwards into someone. Slowly I turn around and face whomever I was shoved into. I smile brightly as my eyes widen with joy. I take a step forward and throw my arms around the person.
"Tamahome!"
"Miaka"
"Tamahome! I missed you so much!" I say while I continue to hug him.
"Miaka, He utters quietly while placing his hands on my shoulders,pushing me back some. continuing in a gentle voice he says " I wanted, he started then finished in a ice cold voice, to see you too!" roughly shoving me backwards into a wall while pulling out his nunchaku swiftly lifting his arm up then slamming it down so one side of the nunchaky slam into my arm breaking it. Blood begins to seep through the dark brown sleeve of my school uniform. I stumble a bit as I stare blankly at him. "Tamahome" I whisper in a confussed and broken voice. I'm in shock I don't know what I'm suppose to do.Hardly registering anything he says to me. Tamahome handed me over to the guards as he embraced Yui in a hug. Eventually Chichiri,whome was in the disquise of Nakago,found me and thus took me from the guards and making the mistake of leaving me with Tasuki.
A short while later Tasuki starts to bandage my arm the best to his abilities. I sit there not really noticing anything he's saying. My thoughts are centered on one thing and one thing only Tamahome. Quickly snapping out of my daze I point and say something very stupid about Nakago. And my dear sweet Tasuki fell for it and look twords where I was pointing.Quickly while he's looking I tie him back up to the pole.
"Hey! what in the hell do you think your doing!?!?!" Tasuki shouts at me.
~Jeez Tasuki, I thought bitterly you were right women are cunning.~
"Gomen ne Tasuki!" I shout while running away from him.
"Miakaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!"
~*~End Flashback~*~
I'm now lying here bruised and broken. Pondering my fate while floating on that black abbys of conciousness and un consiousness. My vision is very blurred my whole body aches and it hurts imensly to breath. I'm not sure how much longer I can stay awake for I know falling asleep leads to very bad results. I can only pray that Chichiri and Tasuki find me soon. Somehow I manage to notice I'm losing a lot of blood. If only I could call out to them. I can't move or get up. My already blurry vision begins to fade away to black I feel myself begin to slip away. ~No! I can't Die! Not like this!! Somebody! Help me! Suzaku! Onegai....~
Someplace in a dark empty room filled with books. A young man reads in a gentle voice filled with pain and sorrow. " As the Suzaku no Miko lays on the once green grass under a tree now stained with her blood. Her clothing torn and bloodied. She prays for her god Suzaku to help her. Keisuke paused his reading for a moment as he let out a choked sob as salty tears fall down his cheeks.Glaring at the book he picks it up and continues to read as he cries for his sister. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *A/N* Well this is the updated version! Hope you liked the revisions I made to it Hopefully as you read this I'll have atleast part a of chapter 1 if not the whole chapter. Anywho I'll try quickly to get chapter 2 out! Please review!
~ indicates her more bitter side of her italicoized indicates emphasis (no duh lol) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~****~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Prolouge:(Miaka's View)
"While I was in hell you were thinking of tamahome",Yui's voice echoed through my head. Why would she think that I sadly wonder.Why? I honestly wonder if she would care if she knew what just took place.
~"She probaly told him to do this!"~,the darker side of my mind snapped.
No! Yui-chan wouldn't do this!,Yui-chan so nice...my friend! She wouldnt! No matter how much she hates me! Not even she would wish this upon somebody she hates.
~You never know Miaka! She's changed.She is no longer your friend.She don't even like you. She hates you~ taunted the voice.
"Shut up! Shut up! It's not true!" yell.
~If you say so..~ the voice said while fading away.
After awhile silence is all I can hear as I start thinking about my latest encounter with Yui. ~*~FlashBack~*~ "Wait! Yui where's Tamahome?! Onegai!?! Return Tamahome to me!" I yelled as Iheld onto her arm.
"I don't know!",she yells bitterly then tries to yank her arm out from my grip. "Let go!"
"Yui-chan!Onegai! Yui!"I cry out to her once more.
"I told you to let go of me!!",she yells shoving me backwards into someone. Slowly I turn around and face whomever I was shoved into. I smile brightly as my eyes widen with joy. I take a step forward and throw my arms around the person.
"Tamahome!"
"Miaka"
"Tamahome! I missed you so much!" I say while I continue to hug him.
"Miaka, He utters quietly while placing his hands on my shoulders,pushing me back some. continuing in a gentle voice he says " I wanted, he started then finished in a ice cold voice, to see you too!" roughly shoving me backwards into a wall while pulling out his nunchaku swiftly lifting his arm up then slamming it down so one side of the nunchaky slam into my arm breaking it. Blood begins to seep through the dark brown sleeve of my school uniform. I stumble a bit as I stare blankly at him. "Tamahome" I whisper in a confussed and broken voice. I'm in shock I don't know what I'm suppose to do.Hardly registering anything he says to me. Tamahome handed me over to the guards as he embraced Yui in a hug. Eventually Chichiri,whome was in the disquise of Nakago,found me and thus took me from the guards and making the mistake of leaving me with Tasuki.
A short while later Tasuki starts to bandage my arm the best to his abilities. I sit there not really noticing anything he's saying. My thoughts are centered on one thing and one thing only Tamahome. Quickly snapping out of my daze I point and say something very stupid about Nakago. And my dear sweet Tasuki fell for it and look twords where I was pointing.Quickly while he's looking I tie him back up to the pole.
"Hey! what in the hell do you think your doing!?!?!" Tasuki shouts at me.
~Jeez Tasuki, I thought bitterly you were right women are cunning.~
"Gomen ne Tasuki!" I shout while running away from him.
"Miakaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!"
~*~End Flashback~*~
I'm now lying here bruised and broken. Pondering my fate while floating on that black abbys of conciousness and un consiousness. My vision is very blurred my whole body aches and it hurts imensly to breath. I'm not sure how much longer I can stay awake for I know falling asleep leads to very bad results. I can only pray that Chichiri and Tasuki find me soon. Somehow I manage to notice I'm losing a lot of blood. If only I could call out to them. I can't move or get up. My already blurry vision begins to fade away to black I feel myself begin to slip away. ~No! I can't Die! Not like this!! Somebody! Help me! Suzaku! Onegai....~
Someplace in a dark empty room filled with books. A young man reads in a gentle voice filled with pain and sorrow. " As the Suzaku no Miko lays on the once green grass under a tree now stained with her blood. Her clothing torn and bloodied. She prays for her god Suzaku to help her. Keisuke paused his reading for a moment as he let out a choked sob as salty tears fall down his cheeks.Glaring at the book he picks it up and continues to read as he cries for his sister. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *A/N* Well this is the updated version! Hope you liked the revisions I made to it Hopefully as you read this I'll have atleast part a of chapter 1 if not the whole chapter. Anywho I'll try quickly to get chapter 2 out! Please review!
