AN. Wow, I totally didn't expect to get so many reviews so soon. Thank
you all so much. You support has been overwhelming. I am working on
chapter3 as we speak. I know this is a short chapter, but I promise that
the next chapter will be good and hot.
I'm a complete perfectionist when it comes to character. I know that I can write Tristan. Rory I'm working on. Jess is terrifying to write because there is such a difference between what he says and what he thinks and what he does. But Luke is someone I never thought I'd write, and I hope I did it well. Lorelaiā¦.I know I can't write her. If anyone out there thinks they can write her well, then please let me know.
As far as spelling and grammar, I do the best I can. I hope it's good enough.
Oh, how do you like the title of the fic?
Ok, so enjoy .
Jess had been lying in bed for over an hour. He was supposed to be working, but he couldn't bring himself to walk down those stairs. Walking those stairs meant running into Rory, and he had no idea how to behave. He still couldn't believe what had happened. He couldn't believe that he had been so fucking stupid. He should have just walked away and he certainly never should have gone inside. **How stupid are you** he asked himself.
He heard Luke calling him for the thousandth time to get to work. He sighed, and started down those dreadful steps. **I remember there being more steps** he thought to himself. He took a deep breath and walked into the diner. Luke had a stupid grin on his face, and that could only mean one thing-Lorelai had been there. He then noticed only one cup of coffee on the counter. It had lipstick on it, so he knew it couldn't have been Rory's.
"Go give Ms. Patty more coffee" Luke told Jess
"No" Jess said definitely
"Excuse me?"
"No, it is way to early in the morning to deal with some fat, over the hill, wanna-be dancer who wants to jump my bones. No way, not today"
"Just go over there, pour her coffee, and walk back"
"Yeah" Jess said almost in fear, "except whenever I walk away she stares at my butt"
"Sorry kid, but it's your turn. I did it the last time. Go"
"Fine"
Jess walked over to Miss Patty and began to fill her coffee cup. She was so involved in a conversation with Kirk, that she didn't even notice Jess.
"You know, Lorelai is even worse when Rory isn't around. I mean, the way she flaunts herself in front if Luke" Kirk, said disgusted
**So, Rory didn't come in today** Jess thought
"I know, I'm not sure how much longer we can wait until they get together. How she can control herself around that beautiful man is beyond me," Miss. Patty said glancing towards Luke
Jess had been so lost in thought at the idea that Rory hadn't been at the diner, that he accidentally over filled the cup. Coffee was spilling over onto the table.
"My word!" Miss. Patty exclaimed
"Shit" Jess sighed in surprise, "I'm sorry"
"Oh darling it's alright, but I'm sure I can think of a few way for you to make it up to me" Miss Patty said suggestively
Before Jess had a chance to choke back a horrified expression, Luke was standing next to him.
"Is everything ok? Patty, here's a muffin on the house" Luke said, handing her a plate.
"Oh, thank you dear. Now as I was telling Jess.."
"Yeah, Jess, it's not your job to stand around and spill. There are people waiting to be served and you won't keep them waiting any longer, got it?" Luke said in anger
"Yes sir" Jess said looking at Luke, "sorry Patty, and another time"
As they walked to the counter Jess whispered to Luke.
"What do you read lips or something?"
"No, but she was doing that thing with her eyes, that is never good" Luke said knowingly
"Thank you"
"You owe me"
Patty stared at the two Danes men as they walked away.
"Mmmmmm, must run in the family" she sighed
end of chap 2
I'm a complete perfectionist when it comes to character. I know that I can write Tristan. Rory I'm working on. Jess is terrifying to write because there is such a difference between what he says and what he thinks and what he does. But Luke is someone I never thought I'd write, and I hope I did it well. Lorelaiā¦.I know I can't write her. If anyone out there thinks they can write her well, then please let me know.
As far as spelling and grammar, I do the best I can. I hope it's good enough.
Oh, how do you like the title of the fic?
Ok, so enjoy .
Jess had been lying in bed for over an hour. He was supposed to be working, but he couldn't bring himself to walk down those stairs. Walking those stairs meant running into Rory, and he had no idea how to behave. He still couldn't believe what had happened. He couldn't believe that he had been so fucking stupid. He should have just walked away and he certainly never should have gone inside. **How stupid are you** he asked himself.
He heard Luke calling him for the thousandth time to get to work. He sighed, and started down those dreadful steps. **I remember there being more steps** he thought to himself. He took a deep breath and walked into the diner. Luke had a stupid grin on his face, and that could only mean one thing-Lorelai had been there. He then noticed only one cup of coffee on the counter. It had lipstick on it, so he knew it couldn't have been Rory's.
"Go give Ms. Patty more coffee" Luke told Jess
"No" Jess said definitely
"Excuse me?"
"No, it is way to early in the morning to deal with some fat, over the hill, wanna-be dancer who wants to jump my bones. No way, not today"
"Just go over there, pour her coffee, and walk back"
"Yeah" Jess said almost in fear, "except whenever I walk away she stares at my butt"
"Sorry kid, but it's your turn. I did it the last time. Go"
"Fine"
Jess walked over to Miss Patty and began to fill her coffee cup. She was so involved in a conversation with Kirk, that she didn't even notice Jess.
"You know, Lorelai is even worse when Rory isn't around. I mean, the way she flaunts herself in front if Luke" Kirk, said disgusted
**So, Rory didn't come in today** Jess thought
"I know, I'm not sure how much longer we can wait until they get together. How she can control herself around that beautiful man is beyond me," Miss. Patty said glancing towards Luke
Jess had been so lost in thought at the idea that Rory hadn't been at the diner, that he accidentally over filled the cup. Coffee was spilling over onto the table.
"My word!" Miss. Patty exclaimed
"Shit" Jess sighed in surprise, "I'm sorry"
"Oh darling it's alright, but I'm sure I can think of a few way for you to make it up to me" Miss Patty said suggestively
Before Jess had a chance to choke back a horrified expression, Luke was standing next to him.
"Is everything ok? Patty, here's a muffin on the house" Luke said, handing her a plate.
"Oh, thank you dear. Now as I was telling Jess.."
"Yeah, Jess, it's not your job to stand around and spill. There are people waiting to be served and you won't keep them waiting any longer, got it?" Luke said in anger
"Yes sir" Jess said looking at Luke, "sorry Patty, and another time"
As they walked to the counter Jess whispered to Luke.
"What do you read lips or something?"
"No, but she was doing that thing with her eyes, that is never good" Luke said knowingly
"Thank you"
"You owe me"
Patty stared at the two Danes men as they walked away.
"Mmmmmm, must run in the family" she sighed
end of chap 2
